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|"WHY" - engineering department, NORTHWESTERN SUPPLEMENT
6 - Hi Jonathan, you can post your next draft any time you want, I look forward to seeing your progress....
UndergraduateiRunShow - Dec 27, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
|"Childhood Disappoinment": Stanford Supplement Essay on Intellectual Vitality
3 - What do you mean Santa is not real!! Who do you think left all these presents at my apartment!?...
UndergraduatePineappleCrush - Dec 27, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
|UPenn Page 217 - my life in Paris :)
4 - This is beautifully written. I couldn't find much else to correct grammatically, so, well done. =)...
UndergraduateIvy_Equestrian - Jan 1, 2010 / shinding21 - Jan 1, 2010
|'university that has great regard for the students' - Why Yale - Short Answer
10 - Attending small schools in impoverished countries -- (name the countries) -- has limited... I also think this sentence...
Undergraduatecucciola21 - Dec 27, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
|Not a Kumbaya - UVa Supplement Essay for My world
Undergraduatems_jahangiri - Jan 1, 2010 / sonrisa247 - Jan 1, 2010
|supplement: why Stanford? can i talk about something abstract ?
Undergraduatejpg_76 - Dec 30, 2009 / jpg_76 - Jan 1, 2010
|MIT activity Essay---Reading
Undergraduatepolitik - Dec 24, 2009 / jpg_76 - Jan 1, 2010
|MIT essay. A time you used your creativity.
8 - this last sentence seems awkward to me because it looks like something kids don't actually say. Other than...
Undergraduatesonnbc - Dec 12, 2009 / whitepolarbear - Jan 1, 2010
|Cornell Architecture Supplement Essay : Why Architecture?
2 - As an artist and an admirer of dynamic structures, I cannot remain ... Having a fascination for various...
Undergraduateiqbalhasan0 - Dec 27, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
|Academic and social communities in the University of Pennsylvania
11 - I don't think you should say "never heard of" ...perhaps something like: I digressed from my main plans...
Undergraduatepablito3 - Dec 30, 2009 / kakashi1992 - Jan 1, 2010
|Food science - Cornell CALS/ selection of major
2 - ...complete the essays that correspond to your primary and alternate choice. You didn't mention an alternate choice. This...
Undergraduateiluvcake2 - Dec 31, 2009 / EF_Susan - Jan 1, 2010
|Northwestern Supplement Seeking the Relationships Between the Outerworld Help
17 - Some of this material would be better if you revised for conciseness. For example: But to stop now, after...
Undergraduatesrandhawa - Dec 27, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
|Common App personal essay option#1-My Greatest Personal Failure--Feedback
Undergraduatepolitik - Dec 17, 2009 / politik - Jan 1, 2010
|SOS!Williams essay by a Taiwanese student
6 - Thank you so much NKBaseballbum18 IvanD I changed the dialogue into short description don't know whether it lose...
Undergraduates61001234 - Dec 31, 2009 / s61001234 - Jan 1, 2010
|loss of sight is not the worst part - "blue eyes" - person who has influenced me
6 - Nice job! You show the colleges who you are without putting the spot light on Ann too much. Maybe...
UndergraduateAyshaya - Dec 30, 2009 / TheBostonian92 - Jan 1, 2010
|Johns Hopkins Supplement- Why Biology Essay
5 - No, I'm sorry but neither of those really make sense. My questions were always either left unanswered or...
Undergraduatenadine83 - Dec 31, 2009 / LolaYu - Jan 1, 2010
|AT THE 217TH PAGE, ANOTHER CHANCE BEGUN.-PENN U SUPPLEMENT ESSAY
13 - ...waving an L letter with his fingers-"loser". ...wondering what has gone wrong? Just yesterday, I thought that I knew...
UndergraduateVANESSAPHAM12 - Jan 1, 2010 / Ivy_Equestrian - Jan 1, 2010
|nyu haiku about midgets (nyu supplement)
Undergraduateowls - Dec 27, 2009 / jyu104 - Jan 1, 2010
|"Alzheimer" QUESTIONS AND ANSWERS - JHU major essay
Undergraduatepoisonivy - Dec 27, 2009 / poisonivy - Jan 1, 2010
|Stanford Roommate Serious Humor Short Essay
UndergraduateDeusEx - Jan 1, 2010 / jpg_76 - Jan 1, 2010
|Maybe political Science major, Comment on Cornell ILR supplement essay!
