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|Liberal arts program essay: New University in India
5 - Thanks,I don't know why but my character counter behaves a little different. I had 3985 in the edited version...
Undergraduateak2909 - Jun 3, 2014 / ak2909 - Jun 5, 2014
|ESSAY REVIEW: where you are perfectly content?; 'help for the benefit of others'
Undergraduatejennifermiranda - Jun 4, 2014 / okdeerpass - Jun 5, 2014
|My Cousin is My Other Mother
7 - it's true!...
Undergraduatesothea1999 - May 30, 2014 / sothea1999 - Jun 4, 2014
|I was born in Ukraine and during the collapse of the Soviet Union
1 - I would like to receive some help with essay in regards to making it stronger in its message. I...
Undergraduateeduardkogan - Jun 3, 2014 / — -
|Boarding School Essay; I'm significantly interested in philosophy and psychology
3 - So i made another draft. Here it is.List and describe your level of interest and participation in school activities...
Undergraduatetahdas - Apr 6, 2014 / tahdas - Jun 1, 2014
|Personal statement - Loyola Transfer Application Essay; insults welcomed (School Paradoxes)
4 - Yeah, unfortunately, you are right in leaving out the addiction and recovery story. Even though it could be a...
Undergraduatemattcline - May 30, 2014 / Didgeridoo - Jun 1, 2014
|'confidence and awareness in the sport of soccer' - background or story
1 - The prompt I chose was "Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity...
Undergraduatebeccaboo0297 - Jun 1, 2014 / — -
|'doing the things that make me feel complete' - SOP for SAIC application
1 - I've been struggling with this quite a bit, and the deadline to get this application in looms. ==================================...
UndergraduatePandaro - May 31, 2014 / — -
|'A citizen of Earth' - Stanford short essay--What matters to you and why?
7 - Hey Dear, The essay is asking to describe the impact you can make as an individual in the world...Make...
Undergraduateysysysys - Nov 6, 2012 / christy6789 - May 30, 2014
|"No English" University of Florida Application Essay
UndergraduateVTP77 - May 25, 2014 / reza10977 - May 29, 2014
|Describe an important decision that you made - ENGLISH TEACHER
4 - ... I suggest this way; My decision of choosing University of Pedagogy is one of the most important...
Undergraduatehoanghcmup - May 25, 2014 / dumi - May 29, 2014
|"Collision" - write about the moment that changed your life.
2 - I realized how important we should follow the traffic law, and keeps minds clam and clear when we are...
Undergraduatekristennguyen23 - May 29, 2014 / Vihuynh - May 29, 2014
|'community feel of the campus' - BARNARD COLLEGE ESSAY: WHY BARNARD?
4 - Ok....however, it is better if you included your essay prompt also in the post so that we know...
Undergraduatehollymollybabs - May 24, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|UC Personal Statement Prompt - 2 essays: my father / my chin
3 - It is good if you included the prompts in this post. Without seeing them it is a bit difficult...
UndergraduateAmanda97 - May 21, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|Readmission Essay into College of Education; past and future - statements
1 - Assignment: You must complete a 1-2 page typed statement of readiness that reflects on any impediments that kept you...
Undergraduatee_karina0309 - May 27, 2014 / — -
|"I'll be blunt" - Family history, culture, environment influence UCF essay
2 - I hate to break it to you, but college essays are very different from high school essays. Often there...
Undergraduatekgaydos7 - May 26, 2014 / Didgeridoo - May 26, 2014
|How my family shaped who I am today
Undergraduatenyrobimanuel - May 19, 2014 / hoanghcmup - May 25, 2014
|Appeal for admission to NUS Faculty of science chemistry course
2 - I hope this helps, I have just alliterated the grammatical errors, not any content. Good luck!...
UndergraduateSnowy123 - May 21, 2014 / classified9988 - May 25, 2014
|COMMON APP - previous commendable experiences, activities
3 - I think you are spending too much time on the commendable experiences part, when the focus should be what...
UndergraduateAnosha29 - May 20, 2014 / Didgeridoo - May 23, 2014
|Essay on leadership-its importance in diversity and importance of learning it
2 - You repeat "But as art" twice in your intro within short frequencies. Avoid repetition of phrases as they make...
Undergraduategarcia22 - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 23, 2014
|Reasons why you wish to attend APU - STUDYING ABROAD
5 - Being able to live in Asia and still be connected with all types of different cultured people from around...
UndergraduateAnosha29 - May 20, 2014 / Pahan - May 20, 2014
|This is my personal statement prompt 1; My grandfather Lee
5 - Elderly man told us that nine years ago, he hasn'twasn't feeling longelylonely because there arewere more than 500 pieces...
