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|'the significance of lines in my life' something about you that you want us to know.
Undergraduateninjahatori - Dec 31, 2011 / ItsokaytoGaga - Jan 3, 2012
|'Rocky Horror' - Pomona Supplement Essay - what i do for fun
Undergraduatejocelynt44 - Jan 2, 2012 / jocelynt44 - Jan 3, 2012
|'something that I can accomplish' - Peace Corps Application Essay help
NEW - Hey everyone, this is my first time using this site, but I could really use some help on this...
Undergraduatetravdaddy - Jan 3, 2012 / — -
|'friend told me about the nursing home' - Common App Short Answer
2 - Hi :) Nice job! Your first sentence needs work: A friend told me about the nursing home giving...
Undergraduateblackjack11z - Jan 3, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 3, 2012
|U Chicago-- Third thing between living and dreaming
2 - Wow! You have a very well-written paper here. Nice critical thinking, you sound mature and educated. I cannot find...
Undergraduatearipeters17 - Jan 3, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 3, 2012
|'unconventional essay prompts' - why uchicago essay
Undergraduatemyjeselle - Jan 2, 2012 / myjeselle - Jan 3, 2012
|'Female roommate to share freshman college experience' BU supplement roomate question
Undergraduatepen2papr - Jan 3, 2012 / m7md - Jan 3, 2012
|'chances to experience the terrific Core' - Why Uchicago
Undergraduatephhai - Jan 2, 2012 / m7md - Jan 3, 2012
|'A world class university with renowned faculty' - Georgetown
Undergraduatebbmukete - Jan 3, 2012 / ninjahatori - Jan 3, 2012
|'kids that were misguided' - Rutgers
NEW - Hi I would like help with my Rutgers Undergrad Admissions Essay: Required Essay: Rutgers University is a vibrant community...
Undergraduatecorbin400 - Jan 3, 2012 / — -
|'Joining the tennis team' - University of Illinois essay check
Undergraduatejlee2648 - Jan 2, 2012 / ciiins - Jan 3, 2012
|'electromagnetism and electronics' - Pratt Engineering
Undergraduateleviator - Dec 30, 2011 / Ravenclaw_roar - Jan 3, 2012
|Eugene Lang "Design a class and how it will impact the world"
4 - Hey I really like the conclusion! It's really strong. I agree with PO - you should get rid of...
Undergraduateariawashere - Jan 2, 2012 / Ravenclaw_roar - Jan 3, 2012
|'Dancing in my room' Mount Holyoke - What activities make you lose track of time?
UndergraduateRavenclaw_roar - Dec 30, 2011 / Ravenclaw_roar - Jan 3, 2012
|"Incipit Vita Nova" - WHY SCRIPPS?
2 - Hey I think that it is actually pretty good. You made the essay sound quite personal. I can't seem...
Undergraduatepong - Jan 2, 2012 / Ravenclaw_roar - Jan 3, 2012
|Dream Comes True! [My choir experience-APP ESSAY for Japan Intl Uni]
Undergraduateciiins - Jan 3, 2012 / ciiins - Jan 3, 2012
|'to capture all this in one picture' - International applicant CommonApp essay
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|'Being able to see new places' - common app transfer essay
3 - I agree, great essay! But maybe be a little more specific about the objectives you hope to achieve? It's...
Undergraduatekingkung - Dec 30, 2011 / worried26 - Jan 3, 2012
|'things to do and watch'- UChicago -about favorite things
5 - you think you will change it to fit uchicago prompts ? Hmm i find it personal , fairly interesting....
UndergraduateKylemac - Jan 2, 2012 / phhai - Jan 3, 2012
|'Education is optimum tool to achieve my goals' - PURDUE
Undergraduatesoufianelaouad - Jan 2, 2012 / Mango17 - Jan 3, 2012
|'getting a distinction in both courses' - Meliora
6 - For me, changing from being a such a technical thinking individual to being more well-rounded was a great...
