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|(delete "During my years in the *** lab? - how to make it shorter and effective
3 - Hi josexirizarryx7, Thank you so much for your help! and I am pleased that you liked my essay...
Undergraduateunjh4545 - Jan 29, 2012 / unjh4545 - Jan 29, 2012
|'From Sri Lanka' + 'The Church of Jesus' - A setback I have encountered in my life
3 - A setback encountered in my life essay x3. thank you in advance! Can someone edit my university essays...
Undergraduatedianneraja - Dec 22, 2011 / rajadianne - Jan 29, 2012
|'sent to live with relatives' - u mich supplement
NEW - Describe the unique qualities that attract you to the specific undergraduate College or School (including preferred admission and dual...
Undergraduateanpan - Jan 29, 2012 / — -
|'in one fateful day, my life changed forever' - Penn State UPark statement
5 - Instead of focusing so much on how you've development philosophically. talk about how you want to pursue your major...
Undergraduateapv - Jan 27, 2012 / anpan - Jan 29, 2012
|'The mobile care community' - undergrad admission
2 - Hi, Rohit1994 I would say that you have invaluable experience in helping people especially the survivors of Tsunami....
UndergraduateRohit1994 - Jan 28, 2012 / apidjakfar - Jan 29, 2012
|'enjoyed studying the human mind' - Help with Common App Essay
2 - You used 'missionary' a lot in this essay. Well, redundancy is not good in college essay... you need to...
Undergraduatemonjinho - Jan 29, 2012 / unjh4545 - Jan 29, 2012
|Research essay for Ryerson's Radio and Television Arts - confused about format
2 - If you are writing a research essay, don't start from the intro. Since you chose Spiderman from 1967,...
UndergraduateMikeCola - Jan 28, 2012 / unjh4545 - Jan 29, 2012
|'passion for computers, video games, and media' - USC Supplemental 2
2 - It will be an honor being part of the modernist vanguard for technology and calling them my friendscolleagues? apart...
UndergraduateMEM4FP - Jan 28, 2012 / A1C PD - Jan 29, 2012
|'very high expectations for me' - SUPERMAN
UndergraduateSpellWing - Jan 28, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 28, 2012
|UW: It goes to show that earning good grades isn't the ONLY way to define success
NEW - UW Prompt: Tell us a story from your life, describing an experience that either demonstrates your character or helped...
Undergraduatedje1212 - Jan 28, 2012 / — -
|'reason I have is really low GPA' - Chemical Engineering Major Transfer Essay
2 - When I went to Manchester Community College, I took more chemistry and I found out that I loved chemistry...
Undergraduatenirajpatel - Jan 28, 2012 / qadirv - Jan 28, 2012
|UC Berkeley Questionnaire on Disability
11 - Dear Saurabh, This is truly inspirational.. Well written and well answered... I feel that I have got into...
Undergraduatesaurabh93 - Jan 22, 2012 / Rohit1994 - Jan 28, 2012
|"transcend through cultural ghettos" - UMICH SUPPLEMENT
2 - On the outside, most people see me as a private school student, attending the most prestigious college prep high...
Undergraduateanpan - Jan 28, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 28, 2012
|'to understand how human grow up and the consist' - Pittsburg University
NEW - THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!!!!!!!! Everybody mayhave a unique adjective to summarize his personality and briefly mine is "perseverant". To...
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|Learning From My Dissapontments (saint marys supplement)
UndergraduateSarahrenee - Jan 22, 2012 / JuliaRose - Jan 27, 2012
|'Decisions, Decisions' by Julia Snowdon - FIT essay
NEW - I'm a senior applying to the Fashion Institute of Technology and I have to write an essay answering this...
UndergraduateJuliaRose - Jan 27, 2012 / — -
|Ryerson University - Radio and Television Arts research-based essay
Undergraduateowusuh001 - Jan 27, 2012 / apv - Jan 27, 2012
|'unfulfilled promise in my life' - autobiographical essay for admission to Smith
Undergraduatejet1981 - Jan 27, 2012 / — -
|Artist statement, photography major
UndergraduateMikemikemike - Jan 27, 2012 / Mikemikemike - Jan 27, 2012
|'to test valor' - Relate interest in studying at Georgetown to your goals
10 - Wow! It's so wonderfully written and directly conveys why you'd like to join Georgetown. There aren't any grammatical errors...
