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|"For those who are lost, there will always be cities that feel like home" - Boston Univ. Application
Undergraduatethiisbrazilian - Aug 13, 2016 / molly16 - Aug 13, 2016
|Teaching: The Myth and the Reality - interest that truly fascinates, amazes, and mystifies me
2 - Hey Jacques, welcome to Essay Forum! I think you have a nice start to this essay here. You have...
Undergraduateshadels27 - Aug 11, 2016 / Hiddengrace - Aug 12, 2016
|Discuss any obstacles and/or hardships you have encountered and how you dealt with them.
3 - Hi Aman, know what, when it comes to hardships, I believe everybody does have their own share of this...
Undergraduateadepani3112 - Aug 11, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 11, 2016
|there! So, I am planning to apply to SCAD for the undergraduate fashion design program.
2 - It is this axiom that I, Gehna Patel, try my level best level to uphold and incorporate what???verb transitive...
Undergraduategehna - Aug 10, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 11, 2016
|Discuss your reasons for pursuing the Major/Academic Program selected above?
2 - to your local motel's owner Without any resentment , I always laugh knowing they are partially Just a...
Undergraduateadepani3112 - Aug 11, 2016 / gabrieloandco - Aug 11, 2016
|NC State is a community that is strong because of the diversity of our perspectives and experiences
Undergraduateadepani3112 - Aug 9, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 10, 2016
|Barnard College- pick one woman in history or fiction to converse with
2 - Hi Ann, first of all WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, I hope you find this website as helpful...
Undergraduatesolikerez - Aug 9, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 10, 2016
|The Semester at Sea program has been a dream of mine since I found out about it as a junior
6 - Hi again Courtney! Your essay is definitely on the way! I still think your essay can be tightened up...
Undergraduatecourtneyurzen - Aug 4, 2016 / Hiddengrace - Aug 8, 2016
|WARMTH - CORNELL HOTEL SCHOOL APPLICATION 2016
UndergraduateLincsanity - Aug 3, 2016 / gabrieloandco - Aug 5, 2016
|The quote attributed to William Hastie, Amherst College Class of 1925 - Amherst Writing Supplement
Undergraduatekenant - Jul 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 4, 2016
|The role of my family on who I am - help edit my essay, I want positive and negative reinforcement.
UndergraduateDavidg021 - Aug 2, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 3, 2016
|"THE HIGH FIVE" COMMON APP ESSAY 2016 - making success from a failure
UndergraduateLincsanity - Aug 1, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 2, 2016
|Common app supplement Essay: Harvard University Supplement essay
4 - Hi Sambhab! Here's my feedback on your essay: I think the reason your essays aren't getting lots of...
Undergraduatetyjoke - Aug 1, 2016 / Hiddengrace - Aug 2, 2016
|Two different houses - What was the environment you were raised?
2 - Hi Jocelyn, first of all, as this letter is for your admission to college, it would greatly help if...
Undergraduatejocymariah - Aug 1, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 2, 2016
|Soliloquy-2016-17 Common Application Personal Statement Essay prompt from an International Student-
3 - Hi Sambhab, first of all, WELCOME to the English world, as much as EF would like to teach every...
Undergraduatetyjoke - Jul 26, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 2, 2016
|"Blessed is the influence of one true, loving human soul on another" - my father influence on me
3 - Hi Danielle, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, you have come to the right platform to...
UndergraduateMochachii - Jul 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 27, 2016
|Technology has always been a passion to me since my childhood; Penn State University statement
2 - Personally,I feel like your essay has a potential but it has a dull sense in the vocabulary.It would be...
UndergraduateWazyr - Jul 26, 2016 / tyjoke - Jul 27, 2016
|Why you would like to come and study at Far East University as an exchange student?
7 - Hi Nrakad, the revised essay is definitely better than the original one, however, I still find a few notes...
Undergraduatenrakad - Jul 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 21, 2016
|'very impressed with what I saw' - advice on my Naval Academy Personal Statement Admissions Essay
Undergraduateafnavy - Jul 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 19, 2016
|Studying abroad to pursue an accounting degree of global standards;Study Plan for studying in Canada
2 - HI Hasib, as I was going through your essay, what I notice is the lack of smooth transition in...
