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|'I reinforced my values' - The world I come from - UC essay
3 - This was really good feedback! I'll watch out for the word meticulous in the future Thank you so much....
UndergraduateDrKitKat - Nov 24, 2011 / DrKitKat - Nov 24, 2011
|'K-Pop music is my favorite musical genre' - Transfer UC Prompt 2
UndergraduateMEM4FP - Nov 24, 2011 / Ellis - Nov 24, 2011
|essay on how i will enrich the college's community thru my life experiences, etc.
3 - Be aware of your writing approach.... With my dedication and focus, creativity and drive, I wish I am...
Undergraduate2012grad - Nov 23, 2011 / Kenneth Tan - Nov 24, 2011
|'the judgments have no credibility' - Significant Experience Essay
Undergraduaterg1220 - Nov 23, 2011 / Keerthika2014 - Nov 24, 2011
|"design entrepreneurship" - Common App
Undergraduatebxlnt - Nov 24, 2011 / bxlnt - Nov 24, 2011
|'fascination for computer' - MIT- the world you come from
Undergraduatenoal - Nov 23, 2011 / noal - Nov 24, 2011
|'A Beans' Worst Nightmare - Lima Beans- uc #2
2 - I think it's a great story:) But I'm not sure you answered the part "makes you proud". Oh, and...
Undergraduatedmatano360 - Nov 24, 2011 / Guest - Nov 24, 2011
|UC Prompt 1"living in America as a foreigner" Any advice would be greatly appreciated
2 - I think you did a pretty great job:) The college will be able to see your perseverance, your ability...
UndergraduateLillyB1901 - Nov 23, 2011 / Guest - Nov 24, 2011
|'my Chinese class was preparing' - Tell us about a personal quality
UndergraduateLesliema713 - Nov 21, 2011 / Lesliema713 - Nov 24, 2011
|'Global Concerns is an important part' - UC Essay #2
2 - the majority of this essay is outstanding! however at the end you say:I found that the best results come...
UndergraduateDrKitKat - Nov 24, 2011 / sportsfan1234 - Nov 24, 2011
|'nature verses nurture' - UC personal statement
6 - I definitely do agree with the previous comments. Talk more about yourself rather than the 'nature vs nurture' concepts...
Undergraduateksnapp369 - Nov 22, 2011 / DrKitKat - Nov 24, 2011
|'Coming to the US' + 'Helping others' - UC Personal Statements
Undergraduatesjessicaa - Nov 23, 2011 / sjessicaa - Nov 24, 2011
|'My family puts me as their first priority' - UC PROMPT 1
UndergraduateHappyBerry - Nov 20, 2011 / HappyBerry - Nov 23, 2011
|My personal quality - Curiosity.
Undergraduatejungsuzy - Nov 22, 2011 / jungsuzy - Nov 23, 2011
|'My grandma was a wonderful woman' - she has made an impact on my life essay
3 - You've definitely written an excellent essay. There's only a few small things I would fix. "...for giving me...
Undergraduatebdeleon11 - Nov 21, 2011 / mmay - Nov 23, 2011
|'becoming a robotics engineer' - UC: Describe the world you come from
4 - I think I know what Emma's saying (correct me if I'm wrong, Emma). You've focused your essay on robotics...
UndergraduateGinyuTokusentai - Nov 21, 2011 / mmay - Nov 23, 2011
|'what makes us grow as a person' - UC PROMPT 2
UndergraduateHappyBerry - Nov 21, 2011 / mmay - Nov 23, 2011
|'My culture is disappearing' - UC Prompt #1. Too risky of an essay?
7 - Hmm, It's very unique, but I don't think anyone's close-minded enough to say that's risky. It's very well written...
UndergraduateJennyP - Nov 22, 2011 / mwazit - Nov 23, 2011
|'loved one of yours is gone' - UC prompt 2
Undergraduatesouthgate92 - Nov 23, 2011 / sportsfan1234 - Nov 23, 2011
|"What makes you, you." - Help on how to begin an essay
3 - A good place to start would be a humorous story about yourself reflecting something unique about yourself. For instance,...
