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|"Big changes begin with a small step" - How will your presence enrich our community?
NEW - I do not intend to make myself well-known in the university. I do not wish fame and to make...
Undergraduatemyzatil - Jun 20, 2012 / — -
|'youth outreach clubs' - How my goals relate to my interests- Georgetown
2 - When I was diagnosed with vitiligo, a skin condition, I truly came to appreciate the dedication and compassion with...
Undergraduatekarina23 - Jun 19, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 20, 2012
|'mixture of diversities and cultures' - UW's CSE Short Answer Question - Diversity
Undergraduatenqtong - Jun 20, 2012 / nqtong - Jun 20, 2012
|'diligent mind and body' - Rutgers Personal Essay
2 - Your first sentence needs more of a punch, but your point is strong in this paper. Always make statements...
UndergraduateAhmad1015 - Jun 19, 2012 / EF_Kevin - Jun 19, 2012
|'When one dies...' - What experience defines you as a person?
Undergraduatemonicanaz - Jun 16, 2012 / monicanaz - Jun 17, 2012
|Argument Essay about Class rank for ApplyTexas Topic A essay
2 - In my opinion, the class rank system does not giveoffer equal opportunities to all students, and can lead to...
UndergraduateGoodmattenator - Jun 15, 2012 / dumi - Jun 15, 2012
|My daughter is my significant influence
Undergraduatedeannah21 - Jun 14, 2012 / deannah21 - Jun 15, 2012
|'The birth of my son' - Nursing essay (does this essay satisfy the question?)
4 - My life experiences which includeI personally don't think this is necessary, if anything you're just filling up your word...
Undergraduateola77 - May 22, 2012 / Guest - Jun 15, 2012
|'friendship and camaraderie' - Naval Academy Personal Statement
2 - The United States Naval Academy is where I want to be. The academy will give me unparalleled, wide-ranging skills...
Undergraduatesofiana13 - Jun 14, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 14, 2012
|'Bachelors of Science in Biomedical Sciences' - Short essay on career goals
5 - Academic goals would be how far you want to go into acadamia. Like in example you may want to...
Undergraduatescission6 - Jun 13, 2012 / KevinHaroldo - Jun 14, 2012
|'Pleasant Tragedy' - Personal Statement for Undergraduate School
Undergraduateelizkarimian - Jun 14, 2012 / elizkarimian - Jun 14, 2012
|"About the sea' - "About me essay"
Undergraduatekrissytintin - Jun 6, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 11, 2012
|(I want to study in the University of Hong Kong) - A personal statement
NEW - I am apply for the University of Hong Kong.She requires a personal statement.My english is not very well, so...
Undergraduatellychinalz - Jun 11, 2012 / — -
|'I wear a scarf' - University of Michigan: your community and your place in it
Undergraduatenina2 - Jun 10, 2012 / dumi - Jun 11, 2012
|'not to fear death and to seize the day' - Most significant experience
2 - This is a very compelling essay about you and your grandmother. I really liked the essay but just fixed...
Undergraduatetiffanyfelix - Jun 10, 2012 / kimisizer - Jun 10, 2012
|Personal Narrative- My Broken Hand
UndergraduateZubaida - May 22, 2012 / aleen - Jun 10, 2012
|'attracted by teacher's explaining' - A statment of purpose for teaching.
Undergraduatehafidgg - Jun 8, 2012 / hafidgg - Jun 9, 2012
|'The place starts and nurtures my dreams' - [academic goals] Transfer
2 - My feeling is that this para deviates from what is expected by the prompt; it doesn't talk about your...
Undergraduatewaiting4u - Jun 1, 2012 / dumi - Jun 7, 2012
|'The frontiers of research' - Transfer Essay: Texas A&M engineering
2 - Many students only choose what is popular among their faction of friends or what has the most promising career...
Undergraduateccdw - Jun 1, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 6, 2012
|"Excited to Strive" An Application Essay to the Art Institute.
NEW - "You've just to choose the aspect you want to utilize now, where you want to take you art and...
UndergraduateSorriz - Jun 2, 2012 / — -
|Study objectives (project management and business engineering)
4 - Thank you Ahmed for the fast editing of my essay, I really do appreciate your effort and I am...
