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|'Drinking teens' - UT Austin Admission Essay - Issue (Alcohol)
Undergraduatejusamlee - Jul 30, 2012 / KhanhZ - Jul 31, 2012
|'things I never thought I would learn' - Significant experiences or accomplishments
3 - From the 1st to the 2nd paragraph---Continue with the "change" topic, to keep the transition smooth. You say: ...
UndergraduateEnmaAi - Jul 29, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jul 31, 2012
|'the circumstances' - Bump in the Road Essay for UCF
UndergraduateRGore - Jul 31, 2012 / KhanhZ - Jul 31, 2012
|'Jesus' APPLY TEXAS ESSAY: Write an essay about a person of importance in your life
UndergraduateGsan82 - Jul 27, 2012 / Gsan82 - Jul 31, 2012
|"Halmoni" - UT Essay: Someone who made an impact/why this person is important.
3 - Thanks, Jennifer and Former Ivy AO! I really appreciate it! I expected these errors, but did not know...
Undergraduaterpark94 - Jul 27, 2012 / rpark94 - Jul 31, 2012
|'Lonely people at restaurants' - Is my topic Essay B or Essay C?
Undergraduatebunnybunsss - Jul 29, 2012 / bunnybunsss - Jul 31, 2012
|Children - Common App Essay "Identity and Motivation"
UndergraduateLaura Tale - Jul 30, 2012 / Laura Tale - Jul 31, 2012
|'this wisdom and lesson' - Discuss a personal crucial relationship you have had
3 - Hi, Arthur) what is the exact question? Do you need to write about the lesson you have learned from...
Undergraduatedaredevi435 - Jul 30, 2012 / KhanhZ - Jul 30, 2012
|'My previous ventures and achievements' - why business major
Undergraduatepcvrz34g - Jul 27, 2012 / KhanhZ - Jul 30, 2012
|Speech Language Pathology Graduate School Essay - Seeking edits
2 - I failed realize --- I FAILED TO REALIZE Great piece of writing! I really enjoyed reading it. The...
UndergraduateSLPWannabe - Jul 30, 2012 / April April - Jul 30, 2012
|'strong communications program' - My Transfer Common App
2 - Perhaps in the second paragraph you could make yourself sound even more sophisticated if you changed the third sentence...
Undergraduatemarino6 - Jul 29, 2012 / Laura Tale - Jul 30, 2012
|My Experience as a Prodigal "Son" --Common App Personal Statement
4 - I think that I answered your questions in my post above--cut down the story of that night and elaborate...
Undergraduateweeyummy1 - Jul 27, 2012 / FormerIvyAO - Jul 30, 2012
|'connect the world' - Describe an intellectual concept that excites you
4 - Very well written from your essay i can tell that you are genuinely interested in math. It shows that...
Undergraduatefroggington - Jul 23, 2012 / ricaud - Jul 30, 2012
|'Teen Drinking' APPLY TEXAS: Choose an issue of importance to you
UndergraduateGsan82 - Jul 29, 2012 / Gsan82 - Jul 30, 2012
|"Hitting Walls" - my comm app essay for question # 3 for 2013 admission
17 - Since you are writing about a pretty difficult topic, you may want to be more cautious about how you...
UndergraduateKhanhZ - Jul 9, 2012 / weeyummy1 - Jul 30, 2012
|'Dr. Tyson' - ApplyTexas: Person of importance, why they impacted you
5 - Thank you for the input, I had a feeling that was the case. Below is the updated essay. Highlighted...
UndergraduateGrimes - Jul 26, 2012 / Grimes - Jul 30, 2012
|'helping people' - Apply Texas: issue of importance, how/why it effects you
UndergraduateGrimes - Jul 26, 2012 / Grimes - Jul 30, 2012
|'Biomedical Engineering' - Common App transfer- Never let it rest
4 - Oh and my real name is Nadir btw. I used Batman's other name because I didn't want anyone creeping...
UndergraduateBruce_Wayne - Jul 27, 2012 / Bruce_Wayne - Jul 30, 2012
|'slime mold mapping ' - UVA surprising art, music, science, math, literature
2 - Just say, "rolled oats, the slime mold's preferred food, . . ." This is fascinating. I don't know...