Undergraduatethatgirl12 - Jan 10, 2012 / Athena - Jan 27, 2012
|'Hungarian and public health' - UT Austin undergraduate transfer application
Undergraduatevargam91 - Jan 26, 2012 / vargam91 - Jan 26, 2012
|'when I first came to America in 11th grade' - Personal Challenge--short essay
NEW - Am I answering the questions correctly? Do I have any grammatical errors? Any suggestions on how to improve this...
Undergraduatexinxin - Jan 26, 2012 / — -
|'to improve my Spanish and get to know more' - essay of Self Introduciton
2 - I'm working on my senior project, which is a "Wireless Handheld Voting Device". It is a tool for students...
Undergraduatejeannief - Jan 26, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 26, 2012
|'Hungary, Goals, Movies..' - Personal Statement to Italy- motivation letter
3 - Your comment made me smile, but I'm getting more and more confused.. all my friends told me it's a...
Undergraduate5u2ie - Jan 19, 2012 / 5u2ie - Jan 26, 2012
|'bad feelings and dark days' - a personal hardship and it's significance
UndergraduateBrandon94 - Jan 23, 2012 / Athena - Jan 25, 2012
|'I can achieve academic goals' - UW Madison Essay
5 - You're doing a good job of demonstrating conquer of an obstacle while keeping it brief! Can you look at...
Undergraduatedanielcoley93 - Jan 25, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 25, 2012
|HOW I BECAME MORE CONFIDENT (reflective application essay)
NEW - My assignment was to write a reflective essay that could be used as a college application essay. Please help...
Undergraduatesavstar26 - Jan 25, 2012 / — -
|'I dream about going to college, but I don't have much money' - About yourself
Undergraduatetiffanyskylar - Jan 11, 2012 / tiffanyskylar - Jan 25, 2012
|How life experience has prepared me to be a nurse.
Undergraduatekhminkcuti3 - Jan 23, 2012 / khminkcuti3 - Jan 25, 2012
|SOP-M.S/PhD Research , Computer Science - Review
3 - Excellence in any sphere of life can be achieved through determination and perseverance. These are the driving forces that...
Undergraduatearunsprasath - Oct 17, 2011 / arunsprasath - Jan 25, 2012
|"Cheap House Is Not Available" - Apply for University of Texas.
4 - That new paragraph looks promising! The Financial Analyst Program McCombs offers is so unique that excites me a...
Undergraduateyuxxx653 - Jan 12, 2012 / inakilopez - Jan 25, 2012
|'A dozen gleaming faces' - Common app short answer
Undergraduatemonjinho - Jan 16, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 25, 2012
|'My father had been my inspiration' - Engineering Essay - UofT
2 - Hi, I liked your essay :)I just corrected a couple of things in the revised version. ....lives by...
Undergraduateanita123 - Jan 24, 2012 / Athena - Jan 25, 2012
|'Getting lost in a book' - Favorite Place to get lost -UVA
3 - GREAT first sentence.. very insightful. One place that I can usually count ---Get rid of "that" whenever it is...
Undergraduatesnuggie - Dec 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 24, 2012
|'passion for business' - A Hopeful Junior Transfer - Personal Essay
8 - Thank you! You're right. I just read my whole essay, and that part really does take it off topic....
Undergraduatespeedoflight25 - Jan 17, 2012 / speedoflight25 - Jan 24, 2012
|(starting up my own company / the field of computer science) Madison Wisconsin
NEW - Statement 1: The University values an educational environment that provides all members of the campus community with opportunities...
Undergraduateclbembry - Jan 24, 2012 / — -
|PURDUE's "my autobiography - digital life"
4 - Hi :) No worries! You are doing fine. About your questions: this was copy from my last statement,...
Undergraduategraxezi - Jan 23, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 24, 2012
|My goal to transfer to Nursing School Admission
Undergraduatebyeung1489 - Jan 24, 2012 / TokoziBlonde - Jan 24, 2012
|'the ins and outs of cars' - Mechanical Engineering UofT
Undergraduatejasonty9 - Dec 3, 2011 / anita123 - Jan 24, 2012
|(My exploration / Autism) - UC Essays Review
Undergraduatesaurabh93 - Jan 23, 2012 / Athena - Jan 24, 2012
|'more levels to reach' - CALTECH ESSAY
6 - Edited version: "This moment in fourth grade stuck with me for years, and is still as clear as...
