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|Interdisciplinary Humanities, U OF SAN DIEGO Transfer Student Personal Statement
5 - Kevin, Thank you so much for your feedback.My insecurity about my application due on Monday has been alleviated. I...
Undergraduatehellokitty930 - Feb 24, 2010 / hellokitty930 - Feb 27, 2010
|"Something not relevant from academic record" - Adelphi Essay
Undergraduatecrossxhearts - Feb 23, 2010 / crossxhearts - Feb 27, 2010
|"why I want to be a nurse?" - Nursing school admissions essay
2 - Your first sentence is good, but you should add 3 more sentences after it and then do a paragraph...
Undergraduatehollylopez - Feb 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 26, 2010
|Psychology Undergrad: Work Experience as Laser tech
4 - You have an incomplete sentence here: Like most other kids from the 80's, I had an almost mystical fascination...
Undergraduateklusterfunk - Feb 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 26, 2010
|interest in interactive media - University Entrance Essay
3 - I have always loved to see photography and visual communication combined with interactive media. It is a lovely...
UndergraduateTrusTfmnp - Feb 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 26, 2010
|"Having a child made me a better person"- meaningful experience, FAMU admissions
Undergraduatetbrown11190 - Feb 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 26, 2010
|"the communist reality" - University of Texas: Statement of Purpose
4 - Thanks for the advice Jen. I see I definitely need to work on answering the prompt, like I said...
UndergraduateVeta - Feb 24, 2010 / Veta - Feb 25, 2010
|"ready to return to my learning state of mind" - SCAD STATEMENT OF PURPOSE
5 - I changed most of the mistakes already and already turned in my statement. Thanks guys! This is a...
Undergraduaterichk - Feb 11, 2010 / richk - Feb 25, 2010
|What makes you a perfect candidate for FIT(FASHION MERCHANDISE MANAGEMENT-B.A) ?
2 - During my flight to New York in winter of 2007, I was excitedly dreaming about my future as a...
Undergraduateappleschool - Feb 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 25, 2010
|A stepping stone: Transfer Student for the Common Application (Emerson College)
6 - you're welcome! Now, if you have a few minutes, go help a few other people on the "Unanswered" list...
Undergraduategber371 - Feb 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 25, 2010
|Marine Biology program, University of NC at Wilmington essay admissions question
2 - When someone is really inspired about something, their ideas have a kind of freshness and a compelling quality...
Undergraduateamk74 - Feb 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 25, 2010
|How to write SoP for a Design University
UndergraduateVIVIAN87 - Feb 18, 2010 / VIVIAN87 - Feb 25, 2010
|admission essay on academic interests AND extracurricular activity
2 - Yes! The thing to do is express your ideas differently for each school. Enjoy the process of expressing your...
Undergraduatepmek - Feb 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 25, 2010
|Rice Transfer Supplement - What perspective can you contribute?
6 - It's a bold claim you make at the start... that you now understand human emotions. Maybe solution is...
Undergraduatekevinchen00723 - Feb 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 25, 2010
|'Encyclopedia books' - UIUC tranfer (Academic interests/professional goal)
4 - Encyclopedia books account for one type. I spent large amount of time reading them when I was young. The...
Undergraduateduduj - Feb 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 25, 2010
|"the ability to lead" - My statement of purpose for UT
7 - Well, after taking into consideration what you guys have told me along with what the writng center here has...
Undergraduatebradm09 - Feb 21, 2010 / bradm09 - Feb 24, 2010
|Why Rice, excellent pre-med program (Transfer Essay)
12 - i agree with janson. being specific in this type of essays could really make you stand out and let...
Undergraduateqchen - Feb 20, 2010 / kevinchen00723 - Feb 23, 2010
|USC Transfer Essay - What Matters To Me and Why? Environmental Internship Essay
9 - The communicative, analytical and political knowledge available in the study of Political Science will be beneficial when representing...
Undergraduateurbanoutfitters - Jan 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 23, 2010
|'my vocation in communication' - Statement for Nothwestern university, communication
3 - Thank you very much for your help. You've been really helpful as I don't have anyone else than you....
