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|'the day I changed inside forever' - University of Colorado Boulder Essay
Undergraduatejustsm0 - Jun 22, 2012 / justsm0 - Jul 1, 2012
|'always wanted to go to' - The top five reasons you want to attend Virginia Tech?
3 - Don't talk about ranking. Mention your ethnicity instead of referring to it vaguely. Be more specific as to the...
Undergraduatetokiwong - Jun 25, 2012 / avenged7fold - Jul 1, 2012
|Zicklin School of Business - top 3 criteria when looking for business school
2 - Your essay is good, but generic. Mostly, I got from it that you want New York, and Business. The...
Undergraduateammadshami - Jun 30, 2012 / lafortuna - Jul 1, 2012
|UF Statement of Intent - 200 Words - "The International Economist"
Undergraduateedgardocev - Jun 29, 2012 / edgardocev - Jun 30, 2012
|Introduction - ASP 100-GRND: Skills for Success
Undergraduatetau - Jun 29, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 30, 2012
|'About Jerry' - common app - Describe a fictional character and its influence.
10 - Oh. Thanks Kelvin. I'm glad and have taken those corrections. However, I'm scared if this essay is ever...
UndergraduateOpara - Jun 26, 2012 / Opara - Jun 27, 2012
|lower income communities- the factors that influenced your decision to choose nursing
2 - My dream of(not on) becoming a nurse started when I became a mother. We needed help(add a comma),...
UndergraduateIana - Jun 27, 2012 / Opara - Jun 27, 2012
|'a successful Aerospace Engineer' - Statement of Purpose - UT
Undergraduategoodboy - Jun 26, 2012 / Opara - Jun 27, 2012
|"time when you went out of your way to help a colleague" Competency based question
2 - During my first experience with *** company, there have beenwere some changes in our management team which brought in...
UndergraduateAfel - Jun 26, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 26, 2012
|'Enterprise solutions and computer science' Personal statement Essay for Fulbright
Undergraduatemuhannadmatahen - Jun 25, 2012 / dumi - Jun 26, 2012
|'DETERMINED TO BE SOMEBODY' - Howard University Admission Essay
4 - write about something unique. Jaybird has a point. There are thousands of people that apply to Howard that write...
Undergraduatesnaacks - Jun 24, 2012 / chessman567 - Jun 25, 2012
|'Character development and integrity' - Naval Academy application essay
Undergraduatemadeline18 - Jun 23, 2012 / karina23 - Jun 25, 2012
|UW CSE's personal statement - Finding my own path
Undergraduatenqtong - Jun 23, 2012 / dumi - Jun 23, 2012
|Personal statement for MSc in Financial Mathematics and Computation
3 - "The water that bears the boat is the same that swallows it up." It is the Chinese metaphor that...
Undergraduategeniusnth - Jun 17, 2012 / adaiah - Jun 21, 2012
|'no way for me to be invisible' - Peace Corps Essay 2
3 - Is it necessary to use from before each item in the following list: who came from Mormon Utah, from...
Undergraduatepigwithwings11 - Jun 18, 2012 / adaiah - Jun 21, 2012
|'to earn as many experiences as possible' - SMU SIS appeal
NEW - Hi there, I recently applied to SMU and rejected. so i want to appeal the result. The appeal...
Undergraduateholyeternal - Jun 21, 2012 / — -
|"Will you be my guest for prom?" - Spelman College
Undergraduatesnaacks - Jun 20, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 20, 2012
|"Big changes begin with a small step" - How will your presence enrich our community?
NEW - I do not intend to make myself well-known in the university. I do not wish fame and to make...
Undergraduatemyzatil - Jun 20, 2012 / — -
|'youth outreach clubs' - How my goals relate to my interests- Georgetown
2 - When I was diagnosed with vitiligo, a skin condition, I truly came to appreciate the dedication and compassion with...
Undergraduatekarina23 - Jun 19, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 20, 2012
|'mixture of diversities and cultures' - UW's CSE Short Answer Question - Diversity
Undergraduatenqtong - Jun 20, 2012 / nqtong - Jun 20, 2012
|'diligent mind and body' - Rutgers Personal Essay
2 - Your first sentence needs more of a punch, but your point is strong in this paper. Always make statements...
