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|'I hear the name Steve Jobs after' - Reed 2012 Admission Essay
2 - While the presence of Steve Jobs adds more prestige to the college, as it would to any college, the...
Undergraduatemkpack - Jan 13, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 14, 2012
|'our different human experiences' - USC academic interest paragraph
Undergraduatehopefulsckid - Jan 13, 2012 / hopefulsckid - Jan 14, 2012
|'My parents will support any decision' - CommonApp Personal Statement
2 - Growing up, I havewas lucky enough to live with both of my parents and my younger sister. My family...
Undergraduatesoccergrl7z7 - Jan 14, 2012 / jimmik - Jan 14, 2012
|'Watching Allen playing' - INDICATE AND DESCRIBE AN INFLUENTIAL PERSON
Undergraduatedzung_0809 - Jan 14, 2012 / dzung_0809 - Jan 14, 2012
|'where all the fun comes to die' - Why Bryn Mawr?
5 - your essay is really amazing! but i think you should add some details about what you will bring to...
Undergraduateaugust23vn - Jan 8, 2012 / michelleyixuan - Jan 14, 2012
|'Children Medical Services' - Sophie Davis: meaningful volunteer experience
Undergraduatemohamed459 - Jan 8, 2012 / mohamed459 - Jan 14, 2012
|'become intimate with him/her' - Common Application
2 - , I heard their ineffable debacles, including rapes and brutal assaults. From this unique opportunity, I became more aware...
Undergraduategjfzm55 - Jan 14, 2012 / cabotbp - Jan 14, 2012
|'my career path of forensic psychology' - SEATTLE U PERSONAL STATEMENT
Undergraduatelopezangela30 - Jan 14, 2012 / maryp630 - Jan 14, 2012
|'the city that taught and inspired me in my youth' - Queens university entrance
NEW - In an essay of 300 words or fewer (approximately 1950 characters with spaces), write about your goals for your...
Undergraduatelordsia - Jan 14, 2012 / — -
|'Am I going to be expelled?' - COMMON APP
3 - This is the topic Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work (as in art,...
Undergraduateasm - Jan 13, 2012 / asm - Jan 14, 2012
|'spent all my life in Georgia' - Furman Supplement essay.
Undergraduategugavar - Jan 14, 2012 / mursel - Jan 14, 2012
|(academics and social life / speak life / house) - Tufts essayds
6 - Hey John! Your essays are really great! Good work! :) Your writing shows to its full exent the kind...
Undergraduatejohnfwilliam - Jan 4, 2012 / ItsokaytoGaga - Jan 14, 2012
|'a 5 hour plane ride to Texas' - University Of Richmond Supplement
2 - Your essay sounds well, just write more in the conclusion. It is good when you are describing the value...
Undergraduateblcchp - Jan 13, 2012 / gugavar - Jan 14, 2012
|'the painting competition' - (Grinnell Supplement)
Undergraduategugavar - Jan 14, 2012 / Leehoo - Jan 14, 2012
|[Why Wellesley] 'underneath the Mona Lisa Smile'
NEW - Hey guys~ This is my Why Wellesley essay. It will be submitted in 24 hours so I really need...
UndergraduateLeehoo - Jan 14, 2012 / — -
|(don't know how to start) - SUMMER RESEARCH PROGRAM ESSAYS (completed)
3 - I thought you answered the questions very well. They are very very specific, which is very good. Also, your...
Undergraduateericao2010 - Jan 3, 2012 / singh955 - Jan 14, 2012
|'interest in pursuing a Business' - Ithaca Supplement.
3 - I think this essay is great, but doesn't Ithaca have a 250 character limit? Common App is cutting me...
Undergraduatejult94 - Dec 30, 2011 / jason7 - Jan 14, 2012
|'Different' - Fashion Design - candidate for FIT?
2 - I wouldn't use 'however' as a transition there for your ideas in the two sentences feel like more...
UndergraduateFannie - Jan 13, 2012 / cordyceps - Jan 13, 2012
|'Proud and inspiration' - Admissions Essay
UndergraduateChavCool93 - Dec 31, 2011 / Fannie - Jan 13, 2012
|(We'll meet in Italy / Academics) - Colgate supplemental
5 - Your story was a great way to start off answering the firs question. I wouldn't say "Staying far...
