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|'Voluntering at a hospital, the fine arts' - Rutgers Essay
Undergraduatekpj1994 - Nov 24, 2011 / kpj1994 - Nov 25, 2011
|'jogging with my dad every weekend'- person who has had a significant influence on me
Undergraduateleah0604 - Nov 24, 2011 / leah0604 - Nov 25, 2011
|My Father Impact on the person i am today
Undergraduatemarah - Nov 23, 2011 / denofthieves - Nov 25, 2011
|My big sister has made an impact on your life
3 - I think examples could really help and they would fill up space--talk about a situation which made you dislike...
Undergraduateemekaobi - Nov 24, 2011 / clare11 - Nov 25, 2011
|'education and opportunities engineering' Why interested in attending Georgia...
Undergraduateshreya101 - Nov 25, 2011 / shreya101 - Nov 25, 2011
|"my family's first computer" - UC Prompt #1 How has your world shaped you?
6 - Your essay answers the question, and there's only minor grammar errors. I'd say that your essay is good, but...
Undergraduatektzluke10 - Nov 23, 2011 / elenazafrul - Nov 25, 2011
|Half-blood - uc prompt
2 - Though I wish that one of my relatives was Greek, it would be cool to learn about the Olympians....
Undergraduateelenazafrul - Nov 25, 2011 / Guest - Nov 25, 2011
|'born in Taiwan and raised in Shanghai' - uc prompt
5 - Thank you for your support! You give me confidence to my ideas! I'm also glad that I dont have...
UndergraduateLesliema713 - Nov 21, 2011 / Lesliema713 - Nov 25, 2011
|'I loved looking at photographs' - FIT Essay
4 - Provide a little bit of imagery for the reader. Write something about your development from an amateur photographer to...
Undergraduateemariam - Nov 23, 2011 / karan11295 - Nov 25, 2011
|"Imitation, then, is one instinct of our nature." ; Egypt Grants to Artists
UndergraduateAgypten - Nov 18, 2011 / Agypten - Nov 25, 2011
|Intended Major..." Cancer and Public Health Major" UC Transfer Essay #1
2 - the essay is well written, but i have minor notifications. the introduction drew me lost, its very good in...
Undergraduatemaggiei - Nov 24, 2011 / marah - Nov 24, 2011
|The Challenge of the Trek - BYU Admissions Essay
2 - I think the commentary of this essay really makes it pop and really drew me into your essay. Excellent--I...
Undergraduatemugglegurl - Nov 23, 2011 / clare11 - Nov 24, 2011
|Moving to Jamaica --- Common application essay
3 - It can be challenging to write an auto biography because you have to give details about what happened in...
UndergraduatebreakingRenee - Nov 13, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Nov 24, 2011
|'Hard work and a fluent Spanish speaker' - a personal quality, talent
2 - In school I would balance my time between class , work, and basketball/track practice but I would always get...
Undergraduatejeceni33 - Nov 24, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Nov 24, 2011
|'mom was born in Russia and my father in Ukraine' - UC I the world I come from
2 - The way you start your second paragraph, "I am tempted to write in great detail about my travels throughout...
UndergraduateCecile - Nov 23, 2011 / shmaceroo - Nov 24, 2011
|Moving Forward by Looking Back -- USC Supplement
Undergraduatefrankfink - Nov 24, 2011 / tanner328 - Nov 24, 2011
|'my education, community, and beliefs' - Description of the world I've come from
3 - I totally agree with jennyflower. The introduction and the topic is great! The intro is engaging and even humorous....
Undergraduatensullivan - Nov 23, 2011 / chocana - Nov 24, 2011
|UC Prompt 1 - Coming from a world of technology
4 - Well it depends on your dreams and aspirations as well. Your topic is about your life is technology right?...
Undergraduaterinam77 - Nov 24, 2011 / Eaving - Nov 24, 2011
|"How my mother wanted me to become a reliable person." - UC Prompt 1 : My world
UndergraduateEaving - Nov 23, 2011 / rinam77 - Nov 24, 2011
|'Ruby Hills' -UC Essay 1
UndergraduateKenny H - Nov 23, 2011 / frankfink - Nov 24, 2011
|'I like cheese / architecture / Mali' - Notre Dame
UndergraduateGuest - Nov 10, 2011 / Guest - Nov 24, 2011
|'having a complete family' - LIM College Essay
3 - I don't think you really answer the essay prompt. Keeping to yourself and forcing a smile everyday is not...
