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|My first thought was always UCF when I heard the question about my future plans
3 - Hi! So I honestly really like your essay but besides the minor grammar edits that have already been commented...
Undergraduatecarleyfa - Sep 11, 2016 / lylreaganmac - Sep 13, 2016
|"Don't you see? Syracuse is Syracuse" - impact on my decision for choosing this university
4 - Hello, For my opinion, you should use more academic words in your essay. The jury will appreciate that for...
Undergraduatejuju070799 - Sep 10, 2016 / thphuong1911 - Sep 12, 2016
|Write about an Issue of Importance --- Presidential Election --- UofTexas prompt
2 - Hi Landon, welcome to EssayForum, an online essay writing support. First, I would like to remind you to use...
Undergraduatelandperk - Sep 9, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Sep 10, 2016
|Leadership, progress, and service I have portrayed in last three years.
UndergraduateJaZZyCooL - Sep 8, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 8, 2016
|My profile is interesting - I write about introducing myself
UndergraduatePraewpan38 - Sep 7, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 7, 2016
|I choose Ritsumeikan University because... Can someone review an application essay?
2 - Hi very good writing understand that from something as simple as ... the drive for=> the motivation for me...
UndergraduateSmansa101 - Sep 7, 2016 / sinahector - Sep 7, 2016
|Unique Qualities / University of Michigan (essay by a conflicted and undecided student)
2 - OK, for one thing, that "it's vast curriculum" is almost causing me physical pain. but I really like your...
Undergraduatedaisyidk - Sep 7, 2016 / TJLuschen - Sep 7, 2016
|'I am a messy perfectionist' - SAIC personal statement / artist statement
2 - Hi, I really liked your essay. Your introduction seemed a little choppy, because the first half had a...
Undergraduatequeeny210 - Sep 5, 2016 / TJLuschen - Sep 6, 2016
|"Me Do" moments - Common App. Essay
Undergraduatemarygram - Sep 5, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 6, 2016
|There wasn't no one to push me to do my best in the school in Jamaica
Undergraduateshawnakay2017 - Sep 5, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Sep 6, 2016
|Georgia Tech undergraduate application prompt. Apply for chemical engineering
7 - Hi, your content seems better now, but your sentence structure is very repetitive - "I can", "I can", "I...
Undergraduatemaxinemiu - Sep 2, 2016 / TJLuschen - Sep 5, 2016
|"Bump, set, spike" COLLEGE ESSAY ADVICE! Volleyball Struggle Essay!
4 - I personally love the way how you deliver your thoughts in writing. And both the above comments are great...
Undergraduatezdiflo13 - Sep 4, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Sep 5, 2016
|Nursing is not only a deep-rooted passion for me; it is my way of life.
UndergraduateShannon7792 - Sep 4, 2016 / rian31 - Sep 5, 2016
|Common Application - prison rides
2 - ... for high school, but the physical medium security, barbed wire-encased , building. (the word physical threw me off...
Undergraduateelenahapworth - Sep 4, 2016 / mandeute - Sep 5, 2016
|Given funding for a small engineering project UVA essay.
Undergraduatespachelord - Sep 1, 2016 / SV kumar - Sep 2, 2016
|My family environment has influenced who I am today. UCF Admissions Essay
UndergraduateD_Nae - Aug 31, 2016 / TJLuschen - Sep 2, 2016
|Suggestions and reviewing on what I have so far explaining about my circumstances and aspects.
3 - No no I love your idea and it is clear and outlined perfectly for me to concentrate and address...
Undergraduatemia_amare - Sep 1, 2016 / mia_amare - Sep 1, 2016
|Address the admissions committee directly and let us know more about you as an individual
Undergraduatemia_amare - Sep 1, 2016 / TJLuschen - Sep 1, 2016
|Nomination Essay - What motivates you to attend a service academy?
Undergraduateemmarecord - Sep 1, 2016 / ashelarisa48 - Sep 1, 2016
|' I am looking for a change of pace' - Why University of Chicago? (Be brutally honest)
3 - Beyond a lot of grammatical errors that you need to clean up, I think your essay really needs a...
Undergraduatealeng - Aug 28, 2016 / aikoashiya - Aug 31, 2016
|Why Uchicago essay - I'm not sure about it. Tear it apart...
Undergraduatemchammer - Aug 28, 2016 / aikoashiya - Aug 31, 2016
|I am more than a two digit number
NEW - Prompt: Optional/additional common application essay. No prompt "In through the nose, out through the mouth," I whisper to...
