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|Common App Essay- Trying to be different but need advice on it
Undergraduatelizrose92 - Dec 29, 2009 / erinhcho - Dec 29, 2009
|Calvin and Hobbes influenced my life - Common App
UndergraduateReach - Dec 28, 2009 / ekfoong - Dec 29, 2009
|NYU-2050 MOVIE (newspaper incident)
Undergraduaterosschang - Dec 29, 2009 / luminousx - Dec 29, 2009
|Crockett to INTERPOL - NYU Prompt 3
7 - Those are pretty good titles, if you're leaning more along a title with the word peace, you could...
Undergraduatenogasa - Dec 29, 2009 / lauren492 - Dec 29, 2009
|Duke Supplement Essay - Why Engineering and why Duke
3 - Let's fix this intro: ...about becoming one thing: an Engineer. More specifically, I wanted to be an Inventor. ...
UndergraduateBlessedHands23 - Dec 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2009
|Looking for fundamentals of how everything is functioning Cornell Arts & Sciences 'interests' prompt
7 - Chemistry explains all this, and vivified the intricacies of the matter around us. I decided a long time ago...
Undergraduatebatmankiller - Dec 25, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2009
|Library, books, socializing - MIT significant challenge, help, comment, correct
2 - The one thing you might want to think about is how your portray this as a challenge. Obviously,...
Undergraduatemjellma - Dec 29, 2009 / birthdayattackr - Dec 29, 2009
|Not a Typical Upbringing...Tufts Community Essay
5 - When you say you begged your parents to sign you up for those 3 activities, it implies that they...
Undergraduateshannon92 - Dec 25, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2009
|My Common App essay- written by my "Grandson"
UndergraduateMTcherevik - Dec 25, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2009
|Does this fit the prompt for Pepperdine???
UndergraduateWrestlingnba - Dec 25, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2009
|Global Business and Entrepreneurship Conference, NYU - Common App Essay
2 - I think you should submit the first essay. It illustrates a complete picture of your growing path. I have...
Undergraduatelekha - Dec 29, 2009 / demuredelight - Dec 29, 2009
|Nepal -- small land lock country, Tufts supp-
4 - Asnika, I had to delete a lot of responses you gave people, because they didn't provide and ideas or...
Undergraduatedark horse - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2009
|Main Common App Essay--An Experience that Impacted You
2 - You have such an elegant writing style, very nice sentences. Okay, this essay is beautifully written, and...
Undergraduateessayhelp - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2009
|What don't you know?- Brown Supplement!
8 - My only concern with this essay is that I've already read more than five essays very similar to this(...
Undergraduatejoosunggrace - Dec 28, 2009 / MSetYo - Dec 29, 2009
|Profile Questions and "Why Stanford" - Stanford Supplement Essays
UndergraduateKupcakeKim - Dec 29, 2009 / tkkt1 - Dec 29, 2009
|U-Chicago Free Prompt AND Yale Secondary Essay! - Can I use it for both? :D
10 - I thought it was creative and very well done. You are a very good writer, and you should use...
Undergraduatetimeturner36 - Dec 23, 2009 / purple_eyes - Dec 29, 2009
|Uchicago "Describe a road that you know (real, imagined or metaphorical)" Essay
8 - Thanks everyone. i think that once i make these correction my essay will be great. and if i do...
Undergraduatepoleandreel - Dec 29, 2009 / poleandreel - Dec 29, 2009
|Success - I want to choose the path that will not let me regret taking chances in my life
5 - I have to agree with the earlier posters. The essay readers want to know about you. Sure, background information...
UndergraduateJahnavi71592 - Dec 28, 2009 / Significa - Dec 29, 2009
|Trinity College Supp - What's your Integrity Contract?
2 - Together, they have constructed the integrity plan I have adhered to in my everyday word and action. <-...
Undergraduatehbrad8002 - Dec 29, 2009 / Frydafly - Dec 29, 2009
|Brown University supplement: What don't you know?
6 - You didn't answer the question. I think it is very important to answer the prompt, "What don't you know?"...
Undergraduatenoiresia - Dec 6, 2009 / NAhmed - Dec 29, 2009
|"ecstasy with smells" - Lafayette Supplement: describe a creative interest
2 - I love your essay simply because I'm just as passionate about smells. You, are now officially awesome to me....