UndergraduateAngevil91 - Feb 22, 2010 / Angevil91 - Feb 23, 2010
|My short reply on activities for the common app - my work as electrician
Undergraduatelittle636 - Feb 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 23, 2010
|U of T-Victoria College-successful undergraduate experience
4 - this first sentence should be changed, I think: I was firstly attracted by the high reputation of Vic, since...
Undergraduatehqm - Feb 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 23, 2010
|Rice - Why xxx school of study (interested in science)
10 - Jonathan: thanks for the input! Simrath: u really seem to know what you are talking about. i was...
Undergraduatekevinchen00723 - Feb 21, 2010 / kevinchen00723 - Feb 23, 2010
|Computers and technology - Purdue undergrad essay
Undergraduatecmailer91 - Feb 21, 2010 / cmailer91 - Feb 22, 2010
|"the internet mess" - UT Austin Personal Essay
Undergraduatestefoo - Feb 21, 2010 / stefoo - Feb 22, 2010
|"larger and profound education" - Why did i choose to apply to ucf?
2 - I'm applying to the University of Central Florida because I feel that I'm ready for a much larger and...
Undergraduatejohnruiz - Feb 21, 2010 / EF_Susan - Feb 22, 2010
|What's life without a little challenge? - transfer for challenge
5 - letter from a U.S. college or letter from an United States college With the TOEFL, SAT, and applications...
Undergraduatechasity - Feb 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 22, 2010
|Carnegie Supplement: why major (Electrical and Computer Engineering), goal
Undergraduatestar1space - Feb 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 22, 2010
|"become an air traffic controller" UT transfer studen/ Statement of purpose
Undergraduatepinnotes - Feb 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 22, 2010
|'Changing people's lives' - Community Service- Synthesis Essay
Undergraduatetiger31twin - Feb 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 22, 2010
|Experiances give valuable lessons-agree or disagree
9 - Remya,here is the answer of your question.I was in doubt like u regarding transactions. Now I read FAQ and...
Undergraduateremya - Feb 19, 2010 / usalma2002 - Feb 21, 2010
|Common App Transfer Essay- The storm is now sunshine
5 - Overall, I think this essay is very strong. I would suggest cutting the metaphor about the weather. I don't...
Undergraduatepeacelovesarah - Feb 19, 2010 / afurgeson - Feb 21, 2010
|U of T Briefly comment on Victoria College's motto:"Studies Pass into Character"
Undergraduateamyibing - Feb 21, 2010 / amyibing - Feb 21, 2010
|Personal Essay for Adult student with sub-par educational background
3 - This is as impressive as these things get. I am pretty blown away by it. As someone who considers...
Undergraduateafurgeson - Feb 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 21, 2010
|Economic field + Volunteering - U of Illinois (Trasfer)
4 - Beyond just enabling me to apply its concepts in real-life situations, it also provides me with provides me with...
Undergraduatecwoosung2 - Feb 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 21, 2010
|"fear for challenge" - Brown University Transfer Essay
Undergraduateveroniquexie - Feb 15, 2010 / veroniquexie - Feb 21, 2010
|A Second Chance - UniChicago supplement essay:why u chicago and why chicago
3 - Agreed w/ Argit! No need to refer to website research either--it detracts from the efficacy of your case. ...
Undergraduategemma2345 - Feb 21, 2010 / ivyeyesediting - Feb 21, 2010
|"Brown University offers so much more than quality education"
6 - The writing is pretty eloquent. I see how you are trying (and why not, even succeeding) to use nice...
Undergraduateazupwah - Feb 14, 2010 / little636 - Feb 21, 2010
|UT Austin Statement of Purpose (bodybuilding and diabetes)
6 - Bignasty36 Hello Hassan, This is a great essay. Just a few things Id like to recommend I began...
UndergraduateBignasty36 - Feb 16, 2010 / pinnotes - Feb 20, 2010
|My Mom: Someone with an influence on your life - Common Applicatiton Essay
7 - She has always been there for me and supported me whenever I "make " decisions. During the most...
Undergraduatefloridagirl09 - Feb 17, 2010 / victorp_sv - Feb 20, 2010
|Catholic University - Personal Statement - Community Outreach
5 - Gentleman, please accept my deepest gratitude for your comments. I will make the appropriate grammatical changes to my essay...
