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|'his island of Puerto Rico' - FSU Essae
3 - FSU Essay second draft Growing up in a family with parents who didn't have much formal education, I...
Undergraduateyenesco - Sep 13, 2008 / yenesco - Sep 14, 2008
|'a gymnastics routine' - FSU Admission Essay
Undergraduatekdarin - Sep 14, 2008 / kdarin - Sep 14, 2008
|Qualities and characteristics for an individual at UCF
NEW - first draft. need to cut it by 150 words. be as critical as possible What are essential qualities...
Undergraduatesofl - Sep 14, 2008 / — -
|FAMU: how my name has influenced me
NEW - this is about describing how family culture/ history has influenced you I need to know is this acceptable.. i...
UndergraduateBlaqnsassy - Sep 14, 2008 / — -
|'different from my peers' - An essay - Why MIT should admit me?
Undergraduateadrivit - Sep 11, 2008 / adrivit - Sep 14, 2008
|'Varied cultures' - State of Maine, UNI of Florida Essay
2 - You've got a good essay here; just a few corrections. I like the basis for your essay; I think...
Undergraduateashcakes - Sep 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 13, 2008
|Boston College Essay - discussing concerns
NEW - 2 Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you Over the...
Undergraduateswooshnic21 - Sep 13, 2008 / — -
|Divorce, man, woman, family - University of Central Florida statement.
3 - As this is the same essay posted previously, make sure you keep it attached to its appropriate post. Please...
Undergraduatekm0416 - Sep 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 12, 2008
|"Youth Leadership Program and more" - UF admission Essay.
NEW - I need some help with this Essay. Describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and...
Undergraduateswooshnic21 - Sep 11, 2008 / — -
|'the guiding philosophy' - FSU application essay
8 - Unfortunately, you are the only one that can provide your own personal story to connect it to. Regards,...
UndergraduateShaenat - Sep 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 11, 2008
|'full custody off me' - FFSU ESSAY FIRST ATTEMPT
NEW - Please give me your input be blunt i dont mind.. For almost one hundred years, the Latin words,...
Undergraduatefloridakid - Sep 11, 2008 / — -
|"A person I admire" - High school application essay
UndergraduateWilliam - Sep 11, 2008 / — -
|'I wanted to be a UCF Knight' - Why did you choose to apply to UCF?
NEW - This is my first attempt at my essay, it needs some grammar and vocabulary help. Ever since I...
Undergraduatelexoticstylez02 - Sep 10, 2008 / — -
|'The youngest professor in Korea'; USB
UndergraduateMiyaKi - Sep 10, 2008 / — -
|'Mathematics and the Physics program' - to major in, which department - short essay
Undergraduatemichel92 - Sep 7, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 9, 2008
|Working on the farm the best way ; UF Essay-Agriculture
NEW - Hi, Here's my UF essay. I would appreciate any advice you might have. I am particularly concerned about...
UndergraduateHallieB - Sep 9, 2008 / — -
|Give an advice on my application essay: education, science
UndergraduateMiyaKi - Sep 7, 2008 / MiyaKi - Sep 8, 2008
|Morgan State University - how my job influence my life
Undergraduatekbsmith - Aug 23, 2008 / kbsmith - Sep 8, 2008
|Hospitality management - Yet another FSU undergraduate admisssions essay
NEW - Can you help me with mechanical and grammatical errors, please! The guiding words to Florida State University, "Vires,...
UndergraduateBrynnD - Sep 8, 2008 / — -
|'Have values and individuality' - Florida State (Vires, Artes, Mores)
2 - Nice work! Only a few mechanical corrections, and your content is very well thought out and organized. Your essay...
Undergraduatetheblackmaria6 - Sep 8, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 8, 2008
|Florida State's motto - completed FSU essay...
4 - You posted this essay and I edited that one for you as well. This is why multiple postings of...
