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|Explanation letter for Canadian Visa
2 - I don't know about the Canadian visa process but I doubt that the Canadian government needs a well-written essay...
Undergraduatemnm123 - Jun 20, 2014 / Archlefirth - Jun 20, 2014
|'my journey through a candy store' - entrance to a selective diversity program
Undergraduatesoto1996 - Jun 14, 2014 / abhay4556 - Jun 20, 2014
|"Concept of Dharma" - Princeton Undergraduate Commmon Application Supplement
NEW - I was finishing up my Princeton application and I was wondering if anyone was willing to help. Much thanks...
Undergraduateabhay4556 - Jun 20, 2014 / — -
|Essay "Tell us about your life" for Tel-Aviv University (Engeneering program)
2 - In addition to languages, my hobbies represent a mixture of different occupations. In my childhood, I...
Undergraduateaklochkova1 - Jun 18, 2014 / Misnariah Idrus - Jun 18, 2014
|How cancer contributted to my Identity and work ethics
Undergraduatesmoore34 - Jun 16, 2014 / forouzan - Jun 17, 2014
|Describing my future project; 'to end and satisfy the hunger for money and food'
2 - your vocabulary is strong but i believe "why do I got to live like this?" is incorrect grammer and...
UndergraduateStevenWong206 - Jun 15, 2014 / rmk1 - Jun 15, 2014
|college essay - 'how much of my life has gone by without me even realizing'
Undergraduatermk1 - Jun 13, 2014 / rmk1 - Jun 15, 2014
|The feeling of wanting to know computers; Personal statement for admission to CS
Undergraduatenitex - Jun 11, 2014 / eva_lim - Jun 15, 2014
|'I am the forgotten child in my family' - the world I came from
UndergraduateAlexus11 - Jun 12, 2014 / reza10977 - Jun 12, 2014
|Drexel University Essay: why you are interested in your choice of major
4 - good writing. you can also add in what you want to do with learning computer or how learning computer...
UndergraduateGilchrist2014 - Jun 12, 2014 / nitex - Jun 12, 2014
|"car accident" Essay for applying at UCF as a transfer
Undergraduatemcervone - Feb 12, 2011 / ibk - Jun 10, 2014
|Undergraduate Essay Drafting - Transitions; 'dealing with changes'
Undergraduatecassidy23 - Jun 8, 2014 / Didgeridoo - Jun 10, 2014
|Essay for a liberal arts program - 'without art world would be a poorer place'
NEW - My prompt is: What in your opinion is one art form without which the world would be a poorer...
Undergraduateak2909 - Jun 9, 2014 / — -
|Is it true, that one can always find opportunity, even in trouble?
6 - Troubles are part of our lifelives . Everyone has troublesfaces difficulties and challenges in their lifelives but it doesn'tdoes...
UndergraduateHumza33 - Jun 6, 2014 / lewyne - Jun 9, 2014
|To Stay Sane, Stay Busy (COMMON APP ESSAY- CONTENT)
2 - For myselfme , the shouting and constant challenges that arise are what make working at the[BUSINESS] the most blissful...
Undergraduatemarktager - Jun 7, 2014 / niesaysi - Jun 8, 2014
|What type of individual is most likely to cause the world to progress?
UndergraduateSodiumFactor - May 30, 2014 / SodiumFactor - Jun 6, 2014
|Liberal arts program essay: New University in India
3 - Thanks,I don't know why but my character counter behaves a little different. I had 3985 in the edited version...
Undergraduateak2909 - Jun 3, 2014 / ak2909 - Jun 5, 2014
|ESSAY REVIEW: where you are perfectly content?; 'help for the benefit of others'
Undergraduatejennifermiranda - Jun 4, 2014 / okdeerpass - Jun 5, 2014
|My Cousin is My Other Mother
Undergraduatesothea1999 - May 30, 2014 / Didgeridoo - Jun 4, 2014
|I was born in Ukraine and during the collapse of the Soviet Union
NEW - I would like to receive some help with essay in regards to making it stronger in its message. I...
Undergraduateeduardkogan - Jun 3, 2014 / — -
|Boarding School Essay; I'm significantly interested in philosophy and psychology
3 - So i made another draft. Here it is.List and describe your level of interest and participation in school activities...
Undergraduatetahdas - Apr 6, 2014 / tahdas - Jun 1, 2014
|Personal statement - Loyola Transfer Application Essay; insults welcomed (School Paradoxes)
4 - Yeah, unfortunately, you are right in leaving out the addiction and recovery story. Even though it could be a...
