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|'the most exciting experience' - Colgate Supplement: Egypt!
Undergraduatesuper57 - Dec 28, 2011 / flafi120 - Jan 4, 2012
|'quirky sense of humor and creative pranks' - caltech supplement
Undergraduatem7md - Jan 3, 2012 / flafi120 - Jan 4, 2012
|'human-focused care'- Cornell College of Human Ecology Essay
2 - I love how the essay is structured! I think it is perfectly fine, apart from some minor grammatical...
Undergraduatemaximo3994 - Jan 2, 2012 / GrimRippah - Jan 4, 2012
|Supplement Essay-How I Developed Interest in Cancer
19 - I agree with the preceding remarks. As touching as your story seems, there is a very vague linkage, if...
Undergraduateworried26 - Dec 29, 2011 / saurabh93 - Jan 4, 2012
|(learning about science / engineering / city, campus / bands) - COLUMBIA
2 - Essay 1 -- The two topics were different in that biology consisted solely of memorization, as opposed to chemistry...
Undergraduategreeley - Jan 4, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 4, 2012
|'Choosing our friends' -Caltech Short answer (Ethical Dilemma)
Undergraduatebanjofood - Jan 4, 2012 / timurmukhtarov - Jan 4, 2012
|(power outage / the supplier / liberal education) - University of Southern Cali
4 - Thanks guys for all the input. I wanted to be funny, so I put literal events that happened for...
UndergraduateGraceTaylorWei - Jan 3, 2012 / GraceTaylorWei - Jan 4, 2012
|'celebrate another year on this planet ' - (Creative prank) Caltech supplement
Undergraduatebanjofood - Jan 3, 2012 / banjofood - Jan 3, 2012
|'natural flair and love for art and fashion design' - GeorgetownU essay
3 - Sorry for the late response! Anyway I think this essay is pretty good. I understand you worry for...
UndergraduateRoluwa - Jan 3, 2012 / ericao2010 - Jan 3, 2012
|An Issue of Importnace- The American Flag
Undergraduatexxaskmexx - Jan 3, 2012 / elevit2 - Jan 3, 2012
|'no boyfriend or a relationship until college' - Tufts #5
7 - egpctim As I was reflecting on this question while writing this essay , I think applying to colleges...
Undergraduateegpctim - Jan 3, 2012 / alexxisx - Jan 3, 2012
|'struck at the ambiance' - POMONA 2 -- Fun experience
5 - each and every individual <-- just say everyone people make resolutions to put themselves in better shape for the...
Undergraduatesaurabh93 - Jan 2, 2012 / GraceTaylorWei - Jan 3, 2012
|'Hosting a ceremony in a nonnative language' - Common Essay
Undergraduatesibylisaprophet - Jan 1, 2012 / Jono18 - Jan 3, 2012
|'living & dreaming' - University of Chicago Essay
4 - Thank you so much guys! :) and yes. I will try to help your essay: Itsjustcheese. By the way,...
Undergraduateemily9587 - Jan 3, 2012 / emily9587 - Jan 3, 2012
|'everyone in NYC is in a rush' - villanova essay
2 - It is good how you found the deeper meaning between the prompt about what sets your heart on fire...
Undergraduatemyjeselle - Jan 3, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 3, 2012
|'Play-Doh to plato' - UChicago.. Play -Doh's prespective
Undergraduateluvicemocha - Jan 2, 2012 / luvicemocha - Jan 3, 2012
|Tufts Supplements " Legos , A Park , All Aboard!"
UndergraduateDavemedsci - Jan 3, 2012 / Davemedsci - Jan 3, 2012
|'Filipino' - Boston University- The Importance of Diversity around the world
2 - I soon became jealous of my cousin's life because, unlike her, I have never been able to share similarity...
Undergraduateedwkoc - Jan 3, 2012 / zmj7706 - Jan 3, 2012
|' New Schools, New Me' - Common App Essay #5
Undergraduatemendoza123 - Jan 2, 2012 / luvicemocha - Jan 3, 2012
|'Transvoltum, l'appel du vide' - UCHICAGO
2 - Very impressive essay. It all seems correct to me but that is my opinion. Maybe watch out for the...
