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|I was born in China and moved to Switzerland - Transfer motivation to Penn
2 - Starting to learn a completely new language (German) and adapting myself to a new environment waswere great challengesa great...
Undergraduateluluenvogue - Mar 12, 2014 / dumi - Mar 13, 2014
|What is my intended major? Why would i choose this major?
Undergraduatehhb450 - Mar 12, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 12, 2014
|Stevenson University Transfer - Julius Caesar/ CAREER GOALS
3 - Thank you And this: "I am a first year community college student seeking to transfer and major in...
UndergraduateGrizwald - Mar 7, 2014 / Grizwald - Mar 12, 2014
|My conductor has been a great influence in my life; Person who had an influence on me
Undergraduatetadajiaen - Mar 10, 2014 / JasS - Mar 12, 2014
|"Who can say where the road goes, where the day goes, only time"; Hardship/Obstacle
Undergraduatedenishzaki - Mar 9, 2014 / denishzaki - Mar 10, 2014
|Texas A&M Transfer SOP Essay: Only One Week Left
Undergraduateajaxmonkey - Mar 9, 2014 / ajaxmonkey - Mar 10, 2014
|My first impression of an university
3 - Thank you for your reply .What should I have included more? Any recommendation? Is it better if I compare...
UndergraduateSpecialOne - Mar 9, 2014 / SpecialOne - Mar 9, 2014
|Statement of Purpose - UT Austin Computer Engineering Transfer
5 - Well, it's absolutely ok that you have not liked my comment :) But if you want to give likes,...
Undergraduatecatrevinoa - Feb 26, 2014 / dumi - Mar 8, 2014
|Personally, I have evolved as a person; Temple University Essay
3 - Thank you :)...
UndergraduateAfarin94 - Mar 6, 2014 / Afarin94 - Mar 7, 2014
|University App - Kyushu - continue my study overseas
2 - Hello talisca17, Here's my suggestion. In my opinion, your answer still cannot convince me enough. You need to...
Undergraduatetalisca17 - Mar 7, 2014 / kridUessay - Mar 7, 2014
|I am a girl who's beyond lucky; UW Seattle transfer
6 - quote=Rechy]Hi dumi, could you help review my transfer essay? I can't post it on here, so I'd rather you...
Undergraduatesandoama - Feb 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 7, 2014
|Cornell University - REASONS for TRANSFER
3 - Well, for me, this sounds a little negative and I fear this may work negatively on your candidacy....
Undergraduateachen187 - Feb 24, 2014 / dumi - Mar 7, 2014
|I plan on majoring in International Business and to be able to establish global connections.
2 - Well, this prompt asks you; In your response, you basically attempt to talk about your exposure in...
UndergraduateHousaka - Mar 6, 2014 / dumi - Mar 7, 2014
|The reason why do you want to apply Elms College.
Undergraduatecheesecaking - Feb 28, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 6, 2014
|GOOD FIT ; Transfer Essay- BOSTON UNI
2 - Chance to explore what? Better specify! .... what do you mean by saying developing physically? It...
Undergraduate13williamsm - Feb 28, 2014 / dumi - Mar 6, 2014
|College Freshman Essay; A Midsummer Night's Dream.
2 - In " A Midsummer Night's Dream" , Shakespeare writes his characters to mean somethingcontain a deep meaning. Each and...
UndergraduateFudgems22 - Mar 2, 2014 / dumi - Mar 6, 2014
|'greatness and prosperity' How family history, culture - influenced who you are?
2 - ... this sentence sounds confusing for me. What do you really mean by this? I remember sitting around...
Undergraduatedhenry - Feb 28, 2014 / dumi - Mar 5, 2014
|Georgia Tech Transfer Essay; day-to-day interactions with faculty members
UndergraduateLendor - Feb 27, 2014 / sandipsinh - Mar 4, 2014
|Study aboard is one of my academic goals ; Personal statement
UndergraduateKeepCalmWrite - Mar 3, 2014 / jennifer2000 - Mar 3, 2014
|"... if you try to teach a fish to climb a tree it will live its whole life believing it is stupid"
Undergraduatemaisonpotts - Feb 28, 2014 / maisonpotts - Mar 3, 2014
|Background or story (Central to identity): Middle Child/ Independent
NEW - Essay Topic : Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they...
