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|'I lay my heart on the line' - North Carolina
4 - You switch back and forth from the british and american version of learnt and learned. When you say this,...
Undergraduatetgupta16 - Jan 10, 2012 / boom - Jan 13, 2012
|'not a sad little creature all the time' - Letter to your roommate - Bryn Mawr
Undergraduateaugust23vn - Jan 8, 2012 / boom - Jan 13, 2012
|'Sarajevo, Jakarta, Thailand, Nepal' - Skidmore College Diversity Answer
3 - Thank you so much! I feel relieved now. I've made some little edits in my answer but that's it....
Undergraduateboom - Jan 12, 2012 / boom - Jan 13, 2012
|"What miracle have you witnessed?" MHC sup.
NEW - This is a real story that happens in my life. And i really appreciate all advices for this draft....
Undergraduatekexu2012 - Jan 13, 2012 / — -
|'I feel powerless' - Common App personal essay
3 - The "s" instead of "z" with regards to the spelling is because I'm from England, so technically they're not...
UndergraduateMoonpie123 - Jan 12, 2012 / Moonpie123 - Jan 13, 2012
|'I am working as a Consulting Engineer' - Description of your self
Undergraduatemouhandissa - Jan 11, 2012 / mouhandissa - Jan 13, 2012
|(To become an artist) - The job I like best---short essay
2 - I think your essay would be stronger if you just elaborate on one experience in full details, like the...
Undergraduateecho5016 - Jan 13, 2012 / duckling - Jan 13, 2012
|'Discovering my passion for learning and math' - COMMONAPP
Undergraduateduckling - Jan 13, 2012 / besareso - Jan 13, 2012
|'joined a motorcycle club' - personal statement, leadership and achievement
UndergraduateValerie - Jan 12, 2012 / besareso - Jan 13, 2012
|'a great learning environment' - essay for Rutgers.
3 - Tell them about your dominance and why you eager to studying in Rutgers University. To my opinion, the very...
UndergraduateSecundinius - Jan 12, 2012 / echo5016 - Jan 13, 2012
|'finding connections between subjects' - WHY REED? SUPPLEMENT ESSAY
Undergraduatetrgcook - Dec 21, 2011 / mkpack - Jan 13, 2012
|'My grandmother, cousins, and I' - VTECH essay
3 - Great beginning, beautiful opening. The flow seems a bit choppy though, and I'm having trouble following the end. ...
Undergraduateariana123 - Jan 12, 2012 / mkpack - Jan 13, 2012
|'Applying academic knowledge to reality' - WPI supplement
Undergraduatenick_vt - Jan 12, 2012 / singh955 - Jan 13, 2012
|'My inherit hobby, reading' - Community essay for Umich
Undergraduate1994yxf - Jan 11, 2012 / Misskaylamarie - Jan 12, 2012
|("Creative thought matters" / "Diversity") - Skidmore College
3 - ...through this motto, I understand that Skidmore is the most suitable environment for me to develop my ability.---Ability to...
Undergraduatehuyenle - Jan 9, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 12, 2012
|'the campus is one of the most unique qualities' - Emory Supplement
Undergraduatesingh955 - Jan 12, 2012 / singh955 - Jan 12, 2012
|'continue my passion for philosophy' - USC Supplement, Why Essay
4 - ...philosophical concepts to real-life problems of civil and poltical cases . Through the USC Study Abroad Program, I...
Undergraduaterunhenry - Jan 8, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 12, 2012
|'San Francisco's nursing program' - Admission essay help
Undergraduateccstudent101 - Jan 12, 2012 / khagazi - Jan 12, 2012
|'education is the vehicle' - Common App Transfer Student
2 - During the previous summer of 2011, I volunteered at the Northern Westchester at a social workers office. These...
Undergraduatesophstar27 - Jan 12, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 12, 2012
|Human nutrition as my major, UIUC essay
NEW - Prompt:In an essay of 300 words or less, please discuss your academic interests and/or professional goals. Please help me...