Undergraduatenc08dkia - Dec 29, 2009 / paranormale - Dec 29, 2009
|Common App: Personal Statement (Brass Buddy)
8 - The last sentence is very awkward. Perhaps you could say something like: I know that I'll be able...
Undergraduateparanormale - Dec 29, 2009 / invisiblewriter - Dec 29, 2009
|2002 Olympic Experience for U Washington
Undergraduatedaft123 - Dec 28, 2009 / sbdaiquiri - Dec 29, 2009
|Chinese and American Cultures and Family Eating
2 - Fix these errors: My friends were always a little surprised when they came to my house for dinner...
Undergraduatedaft123 - Dec 29, 2009 / Reach - Dec 29, 2009
|The Tenacious Protest--Common App Essay
Undergraduatespacerelay - Dec 28, 2009 / spacerelay - Dec 29, 2009
|Common App Essay - Who has Influenced You & Issue of Importance
3 - When I read your essays, I can definitely feel that you cherish the past and feel sad about the...
Undergraduatedarkwaffle - Dec 29, 2009 / sakeloga - Dec 29, 2009
|U Chicago main essay: flashdrives and k-pop
8 - this is definitely creative! i enjoyed the mystery of what you were looking at in the beginning. i honestly...
Undergraduatecolorfuloving - Dec 25, 2009 / poleandreel - Dec 29, 2009
|Pomona Supplement- my trip to Alaska
2 - Here are a few thoughts for you: Generally speaking, in the U.S. we only use single quotation...
UndergraduateHBZ - Dec 29, 2009 / Notoman - Dec 29, 2009
|"Learning the Guitar"- My Common Application Essay
5 - I am interested at the subject of this essay (its easier to read than most of the others). Though,...
Undergraduatetpingt - Dec 25, 2009 / poisonivy - Dec 29, 2009
|"the department stores on Fifth Avenue" - Williams Essay
6 - I love this essay. I think you have accomplished precisely what Williams is looking for, perhaps you could include...
Undergraduateguitarbfour - Dec 26, 2009 / cmg12 - Dec 29, 2009
|"Carnegie Mellon? What? Mellon like a watermelon?"; MAJOR & WHY CMU?
6 - imo, i think it is a bit too generic. You need to elaborate and give specific examples on how...
UndergraduateMpx - Dec 22, 2009 / darkwaffle - Dec 29, 2009
|My goal is major in mechanical engineering and enhancing the unmanned technology, especially in cars
3 - Today, engineering has become a crucial subject for our society, and without engineering society would just regress back to...
Undergraduatekeyshop13 - Dec 25, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2009
|SYRACUSE SUPPLEMENT: # 2 ( WORK EXPERIENCE) ANY INPUT?
3 - I have always been a As a teen ager with serious long-term goals, I have been motivated by my...
UndergraduateCobraRose - Dec 25, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2009
|Common App essay (person who inspired me)
2 - Very interesting essay! If you're going to mention the quotation, you should include it in your essay! (The actual...
Undergraduateanirudhaw - Dec 25, 2009 / EF_Susan - Dec 29, 2009
|Rice Supplement--why school of natural sciences?
3 - Be careful with your wording. I gravitated towards health care, because I enjoy helping people feel better and...
Undergraduateebby2010 - Dec 28, 2009 / invisiblewriter - Dec 29, 2009
|Tufts required essay- describe the environment in which you were raised.
Undergraduategemma2345 - Dec 25, 2009 / gemma2345 - Dec 29, 2009
|Syracuse- influence, work, and experience
Undergraduateangie127 - Dec 29, 2009 / angie127 - Dec 29, 2009
|Rice Supplement: upload an image that appeals to you
12 - NuclearTide: actually, it is required, whether you're submitting the application online or by paper. And although it may not...
Undergraduateebby2010 - Dec 28, 2009 / ebby2010 - Dec 29, 2009
|I was born in Yale-New Haven Hospital, and my father got his PhD from Yale.
6 - You have to get to the "heart" of the yale essay. Its sortof "on the surface", talk more about...