Undergraduatesgcomas - Sep 7, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 8, 2008
|'senior year was supposed to be easy' - ucf essay - bump in the raod
Undergraduatevirgo66 - Sep 7, 2008 / virgo66 - Sep 7, 2008
|How should i describe how this value is reflected in my life - admission FL
Undergraduatecollegeicntwait - Sep 7, 2008 / collegeicntwait - Sep 7, 2008
|Uf essay about me and my friend Rodrigo.
3 - Although I have been a Christian for over a year now, the thought of arriving as a newcomer filled...
Undergraduatejlcisternas - Sep 7, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 7, 2008
|'working at Dunkin' Donuts' - commonapp essay
NEW - I literally just finished this and condensed it to exactly 500 words. It was originally 650ish words--do you think...
Undergraduatejessmel - Sep 7, 2008 / — -
|'ehad, shtayim' / 'I am a Jewban' - two essays... which one do I use?
2 - Good evening. I really like the second essay better. It speaks of similarities and differences, and shows that...
UndergraduateAlexandraSusi - Sep 7, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 7, 2008
|Breast cancer walks and research - vires, mortes essay
NEW - hi gloria you helped me a lot with my other UCF admission essay i was wondering if you could...
Undergraduatelidlmissblonde - Sep 7, 2008 / — -
|'Great ride, my high school career' - FSU essay..advice, edit
NEW - My high school career has been a great ride. Those years are years I will never forget no matter...
UndergraduateBrianOchuko - Sep 6, 2008 / — -
|'Helping a woman' - an event that has changed your life - app essay
UndergraduateDantheman100 - Sep 6, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 6, 2008
|"Objection Overruled" - Elaborate on one of your extracurricular activites.
2 - Depending on your word count restrictions, you could talk a little bit more about why it is you choose...
UndergraduateDantheman100 - Sep 6, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 6, 2008
|Working not only gave me a paycheck, but it allowed me greater independence. Extracurricular essay
Undergraduatejenrik2714 - Sep 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 6, 2008
|"Doctor's passion" - UF, meaningful event
3 - Wow, thank you for the corrections! I appreciate the time you put into correcting this... you all are wonderful...
Undergraduatekola - Aug 20, 2008 / kola - Sep 6, 2008
|Stonewall riots -how a historical event has impacted you - English 101
2 - Good afternoon. It sounds like your professor wants something of a personal impact essay. Has the Stonewall riot...
Undergraduatenickatron - Sep 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 5, 2008
|The world of design; M.Arch Statement of Purpose
2 - Good afternoon. A statement of purpose is generally designed to give you the opportunity to tell the admissions...
Undergraduateklmoyn - Sep 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 5, 2008
|UCF - 'Accepting the challenge' - bump in the road, explain circumstances
2 - Good job. This is an unusual subject to answer this question with, which makes it stand out; this is...
Undergraduatedlb1670 - Sep 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 5, 2008
|"One should never stop learning" / KOREAN ART- US college app
NEW - "One should never, never, never stop learning" I used to hear of it during entire of my life time...
UndergraduateShin80 - Sep 4, 2008 / — -
|'favorite art class' - College of Lake County - My application essay
3 - Thank you so much Your suggestions on my essay was excellent you are so kind I thank you again...
Undergraduatekye009 - Sep 4, 2008 / kye009 - Sep 4, 2008
|past year of school - admission essay
NEW - "In this past year of high school, many things have taken place and they have changed me for the...
Undergraduatedlvspw08 - Sep 3, 2008 / — -
|'Colombia and the efforts of my parents' Meaningful event, experience, etc.-Narrative
3 - I believe there is one error, a comma in your first paragraph. I think you have answered the prompt...
UndergraduateNena011 - Sep 2, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 3, 2008
|STOP HURTING YOURSELF; FSU essay - "Vires, Artes, Mores"
NEW - Please tell me what you think. Please be brutal and blunt, this whole essay thing is making me very...
