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|"Life is beautiful. Really, it is." - Rider - a significant person in your life?
UndergraduateLizzycello - Jan 3, 2012 / chowkiepowder - Jan 4, 2012
|My position in DECA is the Vice President of Communications - extracurricular activities
4 - Yup this definitely over 1000 characters so i think you should cut out the stuff about how to move...
Undergraduatecwsfan974 - Jan 4, 2012 / DaeDae - Jan 4, 2012
|'I will not follow the same path every other woman in my family' personal statement
NEW - The biggest obstacle I have had has been to convince my family I will not follow the same path...
Undergraduateroxy1028 - Jan 4, 2012 / — -
|'I love to travel' - Georgetown's essay
5 - @trgcook. Thanks. What about saying that I want introduce the foods and fruit in my country to the world,...
UndergraduateBTDTXXDY - Jan 3, 2012 / BTDTXXDY - Jan 4, 2012
|'No hun, but Aria' - Eugene Lang New School: a time when you were in the minority
7 - Ok, well, just try what I suggested? And we'll proceed from there. I'll be helping you as much as...
Undergraduateariawashere - Jan 1, 2012 / DaeDae - Jan 4, 2012
|"I found my name!" - my common app essay?
3 - I like the concept and idea of this essay but you should really consider adding to it. Go deeper...
Undergraduatemyjeselle - Jan 4, 2012 / trgcook - Jan 4, 2012
|'help of great faculty members' - why franklin and marshall
Undergraduatepetcause - Jan 2, 2012 / petcause - Jan 4, 2012
|'to kill another man?' - University of Illinois essay
5 - It has great potential! its very touching! the beginning makes it almost sound like thats the kind of major...
Undergraduatefizz - Jan 2, 2012 / 22kcox - Jan 4, 2012
|'The strength of the Egyptian people' - Why journalism? Emerson supplement
2 - The strength of the Egyptian people and the opportunity of experiencing the victory and pride they have gained through...
UndergraduateCleopatra - Jan 4, 2012 / janeth - Jan 4, 2012
|McMaster Health Science program supplemental -- "Zero"
Undergraduateashu8d - Jan 2, 2012 / EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2012
|The final battle; with the winner coming out with her life - Stanford Supplement
UndergraduateCVP1993 - Jan 1, 2012 / lenaincanada - Jan 4, 2012
|'been on both sides of the fence' - Personal Statement
Undergraduatejadore_lamode68 - Jan 4, 2012 / jadore_lamode68 - Jan 4, 2012
|'the audience was in shock' - extracurricular activity or work experiences
3 - I agree with rvonitter, although in a few sentences you've summed up your accomplishments and achievements through music very...
UndergraduateDuchess123 - Jan 4, 2012 / jadore_lamode68 - Jan 4, 2012
|'my strong conviction of helping people' - George Washington Univ.
NEW - I remembered that day well. I was sent to deliver a letter while volunteering at the Howard University Hospital....
Undergraduatecrystal77 - Jan 4, 2012 / — -
|(Nerdy myself / Bicycle together) - Tufts
4 - first essay is perfect I really like the way you wrote it. second essay is great too, it shows...
Undergraduatedoctorgirl222 - Jan 3, 2012 / johnfwilliam - Jan 4, 2012
|'The Egyptian educational system' - MIT admission
UndergraduateAmrTawfik - Dec 8, 2011 / johnfwilliam - Jan 4, 2012
|Story competition - (significant event in their eraly childhood)
Undergraduatemartabenvinda - Jan 3, 2012 / martabenvinda - Jan 4, 2012
|(great libraries / engaging classes) - Santa Clara
2 - Essay #1: I think the last sentence of this essay is pretty weak. The end of the essay should...
Undergraduatechowkiepowder - Jan 4, 2012 / doctorgirl222 - Jan 4, 2012
|Live a life of integrity - Stanford Supplement Essay
UndergraduateCVP1993 - Jan 1, 2012 / Dilara1010 - Jan 4, 2012
|We are so small but yet so powerful. Common App essay!