Undergraduatenlnjakid - Nov 22, 2011 / ElyGeoSav - Nov 24, 2011
|'Bilingual, Brazil, United States' -What community do I belong to?
4 - I love the intro sentence! It works extremely well with the rest of the essay. And while I agree...
Undergraduateraphael0729 - Nov 24, 2011 / ElyGeoSav - Nov 24, 2011
|"First time ditched class" - UC transfer personal statement prompt 2
Undergraduatepokon - Nov 23, 2011 / ElyGeoSav - Nov 24, 2011
|'Literature, Science, and the Arts' - Michigan what draws me there?
2 - I think this is a decent essay; however, I think your first paragraph could use a bit of work....
Undergraduateraphael0729 - Nov 24, 2011 / cherrybomb94 - Nov 24, 2011
|Half a Bindhi - Transfer #2 :Accomplishment essay
2 - I think this a very valuable experience to share. However, I think you could fine-tune your essay a few...
UndergraduateKeerthika2014 - Nov 24, 2011 / ElyGeoSav - Nov 24, 2011
|'I reinforced my values' - The world I come from - UC essay
3 - This was really good feedback! I'll watch out for the word meticulous in the future Thank you so much....
UndergraduateDrKitKat - Nov 24, 2011 / DrKitKat - Nov 24, 2011
|'K-Pop music is my favorite musical genre' - Transfer UC Prompt 2
UndergraduateMEM4FP - Nov 24, 2011 / Ellis - Nov 24, 2011
|essay on how i will enrich the college's community thru my life experiences, etc.
3 - Be aware of your writing approach.... With my dedication and focus, creativity and drive, I wish I am...
Undergraduate2012grad - Nov 23, 2011 / Kenneth Tan - Nov 24, 2011
|'the judgments have no credibility' - Significant Experience Essay
Undergraduaterg1220 - Nov 23, 2011 / Keerthika2014 - Nov 24, 2011
|"design entrepreneurship" - Common App
Undergraduatebxlnt - Nov 24, 2011 / bxlnt - Nov 24, 2011
|'fascination for computer' - MIT- the world you come from
Undergraduatenoal - Nov 23, 2011 / noal - Nov 24, 2011
|'A Beans' Worst Nightmare - Lima Beans- uc #2
2 - I think it's a great story:) But I'm not sure you answered the part "makes you proud". Oh, and...
Undergraduatedmatano360 - Nov 24, 2011 / Guest - Nov 24, 2011
|UC Prompt 1"living in America as a foreigner" Any advice would be greatly appreciated
2 - I think you did a pretty great job:) The college will be able to see your perseverance, your ability...
UndergraduateLillyB1901 - Nov 23, 2011 / Guest - Nov 24, 2011
|'my Chinese class was preparing' - Tell us about a personal quality
UndergraduateLesliema713 - Nov 21, 2011 / Lesliema713 - Nov 24, 2011
|'Global Concerns is an important part' - UC Essay #2
2 - the majority of this essay is outstanding! however at the end you say:I found that the best results come...
UndergraduateDrKitKat - Nov 24, 2011 / sportsfan1234 - Nov 24, 2011
|'nature verses nurture' - UC personal statement
5 - I definitely do agree with the previous comments. Talk more about yourself rather than the 'nature vs nurture' concepts...
Undergraduateksnapp369 - Nov 22, 2011 / DrKitKat - Nov 24, 2011
|'Coming to the US' + 'Helping others' - UC Personal Statements
Undergraduatesjessicaa - Nov 23, 2011 / sjessicaa - Nov 24, 2011
|'My family puts me as their first priority' - UC PROMPT 1
UndergraduateHappyBerry - Nov 20, 2011 / HappyBerry - Nov 23, 2011
|My personal quality - Curiosity.