NEW - Hello, I'm working on the supplement essay for the ILR school at Cornell. Cornell is a pretty big reach...
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|May 3rd, 1998 -- Pepperdine Essay
4 - But being born was the first unconscious decision I made; I said I was up to the challenge of...
Undergraduatecaisson22 - Dec 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
|Stanford Essay: Describe Yourself Walks!
Undergraduateschmevie - Dec 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
|UChicago Essay- Outgrowing
3 - "My new school did not have a grassy sports field.I nstead the school yard was just a concrete space...
Undergraduatemchen92 - Jan 1, 2010 / ebby2010 - Jan 1, 2010
|if you like in-n-out burger.....READ THIS UPENN ESSAY.
Undergraduatebtwthisisbecca - Dec 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
|Describe an academic project : DNR orders- Notre Dame essay!
2 - I think you should cut out this sentence. Since childhood, I have been more fascinated by dissecting frogs or...
Undergraduatehahahaha122 - Dec 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
|Common App Main Essay - "The Bidding" - Topic is a bit out there
6 - I have a ridiculously huge list... :) UPenn, Yale, Pton, Williams, Vassar, Tufts, Colgate, Tulane, UMich, Skidmore, Northwestern, Cornell,...
Undergraduatedpi2010 - Dec 31, 2009 / Ivy_Equestrian - Jan 1, 2010
|Bates Vitality Essay--Collecting and Restoring Antique Books
6 - I LOVE THIS. The imagery is thrilling; it is unique and the admissions office will actually want to read...
Undergraduatepmurray62 - Dec 31, 2009 / lauren1212 - Jan 1, 2010
|MIT ESSAY ON DAPARTMENT THAT APPEAL TO YOU
2 - The mechanical engineering department at MIT appeals to me because I am stunned with the research center at MIT,and...
Undergraduatejames23 - Dec 31, 2009 / ngcoel - Jan 1, 2010
|NOTRE DAME SUPPLEMENT+GEORGE WASH: being the political "bow"
Undergraduatemeliza8809 - Dec 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
|'Responsibility shapes me' - Code honor-(Trintiy College essay)
3 - ...set of strict principles that define what honorable conduct for individuals. BEFORE you write this sentence, introduce...
Undergraduateyf8651 - Dec 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
|Tropical sunrise-Williams supplement and Degree-Cornell
NEW - Imagine looking through a window at any environment that is particularly significant to you. Reflect on the scene, paying...
Undergraduatelee123 - Jan 1, 2010 / — -
|CommonApp essay - Sudoku
9 - I'm going to ship it off in an hour... any last minute comments, please? I'll be very grateful!...
Undergraduatesweetpotatoes92 - Dec 30, 2009 / sweetpotatoes92 - Jan 1, 2010
|A HAPPY ESSAY =) (my unique common app essay)
UndergraduateTC3 - Dec 30, 2009 / cheetah777 - Jan 1, 2010
|Williams Supplement (300 words) ~ look through window at signif enviro. to you
3 - As snowflakes fall outside the fog-stained glass, I look inside the window---> Do you mean you are on the...
Undergraduatekakashi1992 - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
|Fishbreak's Common App Essay - - Topic of your choice
2 - Today, the double bass never leaves my side, even when I am engaged in volunteer work.----> i think you...
Undergraduatefishbreak - Dec 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
|pianists, music - Common App- Short Description of Activities
Undergraduatejcmashi - Jan 1, 2010 / poisonivy - Jan 1, 2010
|Upenn essay: which academic and social community are of interest to u(help)
4 - i actually think what you have now is great. even though you're speaking from a future point of view,...
Undergraduateginny2345 - Dec 31, 2009 / hk3741 - Jan 1, 2010
|My jail - common app essay (crit for crit)
24 - I really like the direction you took prompt. However, I don't know how risky it will be to do...
Undergraduateautogunny - Dec 31, 2009 / stars11 - Jan 1, 2010
|NYU Supplement Shorts Answers- Summer Vacation, Famous New Yorker, Movie
5 - I like this, very chic and entertaining, but consider this only as my personal opinion, I think a lot,...
