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|Tropical sunrise-Williams supplement and Degree-Cornell
NEW - Imagine looking through a window at any environment that is particularly significant to you. Reflect on the scene, paying...
Undergraduatelee123 - Jan 1, 2010 / — -
|CommonApp essay - Sudoku
9 - I'm going to ship it off in an hour... any last minute comments, please? I'll be very grateful!...
Undergraduatesweetpotatoes92 - Dec 30, 2009 / sweetpotatoes92 - Jan 1, 2010
|A HAPPY ESSAY =) (my unique common app essay)
UndergraduateTC3 - Dec 30, 2009 / cheetah777 - Jan 1, 2010
|Williams Supplement (300 words) ~ look through window at signif enviro. to you
3 - As snowflakes fall outside the fog-stained glass, I look inside the window---> Do you mean you are on the...
Undergraduatekakashi1992 - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
|Fishbreak's Common App Essay - - Topic of your choice
2 - Today, the double bass never leaves my side, even when I am engaged in volunteer work.----> i think you...
Undergraduatefishbreak - Dec 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
|pianists, music - Common App- Short Description of Activities
Undergraduatejcmashi - Jan 1, 2010 / poisonivy - Jan 1, 2010
|Upenn essay: which academic and social community are of interest to u(help)
4 - i actually think what you have now is great. even though you're speaking from a future point of view,...
Undergraduateginny2345 - Dec 31, 2009 / hk3741 - Jan 1, 2010
|My jail - common app essay (crit for crit)
24 - I really like the direction you took prompt. However, I don't know how risky it will be to do...
Undergraduateautogunny - Dec 31, 2009 / stars11 - Jan 1, 2010
|NYU Supplement Shorts Answers- Summer Vacation, Famous New Yorker, Movie
5 - I like this, very chic and entertaining, but consider this only as my personal opinion, I think a lot,...
Undergraduatecaligirl23 - Dec 31, 2009 / VANESSAPHAM12 - Jan 1, 2010
|Skidmore supplement response - why a good match?
Undergraduatehbrad8002 - Dec 26, 2009 / hbrad8002 - Jan 1, 2010
|Common App Essay, (Sunday Morning Teens Show)
Undergraduateiqbalhasan0 - Dec 31, 2009 / iqbalhasan0 - Jan 1, 2010
|my funky shoes - COMMON APP ESSAY. thoughts?
Undergraduateyikescollege - Dec 27, 2009 / yikescollege - Jan 1, 2010
|NYU Common app supplements-- 2050 movie, famous NYorker, poem on me, why NYU?
4 - your poem's rather...shallow. sorry - it was my impression, and i want to be honest. unless you are transcendently...
UndergraduateEight - Dec 31, 2009 / vpn - Jan 1, 2010
|Princeton Short Answer How did you spend your summers?
3 - If you haven't already submitted this, I would recommend breaking it up into two or three paragraphs. One big...
Undergraduatenathane - Dec 31, 2009 / Ivy_Equestrian - Jan 1, 2010
|How to approach Amherst Supplement on Science
19 - Thank you for your help! One question though...I always gets antsy about grammar. Should my last sentence have...
Undergraduatetwizzlestraw - Dec 26, 2009 / twizzlestraw - Jan 1, 2010
|'I had been overwhelmed' - LAB EXPERIENCES AND TRANQUILITY
4 - Yes, I get your point. For an IVY league coll, this essay will surely catch the attention of the...
Undergraduatesrandhawa - Dec 30, 2009 / Wanderer_x - Jan 1, 2010
|"I knew that was the right major for me." - Stanford
2 - Hey, thanks for answering my question. I think it's a great response to the question but I have 3...
Undergraduatevincentcanlas - Dec 31, 2009 / cz1721 - Dec 31, 2009
|Stanford Supplement - Well, roommate, let me tell you about my rock band...
Undergraduatenikisfalling - Dec 31, 2009 / nikisfalling - Dec 31, 2009
|My conservative, Asian MOTHER; Tufts Supplement: Let your life speak
Undergraduatekrazzikittie - Dec 29, 2009 / krazzikittie - Dec 31, 2009
|Permanent Tattoos-Supplement Essay
Undergraduateaharris64 - Dec 31, 2009 / yang - Dec 31, 2009
|A Tree or a Cloud? - Harvard Optional Essay
Undergraduatesixfoottall - Dec 30, 2009 / twizzlestraw - Dec 31, 2009
|'It was love at first strum' - Common App Short Answer: the ukulele
Undergraduategarfunkel129 - Dec 31, 2009 / vincentcanlas - Dec 31, 2009
|STREET GUITARIST; NYU - my movie, Beautiful Song
5 - Better version! Very brief and informative of what's gonna happen. If you got time, check out another version...
