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|Transfer essay - bad history
2 - Over all the essay seems pretty strong and heart-felt, but I think it goes in the same speed for...
Undergraduateloafmenot - May 16, 2012 / sandhyas - May 17, 2012
|'Seeking knowledge' - Spelman admission essay
2 - lol im in the process just didnt know if that would exactly be a good opening statement. Thank you...
Undergraduatebella21 - May 16, 2012 / bella21 - May 16, 2012
|I learned a great deal about me over past years- Readmission from suspension(UofH)
NEW - I am reapplying to my school from academic suspension, I would love some feedback about my essay, please help...
Undergraduateskazi95 - May 15, 2012 / — -
|'A visit to the park with my daughter' - Diversity John Hopkins Nursing
NEW - 1. Diversity is one of the core values of the Johns Hopkins University School of Nursing. Members of the...
Undergraduateola77 - May 13, 2012 / — -
|What led me to be a physician (for AMCAS)
Undergraduatekcalex13 - May 9, 2012 / kcalex13 - May 10, 2012
|Dependent Children Program Assistant: Application Essay
2 - Great introduction!!! ...Through years of experience working with children, I have become an enlightened teacher with many positive assets...
Undergraduatehgrierson - May 8, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 10, 2012
|(Creative Writing with a specialization in fiction) Study Objective essay
2 - ...There is no doubt that writers taught and trained in the United States is responsible for creating famous, world...
Undergraduatemaria88 - May 8, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 9, 2012
|(Psychology and Criminal Justice) What should the Subheadings for my portfolio be?
2 - Brainstorm: Here are my thoughts for the heading and sub-headings) One: My career path (Know myself, interest, explore...
Undergraduateb15m4 - May 4, 2012 / Jeecee - May 9, 2012
|(Renaissance style education / communication and organization / DHC) - DAVIS HONOR
2 - " I have diverse interests that vary from orchestra performance to social work and healthcare to biological research." ...
Undergraduatelindavis83514 - May 1, 2012 / jgonzalezd - May 8, 2012
|'challenge with my confidence' - PEACE CORPS ESSAY #2
2 - Amazing essay! I read through and could find pretty much nothing wrong with it other than some very minor...
Undergraduatejrtosc - May 7, 2012 / hgrierson - May 8, 2012
|A passion for research and a change for the world (Michigan research community)
Undergraduatetehfunkicookie - May 7, 2012 / tehfunkicookie - May 7, 2012
|Fantasie - My journey as a pianist and a medical researcher. (Research Application )
2 - I remember sliding my fingers across the smooth wood, letting my my eyes float across the keys: black-white-black-white-black. Yet...
Undergraduatemwskwong - May 3, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 3, 2012
|"Cidadăos do Mundo" Describing my participation in any significant project!
2 - Hi, I think, you can add more details like importance of project, how that was important for you...
Undergraduateothonlima - May 3, 2012 / ana_p - May 3, 2012
|"Casa Para Todos" - HONORS PROGRAM - GOALS AND PLANS FOR FUTURE
NEW - On a separate sheet of paper, typed or legibly handwritten, tell us about what you hope to achieve through...
Undergraduateothonlima - May 2, 2012 / — -
|'degree in business management' - Essay describing long-term career goals
5 - Hi, I would like to suggest some important points which will help you to arrange your essay in...
Undergraduatelnw - May 1, 2012 / ana_p - May 2, 2012
|"Yourself", "your career aspirations" and "why you think you deserve this bursary?"
4 - Write a detailed description of your research objectives. Try to answer such questions: What you hope to get from...
Undergraduatemwskwong - Apr 30, 2012 / maria88 - May 2, 2012
|"We must reform society before we can reform ourselves" essay
4 - You are an amazing writer, the way you write is very unique and brilliant! Your way of writing actually...
UndergraduateSandra0805 - Apr 28, 2012 / aboodbataineh - May 1, 2012
|'picked the wrong school for the wrong reasons' - Boulder Essay: Transferring
4 - thank you!...
Undergraduatetaurus92 - Apr 19, 2012 / taurus92 - May 1, 2012
|'Butterfly' - acceptance to engineering university- review
NEW - One of my favourite insects is the butterfly. I am especially drawn to its ability to transform from an...
Undergraduateearlise - May 1, 2012 / — -
|'small classes and discussion board' - Tennessee Tech HONORS PROGRAM ESSAY
NEW - Why do you want to join the Tennessee Tech Honors Program? The Honors Program is known worldwide for...
