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|Application Essay 2, Challenged faces and Avid learning; University Singers
Undergraduatetimmy0110 - Mar 28, 2014 / eddies - Apr 22, 2014
|Application Essay 1, Free from Gen Ed requirement
3 - Commitment, confident, initiative, and determination were four qualities that demonstrated leadership. Leadership, defined by the pioneer of Leadership Study...
Undergraduatetimmy0110 - Mar 28, 2014 / eddies - Apr 22, 2014
|UC Davis Appeal Statement; Wild Campus and The Afterglows
6 - I believe that UC Davis can offer me a unique learning experience( What do you mean by the uniqueness?...
Undergraduateapple1123123 - Mar 28, 2014 / eddies - Apr 22, 2014
|Are we preconditioned to prefer certain types of Music? an inquiry essay
5 - WhileI am used to listening toviolent and angry music(a comma)it has now broadened to include calmer/tranquil music. ...
UndergraduateNiaboc - Mar 28, 2014 / eddies - Apr 22, 2014
|"labor experience" - The ProTrack Engineering Co-op program option!
4 - But you as a recent graduated of thefresh graduate /font] university don't have the experience that the employers are...
UndergraduateAndrea1215 - Apr 16, 2014 / dumi - Apr 22, 2014
|The Broken Boy / CommonApp Essay - Background
7 - Amazing essay. Some thoughts: -Watch out for fluffy, meaningless phrases like "a discovery that changed my life forever"...
UndergraduateImClueless - Apr 5, 2014 / Discipulus96 - Apr 21, 2014
|Why I want to attend the Naval Academy Essay
5 - Here are four ways to improve your essay: -Transitions - Your essay is lacking sufficient transitions between sentences and...
UndergraduateUSNAWilson - Apr 10, 2014 / Discipulus96 - Apr 21, 2014
|SOP "The only thing permanent in life is change" Computer Engineering - my major
Undergraduatetotappa - Apr 17, 2014 / Eva Novita Sari - Apr 18, 2014
|Common application - Tinkerbell
6 - So I have another question I used for the attention getter at the beginning "All you need is Faith...
Undergraduatecutestchloe - Sep 24, 2009 / mschreck - Apr 17, 2014
|Hiking is rewarding; University of Washington transfer personal statement
Undergraduateesereadmyessay - Apr 16, 2014 / esereadmyessay - Apr 16, 2014
|PURSUE A BUSINESS DEGREE; A statement addressesing reasons for transfer
2 - Besides my academic goals, this transfer may help me step out from my comfort zone and grow as...
Undergraduateglamiex - Apr 13, 2014 / dumi - Apr 14, 2014
|from a waste to house - replacing cement Portland by waste brick in housing
4 - thank you very much. However I want my writing to be more specific, because mostly, housing problem happens in...
Undergraduatekikiliyik - Apr 13, 2014 / kikiliyik - Apr 13, 2014
|Quick question, Transfer essay: What would be a better word to use for "aspects" ?
5 - With the incredible amount of diversity this school displays, I hope to partake in various social and cultural...
Undergraduateyyhh0211 - Mar 27, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 12, 2014
|Georgia Tech Supplementary Essay; 'build the skills I need to be an Engineer'
4 - Well, these are most of the general stuff that many students say when they answer this question. Take...
UndergraduateGuest - Apr 10, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 12, 2014
|Philosophy essay topic: Heidegger: Dasein, Digi-Sein and Being in The World.
2 - Thesis statement is strong. Love how the body paragraphs have supporting details/evidence to back it up too. Conclusion is...
Undergraduatenikaynik - Apr 7, 2014 / Guest - Apr 10, 2014
|Personal Statement; 'Life is full of challenges'
Undergraduateqaisnaderi - Apr 7, 2014 / dumi - Apr 10, 2014
|Nursing School Application Essay - 'I want to make a difference'
Undergraduatechelseyjean - Mar 26, 2014 / dumi - Apr 10, 2014
|What is your strength and weaknesses? -- "I am always saved by the last minute!"
4 - I am also a good and convincing speaker, as I am able to express myself well. I enjoy delivering...
UndergraduateUlaai - Apr 1, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 9, 2014
|'being a jerk for no apparent reason' I am highly competitive; NCSSM What make you Unique?
Undergraduatelwbecker98 - Dec 25, 2013 / lwbecker98 - Apr 9, 2014
|Penn State Personal Statement about gaming, how it can lead to success at uni.
