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'AP biology midterm / Stubborn parents and NYC'(2 essays)

2 - Greetings! You have written a couple of very fine essays! I'm impressed by the quality of your writing....

Undergraduatesneezie - Nov 20, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Nov 20, 2006

Expository Essay question - choosing and re-writing my essay?

16 - Greetings! Yes, I am very impressed with your progress indeed! You have vastly improved the grammar, punctuation, and...

Undergraduateeconsangel - Oct 20, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Nov 6, 2006

How to Revising a Story into an Expository Essay?

4 - Greetings! These are some very good questions. I've never heard of an "implicit thesis statement." While that doesn't...

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'counting my steps' - OCD paper

NEW - One, two, three, four; one, two, three four; Why can't I stop counting my steps? The "demon" that caused...

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AVIATION ; ACADEMIC INTEREST & CAREER GOALS; BSC

9 - If they don't specify a particular format, I wouldn't worry about it. And yes, as far as abbreviating the...

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'The cynic is one' - UA Essay

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UndergraduateViracocha - Oct 11, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2006

"military analogies" - UC Admissions Essay

4 - Greetings! I might suggest that the first two sentences are a little repetitive -- you use "describe" twice....

UndergraduateArmand - Oct 23, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2006

FSU Admission Essay (confidence and leadership)

4 - Greetings! Yes, it is better -- it is very good! (You may have overlooked "aggression" in the last...

UndergraduateConfusedmiamiboy - Oct 17, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 17, 2006

Story telling topic; essay based on an interview with a member of your family

12 - Greetings! Your story is definitely progressing and getting better every time you work on it! First, I'll answer...

Undergraduateeconsangel - Oct 11, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 15, 2006

Paper on an econ. concept that help u understand an issue in ur life

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Undergraduateeconsangel - Sep 26, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 3, 2006

English is necessary to everyone; three important essay subjects

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Undergraduatejanice - Jul 28, 2006 / EF_Team4 - Jul 29, 2006

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