UndergraduateGiggles - Mar 2, 2014 / — -
|Global Perspective Semester At Sea Essay
2 - Below are some grammatical errors you've committed. Hope those are helpful:) Their understood ...
Undergraduatejordifg - Feb 21, 2014 / niesaysi - Mar 2, 2014
|A big part of today's American culture is traveling; Important Issue UT Transfer Essay
Undergraduategracieely - Feb 27, 2014 / gracieely - Feb 28, 2014
|Personal Statement for Amherst transfer; my hero Churchill
2 - It is well written, you are answering the prompt. Provide a bit less information on Churchill and more on...
UndergraduateMBLTheNumbaOne - Feb 27, 2014 / Orangeeskies - Feb 28, 2014
|This I Believe ( Mock Essay)
Undergraduatetylermk96 - Feb 28, 2014 / Orangeeskies - Feb 28, 2014
|Why I Choose My Major ( Mechanical Engineering )
2 - I think: - realities => reality - "Throughout high school I have been heavily involved in extra-curricular activities....
Undergraduatedonpeter - Feb 24, 2014 / tiendh - Feb 28, 2014
|UT Austin Transfer Nursing Story- I never wanted to be a nurse
2 - "more sure" is logically incorrect. You are either sure, or you are not sure. Think of a glass, if...
Undergraduatelkraus3 - Feb 23, 2014 / xsimio - Feb 28, 2014
|Essay explaining why you have chosen to continue onto post-secondary
Undergraduatecras69 - Feb 26, 2014 / sandipsinh - Feb 26, 2014
|Admission Essay to UT Austin - I was the only child to single mom in the US Navy
2 - With my mother who was always working , and our little family on the move every few years, entertaining...
Undergraduatesiamesefox - Feb 25, 2014 / niesaysi - Feb 26, 2014
|Columbia GS Essay from perspective of former semi professional hockey player
3 - I think this is not an appropriate place for Parallelism. I thrive in a hockey environment not only...
Undergraduateebladez15 - Feb 25, 2014 / eddies - Feb 26, 2014
|Undergraduate Essay for Gender and Sexuality Studies Transfer (Brown University)
2 - ellerae I think your essays are both really good. Only suggestions I have are grammar-related. It was...
Undergraduateellerae - Feb 25, 2014 / GalPacino - Feb 25, 2014
|"I was a victim of bullying"; Flagler Undergrad Admission Essay
Undergraduatealexisf908 - Feb 25, 2014 / GalPacino - Feb 25, 2014
|My education was not just about getting degree; Statement of intent
Undergraduateznack - Feb 22, 2014 / Pahan - Feb 24, 2014
|Describe why you would like to study in the US. Global Ugrad exchange program.
Undergraduatedidi9494 - Feb 22, 2014 / dumi - Feb 24, 2014
|My passion for psychology. Fall 2014 CommonApp Transfer essay
Undergraduateluvlookie - Feb 10, 2014 / luvlookie - Feb 23, 2014
|Stanford University Summer Session (International).
Undergraduatelfdz - Feb 21, 2014 / lfdz - Feb 23, 2014
|High School Architecture Summer Camp Entrance Essay
4 - I think you should narrow this point by giving one-two real-life story. Therefore, your readers are easy to...
Undergraduateapinoy - Feb 16, 2014 / eddies - Feb 23, 2014
|Queen's PSE: Describe a challenging experience and what you have learned from it.
3 - I think you should narrow this point by giving one-two real-life story. Therefore, your readers are easy to...
Undergraduatewhysohoude - Feb 11, 2014 / eddies - Feb 23, 2014
|"i feel i am ready to return" - Readmission to Undergrad after 2nd dismissal
Undergraduateqibz - Feb 11, 2014 / eddies - Feb 23, 2014
|Bates College- "emancipating potential of the liberal arts"
2 - This is presented very impressively, especially your passion and devotion to arts. However, I feel it is better if...
