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|The benefits of NYU students going to a gy !
Undergraduateziyad_ziyad - Dec 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|"Chasing A Childhood Dream" - Carnegie Mellon Supplement Essay
6 - this should be a semi-colon: Carnegie Mellon Professor Randy Pausch did not choose to spend his remaining time on...
Undergraduatemaochinesechick - Dec 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|"The impact of foreign media on me" - Cornell AEM essay
Undergraduatekxl2009 - Dec 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|Common App Essay: "Learing about life in an autorickshaw"
7 - But as I looked out of the three-wheeled vehicle, I realized that for the first time that those differences...
Undergraduatenikhurs - Dec 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|"At Home" - Notre Dame Undergrad Admissions Essay
3 - Awesome! Reade Awareness by Anthony De Mello! Also, here is another Web resource that shows how awareness...
Undergraduatelearn2imagine - Dec 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|NYU SUPP- 2050 MOVIE(Indian School)// SYRACUSE SUPP- Diversity of Options
UndergraduateJackieC - Dec 29, 2009 / badromance - Jan 7, 2010
|Kid Cudi Stanford Favorite Books/etc.
4 - I think you should write in complete sentences with both subject and predicate! Your ideas are great, but you...
Undergraduateshannon92 - Dec 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|Intellectually engaging idea and what makes stanford a good place for you
5 - I believe Stanford University is the best college choice for me. When researching colleges I noticed that Stanford is...
Undergraduateliptak92 - Dec 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|Working with three hundred strangers in the village of Montalban- common app
8 - This is a really good essay. I agree with others, as you should conclude by emhasizing more on...
Undergraduatesohee1992 - Dec 29, 2009 / badromance - Jan 7, 2010
|I don't know what it's like to lose a parent; Brown supplement.
Undergraduatelauren492 - Dec 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|'well-known mechanical engineer' - lehigh university supplement
3 - A major research university, a small class size, great job after college and a memorable college experience describe the...
Undergraduatepunjabiboyz1995 - Dec 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|Growing up in Cuba, UPenn contribution to community
Undergraduateomgthais - Dec 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|"nothing ever gets handed to you" - Rice Perspective Essay
4 - Wow, this is such a powerful essay. It really affects people deeply when they hear about the harsh conditions...
Undergraduateericao2010 - Dec 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|Academics and student organizations / Microbiology - Duke Essays
4 - For part one, I like the first paragraph, but I think the second paragraph is not good, because it...
Undergraduatesaadishtiaq - Dec 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|Columbia short answers - books, shows, and why Columbia
6 - Hi Anada, I'm sorry I didn't get to help with these before you submitted. You should check out the...
Undergraduatepoisonivy - Jan 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|I'm a charismatic leader who loves school,BU Supplement- 3 words to describe you
Undergraduatemedelman2010 - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|How I First Learned About Bowdoin
Undergraduatepmurray62 - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|Supplement - Massachusetts College of Pharmacy and Health Sciences
3 - a sudden rush of excitement, feeling like a mad scientist, who just discovered something new in the world of...
Undergraduatesincerelyydavid - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|"Reverend Williams? I love him!" CMC- Leadership
8 - Well... how much is one quality of what. Nevermind that, though! It is a good sentence. Also,...
Undergraduatemle2010 - Dec 31, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|Alive, Surprising and Curious, Boston University- 3 words
Undergraduatemle2010 - Dec 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|POVERTY IS A BAD SITUATION
2 - If you say "poverty is a bad situation," it is a statement of the obvious. It is too obvious....
Undergraduatejumoke - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|Person's character - Florida State University Essay: Mores
5 - Structural advice is well appreciated, but time is closing in so anything helpful is also appreciated....
UndergraduateArdlley - Dec 25, 2009 / Ardlley - Jan 7, 2010
|CMC- Aren't you tired? Because you have been running through my head all day.
3 - This part weakens it. You repeat "fallen in love" a second time, and... from the phiosophies to the...
Undergraduatemle2010 - Dec 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2010
|"Virola", A time I used my creativity essay!
Undergraduatehern255 - Dec 27, 2009 / hern255 - Jan 7, 2010
|I dwell in the beauty and power of words. UW undergrad essay.
6 - Its a flawless essay.. But, as it asks to describe an experience and then judge its impact on your...
Undergraduateryanclare - Dec 16, 2009 / marpals - Jan 7, 2010
|"my never-give-up attitude" - Villanova: Lesson you have learned in your life
8 - i'm assuming you're fine, otherwise i'm screwed. the deadline should end at the end of today, the seventh. anyways,...
Undergraduatejolapham - Jan 6, 2010 / rockonfreak22 - Jan 7, 2010
|"I can't dance." - BU 3 words that describe you - INTRO
Undergraduatetwizzlestraw - Jan 4, 2010 / caisson22 - Jan 6, 2010
|Why I Really Must go!- Tufts
6 - Wow. thank you. I also felt that my introduction was a bit weak. ~ really appreciate the reply!...
Undergraduateddragonx34 - Jan 4, 2010 / ddragonx34 - Jan 6, 2010
|Given a second chance (Purdue Personal Statement. Transfer Student)
NEW - 500 words or less Prompt: If you had a second chance - the opportunity to do something over...
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|My sister teaching me how to read - Princeton Supplement
Undergraduatecarbonation - Dec 29, 2009 / keilinger - Jan 6, 2010
|"My high grades confirm that I deserve a better school";TRANSFER OBJECTIVES & REASONS
3 - thank you...
Undergraduateagon123 - Jan 6, 2010 / agon123 - Jan 6, 2010
|Common Application Main Essay: Call me bro (topic of my choice)
3 - Throughout my life I have been exposed to the loud, short-tempered man that was my father. -----or maybe you...
