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|'Being a pharmacist will help me help others' - Why I chose UCF?
Undergraduatexoxoheartx3 - Oct 15, 2008 / xoxoheartx3 - Oct 20, 2008
|high school marching band - UF application essay! On topic?
NEW - Hi! Can you please read my essay and correct me on grammer, spelling, etc? And see if my essay...
Undergraduatexoxoheartx3 - Oct 20, 2008 / — -
|My Uf Admissions essay What i want to be when i grow up
UndergraduateSupaicgyrl - Oct 20, 2008 / — -
|a voyage to a hill tribe village - on Comm App short essay.
UndergraduateRno - Oct 19, 2008 / Rno - Oct 20, 2008
|'no intentions of stopping now' -: Vires, Artes, Mores
2 - I think your essay has good potential. I, too, am applying to FSU this semester, and right now, I'm...
Undergraduatecese09 - Sep 13, 2008 / rhasia - Oct 19, 2008
|The Art Institute Essays..
Undergraduateseven321 - Oct 15, 2008 / seven321 - Oct 19, 2008
|personal essay about me, MELANIE ROSE ZUNIGA
2 - Good morning. As the prompt and/or instructions for this essay were not included in the posting, I can...
Undergraduatemelybaby1 - Oct 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 19, 2008
|'Accountant dream' - How has The Macaulay Honors College changed you?
Undergraduatenikokoskinas - Oct 19, 2008 / — -
|'I have flat feet'. Elaborate on activities (extratricculars, work activities..etc)
Undergraduatenyczxgemii - Oct 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 19, 2008
|"The art of living is more like wrestling than dancing"- need help UF essay
Undergraduatedentine - Oct 19, 2008 / — -
|"Music has become big impact on my life" - FSU NEW ESSAY
NEW - The connection between Vires, Artes, Mores exemplifies not only the morals, values and intelligence a well rounded person has,...
Undergraduategeri2009 - Oct 19, 2008 / — -
|My strengths, talents, and interest - why do I wish to attend UHart?
2 - "I am hoping to garner higher..." In regards to the content, I think you're on to something here....
Undergraduatebeingryanjude - Oct 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
|Personal statement...how i became an adult in the past 2 years.
Undergraduatelakai84 - Oct 18, 2008 / — -
|Diligent and perseverance are the most important qualities - my statement
NEW - Diligent and perseverance are the most important qualities that are necessary for me as a student. For the past...
Undergraduateawakenlion - Oct 18, 2008 / — -
|IT achievement - University of Miami Admission Essay
2 - Good morning. My mechanical suggestions are as follows: First, make sure that you are capitalizing only proper...
Undergraduatelfmasieri - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
|UF ESSAY: "meaningful event" - Upward Bound
Undergraduatecollegeicntwait - Oct 13, 2008 / collegeicntwait - Oct 18, 2008
|"Congratulations! You are going to be a mother!"
9 - OK, I'm assuming the above is the new conclusion. One suggestion: "...talented, a natural leader, and overall...
Undergraduateccn7 - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
|"College was the best time of my life." -UCF APPLICATION ESSAY
3 - thanks!!...
Undergraduatevivalavida - Oct 17, 2008 / vivalavida - Oct 17, 2008
|how does Penn make a perfect match for you?
Undergraduategbtl - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|Name a professor with whom you would like to study or conduct research with
5 - Good evening. Let's see... I suggest taking out some of the ex tenuous detail and condensing your...
Undergraduategbtl - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|Obstacles or 'bumps in the road in your academic or personal life
4 - Sure! "...and I'm confident that..." "...economical crisis don't help..." "...center and I've noticed..." I...
Undergraduatefernaj13 - Oct 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|teleporting mentally to a different world
4 - That would work as well. Generally, whatever tense is more natural and comes easier to you will reflect itself...
Undergraduatemickeygirl - Oct 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|FSU admissions essay- worthy enough to attend Florida State University?
Undergraduatebethany_shphrd - Oct 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|"I am well prepared and primed" - FSU essay
3 - I like the new addition. I suggest changing the middle of the first sentence to be a little less...
Undergraduatecnwilliams - Oct 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|this paper significantly transformed me - pls edit this common app essay
2 - "...freshman ..." "...editor-in-chief ..." In regards to content, you are very concise and organized. Your piece is...
Undergraduateds816 - Oct 17, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|how has your family influenced who you are? UCF admission essay
NEW - Please, tell me all i'm doing wrong in my paper. I have to submit my application for xfer today....
Undergraduatefernaj13 - Oct 17, 2008 / — -
|my summer trip to Trinidad & Tobago - UF Essay Evaluation
2 - Good morning. Please note your other posting for mechanical and grammatical suggestions, as they still apply to this...
Undergraduateking723 - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|Need advice on essay question- "Unique characteristics and experiences"
3 - Hey, thanks alot. I think you are doing a great job on this boarding helping everyone out. I think...
UndergraduateGuruKid - Oct 15, 2008 / GuruKid - Oct 17, 2008
|"I have played piano" - Chopin's Second Ballade
6 - Thanks!...
Undergraduatepianolegend91 - Oct 9, 2008 / pianolegend91 - Oct 16, 2008
|UF Essay - "Ready for My Unpredictable Future"
Undergraduateesthie_ - Oct 14, 2008 / esthie_ - Oct 16, 2008
|GED Practice: Discuss the influence of rock music on young people
2 - "Because rock music is good entertainment for everyone, especially young people, it influences good physical condition, improvement of exercise...