Undergraduateninamy20 - Aug 31, 2016 / — -
|'to shed off a couple of pounds' - Apply Texas Topic A Transfer U.S. - SOP
NEW - Posted wrong prompt on original. Here is the intended one. I'm currently applying as a transfer at UT...
Undergraduatecanuck19 - Aug 29, 2016 / — -
|'Movies like Iron man and Avengers have inspired me' - why mechanical engineering as my major?
2 - Hi Jaamin Patel. Welcome to Essay Forum. Fortunately, you have been the right medium to finalize your writing. Please,...
UndergraduateJaZZyCooL - Aug 29, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 29, 2016
|How to write an essay about Introduce myself ?
3 - Hello Yenguyen These are my some suggestions Everyday, I usualyusually read book in the morning before I come...
UndergraduateYennguyen - Aug 27, 2016 / hailun11 - Aug 28, 2016
|Personal Narrative Essay Topic: write about something that impacted your life, must be in past tense
Undergraduatestudystacksat - Aug 24, 2016 / studystacksat - Aug 26, 2016
|"Playin' it the right way" - CommonApp'16 Essay
4 - Hi Arthavmane, - I HAVE ALWAYS BEEN AN INDOOR GUY. Maybe because I never found friends I could...
UndergraduateArthavmane - Aug 21, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 22, 2016
|Patterns of the Universe: Common App Personal Statement
3 - Hi spade, nice write up but check the last paragraph. ... the cube to the screen. 14Fourteen minutes....
UndergraduateSpade - Aug 13, 2016 / SunnyM - Aug 20, 2016
|"COUGH SYRUP AND SWEAT" - UVA PROMPTS 2016
UndergraduateLincsanity - Aug 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 19, 2016
|How I Wrote This Essay; I'm not sure that I've ever been a particularly good writer. Personal Essay
4 - Hi Sofia, first of all WELCOME to the Essay Forum, we hope to provide you with a comprehensive and...
Undergraduateheylookitsfia - Aug 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 19, 2016
|Vassar Supplement - Advice whether it sounds too generic
3 - hii, here is my correction ;) gothic architecture and treelinestree linesyou should giving space between tree and lines...
Undergraduatemonsterbasher - Aug 18, 2016 / bbcheesecake14 - Aug 19, 2016
|Application Essay - "Why this college" essay for Global Studies Major at Ritsumeikan
2 - Hi, Kozai Thai ! here are my several suggestions, i hope this will help you, regards "Today's children,...
Undergraduatemusafa1930 - Aug 19, 2016 / jomul01 - Aug 19, 2016
|'the role of a lovable redheaded orphan' - Common Application essay
2 - Hi Johnson, welcome to EssayForum :) I would like to share my insights about your common application essay....
Undergraduatek2e1l7 - Aug 17, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 19, 2016
|Large (College admission essay that needs a lot of help and editing!)
2 - Hi Molly! Wow! That was really well written. However, it would be helpful if you included the...
Undergraduatemollyedwards - Aug 16, 2016 / Spade - Aug 17, 2016
|SOP to explain any extenuating circumstances that you feel could add value to your application
4 - Hello! Good job on your essay! There are a few grammar mistakes throughout your essay, but I'll let...
Undergraduatekwonuhy000 - Aug 12, 2016 / Spade - Aug 16, 2016
|The college essay as our opportunity to see the person behind the transcripts and the numbers
2 - hi, here my correction for your writing ;) there are too much punctuation error, such as soccer team,...
Undergraduatethemasteressay - Aug 15, 2016 / bbcheesecake14 - Aug 16, 2016
|Favorite book and movie. I can't surpass 225 characters per mini-paragraph!! Keep that in mind!!
2 - ... that I complete my weekend to work, whether about school or notdoing school's assigments or something else ,...
UndergraduateDavidg021 - Aug 16, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 16, 2016
|Tell us a story that helps us better understand a person, place, or thing you find inspiring.
2 - Hi adepani, Here is my analisis. I hope it is helpful. 1st version: With these experiences, I am...
Undergraduateadepani3112 - Aug 12, 2016 / kobayakawa07 - Aug 13, 2016
|"For those who are lost, there will always be cities that feel like home" - Boston Univ. Application
Undergraduatethiisbrazilian - Aug 13, 2016 / molly16 - Aug 13, 2016
|Teaching: The Myth and the Reality - interest that truly fascinates, amazes, and mystifies me
2 - Hey Jacques, welcome to Essay Forum! I think you have a nice start to this essay here. You have...