Undergraduatekaitong - May 20, 2014 / Pahan - May 20, 2014
|ready for a new start ~ readmit essay
2 - Having just graduated from high school, I thought I could handle a full 18 hour course load as well...
Undergraduatemustanglove - May 20, 2014 / Pahan - May 20, 2014
|CommonApp: The softening harmony of laughter gives me a state of comfort
3 - This is great feedback :) Hope you pay attention to the points that Didgeridoo has stressed upon. My point...
Undergraduatebrijirowetz - May 18, 2014 / dumi - May 20, 2014
|Common App Transfer - Arriving at Equilibrium (Communications Major)
5 - Thank you so much! It is so uplifting to receive positive feedback. However, I am having difficulty trimming down...
UndergraduateMSKnicks91 - May 12, 2014 / MSKnicks91 - May 19, 2014
|Study Abroad Essay- Study Statement; As a person of French descent...
6 - Experiencing another culture and leaving one's comfort zone, allows one to grow as an individual. By studying abroad...
Undergraduatecollegebound28 - Mar 29, 2014 / Tiffany Lin - May 18, 2014
|Gracious App - University of Wisconsin / Computer Science
3 - At the age of nine years old , I grew agitated quickly and slammed the keyboard, which my father...
Undergraduatewhatsgoodintern - May 6, 2014 / Pahan - May 18, 2014
|UCHICAGO PERSONAL ESSAY - overcoming myself and growth. [COMMENT FOR COMMENT]
2 - My name is name here, and I am a current waitlistwait-listed candidate for Fall 2014 at the University of...
Undergraduatekonaren - May 2, 2014 / dumi - May 18, 2014
|'Dutch - my mother language' - Application Essay for University of Cincinnati
4 - Ever since I had learned the basics of Dutch vocabulary, my mother languagemother tongue, at the age of two;...
Undergraduateveggiebunny - May 11, 2014 / Pahan - May 17, 2014
|Room 209, where I studied Commercial Art and Advertising, was my sanctuary
3 - Well, I find all these things tell more general stuff and nothing specific about you. Your admission guys...
Undergraduatenate297 - May 15, 2014 / Pahan - May 15, 2014
|WHO AM I? 'dream to work as a game developer'
7 - During my free time, I enjoy doing my hobbies such as learning new play new piano sheets playing the...
Undergraduatemaryjane - May 12, 2014 / Pahan - May 12, 2014
|Rutgers Transfer Recommended Acceptance Essay
4 - you could also possibly include why Rutgers will help you pursue your career goals compared to your previous college....
UndergraduateLindaFerraz - May 11, 2014 / collegewoman - May 11, 2014
|APPLYING IN TURKISH UNIVERSITIES, why should I choose turkey?
Undergraduateecneics - May 1, 2014 / maheenatiq - May 11, 2014
|US College application essay. check my essay for mistakes.
4 - I would like to get an Associate in Arts degree in Business major at [US College] for transfer to...
Undergraduateemtnd - Apr 19, 2014 / Pahan - May 10, 2014
|Personal essay; I completed three years toward a bachelor degree in economics
Undergraduateskalem - May 6, 2014 / skalem - May 7, 2014
|UC Davis waitlist - clinical opportunities I can bring??
3 - UC Davis is my top choice for pursuing undergraduate studies in the field of Biology, as well as dedicating...
Undergraduatenmadjid - May 5, 2014 / Pahan - May 6, 2014
|MIT essay, Boston; 'I do volunteering job in Boston with Arabs for Altruism'
9 - excuse me I think there is something wrong you said " it has became/ becomes part of Department of...
Undergraduatealmawadxp - Mar 29, 2014 / almawadxp - May 3, 2014
|USC PERSONAL ESSAY & SUPPLEMENT; "read my human"
5 - Although you didn't mention the actual prompt of the essay, I think that the syntax and subject matter is...
Undergraduatebobisweird - Mar 30, 2014 / konaren - May 3, 2014
|Reason why I attend APU essays; 'my dream - manager or business related career'
3 - I came to know about Ritsumeikan Asia Pacific University (APU) from my cousin who is currently studying there....
Undergraduatezjkk - Apr 23, 2014 / dumi - May 3, 2014
|Personal Statement Essay for UCAS for a Nursing Degree
UndergraduateSamantha1111 - Apr 28, 2014 / Samantha1111 - May 2, 2014
|SUMMER CAMP ESSAY: Why do you want to attend the summer course?
7 - Thank you guys all. I took into consideration most of your replies, however, I refined it and sent it...