UndergraduateStoufa - May 31, 2012 / Stoufa - Jun 1, 2012
|Learning about biology even medicine is always make my heart happy
Undergraduatedoraemon - May 26, 2012 / doraemon - May 30, 2012
|'the profession of photography' - A Statement of purpose
UndergraduateAnyaTH - May 26, 2012 / AnyaTH - May 30, 2012
|Statement of Purpose for accounting intern; 'computers as a hobby'
2 - Initially, I had planned on going to school for an associate's degree in computer electronics, but quickly realized that...
Undergraduatebabeatty - May 17, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 29, 2012
|'a good choice to community college students' - A statement for common application
Undergraduatesiguakiss - May 28, 2012 / — -
|(Nursing program) Admission for RN to BSN program.
Undergraduatemdipeolu - May 25, 2012 / mdipeolu - May 28, 2012
|'Becoming a prosecutor lawyer' - Personal Statement
5 - Well, don't be afraid of bragging about yourself, personal statements are supposed to do that - obviously though, don't...
Undergraduatetfizzle - May 25, 2012 / JeremyW - May 27, 2012
|'Korean language' - A three-paragraph essay about a person who influenced you
3 - Thank you for advise. Can you check grammar issues in my essay? I think there are many wrong sentences....
UndergraduateSheldon Lee - May 25, 2012 / Sheldon Lee - May 25, 2012
|United World College - 3 Essays; Why UWC?, Family background, Personal challenge
NEW - Hello, my name is Ann and I'm applying for a United World College. They want three essays: Please...
UndergraduateCollegegirl22 - May 25, 2012 / — -
|'Carlos, my dad, was my example' - for person who has influenced you
2 - Have you ever thought about what it is like to live in a system that restrains your every action?...
UndergraduateSolrac1994 - May 22, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 24, 2012
|'cadets working as a team' - extracurricular activities/work experiences
2 - WithThis elective, it helped me develop character, manners, leadership skills, and many other important skills that are needed in...
UndergraduateiShirley - May 21, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 23, 2012
|Scad statement of purpose- "A little about me''
2 - I believe that if you can't imagine yourself doing anything else but that one particular thing, then that's what...
UndergraduateTennisbaby111 - May 21, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 23, 2012
|"one should never stop learning" - SHORT Admission application essay
Undergraduatebrandman - May 22, 2012 / brandman - May 22, 2012
|'nursing assisting' -Essay on life goals and what are my expectations of the program?
UndergraduateAishatorres24 - May 15, 2012 / Aayushi - May 21, 2012
|"I was made for you!" - Why do I want to go to an engineering summer program?
Undergraduatearmcast - May 17, 2012 / vickywang - May 18, 2012
|Transfer essay - bad history
2 - Over all the essay seems pretty strong and heart-felt, but I think it goes in the same speed for...
Undergraduateloafmenot - May 16, 2012 / sandhyas - May 17, 2012
|'Seeking knowledge' - Spelman admission essay
2 - lol im in the process just didnt know if that would exactly be a good opening statement. Thank you...
Undergraduatebella21 - May 16, 2012 / bella21 - May 16, 2012
|I learned a great deal about me over past years- Readmission from suspension(UofH)
NEW - I am reapplying to my school from academic suspension, I would love some feedback about my essay, please help...
Undergraduateskazi95 - May 15, 2012 / — -
|'A visit to the park with my daughter' - Diversity John Hopkins Nursing
NEW - 1. Diversity is one of the core values of the Johns Hopkins University School of Nursing. Members of the...
Undergraduateola77 - May 13, 2012 / — -
|What led me to be a physician (for AMCAS)
Undergraduatekcalex13 - May 9, 2012 / kcalex13 - May 10, 2012
|Dependent Children Program Assistant: Application Essay
2 - Great introduction!!! ...Through years of experience working with children, I have become an enlightened teacher with many positive assets...
Undergraduatehgrierson - May 8, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 10, 2012
|(Creative Writing with a specialization in fiction) Study Objective essay
2 - ...There is no doubt that writers taught and trained in the United States is responsible for creating famous, world...