UndergraduateAlicegz - Dec 17, 2011 / Dilara1010 - Jan 4, 2012
|'the most exciting experience' - Colgate Supplement: Egypt!
Undergraduatesuper57 - Dec 28, 2011 / flafi120 - Jan 4, 2012
|'quirky sense of humor and creative pranks' - caltech supplement
Undergraduatem7md - Jan 3, 2012 / flafi120 - Jan 4, 2012
|'human-focused care'- Cornell College of Human Ecology Essay
2 - I love how the essay is structured! I think it is perfectly fine, apart from some minor grammatical...
Undergraduatemaximo3994 - Jan 2, 2012 / GrimRippah - Jan 4, 2012
|Supplement Essay-How I Developed Interest in Cancer
19 - I agree with the preceding remarks. As touching as your story seems, there is a very vague linkage, if...
Undergraduateworried26 - Dec 29, 2011 / saurabh93 - Jan 4, 2012
|(learning about science / engineering / city, campus / bands) - COLUMBIA
2 - Essay 1 -- The two topics were different in that biology consisted solely of memorization, as opposed to chemistry...
Undergraduategreeley - Jan 4, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 4, 2012
|'Choosing our friends' -Caltech Short answer (Ethical Dilemma)
Undergraduatebanjofood - Jan 4, 2012 / timurmukhtarov - Jan 4, 2012
|(power outage / the supplier / liberal education) - University of Southern Cali
4 - Thanks guys for all the input. I wanted to be funny, so I put literal events that happened for...
UndergraduateGraceTaylorWei - Jan 3, 2012 / GraceTaylorWei - Jan 4, 2012
|'celebrate another year on this planet ' - (Creative prank) Caltech supplement
Undergraduatebanjofood - Jan 3, 2012 / banjofood - Jan 3, 2012
|'natural flair and love for art and fashion design' - GeorgetownU essay
3 - Sorry for the late response! Anyway I think this essay is pretty good. I understand you worry for...
UndergraduateRoluwa - Jan 3, 2012 / ericao2010 - Jan 3, 2012
|An Issue of Importnace- The American Flag
Undergraduatexxaskmexx - Jan 3, 2012 / elevit2 - Jan 3, 2012
|'no boyfriend or a relationship until college' - Tufts #5
7 - egpctim As I was reflecting on this question while writing this essay , I think applying to colleges...
Undergraduateegpctim - Jan 3, 2012 / alexxisx - Jan 3, 2012
|'struck at the ambiance' - POMONA 2 -- Fun experience
5 - each and every individual <-- just say everyone people make resolutions to put themselves in better shape for the...
Undergraduatesaurabh93 - Jan 2, 2012 / GraceTaylorWei - Jan 3, 2012
|'Hosting a ceremony in a nonnative language' - Common Essay
Undergraduatesibylisaprophet - Jan 1, 2012 / Jono18 - Jan 3, 2012
|'living & dreaming' - University of Chicago Essay
4 - Thank you so much guys! :) and yes. I will try to help your essay: Itsjustcheese. By the way,...
Undergraduateemily9587 - Jan 3, 2012 / emily9587 - Jan 3, 2012
|'everyone in NYC is in a rush' - villanova essay
2 - It is good how you found the deeper meaning between the prompt about what sets your heart on fire...
Undergraduatemyjeselle - Jan 3, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 3, 2012
|'Play-Doh to plato' - UChicago.. Play -Doh's prespective
Undergraduateluvicemocha - Jan 2, 2012 / luvicemocha - Jan 3, 2012
|Tufts Supplements " Legos , A Park , All Aboard!"
UndergraduateDavemedsci - Jan 3, 2012 / Davemedsci - Jan 3, 2012
|'Filipino' - Boston University- The Importance of Diversity around the world
2 - I soon became jealous of my cousin's life because, unlike her, I have never been able to share similarity...