Undergraduatemyjeselle - Jan 3, 2012 / mendoza123 - Jan 3, 2012
|Core program at the University of Chicago brings the undergraduates closer for a global conversation
Undergraduatekenneth1001 - Jan 2, 2012 / kenneth1001 - Jan 3, 2012
|'a band geek' - Tufts Short Response #3
Undergraduateegpctim - Jan 3, 2012 / egpctim - Jan 3, 2012
|'the significance of lines in my life' something about you that you want us to know.
Undergraduateninjahatori - Dec 31, 2011 / ItsokaytoGaga - Jan 3, 2012
|'Rocky Horror' - Pomona Supplement Essay - what i do for fun
Undergraduatejocelynt44 - Jan 2, 2012 / jocelynt44 - Jan 3, 2012
|'something that I can accomplish' - Peace Corps Application Essay help
NEW - Hey everyone, this is my first time using this site, but I could really use some help on this...
Undergraduatetravdaddy - Jan 3, 2012 / — -
|'friend told me about the nursing home' - Common App Short Answer
2 - Hi :) Nice job! Your first sentence needs work: A friend told me about the nursing home giving...
Undergraduateblackjack11z - Jan 3, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 3, 2012
|U Chicago-- Third thing between living and dreaming
2 - Wow! You have a very well-written paper here. Nice critical thinking, you sound mature and educated. I cannot find...
Undergraduatearipeters17 - Jan 3, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 3, 2012
|'unconventional essay prompts' - why uchicago essay
Undergraduatemyjeselle - Jan 2, 2012 / myjeselle - Jan 3, 2012
|'Female roommate to share freshman college experience' BU supplement roomate question
Undergraduatepen2papr - Jan 3, 2012 / m7md - Jan 3, 2012
|'chances to experience the terrific Core' - Why Uchicago
Undergraduatephhai - Jan 2, 2012 / m7md - Jan 3, 2012
|'A world class university with renowned faculty' - Georgetown
Undergraduatebbmukete - Jan 3, 2012 / ninjahatori - Jan 3, 2012
|'kids that were misguided' - Rutgers
NEW - Hi I would like help with my Rutgers Undergrad Admissions Essay: Required Essay: Rutgers University is a vibrant community...
Undergraduatecorbin400 - Jan 3, 2012 / — -
|'Joining the tennis team' - University of Illinois essay check
Undergraduatejlee2648 - Jan 2, 2012 / ciiins - Jan 3, 2012
|'electromagnetism and electronics' - Pratt Engineering
Undergraduateleviator - Dec 30, 2011 / Ravenclaw_roar - Jan 3, 2012
|Eugene Lang "Design a class and how it will impact the world"
4 - Hey I really like the conclusion! It's really strong. I agree with PO - you should get rid of...
Undergraduateariawashere - Jan 2, 2012 / Ravenclaw_roar - Jan 3, 2012
|'Dancing in my room' Mount Holyoke - What activities make you lose track of time?
UndergraduateRavenclaw_roar - Dec 30, 2011 / Ravenclaw_roar - Jan 3, 2012
|"Incipit Vita Nova" - WHY SCRIPPS?
2 - Hey I think that it is actually pretty good. You made the essay sound quite personal. I can't seem...
Undergraduatepong - Jan 2, 2012 / Ravenclaw_roar - Jan 3, 2012
|Dream Comes True! [My choir experience-APP ESSAY for Japan Intl Uni]
Undergraduateciiins - Jan 3, 2012 / ciiins - Jan 3, 2012
|'to capture all this in one picture' - International applicant CommonApp essay
Undergraduatetimurmukhtarov - Jan 3, 2012 / — -
|'Being able to see new places' - common app transfer essay
3 - I agree, great essay! But maybe be a little more specific about the objectives you hope to achieve? It's...