Undergraduatemattcline - May 30, 2014 / Didgeridoo - Jun 1, 2014
|'confidence and awareness in the sport of soccer' - background or story
NEW - The prompt I chose was "Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity...
Undergraduatebeccaboo0297 - Jun 1, 2014 / — -
|'doing the things that make me feel complete' - SOP for SAIC application
NEW - I've been struggling with this quite a bit, and the deadline to get this application in looms. ==================================...
UndergraduatePandaro - May 31, 2014 / — -
|'A citizen of Earth' - Stanford short essay--What matters to you and why?
7 - Hey Dear, The essay is asking to describe the impact you can make as an individual in the world...Make...
Undergraduateysysysys - Nov 6, 2012 / christy6789 - May 30, 2014
|"No English" University of Florida Application Essay
UndergraduateVTP77 - May 25, 2014 / reza10977 - May 29, 2014
|Describe an important decision that you made - ENGLISH TEACHER
4 - ... I suggest this way; My decision of choosing University of Pedagogy is one of the most important...
Undergraduatehoanghcmup - May 25, 2014 / dumi - May 29, 2014
|"Collision" - write about the moment that changed your life.
2 - I realized how important we should follow the traffic law, and keeps minds clam and clear when we are...
Undergraduatekristennguyen23 - May 29, 2014 / Vihuynh - May 29, 2014
|'community feel of the campus' - BARNARD COLLEGE ESSAY: WHY BARNARD?
4 - Ok....however, it is better if you included your essay prompt also in the post so that we know exactly...
Undergraduatehollymollybabs - May 24, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|UC Personal Statement Prompt - 2 essays: my father / my chin
3 - It is good if you included the prompts in this post. Without seeing them it is a bit difficult...
UndergraduateAmanda97 - May 21, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|Readmission Essay into College of Education; past and future - statements
NEW - Assignment: You must complete a 1-2 page typed statement of readiness that reflects on any impediments that kept you...
Undergraduatee_karina0309 - May 27, 2014 / — -
|"I'll be blunt" - Family history, culture, environment influence UCF essay
2 - I hate to break it to you, but college essays are very different from high school essays. Often there...
Undergraduatekgaydos7 - May 26, 2014 / Didgeridoo - May 26, 2014
|How my family shaped who I am today
Undergraduatenyrobimanuel - May 19, 2014 / hoanghcmup - May 25, 2014
|COMMON APP - previous commendable experiences, activities
3 - I think you are spending too much time on the commendable experiences part, when the focus should be what...
UndergraduateAnosha29 - May 20, 2014 / Didgeridoo - May 23, 2014
|Essay on leadership-its importance in diversity and importance of learning it
2 - You repeat "But as art" twice in your intro within short frequencies. Avoid repetition of phrases as they make...
Undergraduategarcia22 - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 23, 2014
|Appeal for admission to NUS Faculty of science chemistry course
NEW - Hi I am currently writing a appeal letter to NUS to appeal for my rejected chemistry course. Would greatly...
UndergraduateSnowy123 - May 21, 2014 / — -
|Reasons why you wish to attend APU - STUDYING ABROAD
5 - Being able to live in Asia and still be connected with all types of different cultured people from around...
UndergraduateAnosha29 - May 20, 2014 / Pahan - May 20, 2014
|This is my personal statement prompt 1; My grandfather Lee
5 - Elderly man told us that nine years ago, he hasn'twasn't feeling longelylonely because there arewere more than 500 pieces...
Undergraduatekaitong - May 20, 2014 / Pahan - May 20, 2014
|ready for a new start ~ readmit essay
2 - Having just graduated from high school, I thought I could handle a full 18 hour course load as well...
Undergraduatemustanglove - May 20, 2014 / Pahan - May 20, 2014
|CommonApp: The softening harmony of laughter gives me a state of comfort
3 - This is great feedback :) Hope you pay attention to the points that Didgeridoo has stressed upon. My point...
Undergraduatebrijirowetz - May 18, 2014 / dumi - May 20, 2014
|Common App Transfer - Arriving at Equilibrium (Communications Major)
5 - Thank you so much! It is so uplifting to receive positive feedback. However, I am having difficulty trimming down...