Undergraduateedwkoc - Jan 3, 2012 / zmj7706 - Jan 3, 2012
|' New Schools, New Me' - Common App Essay #5
Undergraduatemendoza123 - Jan 2, 2012 / luvicemocha - Jan 3, 2012
|'Transvoltum, l'appel du vide' - UCHICAGO
2 - Very impressive essay. It all seems correct to me but that is my opinion. Maybe watch out for the...
Undergraduatemyjeselle - Jan 3, 2012 / mendoza123 - Jan 3, 2012
|Core program at the University of Chicago brings the undergraduates closer for a global conversation
Undergraduatekenneth1001 - Jan 2, 2012 / kenneth1001 - Jan 3, 2012
|'a band geek' - Tufts Short Response #3
Undergraduateegpctim - Jan 3, 2012 / egpctim - Jan 3, 2012
|'the significance of lines in my life' something about you that you want us to know.
Undergraduateninjahatori - Dec 31, 2011 / ItsokaytoGaga - Jan 3, 2012
|'Rocky Horror' - Pomona Supplement Essay - what i do for fun
Undergraduatejocelynt44 - Jan 2, 2012 / jocelynt44 - Jan 3, 2012
|'something that I can accomplish' - Peace Corps Application Essay help
NEW - Hey everyone, this is my first time using this site, but I could really use some help on this...
Undergraduatetravdaddy - Jan 3, 2012 / — -
|'friend told me about the nursing home' - Common App Short Answer
2 - Hi :) Nice job! Your first sentence needs work: A friend told me about the nursing home giving...
Undergraduateblackjack11z - Jan 3, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 3, 2012
|U Chicago-- Third thing between living and dreaming
2 - Wow! You have a very well-written paper here. Nice critical thinking, you sound mature and educated. I cannot find...
Undergraduatearipeters17 - Jan 3, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 3, 2012
|'unconventional essay prompts' - why uchicago essay
Undergraduatemyjeselle - Jan 2, 2012 / myjeselle - Jan 3, 2012
|'Female roommate to share freshman college experience' BU supplement roomate question
Undergraduatepen2papr - Jan 3, 2012 / m7md - Jan 3, 2012
|'chances to experience the terrific Core' - Why Uchicago
Undergraduatephhai - Jan 2, 2012 / m7md - Jan 3, 2012
|"Who am I?" - Common App Essay
36 - I agree with the people above me: the essay is long, but overall a well written essay. Like phhai...
UndergraduateItsokaytoGaga - Dec 1, 2011 / kenneth1001 - Jan 3, 2012
|'A world class university with renowned faculty' - Georgetown
Undergraduatebbmukete - Jan 3, 2012 / ninjahatori - Jan 3, 2012
|'kids that were misguided' - Rutgers
NEW - Hi I would like help with my Rutgers Undergrad Admissions Essay: Required Essay: Rutgers University is a vibrant community...
Undergraduatecorbin400 - Jan 3, 2012 / — -
|'Joining the tennis team' - University of Illinois essay check
Undergraduatejlee2648 - Jan 2, 2012 / ciiins - Jan 3, 2012
|'electromagnetism and electronics' - Pratt Engineering
Undergraduateleviator - Dec 30, 2011 / Ravenclaw_roar - Jan 3, 2012
|Eugene Lang "Design a class and how it will impact the world"
4 - Hey I really like the conclusion! It's really strong. I agree with PO - you should get rid of...
Undergraduateariawashere - Jan 2, 2012 / Ravenclaw_roar - Jan 3, 2012
|'Dancing in my room' Mount Holyoke - What activities make you lose track of time?
UndergraduateRavenclaw_roar - Dec 30, 2011 / Ravenclaw_roar - Jan 3, 2012
|"Incipit Vita Nova" - WHY SCRIPPS?
2 - Hey I think that it is actually pretty good. You made the essay sound quite personal. I can't seem...
Undergraduatepong - Jan 2, 2012 / Ravenclaw_roar - Jan 3, 2012
|Dream Comes True! [My choir experience-APP ESSAY for Japan Intl Uni]
Undergraduateciiins - Jan 3, 2012 / ciiins - Jan 3, 2012
|'to capture all this in one picture' - International applicant CommonApp essay
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