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|'I want to be different and go to college' - experience and its impact on you
11 - Thanks! Are there any grammar mistakes? If somebody can help me out, I'd greatly appreciate it and I can...
Undergraduateerndawg - Dec 19, 2011 / erndawg - Dec 25, 2011
|'I often feel sorry for my dad' - Common App Essay Influential person
Undergraduatejimmytangy - Dec 25, 2011 / jimmytangy - Dec 25, 2011
|William & Mary Supplement: Beyond academics and extracurriculars
2 - I glanced over my porch's overstep and saw a discarded copy of the Los Angeles Times,. I would normally...
UndergraduateUwaiting - Dec 25, 2011 / Balanchine - Dec 25, 2011
|'My grandfather for me was the best gift' - COMMON APP QUESTION
Undergraduatemukhia08 - Dec 25, 2011 / mukhia08 - Dec 25, 2011
|'Flushed' + 'I am exhausted' - Extra Curricular activities essays
15 - Coolio....I will submit the second one. But i am going to try to write another one and let's see...
Undergraduatemenukagrg - Dec 23, 2011 / menukagrg - Dec 25, 2011
|(Human Ecology + Arts and Science) - Cornell Essays
Undergraduaterpendyala - Dec 25, 2011 / rpendyala - Dec 25, 2011
|'never agree with my friends out of fear' - Yale Supplement Essay Help
Undergraduatesaints13 - Dec 25, 2011 / saints13 - Dec 25, 2011
|'the psychology section' - Columbia University-what are your interests?
4 - I, honestly, didn't catch many grammatical mistakes at all haha. Content-wise I believe it is fine as they do...
Undergraduatecherrybomb94 - Dec 23, 2011 / articuno - Dec 25, 2011
|'my school chorus' - common app essay
4 - I really love the imagery of a you practicing with the fistful of rice, etc. It reminds me of...
Undergraduatezhouyihao - Dec 24, 2011 / desm2012 - Dec 25, 2011
|"The Day I Caught a Thought" LOL sounds like Dr. Seuss (Cornell App Essay)
Undergraduatepriscillaaa - Dec 24, 2011 / priscillaaa - Dec 25, 2011
|Why Columbia? -- Protests, Ahmadinejad....
Undergraduatejayelectrolosis - Dec 25, 2011 / easyfu - Dec 25, 2011
|'writing lists' - one thing that I love doing for absolutely no reason
9 - Okay nevermind. It's actually for the MIT app, not Common App, but I previewed it as a PDF and...
Undergraduateflutenerd - Dec 25, 2011 / flutenerd - Dec 25, 2011
|'significant and worthwhile' +'my interest in finance' + 'Singapore' - NYU
4 - You should think about your first sentence on the Why NYU essay. My friend at school in Korea traveled...
UndergraduateYaxue1994 - Dec 22, 2011 / lee235717 - Dec 25, 2011
|'I seek change' - Why Rice?
UndergraduateBuffomatic - Dec 25, 2011 / Buffomatic - Dec 25, 2011
|'the economics section is what I turn to first' - NYU Supp
6 - You said that your Why NYU essay mainly focuses on New York City. Too many applicants talk about that....
Undergraduateeasyfu - Dec 20, 2011 / lee235717 - Dec 25, 2011
|'three puffs of my inhaler' - Common app essay
UndergraduateSilverbrush - Dec 25, 2011 / Silverbrush - Dec 25, 2011
|'aesthetic perfection' Short Answer AND Artist statement for Hamilton
Undergraduatedanigreenhouse - Dec 25, 2011 / danigreenhouse - Dec 25, 2011
|Common App main essay: "Out of the frying pan, into the fridge"
3 - sorry forgot the prompt: A range of academic interests, personal perspectives, and life experiences adds much to the educational...
Undergraduatekevinyslin - Dec 25, 2011 / kevinyslin - Dec 25, 2011
|"Spanish National Derby" common app essay
10 - thank you so much...
Undergraduateparker - Dec 23, 2011 / parker - Dec 25, 2011
|'Porch conversations' - What matters to you and why? Stanford Supp.