UndergraduateMSKnicks91 - May 12, 2014 / MSKnicks91 - May 19, 2014
|Study Abroad Essay- Study Statement; As a person of French descent...
4 - By experiencing another culture and being placed outside one's comfort zone, studying abroad can allow one to grow as...
Undergraduatecollegebound28 - Mar 29, 2014 / Pahan - May 18, 2014
|UCHICAGO PERSONAL ESSAY - overcoming myself and growth. [COMMENT FOR COMMENT]
2 - My name is name here, and I am a current waitlistwait-listed candidate for Fall 2014 at the University of...
Undergraduatekonaren - May 2, 2014 / dumi - May 18, 2014
|'Dutch - my mother language' - Application Essay for University of Cincinnati
4 - Ever since I had learned the basics of Dutch vocabulary, my mother languagemother tongue, at the age of two;...
Undergraduateveggiebunny - May 11, 2014 / Pahan - May 17, 2014
|Room 209, where I studied Commercial Art and Advertising, was my sanctuary
3 - Well, I find all these things tell more general stuff and nothing specific about you. Your admission guys...
Undergraduatenate297 - May 15, 2014 / Pahan - May 15, 2014
|WHO AM I? 'dream to work as a game developer'
7 - During my free time, I enjoy doing my hobbies such as learning new play new piano sheets playing the...
Undergraduatemaryjane - May 12, 2014 / Pahan - May 12, 2014
|Rutgers Transfer Recommended Acceptance Essay
4 - you could also possibly include why Rutgers will help you pursue your career goals compared to your previous college....
UndergraduateLindaFerraz - May 11, 2014 / collegewoman - May 11, 2014
|APPLYING IN TURKISH UNIVERSITIES, why should I choose turkey?
Undergraduateecneics - May 1, 2014 / maheenatiq - May 11, 2014
|US College application essay. check my essay for mistakes.
4 - I would like to get an Associate in Arts degree in Business major at [US College] for transfer to...
Undergraduateemtnd - Apr 19, 2014 / Pahan - May 10, 2014
|Gracious App - University of Wisconsin / Computer Science
Undergraduatewhatsgoodintern - May 6, 2014 / niesaysi - May 7, 2014
|Personal essay; I completed three years toward a bachelor degree in economics
4 - Thank you for your comment. I mentioned my husband because this is how my story started .He was the...
Undergraduateskalem - May 6, 2014 / skalem - May 6, 2014
|UC Davis waitlist - clinical opportunities I can bring??
3 - UC Davis is my top choice for pursuing undergraduate studies in the field of Biology, as well as dedicating...
Undergraduatenmadjid - May 5, 2014 / Pahan - May 6, 2014
|MIT essay, Boston; 'I do volunteering job in Boston with Arabs for Altruism'
9 - excuse me I think there is something wrong you said " it has became/ becomes part of Department of...
Undergraduatealmawadxp - Mar 29, 2014 / almawadxp - May 3, 2014
|USC PERSONAL ESSAY & SUPPLEMENT; "read my human"
5 - Although you didn't mention the actual prompt of the essay, I think that the syntax and subject matter is...
Undergraduatebobisweird - Mar 30, 2014 / konaren - May 3, 2014
|Reason why I attend APU essays; 'my dream - manager or business related career'
3 - I came to know about Ritsumeikan Asia Pacific University (APU) from my cousin who is currently studying there....
Undergraduatezjkk - Apr 23, 2014 / dumi - May 3, 2014
|Personal Statement Essay for UCAS for a Nursing Degree
UndergraduateSamantha1111 - Apr 28, 2014 / Samantha1111 - May 2, 2014
|SUMMER CAMP ESSAY: Why do you want to attend the summer course?
6 - Thank you guys all. I took into consideration most of your replies, however, I refined it and sent it...
Undergraduateyannis2307 - Apr 22, 2014 / yannis2307 - May 2, 2014
|My teacher want paragraph about a good OR a bad childhood experience i had ,,
UndergraduateMaoon - Apr 7, 2014 / ecneics - May 1, 2014
|Three ways to Transfer to University; study plan, support system, skills network
Undergraduatekrlx1900 - Apr 29, 2014 / Pahan - May 1, 2014
|Personal Statement, MPH Environmental Health
2 - I never knew exactly how my grandmother's experience would ultimately affect me. I think you should use Past Participle...
Undergraduatecurban2009 - Apr 26, 2014 / Daniel_LEE - Apr 26, 2014
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