Undergraduatecollegecrazy - Dec 31, 2009 / vincentcanlas - Dec 31, 2009
|Short poem + year 2050 move of my life - NYU SUPPLEMENT
5 - I would revise these two sections just because everything else actually decribes things about you/your activities, but other...
Undergraduatemilano3215 - Dec 31, 2009 / stars11 - Dec 31, 2009
|the Gunn Robotics Team, Another Common App Essay: Significant Experience
2 - Too much quickly in this sentence, but more importantly... The essay is great!! You did a fine...
Undergraduatemuravei2 - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 31, 2009
|UPenn Supplement essay: American Philosophical Society-Bioethis Society
2 - While there is nothing significantly wrong with this beginning, I am writing the same essay and I've read several...
UndergraduateKiaraSwinton - Dec 31, 2009 / stars11 - Dec 31, 2009
|Stanford Essays: Roommate and What Makes Stanford a Good Place
4 - Hey, I think I will submit a little later today. Could you give me some feedback for my essay?...
UndergraduatePineappleCrush - Dec 31, 2009 / dbsqudtlr - Dec 31, 2009
|Common App Essay: "Beyond the Wake"
4 - Yea...I would like to edit some, I definitely don't write as well as you do. I like this part:...
Undergraduategarfunkel129 - Dec 31, 2009 / dbsqudtlr - Dec 31, 2009
|Brown Supplement Essay---Intellectual Experience. Failure is the new Success.
9 - heres the problem i found, this is very good although unfortunately essays dont mean nearly as much as people...
Undergraduatedramacratic - Oct 25, 2009 / srandhawa - Dec 31, 2009
|Grinnell supplement-- how you learned about grinnell
UndergraduateHemin12 - Dec 30, 2009 / Hemin12 - Dec 31, 2009
|Princeton Supplement Essay- Carpe Diem
Undergraduatesonrisa247 - Dec 31, 2009 / Dbarrows1 - Dec 31, 2009
|SYRACUSE ESSAY 1,why syracuse 2,work experience and your gain 3,future plan
5 - You should definitely change up the name of the university in question 1! Don't make a mistake on that!...
Undergraduateuhello - Dec 19, 2009 / ong - Dec 31, 2009
|Brown University Best Advice I've Ever Gotten Supplement
Undergraduatekkrulez3001 - Dec 31, 2009 / — -
|Williams Supplement "Looking into the bookshop window"
5 - there's definitely no need for a transition, you're set to go please check my essay, I'm really desperate...
Undergraduatepmurray62 - Dec 31, 2009 / rapoch - Dec 31, 2009
|Charlie Kaufman, New Yorker or not? NYU supplement
UndergraduatediodotusX - Dec 31, 2009 / Peimon - Dec 31, 2009
|Notre Dame Supplement Essay: "Martian Log 20A1, Come In Star Command"
4 - Its somewhat confusing... I had to go over it a few times to really understand it... ur spiritual side...
Undergraduatetommyj - Dec 31, 2009 / pablito3 - Dec 31, 2009
|my career aspirations, BROWN " What don't you know"
5 - Thanks again, does anyone else have any suggestions? I was also wondering whether or not I answered the prompt....
UndergraduateMSetYo - Dec 29, 2009 / MSetYo - Dec 31, 2009
|U Chicago supplement: tell us about a few of your favorite books.
Undergraduatekiwi90 - Dec 30, 2009 / kiwi90 - Dec 31, 2009
|Boy Scouts Extracurricular Short Ans - Common App
3 - Thanks guys I really appreciate since I have to submit it tonight (a day early). I'll make sure to...
Undergraduatenogasa - Dec 31, 2009 / nogasa - Dec 31, 2009
|"I am a very messy person" - Would you want me as your roommate?
5 - Thanks you guys. This is a great website. I wish I discovered it sooner than yesterday 12am in the...