Undergraduatenicextoxnoxyou - Sep 3, 2008 / — -
|Digital Film making & Video Production ; Career goals/ Education@AI
Undergraduatejabbajuice - Sep 2, 2008 / — -
|Hingham, the meadow; Meaning of MY NAME
4 - Good Afternoon Gloria. Yesterday my friends and I read an English book and it showed us how to...
Undergraduatebiggirl - Sep 2, 2008 / biggirl - Sep 2, 2008
|Family history, culture, or environment influenced - essay admissions
NEW - How has your family history, culture, or environment influenced who you are? As I came helplessly out of...
Undergraduatekuk1234 - Sep 2, 2008 / — -
|"yes Sir and no Sir" - UCF. How has your environment influenced who you are?
NEW - Is this what admission officers are looking for? Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated! As I pulled into...
Undergraduatedlb1670 - Sep 2, 2008 / — -
|UF about my father and ulcerative colitis
Undergraduatebailey - Aug 31, 2008 / bailey - Sep 1, 2008
|'Each of them applied to me' - FSU admission essay
3 - Good evening. I looked at the second essay and edited it here because your editing process is ...
Undergraduatetgn15 - Aug 30, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 31, 2008
|'Towards studying pharmacy' - concise narrative - Undergrad Admission essay
4 - I really like the second, revised essay. It is much more descriptive and your personal energy is showcased very...
Undergraduatemary - Aug 27, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 31, 2008
|the Latin words, "Vires, Artes, Mores" - Florida State University
NEW - Please review my essay for both content and technical errors. Thanks so much for your help! Essay Prompt:...
Undergraduatemnowak17 - Aug 31, 2008 / — -
|'An Erases' Essay for Early Decision to Cornell Uni
NEW - Prompt: Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community, of school - and tell us...
UndergraduateWabbit - Aug 29, 2008 / — -
|'academic studies is a pleasure, not a chore' - UF, meaningful event
NEW - Please review my essay and give me suggestions on how to improve it... I also think my last paragraph...
Undergraduatewhitmire09 - Aug 26, 2008 / — -
|'A problem solving person' - Why did you choose to apply to UCF?
NEW - I am glad i found this site; it seems pretty helpful. Please let me know what you guys think....
Undergraduateextremedew - Aug 26, 2008 / — -
|Family history, culture, environment influence - UCF essay
NEW - 2. How has your family history, culture or environment influenced who you are? My family environment influenced my...
Undergraduatejasonw - Aug 25, 2008 / — -
|Unique qualities - UCF essay; I am loyal, dependable, and hard-working
2 - Good job. Just a few mechanical errors, but I do like the ending much better. Keep up the nice...
Undergraduatesportzgrrrl - Aug 24, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 25, 2008
|STAGE,Excite staff; UF admission - Experience, event, possible contributions, etc.
2 - Your first and second paragraphs are not very well connected. I am unsure if in the first paragraph you...
Undergraduateseniors09 - Aug 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 23, 2008
|'Healthcare Documentation Integrity' - essay for admission into an Art School
UndergraduateKWM - Aug 10, 2008 / KWM - Aug 22, 2008
|'Forget the presence and look at the future' - another FSU admissions essay
2 - Good job. Your essay is very confident and spirited. You explain clearly why this motto applies to you and...
UndergraduateRunyen - Aug 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 21, 2008
|'Computer discovery' - essay for acceptance in Computer related field
NEW - [current date aligned to right] [my name aligned to left] [my address aligned to left] Title: How...
Undergraduatepenner - Aug 21, 2008 / — -
|'Introducted to Jesus Christ' / 'Varsity soccer' - where you come from and your world
NEW - Can you review both of my essays? Prompt #1 Describe the world you come from ď for example,...
UndergraduateFor3v3r - Aug 20, 2008 / — -
|LOOSING THE BEST FRIEND- Life obstacle!
Undergraduatebeebee - Aug 19, 2008 / beebee - Aug 20, 2008
|"changing experiance" UF admission essay
UndergraduateDiiyah - Aug 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
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