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|Admissions Essay for Art School: Confident and Eager to Learn More
3 - I made some changes; what do you think? NSCADU is short for Nova Scotia College of Art and Design...
Undergraduatesmoshr - Jan 31, 2012 / smoshr - Feb 1, 2012
|'As an introvert' - a person essay is past boyfriend appropriate?
3 - Hey Madison, I really like your essay. It's so well-written and expressed, at the same time conveys the...
Undergraduatemadison_mattox - Jan 31, 2012 / Athena - Feb 1, 2012
|'selfless, giving, and caring' - Dominican University- Nursing Supplement Prompt
4 - Hi! A well-written essay! You are answering the question, while also explaining what inspired you. Maybe u could...
Undergraduateheyhihello - Jan 31, 2012 / Athena - Feb 1, 2012
|'I got my first internship in my life' - UM unique essay
2 - Hi Markwu overall, you have drawn well. nonetheless, the first sentence must be "eye-catching", and powerful one. such...
Undergraduatemarkwu - Jan 31, 2012 / apidjakfar - Feb 1, 2012
|(well-known pharmacy school) - this paragraph to improve
Undergraduateunjh4545 - Jan 31, 2012 / — -
|"too compassionate" - McMaster Health Science: What defines you as you?
Undergraduateiliketofu - Jan 30, 2012 / iliketofu - Jan 31, 2012
|'my Armenian and Italian neighbors' - USC Academic Interests
Undergraduateaisl09 - Jan 9, 2012 / markwu - Jan 31, 2012
|'Neurodegenerative diseases' - Personal statement for SURF program in US
2 - As my mother tongue isn't english, so I am worried about every single things. Form proper word or grammar...
Undergraduatewhiungter - Jan 30, 2012 / ranger_85 - Jan 31, 2012
|'I researched registered nurse' - career project
6 - I like keeping things neat and being organized is important to me. AdditionallyFurther , I learnedfeel I am not...
Undergraduatedhamain87 - Jan 29, 2012 / dumi - Jan 31, 2012
|'rid ourselves of rationalizations' - parsons challenge
2 - I'm not really good at writing myself but I can help you with some grammar mistakes. Put a comma...
UndergraduateMikemikemike - Jan 30, 2012 / iliketofu - Jan 31, 2012
|'more analytical approach towards my life' - how you became interested in art
13 - these two disciplines has formed an integral part of my daily life. Chile and New York has given...
UndergraduateMikemikemike - Dec 21, 2011 / cypress - Jan 30, 2012
|'Supplementing my sociological studies' - USC transfer
3 - I really like this essay. I feel like it really grasps the reader because of how it is written....
Undergraduatecallonme - Jan 29, 2012 / aisl09 - Jan 30, 2012
|USC (The Experience of Geeks in the Future / Geeks and Nerds)
2 - Since this school is dedicated to nurturing its students into becomin g successful, the education that this school gives...
UndergraduateMEM4FP - Jan 28, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 30, 2012
|'I live in a big city' - UM [Identity of your community]
1 - Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine,...
Undergraduatemarkwu - Jan 30, 2012 / — -
|(delete "During my years in the *** lab? - how to make it shorter and effective
3 - Hi josexirizarryx7, Thank you so much for your help! and I am pleased that you liked my essay...
Undergraduateunjh4545 - Jan 29, 2012 / unjh4545 - Jan 29, 2012
|'From Sri Lanka' + 'The Church of Jesus' - A setback I have encountered in my life
3 - A setback encountered in my life essay x3. thank you in advance! Can someone edit my university essays...
Undergraduatedianneraja - Dec 22, 2011 / rajadianne - Jan 29, 2012
|'sent to live with relatives' - u mich supplement
1 - Describe the unique qualities that attract you to the specific undergraduate College or School (including preferred admission and dual...
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|'in one fateful day, my life changed forever' - Penn State UPark statement
5 - Instead of focusing so much on how you've development philosophically. talk about how you want to pursue your major...
Undergraduateapv - Jan 27, 2012 / anpan - Jan 29, 2012
|'The mobile care community' - undergrad admission
2 - Hi, Rohit1994 I would say that you have invaluable experience in helping people especially the survivors of Tsunami....
