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|my first two years of high school - Another UF Essay
2 - Good afternoon. This is an excellent essay. Mechanically it is clean; it is well organized, with tightly structured...
UndergraduateLiist - Oct 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
|I was ranked 1,569 in Maharashtra; Personal Statement - Physics&Math
6 - Good afternoon. I hope, as Sarah suggested, that you have read the terms of service for the site,...
Undergraduatemerocksjigar - Feb 11, 2007 / EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
|Sunflower-yellow rice,green peas,red peppfood&black shells of mussels; Culture UC
2 - Good afternoon. I really like your essay, but it is somewhat disconnected. I am not sure what the...
Undergraduatevivalamariani51 - Oct 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
|PS for Common App: Breaking Out. or cont. father's influence on me
2 - Good afternoon. I think your first essay is a good one. It's a good story that illustrates your...
Undergraduatejamieex - Oct 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
|Encounter with myself; Florida State University - "Vires, Artes, Mores"
NEW - For almost one hundred years, the Latin words, "Vires, Artes, Mores" have been the guiding philosophy behind Florida State...
Undergraduateroger chavez - Oct 23, 2008 / — -
|Essay to gain sponsorship for Honours degree in Business Studies
UndergraduateTizzy - Oct 23, 2008 / Tizzy - Oct 23, 2008
|Short Essay Answers: Books, Interests, Why Occidental
2 - Good morning. Just a couple of mechanical corrections, all to do with capitalization. Remember to only capitalize proper...
Undergraduatedocument1 - Oct 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
|situations that were extremely challenging to overcome - UF admission
NEW - Describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and how it will affect your college experience or...
UndergraduateIgnacio1407 - Oct 22, 2008 / — -
|Working for My Family's Business - UF application essay
3 - Good morning :) Mechanically, I do have a few suggestions. First, make sure you are capitalizing only proper...
Undergraduatenicolle18 - Oct 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 22, 2008
|Extracurricular activities; MECD organization in Nicaragua
Undergraduatermdc25 - Oct 21, 2008 / rmdc25 - Oct 22, 2008
|Our families have a major influence on who we are as a person - UCF essay!
Undergraduatexoxoheartx3 - Oct 20, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 22, 2008
|illness had most profound effect upon my life- UConn
NEW - - Describe a person or event that has had a profound effect upon your life. I immigrated to...
Undergraduatembhong - Oct 21, 2008 / — -
|Common app answer "Elaborate on one activity": the Bible Study teacher
NEW - Hello, I need help on the commonapp short answer(see title for prompt) I'm not sure if mine is in...
Undergraduateluv4evr - Oct 21, 2008 / — -
|Giving back: College Essay- Common App and Direct School Application
NEW - Forum, I would like to use this essay for the Common App (...experience impacts your life) as well as...
Undergraduatemscott - Oct 21, 2008 / — -
|The Confidence Stone - Personal Statement!
NEW - The Confidence Stone It is well known that stones are hard and lasting, but have you heard of...
Undergraduatehelenalqy - Oct 20, 2008 / — -
|most noticeable are of my body when I was born - UC Prompt
NEW - i need help on grammar and structure of my essay. and also is my essay kind of offtopic, because...
Undergraduatesteph - Oct 20, 2008 / — -
|I have wanted to attend The University of C Florida - Personal statement.
3 - Thank you so much for your time and suggestions! I will work on expanding the areas you mentioned and...
Undergraduatebjervis - Oct 19, 2008 / bjervis - Oct 20, 2008
|"awakened to Lonnie Liston Smith's 'A Gift of Love'" - UF Entrance Essay
Undergraduatehazardouz10 - Oct 19, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 20, 2008
|high school stereotypes - U of Michigan short answer
3 - Thanks a lot!...
UndergraduateBeast53 - Oct 20, 2008 / Beast53 - Oct 20, 2008
|DON BLOW TOO HARD! - my admission essay advice
3 - ummmm... i had posted that.. but it isnt shown here... my topic is evaluate a significant experience and its...
Undergraduateneethu16 - Oct 20, 2008 / neethu16 - Oct 20, 2008
|It's Not All About the Sticks - extracurricular essay
UndergraduateBeast53 - Oct 17, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 20, 2008
|A visit back home: UF essay- Help is greatly appreciated!
2 - You've got a good illustration here and you do a good job of describing your experience and how it...
Undergraduategiscard_elie - Oct 19, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 20, 2008
|Personal Statement for maths; "prime numbers are the very atoms of arithmetic"
NEW - Hey, this is the 2nd draft of my personal statement, i wish to do mathematics at university prefereably warwick...
UndergraduateMez - Oct 20, 2008 / — -
|'Being a pharmacist will help me help others' - Why I chose UCF?
Undergraduatexoxoheartx3 - Oct 15, 2008 / xoxoheartx3 - Oct 20, 2008
|high school marching band - UF application essay! On topic?
NEW - Hi! Can you please read my essay and correct me on grammer, spelling, etc? And see if my essay...
Undergraduatexoxoheartx3 - Oct 20, 2008 / — -
|My Uf Admissions essay What i want to be when i grow up
UndergraduateSupaicgyrl - Oct 20, 2008 / — -
|a voyage to a hill tribe village - on Comm App short essay.
UndergraduateRno - Oct 19, 2008 / Rno - Oct 20, 2008
|'no intentions of stopping now' -: Vires, Artes, Mores
2 - I think your essay has good potential. I, too, am applying to FSU this semester, and right now, I'm...
Undergraduatecese09 - Sep 13, 2008 / rhasia - Oct 19, 2008
|The Art Institute Essays..