Undergraduatearam3 - Jan 2, 2012 / aripeters17 - Jan 2, 2012
|UChicago Favorite Things Essay - "Lolita/Frank Sinatra"
UndergraduateGraceTaylorWei - Jan 2, 2012 / Mango17 - Jan 2, 2012
|'experience a whole different culture' - Why I want to attend UChicago Essay
NEW - Please help!!! Be brutal with your corrections. :) Thanks in advance! Many people know the University of Chicago...
Undergraduatearipeters17 - Jan 2, 2012 / — -
|'In America, the last thing I ever felt was safe' - COMMON APP ESSAY
2 - Don't doubt yourself, this is a very nice essay! You could use some commas though. "When I came to...
Undergraduateviolalovell - Jan 2, 2012 / inl - Jan 2, 2012
|'under the influence of a great many characters' - Fictional character
UndergraduateXanaphia - Jan 2, 2012 / Xanaphia - Jan 2, 2012
|'Katniss Everdeen was plunged' - Claremont McKenna
4 - i agree with xanaphobia, your essay is well written but a stronger conclusion will be better. I'm applying to...
Undergraduatebigow29 - Jan 2, 2012 / pong - Jan 2, 2012
|'the first club day of my high school career' - POMONA high school experience essay
6 - I agree with sansonmccrady. The second sentence " In middle school, I had neither the peer support nor the...
Undergraduatesaurabh93 - Jan 2, 2012 / kenneth1001 - Jan 2, 2012
|'chemical engineering program' - Common App Transfer
4 - I like how straightforward the essay is. I don't see any errors in this work. I think that it...
Undergraduatewallstreet2015 - Jan 2, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 2, 2012
|Albany school of pharmacy and health sciences supplement - WHY PHARMACY
Undergraduatelo3995 - Jan 2, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 2, 2012
|'Duke supports their Sport clubs' - Duke Essay
Undergraduateekreal - Jan 2, 2012 / ekreal - Jan 2, 2012
|Cornell Supplement. Desire for knowledge and Math.
7 - yosh! I fixed some more things and finally submitted it XD thank you guys for all the advice and...
UndergraduateDaeDae - Jan 1, 2012 / DaeDae - Jan 2, 2012
|'individuality and self-exploration' - Why Oberlin College?
3 - Hello! First of all I can relate to your weirdness :P However, the way this college phrased their prompt...
UndergraduateItsokaytoGaga - Jan 2, 2012 / GraceTaylorWei - Jan 2, 2012
|'shine brighter in Mexico' - Cornell supplement (Arts and Sciences essay question)
UndergraduatePRICE1234 - Jan 2, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 2, 2012
|'interest lies in Economics' - Northwestern Supp Essay
Undergraduateabck300 - Jan 2, 2012 / msaenz - Jan 2, 2012
|My Y BU essay (Economics department)
9 - These are the things you mentioned in your essay -City -Studying with smart students -Diversity I think you...
Undergraduateeasyfu - Dec 25, 2011 / abck300 - Jan 2, 2012
|'Leaders aren't born they are made' - UNC at Chapel Hill Essay
Undergraduatemsaenz - Jan 2, 2012 / msaenz - Jan 2, 2012
|Pomona Essay- Scheduling Experience
Undergraduatepinkcheetah - Jan 2, 2012 / pinkcheetah - Jan 2, 2012
|'An ace in tennis' - Common app Short constructed Response - Tennis
Undergraduatesummerman52 - Jan 2, 2012 / pinkcheetah - Jan 2, 2012
|'a soccer pitch' - Extracurricular Activity
UndergraduateDavemedsci - Jan 1, 2012 / Davemedsci - Jan 2, 2012
|'I will go with my stubbornness' - Upenn Intoduce Yourself
9 - I like your responses but I think you should be a little more specific, like the question on what...
Undergraduatemaroon5 - Jan 2, 2012 / insanesoul81994 - Jan 2, 2012
|'becoming a chef' - Why Duke-FOCUS Program and sport scene
2 - Like the first paragraph, but look at your use of commas. For second paragraph, tell more about why you...
Undergraduatesibylisaprophet - Jan 2, 2012 / Jono18 - Jan 2, 2012
|'Hairspray songs' - a time in which you left your comfort zone
3 - thank you! :)...