Undergraduateangi456 - Jan 12, 2012 / — -
|'looking through some old photos' - U Mich - Ann Arbor - Short Essay - Community
UndergraduateartiQlate - Jan 12, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 12, 2012
|'uncertainty about my future' - Common App Essay, Philosophical Passions
2 - Sorry about that post by some slob who has infiltrated the forum, he is suspended now. Sheesh! ---------------------- ...
Undergraduaterunhenry - Jan 8, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 12, 2012
|'pessimists and optimists' unique or interesting things about yourself -Virginia Tech
4 - One sees a glass half empty, and the other half-full. But there are many aspects to a visionary,...
Undergraduateyousafsalim11 - Jan 2, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 12, 2012
|'Everyone makes mistakes' - common app essay
Undergraduatecgleal5 - Jan 12, 2012 / cgleal5 - Jan 12, 2012
|'Girls are like having a flower' - Supplement
3 - Mariagaston thank you so much for you help. Do you think my writing answer the question that has been...
UndergraduateSonam - Jan 12, 2012 / Sonam - Jan 12, 2012
|'Being the son of immigrants' - Ut Austin
Undergraduatebesareso - Jan 10, 2012 / besareso - Jan 12, 2012
|Why are you a good fit? Union and American Questions
Undergraduateteddyerock - Jan 11, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 12, 2012
|'the final dress rehearsal for Monty Python Does Saigon' - Macalester international
Undergraduatecordyceps - Jan 12, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 12, 2012
|'it's electrifying' - Why I want to go to OSU
Undergraduateols2665 - Jan 12, 2012 / ols2665 - Jan 12, 2012
|"Be nice and smile at the customers" - 250 words critique
3 - The eassy shows your hardwork but i feel that you somewhat jumping from sentence to sentence. There is no...
UndergraduateArizonaT - Jan 11, 2012 / aakashneeraj - Jan 12, 2012
|'Judo teacher ' - school or summer activity
UndergraduateBTDTXXDY - Jan 6, 2012 / BTDTXXDY - Jan 12, 2012
|'to play a game of chess without being able to see' - Chess
Undergraduatejinglethetingle - Jan 11, 2012 / collyguy - Jan 11, 2012
|'curiosity about the natural world' - USC Supplement
6 - In my opinion, this is a fantastic response to the prompt. You go into great detail about how passionately...
Undergraduatesaurabh93 - Jan 10, 2012 / collyguy - Jan 11, 2012
|(Global university / Designed to inspire / Wonder) - NYU
Undergraduatecollyguy - Jan 11, 2012 / collyguy - Jan 11, 2012
|(Mexico travel / Unconventional friendship / Florence / Rainbow) - Georgia!
5 - We had the chance to appreciate and to understand the contemporary situations that people from the "old continent" wanted...
Undergraduateapv - Jan 11, 2012 / Huydq - Jan 11, 2012
|My RBL group-- Umich essay: community
2 - The group research-based learning(RBL) group in my school can always get students who share the same interest together. ...
Undergraduatelittlebutterfly - Jan 11, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 11, 2012
|'a bridal shop' - Most Significant Experience -LIM College
Undergraduatealleykat327 - Jan 8, 2012 / Nickbound - Jan 11, 2012
|'Beijing Youth Technology Innovation Competition' - research transfer essay for Duke
UndergraduateChirstinaf - Jan 10, 2012 / jinglethetingle - Jan 11, 2012
|'a college booklet about any schools of my interest' - Emory Supplement
2 - Just be more specific about what you intend to pursue at Emory and be more detailed about the aesthetic...
Undergraduatesingh955 - Jan 11, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 11, 2012
|Choose an issue of importance to you (making money and being successful?)
4 - eating breakfast alone, and taking control of my own life as a naive child -the part where you say...
Undergraduatecory5579 - Jan 11, 2012 / xoamanda15 - Jan 11, 2012
|'When we are happy' - What intrigues you?
NEW - What intrigues you? Tell us about one work of art, scientific achievement, piece of literature, method of communication, or...
Undergraduatejinglethetingle - Jan 11, 2012 / — -
|"Taylor girl" - Personal Statement for Arizona University
2 - This is a unique take on explaining why you like to go to a particular college, and you've explained...