UndergraduateZuby - Nov 22, 2011 / Easyresearch - Nov 23, 2011
|'Martial art is always my favorite sport' - USC supplement
3 - Thank you!...
Undergraduatequynhhoa0404 - Nov 23, 2011 / quynhhoa0404 - Nov 23, 2011
|Pursuing medicine and experience with tsunami- UC Transfer Prompt
Undergraduatesafiyyah1 - Nov 22, 2011 / safiyyah1 - Nov 23, 2011
|'born in Mexico' - the world you come from - your community or school
3 - thanks...
Undergraduateandrea32092 - Nov 23, 2011 / andrea32092 - Nov 23, 2011
|'Spanish language and serving in my community and school events' - Rutgers
NEW - Essay: Rutgers University is a vibrant community of people with a wide variety of backgrounds and experiences. How would...
Undergraduatecorrales08 - Nov 23, 2011 / — -
|'the Dream Act represents hope' - Apply Texas Topic B- Issue of Importance
7 - @Erika - Do you mean submit an affidavit (legal sworn oath)? I think I know what you mean I'm...
Undergraduate_alan25 - Nov 22, 2011 / _alan25 - Nov 23, 2011
|Passion Behind Computers (intended major)
UndergraduateEDD - Nov 21, 2011 / EDD - Nov 23, 2011
|'I step into the gym' - Application Prompt #2
UndergraduateHayleyy5 - Nov 22, 2011 / Hayleyy5 - Nov 23, 2011
|'grateful when all I have are food, shelter, clothing' Personal Statement-UC Prompt 1
3 - I apologize for the grammatical mistakes. I try my best to correct them. So its mainly the grammatical mistakes?...
Undergraduateamy101 - Nov 22, 2011 / amy101 - Nov 23, 2011
|'Nowhere without hard work' - Describing the world I come from -UC Prompt #1
3 - But then I catch myself and I put myself back in my place. You should elaborate on this. Give...
Undergraduateklvazquez - Nov 21, 2011 / programmerguy - Nov 23, 2011
|'A Promise Made' - review my UC Prompt#1 - the world you come from essay
Undergraduatesoul89reaper - Nov 23, 2011 / soul89reaper - Nov 23, 2011
|'to spend most of my time in WIUT library Coursework ACTION PLAN-Personal development
UndergraduateERDI - Oct 25, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Nov 23, 2011
|'Certified Public Accountant' - Why attending Johnson C. Smith University?
Undergraduatedesmond011 - Nov 21, 2011 / desmond011 - Nov 23, 2011
|'not believing I was in Europe' - Evaluate a significant experience
Undergraduateeek736 - Nov 23, 2011 / sjessicaa - Nov 23, 2011
|'the Malaysian national school system' - University of Colorado, Boulder
UndergraduateKenneth Tan - Nov 20, 2011 / Kenneth Tan - Nov 23, 2011
|'When I ran into the arms of my mother' - U Richmond - leaving the comfort zone
Undergraduateemanon - Nov 17, 2011 / emanon - Nov 23, 2011
|'Cross country, to make the best out of it' - University of California prompt 2
UndergraduateElitelee - Nov 22, 2011 / ktzluke10 - Nov 23, 2011
|'education, health and economy of the Dominican Rep' statement public administration
2 - ...a lot in the past ...and corrupted government that had by that time had no concern for the...
Undergraduatehandernu - Nov 20, 2011 / kxoh - Nov 23, 2011
|'the unfamiliar land of America' - UC Essay Prompt #1
2 - economic hardships naturally followed by exposure to proper medical... each rejection was welcomed by my mother's pleasant smiles...
UndergraduateKsideHb - Nov 21, 2011 / kxoh - Nov 23, 2011
|UC Transfer Prompt: Intended Major Is Anthropology
Undergraduateamatsui19 - Nov 20, 2011 / amatsui19 - Nov 23, 2011
|UC Prompt#1: The Power of Art and Additional Comments
Undergraduateamatsui19 - Nov 19, 2011 / amatsui19 - Nov 23, 2011
|'I'm bilingual in both Vietnamese and English' UC determination and dedication
NEW - "Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this...