Undergraduateshadels27 - Aug 11, 2016 / Hiddengrace - Aug 12, 2016
|Discuss any obstacles and/or hardships you have encountered and how you dealt with them.
3 - Hi Aman, know what, when it comes to hardships, I believe everybody does have their own share of this...
Undergraduateadepani3112 - Aug 11, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 11, 2016
|there! So, I am planning to apply to SCAD for the undergraduate fashion design program.
2 - It is this axiom that I, Gehna Patel, try my level best level to uphold and incorporate what???verb transitive...
Undergraduategehna - Aug 10, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 11, 2016
|Discuss your reasons for pursuing the Major/Academic Program selected above?
2 - to your local motel's owner Without any resentment , I always laugh knowing they are partially Just a...
Undergraduateadepani3112 - Aug 11, 2016 / gabrieloandco - Aug 11, 2016
|NC State is a community that is strong because of the diversity of our perspectives and experiences
Undergraduateadepani3112 - Aug 9, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 10, 2016
|Barnard College- pick one woman in history or fiction to converse with
2 - Hi Ann, first of all WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, I hope you find this website as helpful...
Undergraduatesolikerez - Aug 9, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 10, 2016
|The Semester at Sea program has been a dream of mine since I found out about it as a junior
6 - Hi again Courtney! Your essay is definitely on the way! I still think your essay can be tightened up...
Undergraduatecourtneyurzen - Aug 4, 2016 / Hiddengrace - Aug 8, 2016
|WARMTH - CORNELL HOTEL SCHOOL APPLICATION 2016
UndergraduateLincsanity - Aug 3, 2016 / gabrieloandco - Aug 5, 2016
|The quote attributed to William Hastie, Amherst College Class of 1925 - Amherst Writing Supplement
Undergraduatekenant - Jul 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 4, 2016
|The role of my family on who I am - help edit my essay, I want positive and negative reinforcement.
UndergraduateDavidg021 - Aug 2, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 3, 2016
|"THE HIGH FIVE" COMMON APP ESSAY 2016 - making success from a failure
UndergraduateLincsanity - Aug 1, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 2, 2016
|Common app supplement Essay: Harvard University Supplement essay
4 - Hi Sambhab! Here's my feedback on your essay: I think the reason your essays aren't getting lots of...
Undergraduatetyjoke - Aug 1, 2016 / Hiddengrace - Aug 2, 2016
|Two different houses - What was the environment you were raised?
2 - Hi Jocelyn, first of all, as this letter is for your admission to college, it would greatly help if...
Undergraduatejocymariah - Aug 1, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 2, 2016
|Soliloquy-2016-17 Common Application Personal Statement Essay prompt from an International Student-
3 - Hi Sambhab, first of all, WELCOME to the English world, as much as EF would like to teach every...
Undergraduatetyjoke - Jul 26, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 2, 2016
|"Blessed is the influence of one true, loving human soul on another" - my father influence on me
3 - Hi Danielle, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, you have come to the right platform to...
UndergraduateMochachii - Jul 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 27, 2016
|Technology has always been a passion to me since my childhood; Penn State University statement
2 - Personally,I feel like your essay has a potential but it has a dull sense in the vocabulary.It would be...
UndergraduateWazyr - Jul 26, 2016 / tyjoke - Jul 27, 2016
|Why you would like to come and study at Far East University as an exchange student?
7 - Hi Nrakad, the revised essay is definitely better than the original one, however, I still find a few notes...
Undergraduatenrakad - Jul 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 21, 2016
|'very impressed with what I saw' - advice on my Naval Academy Personal Statement Admissions Essay
Undergraduateafnavy - Jul 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 19, 2016
|Studying abroad to pursue an accounting degree of global standards;Study Plan for studying in Canada
2 - HI Hasib, as I was going through your essay, what I notice is the lack of smooth transition in...
UndergraduateHasib Shakil - Jul 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 19, 2016
|From tracking Heme to studying properties of atoms at absolute zero; Georgia Tech Suppl. - Why TECH
Undergraduateharshhpatel98 - Jul 12, 2016 / harshhpatel98 - Jul 12, 2016
|I was not awarded the scholarship - I began to view myself as a failure...
UndergraduateDennis65 - Jun 17, 2016 / Dennis65 - Jul 11, 2016
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