UndergraduateHasib Shakil - Jul 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 19, 2016
|From tracking Heme to studying properties of atoms at absolute zero; Georgia Tech Suppl. - Why TECH
Undergraduateharshhpatel98 - Jul 12, 2016 / harshhpatel98 - Jul 12, 2016
|I was not awarded the scholarship - I began to view myself as a failure...
UndergraduateDennis65 - Jun 17, 2016 / Dennis65 - Jul 11, 2016
|Autobiography - Simple Introduce myself
6 - Hi Derek, below are additional help for your essay; - atwith the comic book called "SLAMDUNK " -...
UndergraduateDerek Student - Jul 9, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 11, 2016
|Georgetown University essay - discuss extracurricular activity that you are most involved in
Undergraduateadamzwang - Jul 1, 2016 / mandy51425 - Jul 8, 2016
|Transfer Application to University of Michigan: What unique qualities attract you to this school?
2 - Hi Jess, welcome to EssayForum :) Before moving on to my feedback, I would like to remind you that...
Undergraduatejessaw - Jul 6, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jul 8, 2016
|'all drugs come with side effects' - Issue of importance; feel free to critique any mistakes.
8 - Prescribed drugs have certain effects and side effects. Their benefits are uncountable but no one seemed to be ever...
Undergraduatemahamansoor - Jul 3, 2016 / mahamansoor - Jul 5, 2016
|I would like to revise my essay for ACCD - The three major artists and designers
UndergraduateJudgeDredd - Jun 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 28, 2016
|How to better word this excerpt from my application essay?
4 - Hi Reagan! "I began to focus and build (...)" Whoa, that's one really long sentence! It's kind...
Undergraduatelylreaganmac - Jun 26, 2016 / Hiddengrace - Jun 27, 2016
|College application personal essay for vet tech. Just a rough draft, needs a lot of work
3 - Hi Marissa, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we strive to provide you with the most accurate and objective...
Undergraduatempg - Jun 24, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 27, 2016
|Windows On Williams - My Community
3 - HI Harvey, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family. I hope you find this website to be helpful and credible...
UndergraduateAreinn - Jun 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 27, 2016
|Pursuing a Diploma of Leadership and Management course in Canterbury Technical Institute, Australia
UndergraduateChyme96 - Jun 22, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 24, 2016
|A short essay about me for three or four days
Undergraduatesouhail123 - Jun 19, 2016 / Atchane - Jun 23, 2016
|My Study Plan for Australia Student Visa
9 - Hey Lauren, no problem. You can write point to point but you should be able to relate your goals...
UndergraduateLaurenppppp - Jun 20, 2016 / Ssakshijain - Jun 21, 2016
|Orient Career, The essay describe the orient career in short-term an in the long-term.
Undergraduateminhchanh - Jun 20, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 20, 2016
|Simple Life - Aeronautics and Astronautics Department UW COE Personal Statement
5 - Hi Josh, thank you for the appreciation. There's definitely nothing more valuable than logging in and reading words of...
Undergraduatejkreutz5798 - Jun 11, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 16, 2016
|Photography and art - wrong grammar of statement of intent for SVA
3 - Hi Zhi, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family. I hope you find this website helpful as...
Undergraduatezmli - Jun 8, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 9, 2016
|My service - critique my Peace Corps Motivational Statement?
Undergraduatevsfpc2016 - Jun 7, 2016 / vsfpc2016 - Jun 9, 2016
|Help an aspiring engineer get to Georgia Tech - Crowdfunding Essay
UndergraduateJuanSebastianR - Jun 6, 2016 / — -
|"My expirience with the fashion industry" Teen Vogue U Application Essay
2 - Hello Reagan. I can say that this is a convincing essay for college admission purpose. You address the prompt...
Undergraduatelylreaganmac - Jun 6, 2016 / akbartaufiq25 - Jun 6, 2016
|Write a description about a person who has made a strong impression on you.
3 - Thanks for the feedback akbartaufiq25, I'll make sure to include your points into the essay and I'll definitely be...
UndergraduateDanny22 - Jun 5, 2016 / Danny22 - Jun 6, 2016
|Identity - rock climbing + what it brought to myself - how it affected me
UndergraduateArachnid - Dec 30, 2014 / Arachnid - Jun 6, 2016
|"Being from a small town" FIT Admissions Essay
5 - Thank you Rodolfo! This is really helpful! Also thank you for the comment about the last sentence! That is...
