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|'Depression' - Issue of Importance- TEXAS A&M TOPIC B
2 - How can depression affect a person's everyday life? (besides saying the generic) Depression takes a toll on people...
Undergraduatealexmb - Nov 6, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Nov 8, 2011
|'Experience with performance' - Macaulay Essay on risk
2 - Fantastic story! Your essay is very well-written and easy to read. I think many people can relate to your...
UndergraduateAllegra - Nov 6, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Nov 8, 2011
|'Racism. Violence. Crime. AIDS.' - Common App
UndergraduateGuest - Nov 8, 2011 / Seirin - Nov 8, 2011
|'co-educational school'+'a classy but modest restaurant' Barnard Supplement
NEW - I need as much feedback as possible regarding these essays. Also quick question, is it appropriate to use an...
UndergraduateGuest - Nov 8, 2011 / — -
|'lived in thin wooden walls on a mountain' - common app essay
2 - I definitely like your topic, I found it interesting. But yes like you said yourself this essay really needs...
Undergraduatenaomiyeahnaomi - Nov 4, 2011 / Guest - Nov 8, 2011
|'I fashioned some moves of my own' - UC essay prompt#1
UndergraduatePurpleBear - Nov 7, 2011 / karthik21 - Nov 8, 2011
|"I Came, I Spoke, I Conquered" UC Prompt #2 essay
NEW - Public speaking has always been a challenge for me. Dancing and singing on stage poses no threat but when...
UndergraduatePurpleBear - Nov 8, 2011 / — -
|'it was a traumautic event' - about quality, talent, person
NEW - Prompt 2: Tell us about a persona; quality, talent, acomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What...
UndergraduateRaRaRudy - Nov 8, 2011 / — -
|"You can't do it." - Stanford Supplement What Matters to You
Undergraduatelisa6394 - Nov 6, 2011 / karthik21 - Nov 7, 2011
|'Inhale. Exhale.' - personal statement
NEW - Inhale. Exhale. Strength, power, and determination were filing up the room from the tall dark man's energy. The...
Undergraduateorangee10 - Nov 7, 2011 / — -
|'As a young Asian American' world you come from and how it shaped the person you are
2 - As I grew, I did not become the traditional by-product of who my parents were intending to create through...
Undergraduatejavabomb - Nov 6, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Nov 7, 2011
|"Parents Shaping My Future" -UC Prompt
UndergraduateBlahBlahBlah - Nov 5, 2011 / BlahBlahBlah - Nov 7, 2011
|'to draw more teens to the library' - Common App Short Answer - Reading
Undergraduatesweetsk609 - Nov 6, 2011 / sweetsk609 - Nov 7, 2011
|'Education, the great equalizer of society' - Texas, Texas A&M, Issue of Importance
NEW - Please don't beat around the bush if you see any glaring mistakes in my writing, I need to know!!...
Undergraduatevinhstuh - Nov 7, 2011 / — -
|'appreciative for having Paula in my life' - (someone who has made an impact)
UndergraduateBgracia2 - Nov 6, 2011 / Bgracia2 - Nov 7, 2011
|Critique My Family Trip Essay Idea (UC App Prompt)
Undergraduatebaoom - Nov 7, 2011 / ge1992113 - Nov 7, 2011
|'while playing soccer in the mud' - Activity essay for Commonapp
2 - The imagery in the first line is good. And the essay has good direction I feel however that you...
UndergraduateCollegeBound12 - Nov 6, 2011 / jrciii - Nov 7, 2011
|"Sonny's Blues" essay (the present and past tense problems)
6 - is this like a review? if it is i'd start with the plot overview then your opinion, compering it...
UndergraduateRosterloh - Dec 10, 2009 / uzumaki - Nov 7, 2011
|"Son - my mother's tatoo' - Penn Optional
UndergraduateJoneil529 - Nov 3, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 7, 2011
|'Jamshedpur and India' - where you come from and your world
NEW - Prompt #1 Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell...
Undergraduateabhip712 - Nov 7, 2011 / — -
|'the Megabloks' - UC PROMPT 1 Major: Mechanical Engineering
2 - MegaBloks, my younger sister, and computer-aided design. These three have assembled the person I am today. As I flipped...