Undergraduatechibinguyen - Jan 9, 2012 / teddyerock - Jan 13, 2012
|'great influence on defining my goals' - Common APP Transfer Essay
3 - I like how concise and straight to the point your essay is, although you might want to look at...
Undergraduatedjb222 - Jan 13, 2012 / cordyceps - Jan 13, 2012
|"You're childish" - Essay about nature of natural sciences
4 - Really nice essay, i do not think i have any suggestions for improving this because in my opinion it...
Undergraduatejeffstark93 - Jan 11, 2012 / oko - Jan 13, 2012
|'Life is a vortex of events' - UT Austin Transfer Essay
NEW - Hi, could you help me with my essay please? I think it's too wordy and has too many grammatical...
Undergraduatenastya - Jan 13, 2012 / — -
|'I have the whole world' - Union College
Undergraduateloolaa - Jan 9, 2012 / surajpoudel - Jan 13, 2012
|Carnegie Mellon Supplement-The Human BOdy vs Computers
4 - I remember reading a couple weeks ago, and I thought it was amazing. It still is. I can really...
Undergraduatejesupai - Dec 26, 2011 / boom - Jan 13, 2012
|'I lay my heart on the line' - North Carolina
4 - You switch back and forth from the british and american version of learnt and learned. When you say this,...
Undergraduatetgupta16 - Jan 10, 2012 / boom - Jan 13, 2012
|'not a sad little creature all the time' - Letter to your roommate - Bryn Mawr
Undergraduateaugust23vn - Jan 8, 2012 / boom - Jan 13, 2012
|'Sarajevo, Jakarta, Thailand, Nepal' - Skidmore College Diversity Answer
3 - Thank you so much! I feel relieved now. I've made some little edits in my answer but that's it....
Undergraduateboom - Jan 12, 2012 / boom - Jan 13, 2012
|"What miracle have you witnessed?" MHC sup.
NEW - This is a real story that happens in my life. And i really appreciate all advices for this draft....
Undergraduatekexu2012 - Jan 13, 2012 / — -
|'I feel powerless' - Common App personal essay
3 - The "s" instead of "z" with regards to the spelling is because I'm from England, so technically they're not...
UndergraduateMoonpie123 - Jan 12, 2012 / Moonpie123 - Jan 13, 2012
|'I am working as a Consulting Engineer' - Description of your self
Undergraduatemouhandissa - Jan 11, 2012 / mouhandissa - Jan 13, 2012
|(To become an artist) - The job I like best---short essay
2 - I think your essay would be stronger if you just elaborate on one experience in full details, like the...
Undergraduateecho5016 - Jan 13, 2012 / duckling - Jan 13, 2012
|'Discovering my passion for learning and math' - COMMONAPP
Undergraduateduckling - Jan 13, 2012 / besareso - Jan 13, 2012
|'joined a motorcycle club' - personal statement, leadership and achievement
UndergraduateValerie - Jan 12, 2012 / besareso - Jan 13, 2012
|'a great learning environment' - essay for Rutgers.
3 - Tell them about your dominance and why you eager to studying in Rutgers University. To my opinion, the very...
UndergraduateSecundinius - Jan 12, 2012 / echo5016 - Jan 13, 2012
|'finding connections between subjects' - WHY REED? SUPPLEMENT ESSAY
Undergraduatetrgcook - Dec 21, 2011 / mkpack - Jan 13, 2012
|'My grandmother, cousins, and I' - VTECH essay
3 - Great beginning, beautiful opening. The flow seems a bit choppy though, and I'm having trouble following the end. ...
Undergraduateariana123 - Jan 12, 2012 / mkpack - Jan 13, 2012
|'Applying academic knowledge to reality' - WPI supplement
Undergraduatenick_vt - Jan 12, 2012 / singh955 - Jan 13, 2012
|'My inherit hobby, reading' - Community essay for Umich
Undergraduate1994yxf - Jan 11, 2012 / Misskaylamarie - Jan 12, 2012
|("Creative thought matters" / "Diversity") - Skidmore College
3 - ...through this motto, I understand that Skidmore is the most suitable environment for me to develop my ability.---Ability to...