Undergraduatemegan151389 - Jul 27, 2012 / FormerIvyAO - Jul 29, 2012
|'wonderful new experiences' - University of Connecticut Transfer Essay
2 - Dear Sara, I like how you clearly explain why your current institution no longer fits your needs, and...
Undergraduatesara1893 - Jul 26, 2012 / FormerIvyAO - Jul 29, 2012
|"Winning or losing is a trivial round of an entire war" - Georgia Tech Long Essay.
Undergraduatekudosjisoo - Jul 25, 2012 / joshuanderitu01 - Jul 27, 2012
|I am a hummingbird
NEW - My mother has always told me "벌새가 되야한다 (You must be a hummingbird)." She told me a story since...
Undergraduatepcvrz34g - Jul 26, 2012 / — -
|'My dad' - Texas essay on someone who has made an impact in my life
NEW - The essay prompt is: Write an essay in which you tell us about someone who has made an impact...
Undergraduatericaud - Jul 25, 2012 / — -
|'meeting new people' - experiences or achivements that helped define you as a person?
3 - Thanks for the advice. I tweaked my essay a little: I personally believe that a person's field of...
UndergraduateMiguel11795 - Jul 17, 2012 / Miguel11795 - Jul 25, 2012
|Study plan for SNU. business school to continue on to law-mba duel program
2 - First, break this into paragraphs so it's easier to read. the US, one and a half century, ^centuries...
Undergraduatepcvrz34g - Jul 24, 2012 / PA Applicant - Jul 24, 2012
|'the 10 Core Expectations' - Peace Corps Essay 1
2 - I was taught growing up that community and giving back was important. ^While growing up, I was taught that...
Undergraduatesharrison - Jul 16, 2012 / PA Applicant - Jul 24, 2012
|'Homophobia Essay' UT Choose an issue of importance to you...
3 - Perhaps you could say that you want to further understand what are the factors pushing people mentally towards Homophobia?...
Undergraduatesydneyjade1 - Jul 23, 2012 / YangTeng - Jul 24, 2012
|'I have dreamed about college' - Illinois State University application
6 - Thanks!...
Undergraduatetommyboy614 - Jul 19, 2012 / tommyboy614 - Jul 24, 2012
|The famous volleyball player makes the greatest influence in my life.
UndergraduateDydy - Jul 22, 2012 / Dydy - Jul 22, 2012
|Rutgers Essay: My First Computer
Undergraduatekawkaw - Jul 21, 2012 / KhanhZ - Jul 22, 2012
|Admission paper: My teacher of Morality
Undergraduatethanhnguyen - Jul 22, 2012 / — -
|'A girl who looked like a boy' - a person who makes the greatest influence in my life
UndergraduateJieb Manivone - Jul 21, 2012 / beratsancak - Jul 22, 2012
|'parents want their children to be happy' - ISSUE OF IMPORTANCE ESSAY for UT
Undergraduateamenanoori - Jul 18, 2012 / terencetufuor - Jul 21, 2012
|"I live Kate very much" - The person who greatest influence in my life
Undergraduatebee shv - Jul 20, 2012 / bee shv - Jul 21, 2012
|Expectations of a traditional Vietnamese student
Undergraduateseanhuynh - Jul 20, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jul 21, 2012
|My essay - Becoming to Information technology analysts and consultants
Undergraduatetharncl - Jul 19, 2012 / tharncl - Jul 20, 2012
|A Bloomfield College Admissions Self Recommendation
UndergraduateEtoile_Seul - Jul 18, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Jul 19, 2012
|'finding delight in activities I endeavor' -How would you benefit the community?
UndergraduateKhanhZ - Jul 15, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jul 17, 2012
|'My close friend' - describing a person who made a great influence in my life
UndergraduateViphada - Jul 16, 2012 / Viphada - Jul 16, 2012
|'international firm job' - My past experiences and future (UNC business school)
2 - Correction I had many of friends and knew the city like my grandma's backyard; I was the master of...