Undergraduatelylreaganmac - Jun 3, 2016 / lylreaganmac - Jun 4, 2016
|NYU Tisch Film and Television Personal Story Essay - grammar / good storytelling?
8 - Hello there, please be advised that you are supposed to follow the standard essay structure that is Introduction, main...
Undergraduatejrayeveryday - May 31, 2016 / Jeremy Newcastl - Jun 3, 2016
|Transfer Essay: Meaningful interest to complete the application.
UndergraduateJo1nnyJiang - May 3, 2016 / Arachnid - May 30, 2016
|Am I happy where I am in life? Am I the person I want to be? Transition from childhood to Adulthood
UndergraduateDavidTheHomie - May 25, 2016 / justivy03 - May 26, 2016
|Nepal is a lovely place to live in but can't provide a proper study environment - Canada Embassy SOP
7 - Rachana, I think there is no serious problem with the content of your essay. The flow of the ideas...
Undergraduateshova - May 11, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 25, 2016
|What are your career goals and how do you expect your education at The Art Institute of Pittsburgh..
5 - I strongly believe that pursing my education at [...] create a portfolio to show that I got what it...
Undergraduaterachaelspelic - May 25, 2016 / 13williamsm - May 25, 2016
|Semester at Sea Essay - A Voyage of a Lifetime
3 - Hi Courtney, I would like to WELCOME you to the Essay Forum Family, this website is aimed at providing...
Undergraduatecscardecchio - May 25, 2016 / justivy03 - May 25, 2016
|'Pursuing a degree in Physical Therapy was never my first choice' SOP for Applying to PT school
3 - Hi Kaitlyn, indeed, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family! Now, when it comes to your SOP, I must...
Undergraduatekaitlyng24 - May 19, 2016 / justivy03 - May 23, 2016
|YSEALI is an opportunity to learn, experience and bring value to all others.
2 - Hi Tran, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, may this website bring you answers to your...
Undergraduatetranthanhnga - May 18, 2016 / justivy03 - May 18, 2016
|"I deserve to be here" - Appeal/Waitlist Personal Statement for UCs
3 - Appeal/Waitlist Personal Statement for UCs How should I make this better and shorten it to 500 words? Thanks!...
Undergraduatephbelu - May 14, 2016 / pahoehoe - May 15, 2016
|My mother is my model - she has had the greatest influence on my life
3 - Hi Trin, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, may you find this website helpful as well as useful to...
Undergraduatenhocthienbinh - May 13, 2016 / justivy03 - May 14, 2016
|UCSD CSE Transfer Waitlist // New unique facilities, attracted by growth and change.
3 - Hi Jonathan, I would to share my thoughts on your letter. - student,that's interested - in augmentedaugmenting reality...
Undergraduatejkiger - May 11, 2016 / justivy03 - May 11, 2016
|"Exploring my abilities" Transfer Waitlist Personal Statement for UC Davis
UndergraduateCawaLimon - Apr 24, 2016 / jkiger - May 11, 2016
|Temple transfer essay from a biology major
4 - You need to remember that there is no wrong or right in making a personal statement as long as...
UndergraduateAcritton - May 9, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 10, 2016
|Assistance Writing a vice-presidential Nomination Essay for West Point?
5 - Dear Jeremy, It is such a pleasure to be working with you today. Reading your essay was moving....
Undergraduatejeremylumbab - May 5, 2016 / JuanSebastianR - May 8, 2016
|What Do You Want to Be When You Grow Up? - Personal Statement College Essay
6 - Hi Jeffrey, first of all, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF, we definitely appreciate your feedback...
UndergraduateJeffreyGuy - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 30, 2016
|Help me to check my gramatically essays for AAS
NEW - 1. How did you choose your proposed course and institution?* I was chose course that related with my...
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|I realize that my dream of becoming an astronaut is turning into a reality
2 - This is a beautifully constructed phrase; I think maybe you are a better writer than you think!! I...
UndergraduateJuanSebastianR - Apr 25, 2016 / chenghao - Apr 27, 2016
|"Overcoming Adversities" - My College Readmission Essay
Undergraduategreyfidelity - Apr 22, 2016 / JuanSebastianR - Apr 25, 2016
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