Undergraduaterayniv - Feb 19, 2010 / rayniv - Feb 20, 2010
|becoming a thriving businessman - Emory Supplement Short Answer
9 - I'll move this comma: My dream is to become a thriving businessman in the field of finance, and since...
Undergraduatehockey520 - Jan 31, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 20, 2010
|Biomedical, Health & Society, and Bio informatics alternatives - admission essay
Undergraduatesugars225 - Feb 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 20, 2010
|UIUC essay #2 extracurricular - Cheer-leading team
Undergraduategrandcn - Feb 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 20, 2010
|'Lyricist and theatrical actor' Univ. of rochester #2: your contribution to the university
3 - Very efficient writing here. That is nice. Maybe it is too serious and efficient, though. How about adding one...
Undergraduatemystifier - Feb 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 20, 2010
|Celebrating Life oftheMind-- "Why Swarthmore Essay"
UndergraduateJS2010 - Feb 19, 2010 / JS2010 - Feb 20, 2010
|uiuc essay transfer: electronics and technology
3 - Since childhood, my favourite subjects have been mathematics and science, I was always interested in applying in practically applying...
Undergraduatesahajagarwal - Feb 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 19, 2010
|'self motivated entrepreneur' - what makes Rochester the best fit for you
4 - HI dinhhoang0802 how would u want me to change the first sentence. would u mind being more specific? how...
Undergraduatemystifier - Feb 19, 2010 / mystifier - Feb 19, 2010
|"My journey moving to another country" - UT Austin Statement of purpose
6 - Your essay is really good, but you should include within the essay a section about research opportunities that interest...
Undergraduatestefoo - Feb 16, 2010 / drahul91 - Feb 19, 2010
|"I am never go to abroad!" This sentence is what a Japanese friend called Taro in my club said
Undergraduatewei - Feb 16, 2010 / wei - Feb 19, 2010
|Experiences and circumstances as an international student - Temple University
3 - I really like your metaphor with roller coaster and your life; it catches my eyes. Also, I think the...
Undergraduateerinhcho - Feb 17, 2010 / star1space - Feb 19, 2010
|Stanford Supplement "To. Future Roommate" (a roommate tutoring service)
6 - Yes, I think my format is too normal... I thought about conversation format, but it turns out to be...
Undergraduatestar1space - Feb 18, 2010 / star1space - Feb 19, 2010
|I disliked pre-school; Tufts Supplement - Let your life speak
7 - Shannon, it is okay for people to collaborate about essays even if the deadline has passed. The reason for...
Undergraduatekevinchen00723 - Feb 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 18, 2010
|Vassar offers what I need to be successful
2 - This starts very abruptly. First atempt at what? Maybe you need to add one more sentence to the beginning...
UndergraduateRandyhl - Feb 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 18, 2010
|a Counter-Strike club - Activities Essay
UndergraduateSaid - Feb 17, 2010 / Said - Feb 18, 2010
|Texas A&M Galveston Transfer Essay critique
2 - Right here you are using semi-colons in the way you should use dashes: By obtaining a Maritime Transportation...
Undergraduatectausworthe - Feb 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 18, 2010
|A pharmacologist - "Describing aspirations" Essay
UndergraduateAizeng - Feb 16, 2010 / Aizeng - Feb 18, 2010
|Oberlin offers what I need to be successful
3 - Thanks!...
UndergraduateRandyhl - Feb 17, 2010 / Randyhl - Feb 18, 2010
|What kind of words would you like to adorn your headstone? UNC Essay
3 - When applying to colleges I have full faith that the Admissions Committees will see all that I have to...
Undergraduatepeacelovesarah - Feb 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 17, 2010
|"So what do you plan on doing now?" -Common Application Transfer Essay
10 - Yep, some people will see it that way. Some people will just see your honesty and cool personality...
Undergraduatebrw2487 - Feb 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 17, 2010
|Technology, programming - NUS Application Essay Singapore
3 - Events, like open house, that facilitate interaction with parents and students, chief ushers for Ngee Ann Annual Award and...
UndergraduateXueli - Feb 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 17, 2010
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