Undergraduatehuyenle - Jan 9, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 12, 2012
|'the campus is one of the most unique qualities' - Emory Supplement
Undergraduatesingh955 - Jan 12, 2012 / singh955 - Jan 12, 2012
|'continue my passion for philosophy' - USC Supplement, Why Essay
4 - ...philosophical concepts to real-life problems of civil and poltical cases . Through the USC Study Abroad Program, I...
Undergraduaterunhenry - Jan 8, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 12, 2012
|'San Francisco's nursing program' - Admission essay help
Undergraduateccstudent101 - Jan 12, 2012 / khagazi - Jan 12, 2012
|'education is the vehicle' - Common App Transfer Student
2 - During the previous summer of 2011, I volunteered at the Northern Westchester at a social workers office. These...
Undergraduatesophstar27 - Jan 12, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 12, 2012
|Human nutrition as my major, UIUC essay
NEW - Prompt:In an essay of 300 words or less, please discuss your academic interests and/or professional goals. Please help me...
Undergraduateangi456 - Jan 12, 2012 / — -
|'looking through some old photos' - U Mich - Ann Arbor - Short Essay - Community
UndergraduateartiQlate - Jan 12, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 12, 2012
|'uncertainty about my future' - Common App Essay, Philosophical Passions
2 - Sorry about that post by some slob who has infiltrated the forum, he is suspended now. Sheesh! ---------------------- ...
Undergraduaterunhenry - Jan 8, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 12, 2012
|'pessimists and optimists' unique or interesting things about yourself -Virginia Tech
4 - One sees a glass half empty, and the other half-full. But there are many aspects to a visionary,...
Undergraduateyousafsalim11 - Jan 2, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 12, 2012
|'Everyone makes mistakes' - common app essay
Undergraduatecgleal5 - Jan 12, 2012 / cgleal5 - Jan 12, 2012
|'Girls are like having a flower' - Supplement
3 - Mariagaston thank you so much for you help. Do you think my writing answer the question that has been...
UndergraduateSonam - Jan 12, 2012 / Sonam - Jan 12, 2012
|'Being the son of immigrants' - Ut Austin
Undergraduatebesareso - Jan 10, 2012 / besareso - Jan 12, 2012
|Why are you a good fit? Union and American Questions
Undergraduateteddyerock - Jan 11, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 12, 2012
|'the final dress rehearsal for Monty Python Does Saigon' - Macalester international
Undergraduatecordyceps - Jan 12, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 12, 2012
|'it's electrifying' - Why I want to go to OSU
Undergraduateols2665 - Jan 12, 2012 / ols2665 - Jan 12, 2012
|"Be nice and smile at the customers" - 250 words critique
3 - The eassy shows your hardwork but i feel that you somewhat jumping from sentence to sentence. There is no...
UndergraduateArizonaT - Jan 11, 2012 / aakashneeraj - Jan 12, 2012
|'Judo teacher ' - school or summer activity
UndergraduateBTDTXXDY - Jan 6, 2012 / BTDTXXDY - Jan 12, 2012
|'to play a game of chess without being able to see' - Chess
Undergraduatejinglethetingle - Jan 11, 2012 / collyguy - Jan 11, 2012
|'curiosity about the natural world' - USC Supplement
6 - In my opinion, this is a fantastic response to the prompt. You go into great detail about how passionately...
Undergraduatesaurabh93 - Jan 10, 2012 / collyguy - Jan 11, 2012
|(Global university / Designed to inspire / Wonder) - NYU
Undergraduatecollyguy - Jan 11, 2012 / collyguy - Jan 11, 2012
|(Mexico travel / Unconventional friendship / Florence / Rainbow) - Georgia!
5 - We had the chance to appreciate and to understand the contemporary situations that people from the "old continent" wanted...
Undergraduateapv - Jan 11, 2012 / Huydq - Jan 11, 2012
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