UndergraduateAhmad1015 - Jun 19, 2012 / EF_Kevin - Jun 19, 2012
|'When one dies...' - What experience defines you as a person?
Undergraduatemonicanaz - Jun 16, 2012 / monicanaz - Jun 17, 2012
|Argument Essay about Class rank for ApplyTexas Topic A essay
2 - In my opinion, the class rank system does not giveoffer equal opportunities to all students, and can lead to...
UndergraduateGoodmattenator - Jun 15, 2012 / dumi - Jun 15, 2012
|My daughter is my significant influence
Undergraduatedeannah21 - Jun 14, 2012 / deannah21 - Jun 15, 2012
|'The birth of my son' - Nursing essay (does this essay satisfy the question?)
4 - My life experiences which includeI personally don't think this is necessary, if anything you're just filling up your word...
Undergraduateola77 - May 22, 2012 / Guest - Jun 15, 2012
|'friendship and camaraderie' - Naval Academy Personal Statement
2 - The United States Naval Academy is where I want to be. The academy will give me unparalleled, wide-ranging skills...
Undergraduatesofiana13 - Jun 14, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 14, 2012
|'Bachelors of Science in Biomedical Sciences' - Short essay on career goals
5 - Academic goals would be how far you want to go into acadamia. Like in example you may want to...
Undergraduatescission6 - Jun 13, 2012 / KevinHaroldo - Jun 14, 2012
|'Pleasant Tragedy' - Personal Statement for Undergraduate School
Undergraduateelizkarimian - Jun 14, 2012 / elizkarimian - Jun 14, 2012
|"About the sea' - "About me essay"
Undergraduatekrissytintin - Jun 6, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 11, 2012
|(I want to study in the University of Hong Kong) - A personal statement
NEW - I am apply for the University of Hong Kong.She requires a personal statement.My english is not very well, so...
Undergraduatellychinalz - Jun 11, 2012 / — -
|'I wear a scarf' - University of Michigan: your community and your place in it
Undergraduatenina2 - Jun 10, 2012 / dumi - Jun 11, 2012
|'not to fear death and to seize the day' - Most significant experience
2 - This is a very compelling essay about you and your grandmother. I really liked the essay but just fixed...
Undergraduatetiffanyfelix - Jun 10, 2012 / kimisizer - Jun 10, 2012
|Personal Narrative- My Broken Hand
UndergraduateZubaida - May 22, 2012 / aleen - Jun 10, 2012
|'attracted by teacher's explaining' - A statment of purpose for teaching.
Undergraduatehafidgg - Jun 8, 2012 / hafidgg - Jun 9, 2012
|'The place starts and nurtures my dreams' - [academic goals] Transfer
2 - My feeling is that this para deviates from what is expected by the prompt; it doesn't talk about your...
Undergraduatewaiting4u - Jun 1, 2012 / dumi - Jun 7, 2012
|'The frontiers of research' - Transfer Essay: Texas A&M engineering
2 - Many students only choose what is popular among their faction of friends or what has the most promising career...
Undergraduateccdw - Jun 1, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 6, 2012
|"Excited to Strive" An Application Essay to the Art Institute.
NEW - "You've just to choose the aspect you want to utilize now, where you want to take you art and...
UndergraduateSorriz - Jun 2, 2012 / — -
|Study objectives (project management and business engineering)
4 - Thank you Ahmed for the fast editing of my essay, I really do appreciate your effort and I am...
UndergraduateStoufa - May 31, 2012 / Stoufa - Jun 1, 2012
|Learning about biology even medicine is always make my heart happy
Undergraduatedoraemon - May 26, 2012 / doraemon - May 30, 2012
|'the profession of photography' - A Statement of purpose
UndergraduateAnyaTH - May 26, 2012 / AnyaTH - May 30, 2012
|Statement of Purpose for accounting intern; 'computers as a hobby'
2 - Initially, I had planned on going to school for an associate's degree in computer electronics, but quickly realized that...