Undergraduatejujugo85 - Dec 25, 2011 / jayelectrolosis - Dec 25, 2011
|essay on international relations and personal experience- UPenn supplement
5 - ----->When my brother returned from his first summer program at the University of Pennsylvania, I received the impression that...
Undergraduatejr_disk_jockey - Dec 25, 2011 / jr_disk_jockey - Dec 25, 2011
|'old African folklore' - UPenn optional essay
8 - I eventually conquered my problems I wish you had one more sentence at the end to conclude, otherwise...
Undergraduatenamato - Dec 11, 2011 / jr_disk_jockey - Dec 25, 2011
|'Hi, I'm You' - Ivy League Common App
Undergraduategeorgewang - Dec 25, 2011 / georgewang - Dec 25, 2011
|' At this new school' - Education Interruption Essay- Common App
3 - thank you!...
Undergraduateselloway - Dec 25, 2011 / selloway - Dec 25, 2011
|'purpose and ambition to achieve greatness' - yale supplement question
Undergraduaterpendyala - Dec 25, 2011 / Silverbrush - Dec 25, 2011
|"This is Sallyport Arch." - What motivated you to apply to Rice University?
4 - Thanks! I will make it more specific. Any other comments? I need all the help I can. The deadline...
Undergraduateylp2404 - Dec 25, 2011 / ylp2404 - Dec 25, 2011
|'I volunteered one afternoon' - MIT ESSAY
2 - At the opening of the essay, supply a time-frame as to when this occurred. (eg "During my sophomore year,...
UndergraduateAli Poonja - Dec 25, 2011 / selloway - Dec 25, 2011
|'to build my own desktop computer' + 'jobs' - MIT Short Answers
2 - I do not want to participate in a job that draws from previous discoveries and simply repeats past actions....
Undergraduatef2phutch - Dec 25, 2011 / rpendyala - Dec 25, 2011
|('my friends, teachers, and family respect me') MIT- Personality attribute
4 - Alright sorry, could you guys take a look at this one? I decided to write on something different that...
Undergraduateflutenerd - Dec 25, 2011 / flutenerd - Dec 25, 2011
|'Gandhi's quote was true' - Common app (Influential person)
4 - Your essays are superb! Very articulate and creative. Gandhi's quote was true; I found myself, all thanks to...
UndergraduateHEast22 - Dec 23, 2011 / GraceTaylorWei - Dec 25, 2011
|'I come from Kosova' - Stanford Supp - dear roomate
Undergraduateagronr - Dec 25, 2011 / agronr - Dec 25, 2011
|'Engineering and Islamic Architecture' - MIT Application
UndergraduateAli Poonja - Dec 25, 2011 / deremifri - Dec 25, 2011
|(Success) what is the most important charcteristic that a person can have to be
NEW - Success is one of the important things that most of the people want to reach but the question is...
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|'Public Speaking' - MIT busy life / Activity for pleasure
3 - I agree that you should avoid repeating the sleeping in on Saturday morning comment. Also, I think you should...
UndergraduateAli Poonja - Dec 25, 2011 / ricka123 - Dec 25, 2011
|Tufts Suplemental Questions. My defination
8 - Very nice descriptions!!! Fix the errors pointed out above and you're good to go :D Could you look at...
Undergraduatesuper57 - Dec 18, 2011 / DesiGirl - Dec 25, 2011
|Non-Traditional (old) undergrad transfer (neuroscience) statement of purpose essay UT
2 - It began with the rejection of dualism and mysticism as a teenager, where Ayn Rand's ' Atlas Shrugged' helped...
UndergraduateGlenna - Dec 25, 2011 / EF_Susan - Dec 25, 2011
|JHU Supplement - Africana Studies & Pre-Med Track
Undergraduateyaya4lyfe - Dec 25, 2011 / yaya4lyfe - Dec 25, 2011
|Being a Peer Mediator - short answer
6 - Overall, I like your essay a lot! It shows you as a selfishless and sincere student, traits that...