Undergraduatenikjojo - Apr 7, 2014 / nikjojo - Apr 7, 2014
|university essay admission: A journey towards what I am made of
4 - Overall, you write well. I just have few changes It is through participating MOE teaching internship that( a comma)...
UndergraduateAlexis111 - Mar 27, 2014 / eddies - Apr 5, 2014
|reasons why i choose APU and how i intern to approach my studies
2 - students from nearly 100 countries can share their own culture and ides. Are you meaning "ideas"...
Undergraduatebeka gogeliani - Apr 3, 2014 / BINGBINGLIANG - Apr 3, 2014
|Statement Of Purpose for SCAD for undergraduate degree in Industrial Design
3 - Thanks for your help illustration computer is like graphic design but it's just with computer not hands so in...
UndergraduateMohammad Sadegh - Apr 2, 2014 / Mohammad Sadegh - Apr 2, 2014
|Purdue writing supplement; Great plan of study will be substantial for my career
2 - In my opinion you should elaborate more on your 'life goals'. What are your life goals? After that you...
UndergraduateZackjam1 - Mar 31, 2014 / Ulaai - Apr 1, 2014
|UCF: Burnett Honors College Personal Statement: The Computer Room
2 - You have not mention much about your uncle, it would be more captivating if you emphasize that your uncle...
Undergraduateseanlh - Mar 28, 2014 / sandipsinh - Mar 31, 2014
|APPEAL ESSAY FOR UT - My love for art is defined in my pieces
2 - Include the prompt of the essay so you are easy to have relevant and reliable feedback from other readers....
Undergraduatebecks15 - Mar 30, 2014 / eddies - Mar 30, 2014
|Transfer Essay from Community College; 'Cervial and Breast Cancer study'
3 - I apologize for the meaning of colors (that I should have told you), and some information that I forgot....
Undergraduateunwritten53 - Mar 29, 2014 / sntinn - Mar 29, 2014
|Semester at Sea Application Essay! 'effects of diversity and the sociological perspective'
2 - You repeat the "raising" part couple of times in these two lines and too frequently. I feel you...
Undergraduatemayapettes - Mar 26, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 26, 2014
|Stanford intellectual vitality essay! 'Learning is not a momentary process'
Undergraduateunnatch - Mar 24, 2014 / unnatch - Mar 26, 2014
|NYU Transfer; Fox 11's Good Day LA; 'exploring your academic interests'
4 - I'm loving the way that you tied in the NYU professors. That looks solid and it makes you sound...
Undergraduatexolysssaa - Mar 25, 2014 / judas - Mar 26, 2014
|Home stay program in Japan - My hobbies, culture activities, sporting activities
7 - months can be a plural noun here. Write 'my 18-month homestay program' Faulty Parallelism> Write '...
Undergraduatetienhd1k52 - Mar 7, 2014 / eddies - Mar 26, 2014
|Questbridge College Prep - your community; what would you change and why? 'Segregation'
6 - Could you, please, give more explanation on whom you will send your essay to. I mean another school ?...
UndergraduateSalomeA - Mar 24, 2014 / sntinn - Mar 25, 2014
|Synthesis essay about Teaching English as an International Language
2 - ismailjunaid09 As culture develop with the language usage( Native languages are used to have feel of our culture, it...
Undergraduateismailjunaid09 - Mar 25, 2014 / sandipsinh - Mar 25, 2014
|Discretionary Admission Essay for NUS (LAW); History
2 - Hello, The prompt specifically asks you to talk about ONE thing. You blab on about this and that...
Undergraduatecavalier - Mar 25, 2014 / admission2012 - Mar 25, 2014
|APU application essay: Write the reason(s) why you wish to attend APU.
2 - We all know that every child in the world dreams about his future profession (from his very early times.)...
Undergraduateshaxa95 - Mar 24, 2014 / sandipsinh - Mar 24, 2014
|BYU SOAR PROGRAM ESSAY #1: provide a biographical sketch that highlights experiences..
3 - Thank you so much I have been worrying about my essay. Would you mind looking through my other essay?...