Undergraduatemilano3215 - Dec 31, 2009 / milano3215 - Dec 31, 2009
|Calculus or Bust, adding depth to my essay, and relating it back to the prompt.
UndergraduateKatlynedwards - Dec 28, 2009 / shreeek - Dec 31, 2009
|unique qualities, Stanford Supplement-- Why is Stanford a good place for me.
Undergraduateswimchick2266 - Dec 29, 2009 / nikisfalling - Dec 31, 2009
|Common App Essay- Saturday Afternoon
Undergraduatemedelman2010 - Dec 29, 2009 / autogunny - Dec 31, 2009
|Grinnell Supplement: How did I come to know G & a new Mascot/Nickname for G
Undergraduateyoungkim - Dec 31, 2009 / poisonivy - Dec 31, 2009
|Additional Essay for Harvard, Topic Love. Too weird??
UndergraduateForeigner - Dec 31, 2009 / sixfoottall - Dec 31, 2009
|Bates supplement essay question: "How will you, with your life experiences, cont
2 - All my life, I have always worked hard and tried to withstand any challenge thrown at me. perseverance...
UndergraduateAchely - Dec 31, 2009 / sixfoottall - Dec 31, 2009
|All NYU Personal Statement Prompts - "Movie, NYer, Poem, Summer and Major"
5 - Hey Emily, while I would love to make those modifications, it exceeds the stupid character limit. I had to...
Undergraduatesnorlaxative - Dec 31, 2009 / snorlaxative - Dec 31, 2009
|Common app Activity essay - international event
9 - I agree with past comments that this seems like awkward wording.Perhaps try "Waking up at 6 AM and...
Undergraduatepoisonivy - Dec 27, 2009 / stars11 - Dec 31, 2009
|CommonApp - is it OK to use an essay from another college application?
Undergraduatelyra88 - Dec 17, 2009 / lyra88 - Dec 31, 2009
|CORNELL! environmental science
6 - Someone carelessly throws theirhis or her crumpled sack lunch in the general direction of the garbage can. It falls...
Undergraduatemarycornell - Dec 31, 2009 / Peimon - Dec 31, 2009
|'Many things to do' - Stanford Intellectual Vitality: Research
3 - Yeah, I didn't think it answered the prompt either. It was an old recycled essay. Anyways, please tell...
Undergraduatejennyness - Dec 30, 2009 / jennyness - Dec 31, 2009
|"A scar in my heart" my CommonApp essay. Pease, help me with my grammar.
Undergraduateomgthais - Dec 31, 2009 / omgthais - Dec 31, 2009
|Short, funny Yale responses
4 - Umm, that part just seems like awkward wording. Perhaps try "I wish I could function off of few...
Undergraduatepoisonivy - Dec 31, 2009 / stars11 - Dec 31, 2009
|1. Would you tell us about a few of your favorite books - University of Chicago
6 - Captivating essay! It really tells a lot, and even though it talks about Jordan, I can see there you...
Undergraduateericpark - Dec 30, 2009 / poisonivy - Dec 31, 2009
|"The Forbidden Apple", 2050 Movie of my life. NYU
5 - A boy from an underdeveloped island in China emigrated to America, lived by himself, and attended college, where another...
Undergraduateqomoco - Dec 31, 2009 / qomoco - Dec 31, 2009
|"Setting Werther Free"--Common App Essay
Undergraduatepmurray62 - Dec 27, 2009 / marycornell - Dec 31, 2009
|Do you surf or tinker? Are you a vegetarian poet who loves Ayn Rand? Personal Expression
5 - Here is my new draft: Whether we're talking about my personality, my art, my interests or my wardrobe,...
UndergraduatePeimon - Dec 30, 2009 / Peimon - Dec 31, 2009
|Brown PLME other interests supplement - music, piano
Undergraduatearcticbunny - Dec 31, 2009 / ddragonx34 - Dec 31, 2009
|Yale Supplement - the Pitbull's grin
22 - I was just about to read this before you said that:) Anyway, this is solid, conclusion is solid, actually...
UndergraduateIvy_Equestrian - Dec 31, 2009 / srandhawa - Dec 31, 2009
|MIT: what I do for pleasure: human iPod - (91 words, v short!)
4 - So not to cheeky? haha thanks so much, I followed through with all the edits you guys suggested!...
Undergraduateekfoong - Dec 31, 2009 / ekfoong - Dec 31, 2009
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