Undergraduatebabeatty - May 17, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 29, 2012
|'a good choice to community college students' - A statement for common application
Undergraduatesiguakiss - May 28, 2012 / — -
|(Nursing program) Admission for RN to BSN program.
4 - I agree with Percival Fisher. Your essay sounds good. but sorry I cant help you to correct the grammar....
Undergraduatemdipeolu - May 25, 2012 / tinie - May 28, 2012
|'Becoming a prosecutor lawyer' - Personal Statement
5 - Well, don't be afraid of bragging about yourself, personal statements are supposed to do that - obviously though, don't...
Undergraduatetfizzle - May 25, 2012 / JeremyW - May 27, 2012
|'Korean language' - A three-paragraph essay about a person who influenced you
3 - Thank you for advise. Can you check grammar issues in my essay? I think there are many wrong sentences....
UndergraduateSheldon Lee - May 25, 2012 / Sheldon Lee - May 25, 2012
|United World College - 3 Essays; Why UWC?, Family background, Personal challenge
NEW - Hello, my name is Ann and I'm applying for a United World College. They want three essays: Please...
UndergraduateCollegegirl22 - May 25, 2012 / — -
|'Carlos, my dad, was my example' - for person who has influenced you
2 - Have you ever thought about what it is like to live in a system that restrains your every action?...
UndergraduateSolrac1994 - May 22, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 24, 2012
|'cadets working as a team' - extracurricular activities/work experiences
2 - WithThis elective, it helped me develop character, manners, leadership skills, and many other important skills that are needed in...
UndergraduateiShirley - May 21, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 23, 2012
|Scad statement of purpose- "A little about me''
2 - I believe that if you can't imagine yourself doing anything else but that one particular thing, then that's what...
UndergraduateTennisbaby111 - May 21, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 23, 2012
|"one should never stop learning" - SHORT Admission application essay
Undergraduatebrandman - May 22, 2012 / brandman - May 22, 2012
|'nursing assisting' -Essay on life goals and what are my expectations of the program?
UndergraduateAishatorres24 - May 15, 2012 / Aayushi - May 21, 2012
|"I was made for you!" - Why do I want to go to an engineering summer program?
Undergraduatearmcast - May 17, 2012 / vickywang - May 18, 2012
|Transfer essay - bad history
2 - Over all the essay seems pretty strong and heart-felt, but I think it goes in the same speed for...
Undergraduateloafmenot - May 16, 2012 / sandhyas - May 17, 2012
|'Seeking knowledge' - Spelman admission essay
2 - lol im in the process just didnt know if that would exactly be a good opening statement. Thank you...
Undergraduatebella21 - May 16, 2012 / bella21 - May 16, 2012
|I learned a great deal about me over past years- Readmission from suspension(UofH)
NEW - I am reapplying to my school from academic suspension, I would love some feedback about my essay, please help...
Undergraduateskazi95 - May 15, 2012 / — -
|'A visit to the park with my daughter' - Diversity John Hopkins Nursing
NEW - 1. Diversity is one of the core values of the Johns Hopkins University School of Nursing. Members of the...
Undergraduateola77 - May 13, 2012 / — -
|What led me to be a physician (for AMCAS)
Undergraduatekcalex13 - May 9, 2012 / kcalex13 - May 10, 2012
|Dependent Children Program Assistant: Application Essay
2 - Great introduction!!! ...Through years of experience working with children, I have become an enlightened teacher with many positive assets...
Undergraduatehgrierson - May 8, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 10, 2012
|(Creative Writing with a specialization in fiction) Study Objective essay
2 - ...There is no doubt that writers taught and trained in the United States is responsible for creating famous, world...
Undergraduatemaria88 - May 8, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 9, 2012
|(Psychology and Criminal Justice) What should the Subheadings for my portfolio be?
2 - Brainstorm: Here are my thoughts for the heading and sub-headings) One: My career path (Know myself, interest, explore...
Undergraduateb15m4 - May 4, 2012 / Jeecee - May 9, 2012
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