Undergraduateothonlima - Apr 30, 2012 / — -
|'Dear host family' - Global Ugrad exchange program. Describe Yourself.
2 - I am already aware that being an exchange student is very challenging, but I am ready for this journey...
Undergraduatefrank1992 - Apr 27, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 30, 2012
|'when Columbia exploded while re-entering the earth' - UMD essay
Undergraduatejthomas2844 - Apr 27, 2012 / jthomas2844 - Apr 29, 2012
|'To save for education' / 'Taiwan experience' - Business School Admissions
Undergraduateskyhigh - Apr 27, 2012 / ana_p - Apr 27, 2012
|My Grandma walk hours for a broccoli. Poly supplement for NYU
NEW - Hi, I'm an international student applying to the civil engineering major in NYU-Poly. I know it's a little late...
UndergraduateAlina0223 - Apr 26, 2012 / — -
|Q/A for my Uni admission (applied for neuroscience)
2 - I have been fascinated with biology from the day I learnt it was a subject in its own right.I...
Undergraduatembafa3 - Apr 25, 2012 / dtd514 - Apr 25, 2012
|Does my high school record accurately represent your academic abilities. MSU essay
2 - When I first came to United States, I didn't understand any English, but, I still have to go to...
Undergraduatejiayoustate - Apr 23, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 25, 2012
|'I choose not to wonder' - Rutgers Admission Essay
3 - Hi:) The whole passage seems to me a little bit general. I think you need to be more specific...
Undergraduateice2991 - Apr 25, 2012 / MsEmily0421 - Apr 25, 2012
|'respect and self motivation' - My biggest challenge I have to overcome essay
2 - OnAt the breakfast table I told my mom that I was going to be an honor graduate, knowing that...
Undergraduategera - Apr 23, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 25, 2012
|'hearing 1, 2, 3, PUSH' - What Career i Plan On Persuing ?
UndergraduateKayyKayy - Apr 23, 2012 / amanda98387 - Apr 24, 2012
|Cultural Exchange and Quality of Education; "Global UGRAD Prog"- Why study in the US?
2 - ...However, there was a day when my Mom was packing my travelling staffstuff? luggage? to USA. Since then, I...
Undergraduatefrank1992 - Apr 19, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 24, 2012
|Young Family Caregiver - Transfer Essay
2 - Just in this first paragraph, which is wonderful, I would already have to disagree with whomever has said it...
Undergraduatemaria1988 - Apr 20, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 24, 2012
|'My parents gave me education' - admission who impacted my life'
3 - There are certain people, when we asked them about who impact your life's, they usually mentioned their parents. ,,,,,,...
Undergraduatemmsmadan - Apr 15, 2012 / haitham - Apr 24, 2012
|'I will make full use of this rare opportunity' -A short essay for a transfer program
3 - Hi it's good, but you still have to improve your spelling. Your Grammer is well for an ESL student....
UndergraduateSwee Lyn - Apr 22, 2012 / haitham - Apr 24, 2012
|"matriarchal queen" - Northwestern Admissions
5 - Question: What are the unique qualities of Northwestern - and of the specific undergraduate school to which you are...
Undergraduateack92 - Apr 17, 2012 / Hightower - Apr 22, 2012
|"a positive impact on people's lives" commitment to a career in primary health care.
UndergraduateIndy511 - Apr 18, 2012 / adelahj - Apr 19, 2012
|'He always encouraged me to be a computer scientist' - influential person for me
16 - here are some suggestions: I still remember my inspiration to pursue a career in computer science; a computer...
Undergraduatemeandstudying - Apr 6, 2012 / sara alawieh - Apr 19, 2012
|Essay: My Grandpa has had a significant influence on me
2 - ...and garden in the back of his farm, and he would point out the newest additions of growth, which...
Undergraduatebrittanyc - Apr 17, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 18, 2012
|'Are there any borders?' - genetic engineering essay
Undergraduatesara alawieh - Apr 16, 2012 / sara alawieh - Apr 18, 2012
|'on a regular sleeping schedule again' - Transfer Essay to Truman State Unviersity
3 - That is a rather subjective statement. As a matter of fact, SSRIs only help about a 1/3rd of people...
Undergraduatemcgraves91 - Apr 12, 2012 / mcgraves91 - Apr 17, 2012
|'I am advertising' - your academic and personal interests and goals
5 - Becoming a true grownup is what I am going to be When I finish college. - might wanna rephrase...