Undergraduatethemaninblack - Dec 19, 2009 / pennhopefull - Dec 29, 2009
|Common App Essay for Middlebury, American, Smith, Mount Holyoke, Dickinson!!
2 - Maybe you could add something at the beginning, some reason you have felt afraid to drive. Do you know...
UndergraduateJVan09 - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Susan - Dec 29, 2009
|MIT admission essay- difficult situation
2 - Wow. A very impressive essay. Written metaphorically, I don't know if that really fits your essay, but it's unique....
Undergraduateanagaby17 - Dec 29, 2009 / determinedgirl - Dec 29, 2009
|'comfortable expressing one's opinion' - Haverford: Honor Code Essay
Undergraduateepirote901 - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Susan - Dec 29, 2009
|BU supplement: Three words that describe me (dependable, obstinate, analyst)
4 - Hi, I'm glad you found my comments helpful :D I'm actually writing this essay too, so I know it's...
Undergraduatetuna624 - Dec 28, 2009 / onnanoko - Dec 29, 2009
|A. The quality of Rice's academic life and the Residential College System
2 - That is an important observation! The into and conclusion frame the essay and provide its structure. Topic sentences...
UndergraduatePlayerquadratic - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2009
|" Volunteer, not so you can build your resume, but so you can build yourself"
2 - Yeah, likely story! At the start of the essay, making this assertion does not do any good, because...
Undergraduateletsgetfroyo - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2009
|"healing power of spontaneity" - NYU Supplement
UndergraduateIVSolomon - Dec 28, 2009 / Ivy_Equestrian - Dec 29, 2009
|BU: Defining myself with passion for life, sense of humor and dedication
2 - My passion for life is a defining characteristic of my nature. (I cross out tis first sentence because it...
Undergraduatematerial_sloth - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2009
|Getting a Little-Bit Closer - Amherst Supplement Essay
Undergraduatemarkoni - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2009
|The unexamined life is unworth living- Stanford
5 - im actually using the other essay i wrote for this one (i am unable to vote...) but thanks anyhow...
Undergraduateshannon92 - Dec 25, 2009 / shannon92 - Dec 29, 2009
|Why Yale? short answer - Balance in everything
6 - Your short answer is well written. However, I have to agree with gumdrop 41, it doesn't sound personal for...
Undergraduatepoisonivy - Dec 29, 2009 / caligirl23 - Dec 29, 2009
|BU "Three adjectives that describe yourself" Essay
Undergraduaterobyag6 - Dec 25, 2009 / robyag6 - Dec 29, 2009
|A dream of programmer; Carnegie Mellon - major & why CMU?
NEW - Q: "Please submit a one-page, single-spaced essay that explains why you have chosen Carnegie Mellon and your particular major(s),...
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|Common Application Essay: My Father and his Influence
Undergraduateliu007 - Dec 29, 2009 / paranormale - Dec 29, 2009
|Barnard Supplement- Government Representitive
Undergraduatemedelman2010 - Dec 25, 2009 / hehalter - Dec 29, 2009
|"the pleasures of exploring" - Interest in Brown Supplement
Undergraduatesbdaiquiri - Dec 28, 2009 / sbdaiquiri - Dec 29, 2009
|"I love rugby" and sport - Common App Personal Essay
8 - OMG! You used my sentence! Haha I am flattered. However, I'm not certain if it's grammatically correct (since English...
Undergraduatesnailmonster - Dec 29, 2009 / JamesLe - Dec 29, 2009
|NYU - Additional Statement
Undergraduatelekha - Dec 29, 2009 / lekha - Dec 29, 2009
|Common App short answers - Activity, and Secondary School Interruption
5 - Thank you! I'm applying to Yale, Princeton, UPenn, Williams, Tufts, UMich, Northwestern, Tulane, Skidmore, Cornell, Vassar, Colgate, and UVA....
UndergraduateIvy_Equestrian - Dec 23, 2009 / Ivy_Equestrian - Dec 29, 2009
|Barnard Government Repersentative
Undergraduatehehalter - Dec 29, 2009 / medelman2010 - Dec 29, 2009
|International Business, AIM - UPenn supplement
Undergraduatejiangjie - Dec 28, 2009 / jiangjie - Dec 29, 2009
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