Undergraduateohhitsnhi - Nov 23, 2011 / — -
|'A virtuoso in teaching' - Commonapp "short answer" essay
Undergraduateshadglore - Nov 21, 2011 / shadglore - Nov 23, 2011
|My weekends are filled with complaints, compliments, spills, and new releases
2 - Learning from all these experiences will definitely help me achieve my goals I think this is quite vague...you...
Undergraduatekholmes - Nov 21, 2011 / shadglore - Nov 23, 2011
|'We were the only South Asian Muslim family' - statement for University of California
Undergraduateshirajgotaphd - Nov 22, 2011 / shirajgotaphd - Nov 22, 2011
|'no longer being the baby' - UC prompt #1
Undergraduateemicha25 - Nov 22, 2011 / _alan25 - Nov 22, 2011
|About "One Child Policy" for common app
NEW - Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you. Be careful to...
Undergraduateamymao - Nov 22, 2011 / — -
|'The language barrier is the biggest challenge of my life' - UT Essay
Undergraduatexchriswangx - Nov 22, 2011 / dreamsarereal - Nov 22, 2011
|Reasons for pursuing the visual art. SVA essay.
2 - Delete were in the following sentence: As children we were all came across the question "what do you want...
Undergraduateflowersinthesky - Nov 22, 2011 / AU0594 - Nov 22, 2011
|'Service - characteristic that appeals to me the most' - FSU
3 - It might be beneficial to avoid stating "The one characteristic that appeals the most to me is community service."...
UndergraduatebreakingRenee - Nov 20, 2011 / mmay - Nov 22, 2011
|"late night playlist" - Stanford Essay - Roommate
2 - Overall, I think you've written a great essay. I like that you aren't afraid to point out your own...
Undergraduatecarlyhines4 - Nov 22, 2011 / mmay - Nov 22, 2011
|JHU - describe choices in major - Neuroscience/Autism Research
2 - That simple conversation remains, eight years later, the backbone of my goals for the future.---This is great! I have...
Undergraduatedenofthieves - Nov 20, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 22, 2011
|'A college campus = a melting pot' - common app essay on diversity
Undergraduatekenyaboyfresh - Nov 17, 2011 / kenyaboyfresh - Nov 22, 2011
|'Coming from a modern city in India' - UC ESSAY ( MY WORLD )
5 - I think you should move up the second paragraph to be the intro because they want to know about...
Undergraduatepratyush427 - Nov 20, 2011 / safiyyah1 - Nov 22, 2011
|'Family of doctors and engineering' Drexel Application-why interested in your major
2 - I think you shouldn't say that you weren't sure cause towards the end you stated that you wanted to...
UndergraduateNate417 - Nov 22, 2011 / safiyyah1 - Nov 22, 2011
|'having chosen physics as a career' - UC PROMPT #2 ESSAY
5 - thanks for your time reading my essay i have edited the first paragraph Please review it again ...
Undergraduatedarknite94 - Nov 19, 2011 / darknite94 - Nov 22, 2011
|'The Power of Music' - UC 1
2 - Wow this is great, very personal and intimate, and you portray both your internal struggles and big turn-around very...
Undergraduatedmatano360 - Nov 22, 2011 / Kenny H - Nov 22, 2011
|'Ghanaian smiles' - cultural experience supplemental essay
Undergraduateshadglore - Nov 22, 2011 / shadglore - Nov 22, 2011
|Letter to my room mate about my gaming hobby
6 - Do not forget to write in a letter format (according to me). It may be of great importance. For...
Undergraduateketalthedon - Nov 17, 2011 / watermark - Nov 22, 2011
|'all things are subject to change' - Prompt #2
3 - As a young immigrant, changes in my surroundings linguistically and culturally almost seemed natural to me, as well as...
UndergraduateKsideHb - Nov 21, 2011 / ank2jpr - Nov 22, 2011
|'Why so serious?' - Common App favorite quotation
4 - I think your essay is O.k but you've got few things to work on.Remember,adcoms like essays that "show" instead...
UndergraduateTheophania - Oct 30, 2011 / shadglore - Nov 22, 2011
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