Undergraduatehappyduck14 - Nov 7, 2011 / beccalevesque - Nov 7, 2011
|'Never told to clean my room' - Major: Mechanical Engineering
3 - The essay reflects the true "you".U have written it lucidly yet it is inclusive of indepth details....
Undergraduatemechejunker - Nov 7, 2011 / abhip712 - Nov 7, 2011
|'Baby, baby, baby' - Essay on self confidence - CommonApp
10 - i love your essay! i find it really engaging and it truly gives insight into your interests, perspectives, and...
Undergraduateomnxbeast - Oct 28, 2011 / isabellaclaudia - Nov 7, 2011
|'something new to slip my bookmark into' - Common App Supplement- personal narrative
5 - Wow, a truly great essay! Your response shows a lot of personality and maturity. Great job and good luck!!...
Undergraduatedesm2012 - Oct 19, 2011 / tylrrvera - Nov 7, 2011
|'the Key Club presentation' - UF Admissions Essay
3 - At that moment, I wasn't paying much attention to the presentation. They have to make this trip at...
Undergraduatesexililkadie - Oct 31, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 7, 2011
|'Nursing Home for Alzheimer's patients' UC Prompt #1
Undergraduatewyby45 - Nov 5, 2011 / wyby45 - Nov 7, 2011
|'Love for the human body' - Stanford Intellectual Vitality
Undergraduatelisa6394 - Nov 2, 2011 / lisa6394 - Nov 6, 2011
|'Unique, quirky, original' - Yale Supplement
Undergraduatelwest94 - Oct 21, 2011 / LittleWriter - Nov 6, 2011
|'observing my grandfather an architect' - University of California
2 - good start you should add stuff like how did observing your grandfather make you feel how you pursued...
Undergraduatecompocis - Nov 5, 2011 / misternuance - Nov 6, 2011
|'a career that would allow me to help others' - UC Prompt #2
Undergraduatelwgtrrn - Nov 5, 2011 / Kmatt92 - Nov 6, 2011
|'Solidarity is horizontal and respectful' -Common app essay
4 - Great concept, but you can really make it perfect by improving it. Make it much more personal. Talk about...
Undergraduatekarim349 - Nov 5, 2011 / rifatmursalin - Nov 6, 2011
|'Rejection has become a close friend' - Personal talent, quality Prompt #2
4 - I like how you first started telling people about your rejection and about how that made you who you...
UndergraduateKmatt92 - Nov 4, 2011 / luckysnoopy - Nov 6, 2011
|'I believed that homosexuals..' -UT HONORS PERSONAL STATEMENT ABOUT RATIONAL BELIEF
NEW - I am applying for UT honors and need to write a statement on this prompt: Explain a belief you...
Undergraduatedbdnjs1215 - Nov 6, 2011 / — -
|'the Ashes and Snow exhibition' - photography (intended major)
UndergraduateKmatt92 - Nov 6, 2011 / conorg13 - Nov 6, 2011
|'Middle-born children' - Describe the world you come from
3 - When you start taking about yourself evolving and finding your own place, that is when you should put no...
Undergraduatesjwc - Nov 6, 2011 / Jstuff36 - Nov 6, 2011
|'Diversity and raised in a third-world nation' - Yale Supplement
3 - Elaborate more on how the student-faculty ratio can really give you a boost in education. Good luck in...
Undergraduaterifatmursalin - Nov 1, 2011 / vinhstuh - Nov 6, 2011
|'won 3rd place in the Art competition' - Syntax/ grammar help with Prompt 2
3 - many thanks!...
Undergraduatepokiworms - Nov 4, 2011 / pokiworms - Nov 6, 2011
|'continue to try until I succeed' - Personal Statement Prompt 2
2 - Sometimes it takes a lot of motivation to do or continue something, and I know exactly what that is...
Undergraduatemnhere - Nov 4, 2011 / Ellis - Nov 5, 2011
|'my time spent behind a computer' - Penn Supplement
UndergraduateGuest - Nov 4, 2011 / Guest - Nov 5, 2011
|'Your Shoes Can Take You Nowhere' - Personal Statement
2 - The ideas I gleaned from this essay about you: - You feel motivated to succeed academically. - You are...