UndergraduateJennaflirt - Mar 22, 2014 / Jennaflirt - Mar 24, 2014
|Personal or academic interests vs. intellectual and personal goals - essay
Undergraduatejenrik2714 - Sep 4, 2008 / judas - Mar 24, 2014
|NYU- Common App Stern Transfer Application Essay
Undergraduatestefankiwi - Mar 17, 2014 / Slim shady - Mar 24, 2014
|Why UC Davis - waitlist essay; outstanding professors/ great internship programs
Undergraduatedeciduous - Mar 22, 2014 / dumi - Mar 23, 2014
|Tracing is Character Building- CommonApp Transfer Essay
Undergraduatekeeyon10 - Mar 22, 2014 / Naveed786 - Mar 23, 2014
|Transition from childhood to adulthood - Common App Prompt; Central Connecticut State Univ
Undergraduateredazehera - Mar 22, 2014 / mohammaed - Mar 22, 2014
|An important experience that change you. 'lazy, careless, many bad habits'
Undergraduatetv7583 - Mar 22, 2014 / dumi - Mar 22, 2014
|Bachelor in International business administration; Motivation Letter RSM
2 - I'mI was born and raised in Morocco, a multicultural country with its diverse population and religions This...
Undergraduatebodiam - Mar 14, 2014 / dumi - Mar 19, 2014
|Transfer Essay; "Where in the world did you learn to ride horses like that?"
UndergraduateCmccamy - Mar 12, 2014 / dumi - Mar 19, 2014
|transfer (tamu) - The thing that captured me the most.
Undergraduatemocash19 - Mar 9, 2014 / dumi - Mar 19, 2014
|SHORT ANSWERS for a transfer application to SU
Undergraduatenannerz - Feb 26, 2014 / dumi - Mar 19, 2014
|FIT Transfer Admissions Essay: Long past in need of guidance!
3 - Thank you for the input! How can I still use this quote without going too off-topic? After all, it...
Undergraduatesmorales94 - Mar 13, 2014 / smorales94 - Mar 18, 2014
|If you were a superhero, what would your super power be....? PSEO entrance essay
Undergraduatetechnicx - Mar 17, 2014 / technicx - Mar 18, 2014
|A human's most noble act is to create; TRANSFER OBJECTIVES
4 - Beautiful start :) Impressive quote :) aLuckyStudent has given you many useful advice and hope you give some...
Undergraduatedjkiller25 - Feb 27, 2014 / dumi - Mar 18, 2014
|A vacuum is a bad learning environment; Transfer NYU USC Mexican
2 - Rarely do we talk about "cultural social mobility" or a "cultural middle class". -- I know that this structure,...
UndergraduateWondergeek - Mar 16, 2014 / niesaysi - Mar 18, 2014
|correct the grammar and punctuation and help me add some clasical words
4 - After my bachelor I wish would like to continue tofor a Masters degree, so I could keep mastering...
UndergraduateJohn101 - Mar 15, 2014 / niesaysi - Mar 17, 2014
|3 UNIQUE QUALITIES; Northwestern - Why/Unique Qualities
5 - Dwangus, I did not mean to criticize any body's work over here. Take my comments constructive rather than...
Undergraduatedwangus - Mar 15, 2014 / Naveed786 - Mar 17, 2014
|It's kind of like a love story, Common App transfer essay
2 - I think the sentence looks sloppy suggestion: Basically, I just want to know that if your essay gives...
UndergraduateGalPacino - Feb 25, 2014 / bwosti - Mar 16, 2014
|Intellectually Disdain to Dismembered. Transfer Stanford Essay
UndergraduateaLuckyStudent - Mar 14, 2014 / aLuckyStudent - Mar 15, 2014
|11th grade IB application - Introduce yourself as a learner.
UndergraduateTboi890 - Mar 12, 2014 / Saqib - Mar 15, 2014
|We fail to show gratitude for heroes and at some time some of them are deemed to be forgotten.
Undergraduatejgafk - Mar 12, 2014 / dwangus - Mar 15, 2014
|Leadership, Interests, Discrimmination Qusetion Essay
3 - One of my most exhilarating leadership experiences has been thedischarging my duties as the president of the Art...
UndergraduateVicci77 - Feb 28, 2014 / dumi - Mar 14, 2014
|"Be the change you want to see in this world" ; Why APU?
Undergraduatepeacefulwarrior - Feb 15, 2014 / Faith318 - Mar 14, 2014
|TAMU transfer student Statement of Purpose!
4 - Yes he did, I'll be sure to clarify that! And I disagree, he wrote beautiful sonnets for her but...
Undergraduateramisha13 - Mar 9, 2014 / ramisha13 - Mar 13, 2014
|I was born in China and moved to Switzerland - Transfer motivation to Penn
2 - Starting to learn a completely new language (German) and adapting myself to a new environment waswere great challengesa great...
Undergraduateluluenvogue - Mar 12, 2014 / dumi - Mar 13, 2014
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