Undergraduatemaria88 - May 8, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 9, 2012
|(Psychology and Criminal Justice) What should the Subheadings for my portfolio be?
2 - Brainstorm: Here are my thoughts for the heading and sub-headings) One: My career path (Know myself, interest, explore...
Undergraduateb15m4 - May 4, 2012 / Jeecee - May 9, 2012
|(Renaissance style education / communication and organization / DHC) - DAVIS HONOR
2 - " I have diverse interests that vary from orchestra performance to social work and healthcare to biological research." ...
Undergraduatelindavis83514 - May 1, 2012 / jgonzalezd - May 8, 2012
|'challenge with my confidence' - PEACE CORPS ESSAY #2
2 - Amazing essay! I read through and could find pretty much nothing wrong with it other than some very minor...
Undergraduatejrtosc - May 7, 2012 / hgrierson - May 8, 2012
|A passion for research and a change for the world (Michigan research community)
Undergraduatetehfunkicookie - May 7, 2012 / tehfunkicookie - May 7, 2012
|Fantasie - My journey as a pianist and a medical researcher. (Research Application )
2 - I remember sliding my fingers across the smooth wood, letting my my eyes float across the keys: black-white-black-white-black. Yet...
Undergraduatemwskwong - May 3, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 3, 2012
|"Cidadăos do Mundo" Describing my participation in any significant project!
2 - Hi, I think, you can add more details like importance of project, how that was important for you...
Undergraduateothonlima - May 3, 2012 / ana_p - May 3, 2012
|"Casa Para Todos" - HONORS PROGRAM - GOALS AND PLANS FOR FUTURE
NEW - On a separate sheet of paper, typed or legibly handwritten, tell us about what you hope to achieve through...
Undergraduateothonlima - May 2, 2012 / — -
|'degree in business management' - Essay describing long-term career goals
5 - Hi, I would like to suggest some important points which will help you to arrange your essay in...
Undergraduatelnw - May 1, 2012 / ana_p - May 2, 2012
|"Yourself", "your career aspirations" and "why you think you deserve this bursary?"
4 - Write a detailed description of your research objectives. Try to answer such questions: What you hope to get from...
Undergraduatemwskwong - Apr 30, 2012 / maria88 - May 2, 2012
|"We must reform society before we can reform ourselves" essay
4 - You are an amazing writer, the way you write is very unique and brilliant! Your way of writing actually...
UndergraduateSandra0805 - Apr 28, 2012 / aboodbataineh - May 1, 2012
|'picked the wrong school for the wrong reasons' - Boulder Essay: Transferring
4 - thank you!...
Undergraduatetaurus92 - Apr 19, 2012 / taurus92 - May 1, 2012
|'Butterfly' - acceptance to engineering university- review
NEW - One of my favourite insects is the butterfly. I am especially drawn to its ability to transform from an...
Undergraduateearlise - May 1, 2012 / — -
|'small classes and discussion board' - Tennessee Tech HONORS PROGRAM ESSAY
NEW - Why do you want to join the Tennessee Tech Honors Program? The Honors Program is known worldwide for...
Undergraduateothonlima - Apr 30, 2012 / — -
|'Dear host family' - Global Ugrad exchange program. Describe Yourself.
2 - I am already aware that being an exchange student is very challenging, but I am ready for this journey...
Undergraduatefrank1992 - Apr 27, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 30, 2012
|'when Columbia exploded while re-entering the earth' - UMD essay
Undergraduatejthomas2844 - Apr 27, 2012 / jthomas2844 - Apr 29, 2012
|'To save for education' / 'Taiwan experience' - Business School Admissions
Undergraduateskyhigh - Apr 27, 2012 / ana_p - Apr 27, 2012
|My Grandma walk hours for a broccoli. Poly supplement for NYU
NEW - Hi, I'm an international student applying to the civil engineering major in NYU-Poly. I know it's a little late...
UndergraduateAlina0223 - Apr 26, 2012 / — -
|Q/A for my Uni admission (applied for neuroscience)
2 - I have been fascinated with biology from the day I learnt it was a subject in its own right.I...
Undergraduatembafa3 - Apr 25, 2012 / dtd514 - Apr 25, 2012
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