UndergraduateNicoleliu - Apr 13, 2012 / npnpnp - Apr 17, 2012
|Common App #1 - "I am not Richard Feynman."
2 - Well written, amusing. Honestly, I have nothing to reproach. Being yourself is the best thing you could do. And...
UndergraduateThePost1994 - Apr 15, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 15, 2012
|Chemical Engineering - Waitlist essay for UC Davis
4 - Hi Thomas, Menuka has done excellent editing. It sounds much better that way. Also I too believe that...
Undergraduatetomtom123 - Apr 7, 2012 / dumi - Apr 14, 2012
|'Wanting to pursue an economics major' George Washington University admissions
3 - Add some more reasons - why exactly you chose this programme and so forth. I mean, don't write only...
Undergraduatebreyongin - Mar 30, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 14, 2012
|"I am shy" - 500 word Personal essay - starting points?
5 - Shyness and fascination with own subject are very typical for many great scientists. I completely understand you. Let yourself...
UndergraduateBeautifulchaos - Apr 1, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 14, 2012
|Admission essay for Engineering college in India - how to start writing it?
Undergraduatetanveerhossain - Apr 11, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 14, 2012
|'visitation with Jessica' - Obstacle Overcome / Why UCF?
Undergraduatemaspen1995 - Apr 13, 2012 / maspen1995 - Apr 14, 2012
|'finish my studies to help my parents' - WHY DO I DESERVE TO BE A SCHOLAR?
2 - Try to write more about your qualities. Give some real reasons why you think that you would be a...
Undergraduateharuhi fuu - Apr 14, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 14, 2012
|'a better Christian person' an obstacle you have faced & overcome and the lessons
Undergraduatealea - Apr 13, 2012 / sue singh - Apr 14, 2012
|'people you meet impact you' - 500 word Personal essay
2 - Good thoughts but your thoughts need a little bit of reorganizing. Good luck in your future endeavors....
UndergraduateBeautifulchaos - Apr 9, 2012 / alea - Apr 13, 2012
|'Essay about Unicorns; Greed still rules the human race' - U of M Honors
Undergraduateesha33 - Mar 25, 2012 / alea - Apr 13, 2012
|What makes YOU unique? point to specific qualities, hobbies, interests, talents..
9 - Thank you Rachapong, the essay question is : "What makes YOU unique? Please point to specific qualities, hobbies,...
Undergraduatejawad noah - Mar 29, 2012 / study abroad - Apr 13, 2012
|'a software specialist' - Why did I choose my university and Goal of my study
3 - The program's curriculum is outstanding, as it consists of a wide range of courses to choose from. Furthermore,Through...
Undergraduateoldapachee - Mar 27, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 12, 2012
|'broken computer' statement: a life story and how it helped shape my character
5 - So I should say, blue screen of death and then specifiy that the black screen simply is the PC...
Undergraduatearsenal10 - Apr 11, 2012 / arsenal10 - Apr 12, 2012
|UC Davis wait list essay - Veterinary and research pursuits
Undergraduatekjzee0106 - Apr 11, 2012 / kjzee0106 - Apr 12, 2012
|'I received the unfortunate news' admission essay explaining prior academic dismissal
6 - Thanks everyone for the help, I truly appreciate it... Im having trouble ending it because the other admission essays...
Undergraduatechicc032 - Apr 11, 2012 / chicc032 - Apr 12, 2012
|'Wildlife around me' - Transfer Essay for Purdue University
2 - Ever since childhood, I have always been fascinated about the world around me, most especially wildlife. My earliest memories...
Undergraduatenikolas13 - Apr 12, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 12, 2012
|'I saw many leaders' - Global Ugrad exchange program
NEW - Please describe your idea of good leadership. Who do you think is a good leader, and why? What is...
Undergraduatefrank1992 - Apr 12, 2012 / — -
|'Radiography and passion to help others' - admissions essay
3 - Thank you Susan for your response. Here is my finished essay. I would appreciate any feedback ;-) ...
Undergraduateharmony - Apr 10, 2012 / harmony - Apr 11, 2012
|'getting an education is very important' - Essay to attend a Summer program
Undergraduatesunflower123 - Apr 5, 2012 / arsenal10 - Apr 11, 2012
|'engaged in my family company' - extracurricular activities or work experience
8 - Hi sathiprakash, In this line..."During my stay at the company, I worked as a computer operator. I usually...
Undergraduatesathiprakash - Mar 7, 2012 / peterc - Apr 11, 2012
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