Undergraduatemorecelery - Dec 26, 2011 / morecelery - Jan 23, 2012
|"My Goal is Success" - Summer Program Essay
NEW - Essay should be 250 words and it must include : "Please share some of your reasons for wanting to...
Undergraduatejosexirizarryx7 - Jan 23, 2012 / — -
|(give back to the communities / interest in philosophy) - UW 1 and 2
Undergraduateclgroth - Jan 17, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 23, 2012
|'I worked diligently in school' - Common App Transfer Essay - Education
11 - I approached him afterwards, where he said "oh, Karla, I didn't think anyone would actually do it. Thank you,...
Undergraduatejimmik - Jan 14, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 23, 2012
|WCMC-Q admission Essay about Dreams
Undergraduatemartyr - Jan 23, 2012 / martyr - Jan 23, 2012
|The Blind Boy That Taught Me How To See / RISD
5 - Thank you so much! I edited the essay; mostly the beginning and end. THE BLIND BOY THAT TAUGHT...
Undergraduatephenotype - Jan 20, 2012 / phenotype - Jan 23, 2012
|'sharing a goal common to many immigrants' - Help OSU short answer
UndergraduateTopEffort - Jan 22, 2012 / TopEffort - Jan 22, 2012
|'middle-class household, suburban Pennsylvania' Rice cultural tradition/contribution
3 - Well, in the first two paragraphs ,"I" counted seventeen times that you say 'I', there must be a way...
Undergraduategurecka - Dec 29, 2011 / Thors Hammer - Jan 22, 2012
|'My fascination with universities' - Common APP ESSAY-Why I wish to transfer
Undergraduatelamia09 - Jan 17, 2012 / lamia09 - Jan 22, 2012
|Extra curricular essay for Common app-Volunteering at a hospital
Undergraduateaisl09 - Jan 22, 2012 / aisl09 - Jan 22, 2012
|'I'm from Vermont' - Stanford Roommate question
Undergraduatepfrench - Dec 22, 2011 / Sierra_lee1 - Jan 22, 2012
|(love for experiments / remote controlled circuit) - IVYs.
Undergraduatedpa - Jan 18, 2012 / Tennisbaby111 - Jan 22, 2012
|Personal circumstances (that would be useful for us to consider your application)
UndergraduateNesreen - Jan 21, 2012 / Nesreen - Jan 22, 2012
|"Look at her; she is the only Chinese." - Common App personal
Undergraduatemichelleyixuan - Jan 14, 2012 / michelleyixuan - Jan 22, 2012
|Engineering Leaders: Experience inside/outside of class -USC Suppelment
6 - Your welcome! I guess if its the usual length of essays submitted, you could stick to this length. Maybe...
UndergraduateRanak - Jan 21, 2012 / Athena - Jan 22, 2012
|'my passion for medicine' - USC Supplement Essay
5 - I really like this essay because you do a great job of giving insight to your interests and personality....
Undergraduatessm28 - Jan 9, 2012 / aisl09 - Jan 22, 2012
|"The Redbox & McDonald Days" (CommonApp essay)
4 - Thanks for providing a really well written example of a narrative to me. The last attempt at trying to...
UndergraduateThe Quill - Jan 17, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Jan 21, 2012
|'I'm pregnant?' - Admissions Essay - core values
4 - Yes family first - and you still where able to pursue your professional development. That's great for you and...
Undergraduatehnp123 - Jan 19, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Jan 21, 2012
|George Washington U: "Orientation Towards Success" RISKY Essay
5 - I like how you're being honest about why you applied. Still, maybe you could focus a little bit less...
Undergraduatepch340 - Jan 21, 2012 / Snowflakes - Jan 21, 2012
|'a strong foundation in business' Fashion Institute of Technology, Personal Statement
2 - I stopped reading at "ugly"... Please do not put yourself down, not ever, not ever on paper, not even...
Undergraduatesumbeams - Jan 21, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Jan 21, 2012
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