Undergraduatehesaves - Nov 4, 2011 / 12GabrielC - Nov 5, 2011
|Application essay: Opportunities that have affected my academic credentials.
Undergraduatenicksaysbueno - Nov 3, 2011 / KaranGoel - Nov 4, 2011
|'looking forward to majoring in economics' - help on one paragraph from penn
Undergraduatekingofacs - Nov 4, 2011 / KaranGoel - Nov 4, 2011
|' The loss of Anoninmity' - An Issue of Importance to Me
UndergraduateKenneth - Oct 31, 2011 / Kenneth - Nov 4, 2011
|I wish to experience this world of employment; Drexel/Why accounting?
UndergraduateSueHeck - Nov 4, 2011 / hesaves - Nov 4, 2011
|'the same dream about my father every night' - Georgetown - Early Action
5 - Wow, I really enjoyed reading your essay! It definitely gives a clear insight on the person you are. I...
Undergraduatejoeservidio - Oct 27, 2011 / Guest - Nov 4, 2011
|The internet and my store (UC essay)
3 - bumpppp!!!...
Undergraduatetleeohhh - Nov 2, 2011 / tleeohhh - Nov 4, 2011
|'the people I love in Colombia' - Stanford -- What matters to you and why?
Undergraduatejayelectrolosis - Oct 20, 2011 / Ben_Da_Man - Nov 4, 2011
|'My mother - my favorite person, my friend' - Significant Person and Impact
3 - I think the theme is wonderful, and powerful, And I love the message of a parent NOT being 'a...
UndergraduateLovemedoosie - Oct 12, 2011 / SueHeck - Nov 4, 2011
|'my family is always there' What Matters to Me: Family - Stanford Supplement
4 - Thanks for all the help guys! I really took into account your advice when I wrote my final draft,...
Undergraduatericojbon - Oct 29, 2011 / ricojbon - Nov 4, 2011
|'Friends come and go; but family..' - UC Prompt #2 Family
UndergraduatePhanee - Nov 3, 2011 / Ellis - Nov 4, 2011
|LIM COLLEGE (laboratory institute of merchandising)
2 - The piercing whistle of the train echoed my though my surroundings . There I was with my struggling...
UndergraduateJesstietjen - Nov 2, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 4, 2011
|'Track and Field' - UC Prompt #2
Undergraduatewyby45 - Nov 4, 2011 / Ellis - Nov 4, 2011
|'technology influencing many aspects' - UC where I come from
Undergraduatepokiworms - Nov 1, 2011 / pokiworms - Nov 4, 2011
|'Hospital Volunteer' - your extracurricular activities
2 - " Many would think that volunteering in the hospital coffee shop is not a fulfilling experience; after all, you...
Undergraduatebaigs0824 - Nov 1, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 3, 2011
|'become a globally great engineer' - Why I want to study engineering and why at Duke
3 - Thank you so much. This was exactly what I was looking for. Surprised I missed really easy and obvious...
UndergraduateSimone94 - Oct 31, 2011 / Simone94 - Nov 3, 2011
|Stanford Essay - Am I Blind or What?
2 - Unable to see more than a foot away without my glasses, my impaired vision... However, what interested me...
Undergraduatehesaves - Nov 1, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 3, 2011
|'I executed my game plan perfectly' - Personal Experience
3 - The punching bags swayed back and forth caused by the wind coming in through the open garage door ....
UndergraduateBam Bam - Nov 2, 2011 / Ellis - Nov 3, 2011
|Perfection's Disease (Common App)
2 - I used to stand in front of my mirror and just stare at myself, feeling that someone as hideous...
UndergraduateLittlemissct - Nov 1, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 3, 2011
|According to Henry David Thoreau, 'One is not born into the world to do everything'
2 - Although I did not invent any of these things, I can still impact the world in a different way,...
Undergraduate321979Cllge - Oct 31, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 3, 2011
|'Leaving th airport in Beijing' Brown - creation and perspective
2 - Great job on both responses! The second one was great in exhibiting your voice. Here's a few suggestion:...
Undergraduatelaurri - Nov 3, 2011 / rifatmursalin - Nov 3, 2011
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