Undergraduateyannis2307 - Apr 22, 2014 / yannis2307 - May 2, 2014
|My teacher want paragraph about a good OR a bad childhood experience i had ,,
UndergraduateMaoon - Apr 7, 2014 / ecneics - May 1, 2014
|Three ways to Transfer to University; study plan, support system, skills network
Undergraduatekrlx1900 - Apr 29, 2014 / Pahan - May 1, 2014
|Personal Statement, MPH Environmental Health
2 - I never knew exactly how my grandmother's experience would ultimately affect me. I think you should use Past Participle...
Undergraduatecurban2009 - Apr 26, 2014 / Daniel_LEE - Apr 26, 2014
|Transfer Essay from Community College; 'Cervial and Breast Cancer study'
5 - My education at x Community College has been altogether positive . However, my primary reason for transferring is to...
Undergraduateunwritten53 - Mar 29, 2014 / eddies - Apr 22, 2014
|Application Essay 2, Challenged faces and Avid learning; University Singers
Undergraduatetimmy0110 - Mar 28, 2014 / eddies - Apr 22, 2014
|Application Essay 1, Free from Gen Ed requirement
3 - Commitment, confident, initiative, and determination were four qualities that demonstrated leadership. Leadership, defined by the pioneer of Leadership Study...
Undergraduatetimmy0110 - Mar 28, 2014 / eddies - Apr 22, 2014
|UC Davis Appeal Statement; Wild Campus and The Afterglows
6 - I believe that UC Davis can offer me a unique learning experience( What do you mean by the uniqueness?...
Undergraduateapple1123123 - Mar 28, 2014 / eddies - Apr 22, 2014
|Are we preconditioned to prefer certain types of Music? an inquiry essay
5 - WhileI am used to listening toviolent and angry music(a comma)it has now broadened to include calmer/tranquil music. ...
UndergraduateNiaboc - Mar 28, 2014 / eddies - Apr 22, 2014
|"labor experience" - The ProTrack Engineering Co-op program option!
4 - But you as a recent graduated of thefresh graduate /font] university don't have the experience that the employers are...
UndergraduateAndrea1215 - Apr 16, 2014 / dumi - Apr 22, 2014
|The Broken Boy / CommonApp Essay - Background
7 - Amazing essay. Some thoughts: -Watch out for fluffy, meaningless phrases like "a discovery that changed my life forever"...
UndergraduateImClueless - Apr 5, 2014 / Discipulus96 - Apr 21, 2014
|Why I want to attend the Naval Academy Essay
5 - Here are four ways to improve your essay: -Transitions - Your essay is lacking sufficient transitions between sentences and...
UndergraduateUSNAWilson - Apr 10, 2014 / Discipulus96 - Apr 21, 2014
|SOP "The only thing permanent in life is change" Computer Engineering - my major
Undergraduatetotappa - Apr 17, 2014 / totappa - Apr 19, 2014
|Common application - Tinkerbell
6 - So I have another question I used for the attention getter at the beginning "All you need is Faith...
Undergraduatecutestchloe - Sep 24, 2009 / mschreck - Apr 17, 2014
|Hiking is rewarding; University of Washington transfer personal statement
Undergraduateesereadmyessay - Apr 16, 2014 / esereadmyessay - Apr 16, 2014
|PURSUE A BUSINESS DEGREE; A statement addressesing reasons for transfer
2 - Besides my academic goals, this transfer may help me step out from my comfort zone and grow as...
Undergraduateglamiex - Apr 13, 2014 / dumi - Apr 14, 2014
|from a waste to house - replacing cement Portland by waste brick in housing
4 - thank you very much. However I want my writing to be more specific, because mostly, housing problem happens in...
Undergraduatekikiliyik - Apr 13, 2014 / kikiliyik - Apr 13, 2014
|Quick question, Transfer essay: What would be a better word to use for "aspects" ?
5 - With the incredible amount of diversity this school displays, I hope to partake in various social and cultural...
Undergraduateyyhh0211 - Mar 27, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 12, 2014
|Georgia Tech Supplementary Essay; 'build the skills I need to be an Engineer'
4 - Well, these are most of the general stuff that many students say when they answer this question. Take...
UndergraduateGuest - Apr 10, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 12, 2014
|Philosophy essay topic: Heidegger: Dasein, Digi-Sein and Being in The World.
2 - Thesis statement is strong. Love how the body paragraphs have supporting details/evidence to back it up too. Conclusion is...
Undergraduatenikaynik - Apr 7, 2014 / Guest - Apr 10, 2014
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