Undergraduatekingkung - Dec 30, 2011 / worried26 - Jan 3, 2012
|'things to do and watch'- UChicago -about favorite things
5 - you think you will change it to fit uchicago prompts ? Hmm i find it personal , fairly interesting....
UndergraduateKylemac - Jan 2, 2012 / phhai - Jan 3, 2012
|'Education is optimum tool to achieve my goals' - PURDUE
Undergraduatesoufianelaouad - Jan 2, 2012 / Mango17 - Jan 3, 2012
|'getting a distinction in both courses' - Meliora
6 - For me, changing from being a such a technical thinking individual to being more well-rounded was a great...
Undergraduatearam3 - Jan 2, 2012 / aripeters17 - Jan 2, 2012
|UChicago Favorite Things Essay - "Lolita/Frank Sinatra"
UndergraduateGraceTaylorWei - Jan 2, 2012 / Mango17 - Jan 2, 2012
|'experience a whole different culture' - Why I want to attend UChicago Essay
NEW - Please help!!! Be brutal with your corrections. :) Thanks in advance! Many people know the University of Chicago...
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|'In America, the last thing I ever felt was safe' - COMMON APP ESSAY
2 - Don't doubt yourself, this is a very nice essay! You could use some commas though. "When I came to...
Undergraduateviolalovell - Jan 2, 2012 / inl - Jan 2, 2012
|'under the influence of a great many characters' - Fictional character
UndergraduateXanaphia - Jan 2, 2012 / Xanaphia - Jan 2, 2012
|'Katniss Everdeen was plunged' - Claremont McKenna
4 - i agree with xanaphobia, your essay is well written but a stronger conclusion will be better. I'm applying to...
Undergraduatebigow29 - Jan 2, 2012 / pong - Jan 2, 2012
|'the first club day of my high school career' - POMONA high school experience essay
6 - I agree with sansonmccrady. The second sentence " In middle school, I had neither the peer support nor the...
Undergraduatesaurabh93 - Jan 2, 2012 / kenneth1001 - Jan 2, 2012
|'chemical engineering program' - Common App Transfer
4 - I like how straightforward the essay is. I don't see any errors in this work. I think that it...
Undergraduatewallstreet2015 - Jan 2, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 2, 2012
|Albany school of pharmacy and health sciences supplement - WHY PHARMACY
Undergraduatelo3995 - Jan 2, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 2, 2012
|'Duke supports their Sport clubs' - Duke Essay
Undergraduateekreal - Jan 2, 2012 / ekreal - Jan 2, 2012
|Cornell Supplement. Desire for knowledge and Math.
7 - yosh! I fixed some more things and finally submitted it XD thank you guys for all the advice and...
UndergraduateDaeDae - Jan 1, 2012 / DaeDae - Jan 2, 2012
|'individuality and self-exploration' - Why Oberlin College?
3 - Hello! First of all I can relate to your weirdness :P However, the way this college phrased their prompt...
UndergraduateItsokaytoGaga - Jan 2, 2012 / GraceTaylorWei - Jan 2, 2012
|'shine brighter in Mexico' - Cornell supplement (Arts and Sciences essay question)
UndergraduatePRICE1234 - Jan 2, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 2, 2012
|'interest lies in Economics' - Northwestern Supp Essay
Undergraduateabck300 - Jan 2, 2012 / msaenz - Jan 2, 2012
|My Y BU essay (Economics department)
9 - These are the things you mentioned in your essay -City -Studying with smart students -Diversity I think you...
Undergraduateeasyfu - Dec 25, 2011 / abck300 - Jan 2, 2012
|'Leaders aren't born they are made' - UNC at Chapel Hill Essay
Undergraduatemsaenz - Jan 2, 2012 / msaenz - Jan 2, 2012
|Pomona Essay- Scheduling Experience
Undergraduatepinkcheetah - Jan 2, 2012 / pinkcheetah - Jan 2, 2012
|'An ace in tennis' - Common app Short constructed Response - Tennis
Undergraduatesummerman52 - Jan 2, 2012 / pinkcheetah - Jan 2, 2012
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