Undergraduatejungsuzy - Nov 22, 2011 / jungsuzy - Nov 23, 2011
|'My grandma was a wonderful woman' - she has made an impact on my life essay
3 - You've definitely written an excellent essay. There's only a few small things I would fix. "...for giving me...
Undergraduatebdeleon11 - Nov 21, 2011 / mmay - Nov 23, 2011
|'becoming a robotics engineer' - UC: Describe the world you come from
4 - I think I know what Emma's saying (correct me if I'm wrong, Emma). You've focused your essay on robotics...
UndergraduateGinyuTokusentai - Nov 21, 2011 / mmay - Nov 23, 2011
|'what makes us grow as a person' - UC PROMPT 2
UndergraduateHappyBerry - Nov 21, 2011 / mmay - Nov 23, 2011
|'My culture is disappearing' - UC Prompt #1. Too risky of an essay?
7 - Hmm, It's very unique, but I don't think anyone's close-minded enough to say that's risky. It's very well written...
UndergraduateJennyP - Nov 22, 2011 / mwazit - Nov 23, 2011
|'loved one of yours is gone' - UC prompt 2
Undergraduatesouthgate92 - Nov 23, 2011 / sportsfan1234 - Nov 23, 2011
|"What makes you, you." - Help on how to begin an essay
3 - A good place to start would be a humorous story about yourself reflecting something unique about yourself. For instance,...
UndergraduateZuby - Nov 22, 2011 / Easyresearch - Nov 23, 2011
|'Martial art is always my favorite sport' - USC supplement
3 - Thank you!...
Undergraduatequynhhoa0404 - Nov 23, 2011 / quynhhoa0404 - Nov 23, 2011
|Pursuing medicine and experience with tsunami- UC Transfer Prompt
Undergraduatesafiyyah1 - Nov 22, 2011 / safiyyah1 - Nov 23, 2011
|'born in Mexico' - the world you come from - your community or school
3 - thanks...
Undergraduateandrea32092 - Nov 23, 2011 / andrea32092 - Nov 23, 2011
|'Spanish language and serving in my community and school events' - Rutgers
NEW - Essay: Rutgers University is a vibrant community of people with a wide variety of backgrounds and experiences. How would...
Undergraduatecorrales08 - Nov 23, 2011 / — -
|'the Dream Act represents hope' - Apply Texas Topic B- Issue of Importance
7 - @Erika - Do you mean submit an affidavit (legal sworn oath)? I think I know what you mean I'm...
Undergraduate_alan25 - Nov 22, 2011 / _alan25 - Nov 23, 2011
|Passion Behind Computers (intended major)
UndergraduateEDD - Nov 21, 2011 / EDD - Nov 23, 2011
|'I step into the gym' - Application Prompt #2
UndergraduateHayleyy5 - Nov 22, 2011 / Hayleyy5 - Nov 23, 2011
|'grateful when all I have are food, shelter, clothing' Personal Statement-UC Prompt 1
3 - I apologize for the grammatical mistakes. I try my best to correct them. So its mainly the grammatical mistakes?...
Undergraduateamy101 - Nov 22, 2011 / amy101 - Nov 23, 2011
|'Nowhere without hard work' - Describing the world I come from -UC Prompt #1
3 - But then I catch myself and I put myself back in my place. You should elaborate on this. Give...
Undergraduateklvazquez - Nov 21, 2011 / programmerguy - Nov 23, 2011
|'A Promise Made' - review my UC Prompt#1 - the world you come from essay
Undergraduatesoul89reaper - Nov 23, 2011 / soul89reaper - Nov 23, 2011
|'to spend most of my time in WIUT library Coursework ACTION PLAN-Personal development
UndergraduateERDI - Oct 25, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Nov 23, 2011
|'Certified Public Accountant' - Why attending Johnson C. Smith University?
Undergraduatedesmond011 - Nov 21, 2011 / desmond011 - Nov 23, 2011
|'not believing I was in Europe' - Evaluate a significant experience
Undergraduateeek736 - Nov 23, 2011 / sjessicaa - Nov 23, 2011
|'the Malaysian national school system' - University of Colorado, Boulder
UndergraduateKenneth Tan - Nov 20, 2011 / Kenneth Tan - Nov 23, 2011
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