Undergraduatepintianz - Jul 14, 2012 / KhanhZ - Jul 15, 2012
|UNC business school essay about a AP physics group project
5 - You say in third paragraph that your words look repetitive, but i find that you have a suggestion of...
Undergraduatepintianz - Jul 4, 2012 / joshuanderitu01 - Jul 15, 2012
|'bustling city life - piano' - Questbrdge National College Match
UndergraduateLaura_twilight - Jul 14, 2012 / KhanhZ - Jul 15, 2012
|'Studying abroad to learn more' (medicinal chemistry personal statement)
NEW - Why you would like to come to Australia to study and your aspirations. For many years, I have...
UndergraduateMai Linh - Jul 14, 2012 / — -
|'endorsement and encouragement' - evaluating my significant experience
2 - Over the past few years, not only have I grown physically, but grown to be more tolerant and goal-driven....
Undergraduatepeterk94 - Jul 13, 2012 / Laura_twilight - Jul 14, 2012
|'I love eating food and finance' - roommate essay, babson supplement
UndergraduateShreyansh27 - Jun 22, 2012 / Laura_twilight - Jul 13, 2012
|'communicating with individuals' - PTCAS-Physical Therapy Essay Question
NEW - Hi Everyone, This is my first post. The maximum number of characters with spaces is 4500. I have...
Undergraduaterizrajper - Jul 12, 2012 / — -
|<searching for my "forever"> - UCF-Bump in academic or personal life.
4 - Thank you for all your help. I will definitely take both of your suggestions and revise my essay! and...
Undergraduatecrshea - Jul 12, 2012 / crshea - Jul 12, 2012
|'cause of death among college students' - Why FSU is Awesome Essay
UndergraduateMadman59770 - Jun 19, 2012 / Madman59770 - Jul 12, 2012
|Essay about yourself (finance and investment interest)
Undergraduateela4490 - Jul 8, 2012 / ela4490 - Jul 11, 2012
|(My love for running) "Short Answer" activities
UndergraduateHayley5 - Jul 10, 2012 / marczawa - Jul 10, 2012
|Drunk on the Road - ISSUE OF IMPORTANCE COLLEGE ESSAY
Undergraduatehannahjung - Jul 10, 2012 / hannahjung - Jul 10, 2012
|'becoming an architect' - Georgia Tech Admission small essay
2 - U should use some transitional words and terms to connect the sentences. U stated your experiences one after another...
UndergraduateAnts in a Deli - Jul 9, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jul 9, 2012
|'everyone is not as fortunate as I am' - Personal essay for the FALL 2013
Undergraduatewhoami - Jul 8, 2012 / whoami - Jul 9, 2012
|'experience in health care prior to a PA' - motivation towards becoming a PA
11 - thank you...
UndergraduateRudyyunghoi - Jul 7, 2012 / Rudyyunghoi - Jul 9, 2012
|'dependant on computers and technology' - past circumstances and major choice
Undergraduatebwang13 - Jul 7, 2012 / dumi - Jul 9, 2012
|today most of the young children use mobile phone ,what is your opinion?
4 - If the topic is an "agree or disagree" type you should clearly mention your opinion at the end...
UndergraduateALI ASADI - Jul 8, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jul 8, 2012
|'College, my second home' - Transfer admissions essay to Stanford
Undergraduateklhardge - Jul 7, 2012 / klhardge - Jul 7, 2012
|'to make the world a better, more brilliant' - Stanford on "Intellectual Vitality"
NEW - Stanford students possess an intellectual vitality. Reflect on an idea or experience that has been important to your intellectual...
UndergraduateUnivibez - Jul 6, 2012 / — -
|Traditional music give the info about a whole country; international entertains
Undergraduateankury9 - Jul 4, 2012 / ankury9 - Jul 6, 2012
|UC Transfer Prompt: 1 and 2 (How I found myself & overcame depression)
12 - Kevin, Nicely done. I enjoyed reading your second prompt. Even though depression may not be a great thing to...
UndergraduateKevinHaroldo - Jun 12, 2012 / Laura_twilight - Jul 6, 2012
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