UndergraduateRohit1994 - Jan 28, 2012 / apidjakfar - Jan 29, 2012
|'enjoyed studying the human mind' - Help with Common App Essay
2 - You used 'missionary' a lot in this essay. Well, redundancy is not good in college essay... you need to...
Undergraduatemonjinho - Jan 29, 2012 / unjh4545 - Jan 29, 2012
|Research essay for Ryerson's Radio and Television Arts - confused about format
2 - If you are writing a research essay, don't start from the intro. Since you chose Spiderman from 1967,...
UndergraduateMikeCola - Jan 28, 2012 / unjh4545 - Jan 29, 2012
|'passion for computers, video games, and media' - USC Supplemental 2
2 - It will be an honor being part of the modernist vanguard for technology and calling them my friendscolleagues? apart...
UndergraduateMEM4FP - Jan 28, 2012 / A1C PD - Jan 29, 2012
|'very high expectations for me' - SUPERMAN
UndergraduateSpellWing - Jan 28, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 28, 2012
|'when I first came to America in 11th grade' - Personal Challenge--short essay
Undergraduatexinxin - Jan 26, 2012 / xinxin - Jan 28, 2012
|UW: It goes to show that earning good grades isn't the ONLY way to define success
1 - UW Prompt: Tell us a story from your life, describing an experience that either demonstrates your character or helped...
Undergraduatedje1212 - Jan 28, 2012 / — -
|'reason I have is really low GPA' - Chemical Engineering Major Transfer Essay
2 - When I went to Manchester Community College, I took more chemistry and I found out that I loved chemistry...
Undergraduatenirajpatel - Jan 28, 2012 / qadirv - Jan 28, 2012
|UC Berkeley Questionnaire on Disability
12 - Dear Saurabh, This is truly inspirational.. Well written and well answered... I feel that I have got into...
Undergraduatesaurabh93 - Jan 22, 2012 / Rohit1994 - Jan 28, 2012
|"transcend through cultural ghettos" - UMICH SUPPLEMENT
2 - On the outside, most people see me as a private school student, attending the most prestigious college prep high...
Undergraduateanpan - Jan 28, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 28, 2012
|'to understand how human grow up and the consist' - Pittsburg University
1 - THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!!!!!!!! Everybody mayhave a unique adjective to summarize his personality and briefly mine is "perseverant". To...
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|Learning From My Dissapontments (saint marys supplement)
UndergraduateSarahrenee - Jan 22, 2012 / JuliaRose - Jan 27, 2012
|'Decisions, Decisions' by Julia Snowdon - FIT essay
1 - I'm a senior applying to the Fashion Institute of Technology and I have to write an essay answering this...
UndergraduateJuliaRose - Jan 27, 2012 / — -
|Ryerson University - Radio and Television Arts research-based essay
Undergraduateowusuh001 - Jan 27, 2012 / apv - Jan 27, 2012
|'unfulfilled promise in my life' - autobiographical essay for admission to Smith
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|Artist statement, photography major
UndergraduateMikemikemike - Jan 27, 2012 / Mikemikemike - Jan 27, 2012
|'to test valor' - Relate interest in studying at Georgetown to your goals
10 - Wow! It's so wonderfully written and directly conveys why you'd like to join Georgetown. There aren't any grammatical errors...
Undergraduatethatgirl12 - Jan 10, 2012 / Athena - Jan 27, 2012
|'Hungarian and public health' - UT Austin undergraduate transfer application
Undergraduatevargam91 - Jan 26, 2012 / vargam91 - Jan 26, 2012
|'to improve my Spanish and get to know more' - essay of Self Introduciton
2 - I'm working on my senior project, which is a "Wireless Handheld Voting Device". It is a tool for students...
Undergraduatejeannief - Jan 26, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 26, 2012
|'Hungary, Goals, Movies..' - Personal Statement to Italy- motivation letter
3 - Your comment made me smile, but I'm getting more and more confused.. all my friends told me it's a...