Undergraduategmonkey16 - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|Transcripts from Community College Courses- Stanford
2 - Ask Stanford? if you are applying as a transfer, id imagine theyd want a transcript as soon as...
Undergraduateshannon92 - Jan 6, 2010 / Liebe - Jan 6, 2010
|bates supplement - how to highlight vitality?
9 - i just saw this and i have already applied but ill just say thanks thats exactly wat my brother...
Undergraduateumulbaneen - Dec 27, 2009 / umulbaneen - Jan 6, 2010
|Rochester Supplement Essay- How I will contribute to Rochester.
4 - Yes, too short. However, I find these remedies to be ineffective against in comparison with pharmaceuticals. Despite...
Undergraduatesaadishtiaq - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|Experiences that made you leave your comfort zone - University of Richmond
2 - When I was seven-years-old I had to leave Japan and move to Chesapeake, Virginia, because my father was stationed...
UndergraduateJustineee - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|the Universe: Stanford Supplement: Intellectual Vitality Short Essay
5 - Finally, if the Universe has just the critical mass necessary to slow the expansion to a constant-size, space is...
Undergraduatelapsi95 - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|Academic interests that all started with books- Cornell CAS
2 - When I arrived in the States as a six year-old, my parents believed that assimilation was my top priority....
Undergraduatexjohnx92 - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|Common App Essay: A Dream with all my Dreams
8 - I am lying on my bed, exhausted after completing my homework and am glad to finally have a chance...
Undergraduateobituary - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|"My Mantra" - Common Application Essay
6 - Among the list of various proverbs and silly mottos that my Romanian mother has provided me with, this...
UndergraduateKupcakeKim - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|Reverie - NYU supplement - 2050 movie on your life
9 - ...but can she convince humans to choose reality over a virtual paradise? Ha ha, very clever. I really...
Undergraduategumdrop41 - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|"Prejudice is at the heart of misunderstanding." - Common App Essay
4 - When I read that first paragraph, I think that you should move everything after this into paragraph 2: After...
Undergraduatetwixster - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|Colby college admission essay: comment and relate to the following quote !
4 - Yeah, sorry about that. I think a lot of people are feeling that way, because we are still trying...
Undergraduateikkim12 - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|Labor vs. International Relations!
4 - I still feel like it lacks a concrete voice of who you are. Illustrative examples of the field you...
Undergraduateddragonx34 - Jan 2, 2010 / aquamarine84 - Jan 6, 2010
|Smith essay! (Is a women's college still relevant in 2009?& WHY SMITH.)
2 - "So there I met Smith College and surprised" so there i met smith college alumni?representatives and was surprised....
Undergraduatelinhexi - Jan 6, 2010 / umulbaneen - Jan 6, 2010
|Why Am I interested in Engineering? - Cornell Supplement
3 - I think I may have commented on another of your essays recently, and I think I remember saying...
Undergraduatedorkiilove - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|"Twirling Noodles" - Occidental Supplement - Personal Habits
Undergraduatecucciola21 - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|Yale Supplement Essay - The Barn Fire
4 - Slowly, seductively, a tantalizing finger... I don't know if it is good to turn it erotic, with tantalizing...
UndergraduateIvy_Equestrian - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|Essay for Appalachian State..Open Forum..
5 - I think that what you should add to the last paragraph is some discussion of your SPECIFIC goals. In...
UndergraduateJessays321 - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|"cluttered exterior" - Stanford Short Response- To a roomate
Undergraduatejustbee - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|"I am Chinese. I am Filipino. I am Canadian." - Stanford Roommate Supplement
10 - I can already see your loveliness in this essay. But I also agree with daisyx3. Wish you luck....
Undergraduatepatay - Jan 1, 2010 / Thyme - Jan 6, 2010
|Education, curriculum, liberty, more - Brown University - Why Brown Short Answer
4 - I would use "freedoms" and a dash here: ...and introduced to me new freedoms: the freedom to explore, the...
Undergraduatemagicdazn - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|Stanford Supplement Essay : Character count problems, one paragraph?
UndergraduateZlop - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|Common Application Essay (Sticks and Stones)
9 - daniel.. It actually sounds good now(despite few problems in wording)...work on it and you ll have a fine essay....
Undergraduatedlev11 - Jan 4, 2010 / Wanderer_x - Jan 6, 2010
|Why Penn Supplemental Essay-------Merging Medicine and Finance at Wharton
6 - this shit is not going to work for them. that's how one person i know started their essay. its...
Undergraduatertgrove123 - Dec 28, 2009 / smallick13 - Jan 5, 2010
|NYU (summer in Italy, new yorker - Alicia Keys, poem, movie, program of interest
6 - musicislife3128 chelsea, i think u are on the right route but i am sure i read something similar...
Undergraduatemusicislife3128 - Jan 1, 2010 / smallick13 - Jan 5, 2010
|UPenn supplement essay -what I can contribute to community
UndergraduateHBZ - Dec 28, 2009 / smallick13 - Jan 5, 2010
|Why (or why not)? Perhaps the key question is "Why in between?"
22 - Thank You :). I'm glad you like it, so far everyone who read it likes it. Hopefully everyone will...
Undergraduateqomoco - Oct 27, 2009 / qomoco - Jan 5, 2010
|My mission to give back to struggling communities; My Tutoring Experience
UndergraduateOne - Jan 2, 2010 / melisa814 - Jan 5, 2010
|the biomedical program, What makes the University of Rochester good fit for you?
4 - Rochester allows its students to participate in research without restrictions. Instead of saying this, you can give an example...
UndergraduatePlayerquadratic - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 5, 2010
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