Undergraduateyaya4lyfe - Nov 25, 2011 / Leehoo - Dec 25, 2011
|'a family of nurses' - Washington Biology Transfer Personal Statement
Undergraduaterzwart - Dec 24, 2011 / mukhia08 - Dec 25, 2011
|Building Bridges-Cornell College of Engineering Supplement Essay (Minus Conclusion)
Undergraduatedasadhikarik - Dec 24, 2011 / mukhia08 - Dec 25, 2011
|[Common application] Dance and my life
3 - Thank you for your reply! But I didn't write "nervous" in my essay...>.< But your advice on using more...
UndergraduateLeehoo - Dec 25, 2011 / Leehoo - Dec 25, 2011
|Scary moment gives me coruage short answer
Undergraduateraza68 - Dec 24, 2011 / raza68 - Dec 25, 2011
|"Career Advising and Advising Programs" - Why UChicago Essay
Undergraduateeastring - Dec 25, 2011 / USMAN GUJJAR - Dec 25, 2011
|'Soccer is more than that' - Common App Extracurricular
Undergraduateerndawg - Dec 17, 2011 / rosomp - Dec 25, 2011
|'True learning' - what do you hope to learn from and contribute to the Penn?
UndergraduateLeehoo - Dec 24, 2011 / erndawg - Dec 25, 2011
|[short answer] about New York City Explore Program
UndergraduateLeehoo - Dec 24, 2011 / USMAN GUJJAR - Dec 25, 2011
|'mutualistic symbiotic relationship'- How my unique qualities relate to Upenn/Wharton
5 - I think yours are perfect. That symbiotic metaphor is novel, and you've managed to demonstrate how you fit in...
Undergraduatemp4player - Dec 16, 2011 / Leehoo - Dec 25, 2011
|'I never liked the idea of change' - Common App
16 - try reshaping it start wih a scenerio (perhaps from when u last saw ur friends) then start telling ur...
Undergraduatemc52 - Dec 20, 2011 / super57 - Dec 25, 2011
|'college is not another dull place' - U of C Short Essay
Undergraduatejasononwenu - Dec 25, 2011 / ChihiroLavi - Dec 25, 2011
|'raised in a single parent home' - Stanford- Intellectual development
Undergraduate22kcox - Dec 23, 2011 / 22kcox - Dec 25, 2011
|University of Michigan: How Ross is a good fit for me, just like a McSpicy
NEW - Hi, Here is my supplement for Ross School of Business within the University of Michigan. I would really...
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|"Sugar Land bubble"- BU Supplement essay, why BU?
3 - I don't know about grammar, but the short essay seems solid. You could just remove the 22nd thing that...
Undergraduateanushahasan - Dec 24, 2011 / agronr - Dec 25, 2011
|'My two years of hope' - Uchicago/Yale/Harvard Supp Essay
8 - I liked the essay but after it was over, i was also thinking what you actually found. I really...
Undergraduateecieee - Dec 16, 2011 / menukagrg - Dec 25, 2011
|My love for guitar - Common App Activities Essay
9 - thanks for the advice guys! Ive performed in some gigs with my band and even performed for a wedding,...
Undergraduatesnugglyduckling - Dec 20, 2011 / insanesoul81994 - Dec 25, 2011
|What I did for just plain fun - Pomona Supplement
5 - thanks for all the advice guys! I'll delete the extra sentences with unnecessary details. And Ill remove the phrase...
Undergraduateinsanesoul81994 - Dec 23, 2011 / insanesoul81994 - Dec 25, 2011
|"The foursome of senses"-Brown U something you created
Undergraduatewhimdino - Dec 24, 2011 / collegecat - Dec 25, 2011
|'interest in architecture' + 'morals mandatory' - lehigh supplements
2 - Cut this part? Try looking it over and join some of the sentences together perhaps? Overall,I believe...
Undergraduateblack_pearl_310 - Dec 25, 2011 / perfectshove - Dec 25, 2011
|'Collaborate' + 'Finance' + '50 cent' + 'Developing India' - NYU Supplements
2 - i suggest that you start off strong instead of I feel, just say "New York University is all about...
Undergraduatearmaniku - Dec 24, 2011 / tcohen - Dec 25, 2011
|Common App Essay: I Dunwanna Grow Up
Undergraduatecupnoodle123 - Dec 24, 2011 / santoryuu - Dec 24, 2011
|'I wouldn't return to my boarding school' - Common App Essay
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