Undergraduate5u2ie - Jan 19, 2012 / 5u2ie - Jan 26, 2012
|'bad feelings and dark days' - a personal hardship and it's significance
UndergraduateBrandon94 - Jan 23, 2012 / Athena - Jan 25, 2012
|'I can achieve academic goals' - UW Madison Essay
5 - You're doing a good job of demonstrating conquer of an obstacle while keeping it brief! Can you look at...
Undergraduatedanielcoley93 - Jan 25, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 25, 2012
|HOW I BECAME MORE CONFIDENT (reflective application essay)
1 - My assignment was to write a reflective essay that could be used as a college application essay. Please help...
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|'I dream about going to college, but I don't have much money' - About yourself
Undergraduatetiffanyskylar - Jan 11, 2012 / tiffanyskylar - Jan 25, 2012
|Eugene Lang College- "Tell us about a time when you were in the minority" essay
UndergraduateNiQyira - Jan 18, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 25, 2012
|How life experience has prepared me to be a nurse.
Undergraduatekhminkcuti3 - Jan 23, 2012 / khminkcuti3 - Jan 25, 2012
|SOP-M.S/PhD Research , Computer Science - Review
3 - Excellence in any sphere of life can be achieved through determination and perseverance. These are the driving forces that...
Undergraduatearunsprasath - Oct 17, 2011 / arunsprasath - Jan 25, 2012
|"Cheap House Is Not Available" - Apply for University of Texas.
4 - That new paragraph looks promising! The Financial Analyst Program McCombs offers is so unique that excites me a...
Undergraduateyuxxx653 - Jan 12, 2012 / inakilopez - Jan 25, 2012
|'A dozen gleaming faces' - Common app short answer
Undergraduatemonjinho - Jan 16, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 25, 2012
|'Getting lost in a book' - Favorite Place to get lost -UVA
4 - I like your essay! How about including a few examples of some of the places you have traveled...
Undergraduatesnuggie - Dec 19, 2011 / SirDM94 - Jan 25, 2012
|'My father had been my inspiration' - Engineering Essay - UofT
2 - Hi, I liked your essay :)I just corrected a couple of things in the revised version. ....lives by...
Undergraduateanita123 - Jan 24, 2012 / Athena - Jan 25, 2012
|'passion for business' - A Hopeful Junior Transfer - Personal Essay
8 - Thank you! You're right. I just read my whole essay, and that part really does take it off topic....
Undergraduatespeedoflight25 - Jan 17, 2012 / speedoflight25 - Jan 24, 2012
|(starting up my own company / the field of computer science) Madison Wisconsin
1 - Statement 1: The University values an educational environment that provides all members of the campus community with opportunities...
Undergraduateclbembry - Jan 24, 2012 / — -
|PURDUE's "my autobiography - digital life"
4 - Hi :) No worries! You are doing fine. About your questions: this was copy from my last statement,...
Undergraduategraxezi - Jan 23, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 24, 2012
|My goal to transfer to Nursing School Admission
Undergraduatebyeung1489 - Jan 24, 2012 / TokoziBlonde - Jan 24, 2012
|'the ins and outs of cars' - Mechanical Engineering UofT
Undergraduatejasonty9 - Dec 3, 2011 / anita123 - Jan 24, 2012
|(My exploration / Autism) - UC Essays Review
Undergraduatesaurabh93 - Jan 23, 2012 / Athena - Jan 24, 2012
|'more levels to reach' - CALTECH ESSAY
6 - Edited version: "This moment in fourth grade stuck with me for years, and is still as clear as...
Undergraduatemorecelery - Dec 26, 2011 / morecelery - Jan 23, 2012
|"My Goal is Success" - Summer Program Essay
1 - Essay should be 250 words and it must include : "Please share some of your reasons for wanting to...
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|(give back to the communities / interest in philosophy) - UW 1 and 2
Undergraduateclgroth - Jan 17, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 23, 2012
|'I worked diligently in school' - Common App Transfer Essay - Education
11 - I approached him afterwards, where he said "oh, Karla, I didn't think anyone would actually do it. Thank you,...
Undergraduatejimmik - Jan 14, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 23, 2012
|WCMC-Q admission Essay about Dreams
Undergraduatemartyr - Jan 23, 2012 / martyr - Jan 23, 2012
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