Undergraduatefisherman - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|CORNELL COMMON APP ESSAY; To feel desired is a primary biological need in life
2 - Good afternoon. My only suggestion is to make sure you are only capitalizing proper nouns and the first...
Undergraduateakhan11 - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|"struggling to comprehend my nemesis" - a significant experience
2 - Good afternoon. This is an excellent essay! Mechanically and grammatically clean, organized, fluid, with a great story for...
Undergraduatecaliforniagirl - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|'true inner being' - MY UF admission essay
2 - Good afternoon. One mechanical suggestion: "...including soccer, which I had never played before. By my senior...
UndergraduateHelena - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|"I manage all of this", I would love to be a part of this place - FSU Essay - critique and ideas...
2 - "...say I have not, nor plan to, give in when these times occur." "...problems, and depend only on...
Undergraduatemoochykk33 - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|'My determined and independent grandfather' - person who had a significant influence
2 - Good afternoon. Just a couple of suggestions. First, "Grandfather" should not be capitalized, unless it is the first...
Undergraduatelist00 - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|"I am a fencer." -Common App essay: is it any good?
4 - You could add more analysis on how deeply these skills have effected you a bit more; other than that,...
Undergraduatelexlavender - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|'the beauty of mathematics' - California exchange student
Undergraduatemickeygirl - Oct 15, 2008 / mickeygirl - Oct 15, 2008
|Doctor of Pharmacy Degree in less than three years; Why University of the Pacific?
2 - Why is this program better than all of the others? What is it specifically about this institution that is...
Undergraduatewendywu - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 15, 2008
|'Teachers and student relations' - Common App - elaborate on one of your activity
Undergraduategbtl - Oct 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 15, 2008
|Super Powers Hero - FSU Essay
NEW - "Vires represents strength in its many forms. Whether it is physical, emotional, or intellectual, it is something that can...
UndergraduateLimaEm - Oct 15, 2008 / — -
|"my strong moral and intellectual ability" - Last Minute Essay. (FSU)
NEW - Throughout my entire life the Latin word Vires has been my guiding philosophy. Vires embodies my moral and intellectual...
UndergraduateAnthony - Oct 14, 2008 / — -
|'difficulty learning' - UCF ESSAY - BUMPS IN THE ROAD
Undergraduatelecokr - Oct 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
|COMMON APP - the importance of diversity to you
3 - Good evening. Your response does answer the prompt, with well thought out examples and good description. It flows...
Undergraduatecalend4r - Oct 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
|I am passionate about each activity which I am apart of - Elaborate on one of your activities...
Undergraduatebeingryanjude - Oct 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
|'Better grades' - Common Application - Significant Achievement
3 - I agree with calend4r's comments about the last paragraph; it is important to make sure that you are relating...
Undergraduategbtl - Oct 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
|'I have no body, I'm stuck' - Why do you want to attend Pratt?
3 - I agree that the pieces definitely need more expansion. "Intro I have been interested in all sorts of arts...
Undergraduatekobedatnext - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
|'giving up my time to help my uncle' - personal statement
NEW - TELL US A PERSONAL QUALITY,TALENT,ACCOMPLISHMENT, CONTRIBUTION OR EXPERIENCE THAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU. WHAT ABOUT THSI QUALITY OR ACCOMPLISHMENT...
Undergraduatenickymicky - Oct 14, 2008 / — -
|About my youth and my first visit to the USA - some suggestion pls
NEW - Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how...
Undergraduateawakenlion - Oct 13, 2008 / — -
|a multitude of unforgettable memories - common application essay
NEW - Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on...
Undergraduatethebobert - Oct 13, 2008 / — -
|They that wait upon the Lord shall renew their streng - FSU essay help
4 - Yes; elaboration and specifics will save these essays, because as they are here they are still a bit vague....
UndergraduateCydiona - Oct 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 13, 2008
|University of Pennsylvania courses / characteristics
Undergraduatezhangyi - Oct 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 13, 2008
|Common Application; Help with "Elaborate on one of your activities"
2 - Good afternoon. My first concern is capitalization; make sure that you are capitalizing proper nouns and words at...
Undergraduatecubs72191 - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 13, 2008
|Essay supporting an issue about which you are particularly passionate.
Undergraduatemickeygirl - Oct 12, 2008 / cubs72191 - Oct 13, 2008
|Unique characteristics - ability to mentor new students and to tutor underclass-men
5 - One suggestion that I had was that rather than list your accomplishments and say that they made you a...
Undergraduateshinoda10920 - Oct 11, 2008 / cubs72191 - Oct 13, 2008
|"I am an artist." FSU essay...I need help...Is it too out of the box?
2 - Good evening. As the prompt for this essay was not included in this posting, I can give suggestions...
Undergraduatejane6272 - Oct 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 12, 2008
|CARE program essay. The palm of my hand sweats as he holds my hand.
UndergraduateChrisloveT - Oct 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 12, 2008
|How I can enhance the community around me? - UCF ESSAY
UndergraduateCydiona - Oct 10, 2008 / Cydiona - Oct 12, 2008
|"I had a rough start to my high school career" - FSU Essay
UndergraduateJCox2009 - Oct 12, 2008 / JCox2009 - Oct 12, 2008
|Thank you Ms. Steward =) fsu essay
UndergraduateChrisloveT - Oct 12, 2008 / ChrisloveT - Oct 12, 2008
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