Undergraduatenerd4life - Jan 2, 2012 / nerd4life - Jan 2, 2012
|(Annual Hanami Festival / Meeting Strangers) COMMON APPs
7 - I liked your first essay much better because it is unconventional and the metaphor works very well. Please check...
Undergraduatestevenyy - Jan 1, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 2, 2012
|Lunchtime at the Angora: Boston University Supplement Essay
Undergraduatesamsonmccrady - Jan 2, 2012 / samsonmccrady - Jan 2, 2012
|'How Obesity Shaped Me' - Common App Essay #1
2 - You have a terrific essay. I especially like where you wrote about the "As the mounds of fat melted...
Undergraduatetubsofanger - Jan 2, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 2, 2012
|'building the life skills and a work ethic' - Why Harvey Mudd
2 - A well focused essay, and I don't see much problems with grammar or style. PLEASE review my Pomona essay....
Undergraduateinsanesoul81994 - Jan 2, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 2, 2012
|'Living and dreaming' - University of Chicago Long Essay
12 - This is a well laid-out essay, but it would be stronger if you added some of your own examples...
Undergraduatejasononwenu - Dec 29, 2011 / saurabh93 - Jan 2, 2012
|'enjoy working with others' - Why Uchicago?
4 - I think this is a great essay. You talk about lots of specific parts about the school without making...
Undergraduatetehfunkicookie - Jan 1, 2012 / elephant1 - Jan 2, 2012
|'my scientist family' - Supplement- Why UChicago?
Undergraduateashatan - Jan 1, 2012 / elephant1 - Jan 2, 2012
|'Graham' - Brandeis - Common App Essay - Significant Person
Undergraduatewalcotted - Jan 1, 2012 / elephant1 - Jan 2, 2012
|'WHY I DO NOT WEAR PANTS' - Common App
7 - The beginning is really good. Caught my attention instantly. But I got lost after the quote you used. Leggings?...
Undergraduateelephant1 - Dec 30, 2011 / Jono18 - Jan 2, 2012
|'Surfing and water' - Common App: Extracurricular Essay
UndergraduateTGIDP - Jan 1, 2012 / elephant1 - Jan 2, 2012
|'victim to creeping doubts' - SIGNIFICANT EXPERIENCE
4 - I think this essay is good, but it seems as if you are just listing things about yourself. The...
Undergraduatejadore_lamode68 - Dec 31, 2011 / elephant1 - Jan 2, 2012
|'interested in Psychology, Biology and Sociology' Why is Duke the right fit?
Undergraduateekreal - Jan 2, 2012 / ekreal - Jan 2, 2012
|'Sociology and tutoring English and Korean' - CORNELL (COLLEGE OF ART&SCIENCE)
3 - enable me to to specialize will greatly benefit to my studies.-Consider saying something like "will greatly benefit the...
Undergraduatepjw7109 - Jan 1, 2012 / Kylemac - Jan 2, 2012
|(the city life / good impression / medical field) - Boston U Essays
7 - Hey anyone who answered on here please read my thread you really dont have to even read the essay...
Undergraduateblackjack11z - Jan 2, 2012 / Kylemac - Jan 2, 2012
|'an aspiring journalist' - Boston University - Diversity
Undergraduatezerw - Jan 2, 2012 / pjw7109 - Jan 2, 2012
|Supplement Essay on a Bad Decision. (I chose a bad haircut)
3 - I would be careful to mention "Seventeen Magazine" if you are going to, later, blame them for your mistake....
Undergraduatecrew12 - Jan 2, 2012 / angiepie - Jan 2, 2012
|My obsession with giraffes(UGA ESSAY)
Undergraduateangiepie - Jan 2, 2012 / angiepie - Jan 2, 2012
|'a plethora of raw materials' - northwestern supplement
2 - I describe myself as curious and I want a nurturing experience with mentors that encourage my interests and guide...
Undergraduatectranisaurus1 - Jan 2, 2012 / Kylemac - Jan 2, 2012
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