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|"The day when I get my report cards" - UCF Admission essay
2 - Watch your tense; you switch back and forth between past and present tense, which creates very disrupted writing which...
UndergraduateShaenat - Sep 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|"mathematics affinity" - FSU essay on values Vires, Artes, Mores
2 - The Florida State University motto "Vires, Artes, Mores," challenges students to have strength, skill, and character. Nice job;...
Undergraduatekm0416 - Sep 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|My parents' divorce; U Florida - MEANINGFUL CHALLENGE
3 - Good afternoon. How will this experience influence the kind of student you will be at UF? The main...
Undergraduatekm0416 - Sep 19, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|"Skill or craft" ; FSU - "Vires, Artes, Mores"
3 - For several base reasons it is Artes I identify with the most. Artes, by my definition, is reaching a...
Undergraduatesrqking - Sep 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|"My most life-altering experience under my nose" - admission essay "Vires"
NEW - My most life-altering experience occurred right under my nose, as I was making my routine dominations on the soccer...
Undergraduatebhagan11 - Sep 22, 2008 / — -
|'wheelchairs and blankets' - Common application elaboration on one of your activities
Undergraduatecelestialxx - Sep 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|People controlling their lives - UCF admission essay
UndergraduateYellowRoses - Sep 21, 2008 / — -
|Individual background, experiences, identity - UF College Essay Help
UndergraduateAtom - Sep 21, 2008 / — -
|"... everyone was proud to be a Golden Knight" - UCf admissions essay
NEW - Why did you choose to apply to UCF? Every year thousands of students arrive at the same question,...
Undergraduatemcsmike - Sep 21, 2008 / — -
|Shaping our lives - Common App personal Essay
4 - You're welcome. Let's see: I especially enjoy when the children have a show to perform for their...
Undergraduatevid2sean - Sep 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 21, 2008
|Values as components of our lives - Florida State Admissions Essay
Undergraduatesjj315 - Sep 21, 2008 / — -
|Vires is the one that stands out the most; FSU Esssay
NEW - "All of these values are easily reflected in my life, but I feel that that Vires is the one...
Undergraduatecollegeicntwait - Sep 21, 2008 / — -
|'Hard work should pay off' - UF Essay - Meaningful experience
Undergraduateabcspaceships - Sep 21, 2008 / — -
|My parents shaped me into the man I am today; UT (impact/important person)
Undergraduatepthrowed - Sep 20, 2008 / — -
|ART is anything that requires skill, ingenuity,imagination; FSU-Vires, Artes, Mores
Undergraduatebhangra369 - Sep 19, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 20, 2008
|"The diamond is the hardest gemstone" - admission essay
NEW - I apology for plagiarizing several sentance from other sources. actually I plagiarzed from my gemstone collection book. and I...
UndergraduateKimbab - Sep 19, 2008 / — -
|"A painful truth" - SIGNIFICANT EXPERIENCE
Undergraduatemihirmj - Sep 19, 2008 / — -
|Admission Essay Personal story - being friendless
4 - You're welcome. As long as it's a story that illustrates and answers the prompt, it is a successful...
Undergraduatelaughx3smile - Sep 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 19, 2008
|Concepts that are reflected in your life - FSU Undergrads admission essay "Artes"
2 - "Sitting in the pub within my church, focused on the superintendent announcing a call for a new youth leader,...
Undergraduatejasun17 - Sep 19, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 19, 2008
|fsu essay, my moral strenght comes from Christ
2 - Good afternoon. Good start. What about Artes? You include it in the philosophies, but you do not talk...
Undergraduatemkm - Sep 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 18, 2008
|Marching band; BC Extra curicular activity
NEW - During my years in high school, I have participated in many extracurricular activities. My favorite one has been the...
Undergraduateswooshnic21 - Sep 17, 2008 / — -
|'the touchstone of my life' Essay about a Turning Point
3 - Thank you for editing my essay Gloria. I really appreciate it, especially how fast you replied! Other than...
UndergraduateAdmantina - Sep 17, 2008 / Admantina - Sep 17, 2008
|what unique characteristics help add to the UCF family
Undergraduategiuretig4 - Sep 17, 2008 / — -
|UCF admissions essays, Why did you apply? what characteristics do you have?
3 - In college I think that qualities such as, caring, love, and genuine kindness could go a long way in...
Undergraduatezaz - Aug 19, 2008 / giuretig4 - Sep 17, 2008
|The creation of something original, something to call your own - UF
4 - During the past three years of high school (Remove comma) I put myself through one of the most rigorous...
Undergraduatedman0227 - Sep 6, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 17, 2008
|A passion for performing in front of people - Personal Statement Essay
NEW - I am writing a personal essay statement and I just wanted someone to read it ad critique it for...
Undergraduateshan00ts - Sep 17, 2008 / — -
|St. Thomas - meaningful contribution you have made
NEW - Prompt: Describe a meaningful contribution you have made through school, church, or community service St. Louis Dream Center...
UndergraduateAndrea09 - Sep 16, 2008 / — -
|'My boyfriend is moving' - UF: experience & affect your college experience
NEW - Little did I know that a "For Sale" sign would test my strength and perseverance. Fettered by youth, doubt,...
Undergraduatedlb1670 - Sep 16, 2008 / — -
|Common Application Essay: Balance
NEW - Here is what I have, any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Thank you! I can feel the eyes...
Undergraduatemas61691 - Sep 16, 2008 / — -
|'New York City's China Town' - Vires, Aates, Mores essay...
3 - it should be intellectually in the 2nd sentance instead of physically, and the last sentance in the first paragraph....