Undergraduatebeanie123 - Feb 21, 2014 / Pahan - Feb 22, 2014
|I thought I wasn't good enough - I had problems with reading; WHY TRANSFER? /BC, UCLA,NEU
3 - Some corrections 1. I thought I wasn't good enough -> I thought that I wasn't good enough 2. My...
Undergraduate13williamsm - Feb 19, 2014 / rosa_liinna - Feb 21, 2014
|The last piece of puzzle: For me, transferring is taking a journey to find that one.
2 - this essay is written well. you are clear and straight to the point. the last line great. goodluck...
Undergraduateslowandsteady - Feb 21, 2014 / 13williamsm - Feb 21, 2014
|Temple University -personal and professional accomplishments
Undergraduatedenishzaki - Feb 19, 2014 / denishzaki - Feb 20, 2014
|I had participated in a variety of original Russian art fields; Statement of intent
Undergraduateznack - Feb 19, 2014 / Purwati Ayu - Feb 20, 2014
|Issue of Importance essay - Having trouble with past or present tense/opinions on prompt?
UndergraduateJojoray - Feb 19, 2014 / SHanafi - Feb 19, 2014
|What are your reasons for wanting to enroll in the Ib Programme?; IB Entrance
4 - I have told by many people that I have a great potential, however, I don't feel challenged by...
Undergraduateheyhaniel - Feb 2, 2014 / dumi - Feb 19, 2014
|Why APU? I researched well on the uni !
Undergraduatepeacefulwarrior - Feb 17, 2014 / peacefulwarrior - Feb 18, 2014
|My name is Aminu but people call me yakasai
8 - I also like to learn new languages such as French, Spanish etc. because they help me get connected...
Undergraduateay1 - Feb 16, 2014 / Pahan - Feb 18, 2014
|My Brandeis experience; Supplement essay : Why Brandeis?
Undergraduateyuukinguyen - Feb 17, 2014 / yuukinguyen - Feb 18, 2014
|Law School Personal Statement: From a Cultural Bubble, to the Larger Cultural World
Undergraduatepacers7ind - Feb 17, 2014 / SHanafi - Feb 18, 2014
|Being raised and educated in a different country; Diversity
Undergraduatetnguyen6106 - Jan 29, 2014 / SHanafi - Feb 17, 2014
|Option #4: Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content.
Undergraduatecks - Feb 17, 2014 / Pahan - Feb 17, 2014
|Revision of my study objectives essay - Industrial Engineering
3 - I work in the Production Planning Control Department, and daily I come across problems that occur in manufacturing...
Undergraduatemschlindwein - Jan 18, 2014 / dumi - Feb 17, 2014
|How to make my essay more rememberable?-Virginia tech transfer
4 - It is not very clear to the reader what connection your eighth grade scrapbook project had with your...
Undergraduateoreo2016 - Feb 13, 2014 / Pahan - Feb 15, 2014
|Home is wherever I am with my family members; PLACE WHERE I AM PERFECTLY CONTENT
6 - Option #4: Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content. What do you do or experience there,...
Undergraduatesien8888 - Feb 14, 2014 / sien8888 - Feb 15, 2014
|MSc Econometrics - studying in the Netherlands.
2 - Having Being exposed myself to these methods independently.. I will have a strong basis to perform well on...
Undergraduatecoohran - Feb 15, 2014 / niesaysi - Feb 15, 2014
|Social anxiety and inspiration- Circumstance, obstacle or conflict in life
5 - You didn't talk about the resources and skills you used up overcome your anxiety you just went straight into...
Undergraduateabrahamcerv - Feb 9, 2014 / 13williamsm - Feb 15, 2014
|UCLA Supplement Essay #1: Extraordinary talent/skill. APYLP participant.
Undergraduateimtrungle - Feb 4, 2014 / dumi - Feb 15, 2014
|Personal Statement Essay for a Graduate Tax Program.
Undergraduatekokacoca - Feb 8, 2014 / coohran - Feb 15, 2014
|Our greatest glory is not in never failing,but in rising up every time: Recount a failure
3 - @ phamphuongnam - Hey, I found this in Writing Feedback forum. You should have posted it into Undergraduate...
Undergraduatephamphuongnam - Jan 26, 2014 / dumi - Feb 14, 2014
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