Undergraduatecaligirl23 - Dec 31, 2009 / VANESSAPHAM12 - Jan 1, 2010
|Common App Essay, (Sunday Morning Teens Show)
Undergraduateiqbalhasan0 - Dec 31, 2009 / iqbalhasan0 - Jan 1, 2010
|my funky shoes - COMMON APP ESSAY. thoughts?
Undergraduateyikescollege - Dec 27, 2009 / yikescollege - Jan 1, 2010
|NYU Common app supplements-- 2050 movie, famous NYorker, poem on me, why NYU?
4 - your poem's rather...shallow. sorry - it was my impression, and i want to be honest. unless you are transcendently...
UndergraduateEight - Dec 31, 2009 / vpn - Jan 1, 2010
|Princeton Short Answer How did you spend your summers?
3 - If you haven't already submitted this, I would recommend breaking it up into two or three paragraphs. One big...
Undergraduatenathane - Dec 31, 2009 / Ivy_Equestrian - Jan 1, 2010
|How to approach Amherst Supplement on Science
19 - Thank you for your help! One question though...I always gets antsy about grammar. Should my last sentence have...
Undergraduatetwizzlestraw - Dec 26, 2009 / twizzlestraw - Jan 1, 2010
|'I had been overwhelmed' - LAB EXPERIENCES AND TRANQUILITY
4 - Yes, I get your point. For an IVY league coll, this essay will surely catch the attention of the...
Undergraduatesrandhawa - Dec 30, 2009 / Wanderer_x - Jan 1, 2010
|"I knew that was the right major for me." - Stanford
2 - Hey, thanks for answering my question. I think it's a great response to the question but I have 3...
Undergraduatevincentcanlas - Dec 31, 2009 / cz1721 - Dec 31, 2009
|Stanford Supplement - Well, roommate, let me tell you about my rock band...
Undergraduatenikisfalling - Dec 31, 2009 / nikisfalling - Dec 31, 2009
|My conservative, Asian MOTHER; Tufts Supplement: Let your life speak
Undergraduatekrazzikittie - Dec 29, 2009 / krazzikittie - Dec 31, 2009
|Permanent Tattoos-Supplement Essay
Undergraduateaharris64 - Dec 31, 2009 / yang - Dec 31, 2009
|A Tree or a Cloud? - Harvard Optional Essay
Undergraduatesixfoottall - Dec 30, 2009 / twizzlestraw - Dec 31, 2009
|'It was love at first strum' - Common App Short Answer: the ukulele
Undergraduategarfunkel129 - Dec 31, 2009 / vincentcanlas - Dec 31, 2009
|STREET GUITARIST; NYU - my movie, Beautiful Song
5 - Better version! Very brief and informative of what's gonna happen. If you got time, check out another version...
Undergraduatecollegecrazy - Dec 31, 2009 / vincentcanlas - Dec 31, 2009
|Short poem + year 2050 move of my life - NYU SUPPLEMENT
5 - I would revise these two sections just because everything else actually decribes things about you/your activities, but other...
Undergraduatemilano3215 - Dec 31, 2009 / stars11 - Dec 31, 2009
|the Gunn Robotics Team, Another Common App Essay: Significant Experience
2 - Too much quickly in this sentence, but more importantly... The essay is great!! You did a fine...
Undergraduatemuravei2 - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 31, 2009
|UPenn Supplement essay: American Philosophical Society-Bioethis Society
2 - While there is nothing significantly wrong with this beginning, I am writing the same essay and I've read several...
UndergraduateKiaraSwinton - Dec 31, 2009 / stars11 - Dec 31, 2009
|Stanford Essays: Roommate and What Makes Stanford a Good Place
4 - Hey, I think I will submit a little later today. Could you give me some feedback for my essay?...
UndergraduatePineappleCrush - Dec 31, 2009 / dbsqudtlr - Dec 31, 2009
|Common App Essay: "Beyond the Wake"
4 - Yea...I would like to edit some, I definitely don't write as well as you do. I like this part:...
Undergraduategarfunkel129 - Dec 31, 2009 / dbsqudtlr - Dec 31, 2009
|Brown Supplement Essay---Intellectual Experience. Failure is the new Success.
9 - heres the problem i found, this is very good although unfortunately essays dont mean nearly as much as people...
Undergraduatedramacratic - Oct 25, 2009 / srandhawa - Dec 31, 2009
|Grinnell supplement-- how you learned about grinnell
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