UndergraduateSekilahh_RM - Jan 11, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 11, 2012
|'my major weakness is academic' - Howard App Essay
6 - school and extracurricular,activities. An example of a problem posed is I amAs the soccer team's best finisher, so...
Undergraduateunwana11 - Jan 7, 2012 / Prettywings - Jan 11, 2012
|My Struggle with Autism -- Common App
8 - This is amazing! I love the dandelion part. You did a great job at engaging the reader, but I...
Undergraduatesaurabh93 - Dec 15, 2011 / Bleeckerandpine - Jan 11, 2012
|'experiences with various cultures' - Penn State Personal
Undergraduateunwana11 - Jan 8, 2012 / unwana11 - Jan 11, 2012
|'A story about Jesus' - USFCA admission essay
Undergraduatejuswin - Jan 11, 2012 / akari - Jan 11, 2012
|'I am a friendly person' - MY FUTURE ROOMMATE - STANFORD
7 - Well, it certainly is more fun reading your replies after each and every sentence Jawad has written.. I believe...
Undergraduatejkhalifeh93 - Dec 20, 2011 / emanon - Jan 11, 2012
|STANFORDS SUPPLEMENTS- faith in god + grasshopper + reflections
4 - Your roommate essay is so fun to read and also effectively reflects what kind of person you are. And...
Undergraduatejesupai - Dec 20, 2011 / emanon - Jan 11, 2012
|'dynamic and warm community' - Why did you choose to apply to UCF?
2 - UCF seemed to me as a dynamic and warm community. In fact, the endless activities and clubs held within...
Undergraduatexaviermerino - Jan 11, 2012 / littlebutterfly - Jan 11, 2012
|'a product designer and entrepreneur' - USC Essay
4 - I feel like your ideas could be better connected, you mention a lot but dont elaborate on a specific...
Undergraduatekausik1993 - Jan 10, 2012 / greeley - Jan 10, 2012
|'I can become a successdul engineer in the future' - for APIASF
Undergraduate520crystal - Jan 10, 2012 / 520crystal - Jan 10, 2012
|Personal Accountability - UT Undergraduate Admissions
UndergraduateHerrTrigger - Jan 9, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 10, 2012
|Describe your most interesting mistake; 'Invincible' - GWU suggestions
Undergraduateneed_advice - Jan 10, 2012 / need_advice - Jan 10, 2012
|'I love how inspiring you are' - My love letter to Reed.
3 - Farewell until then, my dear. Yours lovingly, I think the last part sounds a bit cliche, but the rest...
Undergraduateaerielm - Jan 10, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 10, 2012
|'a passion for animals and nature' - Bucknell Major Explaination
2 - This is my first year dabbling in Environmental Studies, where I have seen how humans are destroying the planet....
Undergraduateteddyerock - Jan 10, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 10, 2012
|'my passion is trying to find my passion' - Common app essay
2 - Wow! Your essay is very well written- outstanding actually. You make it very clear that you have great passion...
Undergraduatejinglethetingle - Jan 9, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 10, 2012
|'acoustic guitar' - short answer response for Common App
4 - I've gathered some books on application essays over the past few days and I noticed many of them suggest...
Undergraduatewozzcat1990 - Jan 10, 2012 / wozzcat1990 - Jan 10, 2012
|"Music was my refuge." - georgetown
2 - Music: (Living on the Gospel) This is an unclear title. Maya Angelou said, "Music was my refuge. I...
Undergraduatecrystal77 - Jan 10, 2012 / kayleighlevitt - Jan 10, 2012
|'decided to major in computer science' - Commonapp transfer essay
NEW - please help edit this essay.thanks Thomas Jefferson once said "Nothing can stop the man with the right mental...
Undergraduatezanzy - Jan 10, 2012 / — -
|'Academics, diversity, location' - Columbia Supplement: Why!!
8 - What Appeals To You Most About Columbia? After several campus visits, an overnight vist, and an Engineering Invitational,...
UndergraduateTanici1401 - Jan 7, 2012 / Tanici1401 - Jan 10, 2012
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