Undergraduateseven321 - Oct 15, 2008 / seven321 - Oct 19, 2008
|personal essay about me, MELANIE ROSE ZUNIGA
2 - Good morning. As the prompt and/or instructions for this essay were not included in the posting, I can...
Undergraduatemelybaby1 - Oct 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 19, 2008
|'Accountant dream' - How has The Macaulay Honors College changed you?
Undergraduatenikokoskinas - Oct 19, 2008 / — -
|'I have flat feet'. Elaborate on activities (extratricculars, work activities..etc)
Undergraduatenyczxgemii - Oct 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 19, 2008
|"The art of living is more like wrestling than dancing"- need help UF essay
Undergraduatedentine - Oct 19, 2008 / — -
|"Music has become big impact on my life" - FSU NEW ESSAY
NEW - The connection between Vires, Artes, Mores exemplifies not only the morals, values and intelligence a well rounded person has,...
Undergraduategeri2009 - Oct 19, 2008 / — -
|My strengths, talents, and interest - why do I wish to attend UHart?
2 - "I am hoping to garner higher..." In regards to the content, I think you're on to something here....
Undergraduatebeingryanjude - Oct 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
|Personal statement...how i became an adult in the past 2 years.
Undergraduatelakai84 - Oct 18, 2008 / — -
|Diligent and perseverance are the most important qualities - my statement
NEW - Diligent and perseverance are the most important qualities that are necessary for me as a student. For the past...
Undergraduateawakenlion - Oct 18, 2008 / — -
|IT achievement - University of Miami Admission Essay
2 - Good morning. My mechanical suggestions are as follows: First, make sure that you are capitalizing only proper...
Undergraduatelfmasieri - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
|UF ESSAY: "meaningful event" - Upward Bound
Undergraduatecollegeicntwait - Oct 13, 2008 / collegeicntwait - Oct 18, 2008
|"Congratulations! You are going to be a mother!"
9 - OK, I'm assuming the above is the new conclusion. One suggestion: "...talented, a natural leader, and overall...
Undergraduateccn7 - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
|"College was the best time of my life." -UCF APPLICATION ESSAY
3 - thanks!!...
Undergraduatevivalavida - Oct 17, 2008 / vivalavida - Oct 17, 2008
|how does Penn make a perfect match for you?
Undergraduategbtl - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|Name a professor with whom you would like to study or conduct research with
5 - Good evening. Let's see... I suggest taking out some of the ex tenuous detail and condensing your...
Undergraduategbtl - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|Obstacles or 'bumps in the road in your academic or personal life
4 - Sure! "...and I'm confident that..." "...economical crisis don't help..." "...center and I've noticed..." I...
Undergraduatefernaj13 - Oct 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|teleporting mentally to a different world
4 - That would work as well. Generally, whatever tense is more natural and comes easier to you will reflect itself...
Undergraduatemickeygirl - Oct 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|FSU admissions essay- worthy enough to attend Florida State University?
Undergraduatebethany_shphrd - Oct 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|"I am well prepared and primed" - FSU essay
3 - I like the new addition. I suggest changing the middle of the first sentence to be a little less...
Undergraduatecnwilliams - Oct 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|this paper significantly transformed me - pls edit this common app essay
2 - "...freshman ..." "...editor-in-chief ..." In regards to content, you are very concise and organized. Your piece is...
Undergraduateds816 - Oct 17, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|how has your family influenced who you are? UCF admission essay
NEW - Please, tell me all i'm doing wrong in my paper. I have to submit my application for xfer today....
Undergraduatefernaj13 - Oct 17, 2008 / — -
|my summer trip to Trinidad & Tobago - UF Essay Evaluation
2 - Good morning. Please note your other posting for mechanical and grammatical suggestions, as they still apply to this...
Undergraduateking723 - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|Need advice on essay question- "Unique characteristics and experiences"
3 - Hey, thanks alot. I think you are doing a great job on this boarding helping everyone out. I think...
UndergraduateGuruKid - Oct 15, 2008 / GuruKid - Oct 17, 2008
|"I have played piano" - Chopin's Second Ballade
6 - Thanks!...
Undergraduatepianolegend91 - Oct 9, 2008 / pianolegend91 - Oct 16, 2008
|UF Essay - "Ready for My Unpredictable Future"
Undergraduateesthie_ - Oct 14, 2008 / esthie_ - Oct 16, 2008
|GED Practice: Discuss the influence of rock music on young people
2 - "Because rock music is good entertainment for everyone, especially young people, it influences good physical condition, improvement of exercise...
Undergraduatefisherman - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|CORNELL COMMON APP ESSAY; To feel desired is a primary biological need in life
2 - Good afternoon. My only suggestion is to make sure you are only capitalizing proper nouns and the first...
Undergraduateakhan11 - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|"struggling to comprehend my nemesis" - a significant experience
2 - Good afternoon. This is an excellent essay! Mechanically and grammatically clean, organized, fluid, with a great story for...
Undergraduatecaliforniagirl - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|'true inner being' - MY UF admission essay
2 - Good afternoon. One mechanical suggestion: "...including soccer, which I had never played before. By my senior...
UndergraduateHelena - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|"I manage all of this", I would love to be a part of this place - FSU Essay - critique and ideas...
2 - "...say I have not, nor plan to, give in when these times occur." "...problems, and depend only on...
Undergraduatemoochykk33 - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|'My determined and independent grandfather' - person who had a significant influence
2 - Good afternoon. Just a couple of suggestions. First, "Grandfather" should not be capitalized, unless it is the first...
Undergraduatelist00 - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|"I am a fencer." -Common App essay: is it any good?
4 - You could add more analysis on how deeply these skills have effected you a bit more; other than that,...
Undergraduatelexlavender - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
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