Undergraduateswooshnic21 - Sep 14, 2008 / swooshnic21 - Sep 15, 2008
|Driving force in life - FSU undergrad essay
NEW - FSU prompt: Describe how one or more of the values embodied in these concepts are reflected in your life...
Undergraduateashcakes - Sep 15, 2008 / — -
|My first summer in high school, camp counselor position - essay
NEW - The auctioneer bellowed out: "Going Once!" I looked at my Dad, he looked at me. The tension was rising!...
Undergraduateraf - Sep 15, 2008 / — -
|Common App Essay: Either obstacle to overcome or Other
Undergraduatewwr - Sep 14, 2008 / wwr - Sep 14, 2008
|'his island of Puerto Rico' - FSU Essae
3 - FSU Essay second draft Growing up in a family with parents who didn't have much formal education, I...
Undergraduateyenesco - Sep 13, 2008 / yenesco - Sep 14, 2008
|'a gymnastics routine' - FSU Admission Essay
Undergraduatekdarin - Sep 14, 2008 / kdarin - Sep 14, 2008
|Qualities and characteristics for an individual at UCF
NEW - first draft. need to cut it by 150 words. be as critical as possible What are essential qualities...
Undergraduatesofl - Sep 14, 2008 / — -
|FAMU: how my name has influenced me
NEW - this is about describing how family culture/ history has influenced you I need to know is this acceptable.. i...
UndergraduateBlaqnsassy - Sep 14, 2008 / — -
|'different from my peers' - An essay - Why MIT should admit me?
Undergraduateadrivit - Sep 11, 2008 / adrivit - Sep 14, 2008
|'Varied cultures' - State of Maine, UNI of Florida Essay
2 - You've got a good essay here; just a few corrections. I like the basis for your essay; I think...
Undergraduateashcakes - Sep 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 13, 2008
|Boston College Essay - discussing concerns
NEW - 2 Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you Over the...
Undergraduateswooshnic21 - Sep 13, 2008 / — -
|Divorce, man, woman, family - University of Central Florida statement.
3 - As this is the same essay posted previously, make sure you keep it attached to its appropriate post. Please...
Undergraduatekm0416 - Sep 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 12, 2008
|"Youth Leadership Program and more" - UF admission Essay.
NEW - I need some help with this Essay. Describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and...
Undergraduateswooshnic21 - Sep 11, 2008 / — -
|'the guiding philosophy' - FSU application essay
8 - Unfortunately, you are the only one that can provide your own personal story to connect it to. Regards,...
UndergraduateShaenat - Sep 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 11, 2008
|'full custody off me' - FFSU ESSAY FIRST ATTEMPT
NEW - Please give me your input be blunt i dont mind.. For almost one hundred years, the Latin words,...
Undergraduatefloridakid - Sep 11, 2008 / — -
|"A person I admire" - High school application essay
UndergraduateWilliam - Sep 11, 2008 / — -
|'I wanted to be a UCF Knight' - Why did you choose to apply to UCF?
NEW - This is my first attempt at my essay, it needs some grammar and vocabulary help. Ever since I...
Undergraduatelexoticstylez02 - Sep 10, 2008 / — -
|'The youngest professor in Korea'; USB
UndergraduateMiyaKi - Sep 10, 2008 / — -
|'Mathematics and the Physics program' - to major in, which department - short essay
Undergraduatemichel92 - Sep 7, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 9, 2008
|Working on the farm the best way ; UF Essay-Agriculture
NEW - Hi, Here's my UF essay. I would appreciate any advice you might have. I am particularly concerned about...
UndergraduateHallieB - Sep 9, 2008 / — -
|Give an advice on my application essay: education, science
UndergraduateMiyaKi - Sep 7, 2008 / MiyaKi - Sep 8, 2008
|Morgan State University - how my job influence my life
Undergraduatekbsmith - Aug 23, 2008 / kbsmith - Sep 8, 2008
|Hospitality management - Yet another FSU undergraduate admisssions essay
NEW - Can you help me with mechanical and grammatical errors, please! The guiding words to Florida State University, "Vires,...
UndergraduateBrynnD - Sep 8, 2008 / — -
|'Have values and individuality' - Florida State (Vires, Artes, Mores)
2 - Nice work! Only a few mechanical corrections, and your content is very well thought out and organized. Your essay...
Undergraduatetheblackmaria6 - Sep 8, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 8, 2008
|Florida State's motto - completed FSU essay...
4 - You posted this essay and I edited that one for you as well. This is why multiple postings of...
Undergraduatesgcomas - Sep 7, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 8, 2008
|'senior year was supposed to be easy' - ucf essay - bump in the raod
Undergraduatevirgo66 - Sep 7, 2008 / virgo66 - Sep 7, 2008
|How should i describe how this value is reflected in my life - admission FL
Undergraduatecollegeicntwait - Sep 7, 2008 / collegeicntwait - Sep 7, 2008
|Uf essay about me and my friend Rodrigo.
3 - Although I have been a Christian for over a year now, the thought of arriving as a newcomer filled...
Undergraduatejlcisternas - Sep 7, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 7, 2008
|'working at Dunkin' Donuts' - commonapp essay
NEW - I literally just finished this and condensed it to exactly 500 words. It was originally 650ish words--do you think...
Undergraduatejessmel - Sep 7, 2008 / — -
|'ehad, shtayim' / 'I am a Jewban' - two essays... which one do I use?
2 - Good evening. I really like the second essay better. It speaks of similarities and differences, and shows that...
UndergraduateAlexandraSusi - Sep 7, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 7, 2008
|Breast cancer walks and research - vires, mortes essay
NEW - hi gloria you helped me a lot with my other UCF admission essay i was wondering if you could...
Undergraduatelidlmissblonde - Sep 7, 2008 / — -
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