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|This I Believe ( Mock Essay)
Undergraduatetylermk96 - Feb 28, 2014 / Orangeeskies - Feb 28, 2014
|Why I Choose My Major ( Mechanical Engineering )
2 - I think: - realities => reality - "Throughout high school I have been heavily involved in extra-curricular activities....
Undergraduatedonpeter - Feb 24, 2014 / tiendh - Feb 28, 2014
|UT Austin Transfer Nursing Story- I never wanted to be a nurse
2 - "more sure" is logically incorrect. You are either sure, or you are not sure. Think of a glass, if...
Undergraduatelkraus3 - Feb 23, 2014 / xsimio - Feb 28, 2014
|Essay explaining why you have chosen to continue onto post-secondary
Undergraduatecras69 - Feb 26, 2014 / sandipsinh - Feb 26, 2014
|Admission Essay to UT Austin - I was the only child to single mom in the US Navy
2 - With my mother who was always working , and our little family on the move every few years, entertaining...
Undergraduatesiamesefox - Feb 25, 2014 / niesaysi - Feb 26, 2014
|Columbia GS Essay from perspective of former semi professional hockey player
3 - I think this is not an appropriate place for Parallelism. I thrive in a hockey environment not only...
Undergraduateebladez15 - Feb 25, 2014 / eddies - Feb 26, 2014
|Undergraduate Essay for Gender and Sexuality Studies Transfer (Brown University)
2 - ellerae I think your essays are both really good. Only suggestions I have are grammar-related. It was...
Undergraduateellerae - Feb 25, 2014 / GalPacino - Feb 25, 2014
|"I was a victim of bullying"; Flagler Undergrad Admission Essay
Undergraduatealexisf908 - Feb 25, 2014 / GalPacino - Feb 25, 2014
|My education was not just about getting degree; Statement of intent
Undergraduateznack - Feb 22, 2014 / Pahan - Feb 24, 2014
|Describe why you would like to study in the US. Global Ugrad exchange program.
Undergraduatedidi9494 - Feb 22, 2014 / dumi - Feb 24, 2014
|My passion for psychology. Fall 2014 CommonApp Transfer essay
Undergraduateluvlookie - Feb 10, 2014 / luvlookie - Feb 23, 2014
|Stanford University Summer Session (International).
Undergraduatelfdz - Feb 21, 2014 / lfdz - Feb 23, 2014
|High School Architecture Summer Camp Entrance Essay
4 - I think you should narrow this point by giving one-two real-life story. Therefore, your readers are easy to...
Undergraduateapinoy - Feb 16, 2014 / eddies - Feb 23, 2014
|Queen's PSE: Describe a challenging experience and what you have learned from it.
3 - I think you should narrow this point by giving one-two real-life story. Therefore, your readers are easy to...
Undergraduatewhysohoude - Feb 11, 2014 / eddies - Feb 23, 2014
|"i feel i am ready to return" - Readmission to Undergrad after 2nd dismissal
Undergraduateqibz - Feb 11, 2014 / eddies - Feb 23, 2014
|Bates College- "emancipating potential of the liberal arts"
2 - This is presented very impressively, especially your passion and devotion to arts. However, I feel it is better if...
Undergraduatebeanie123 - Feb 21, 2014 / Pahan - Feb 22, 2014
|I thought I wasn't good enough - I had problems with reading; WHY TRANSFER? /BC, UCLA,NEU
3 - Some corrections 1. I thought I wasn't good enough -> I thought that I wasn't good enough 2. My...
Undergraduate13williamsm - Feb 19, 2014 / rosa_liinna - Feb 21, 2014
|The last piece of puzzle: For me, transferring is taking a journey to find that one.
2 - this essay is written well. you are clear and straight to the point. the last line great. goodluck...
Undergraduateslowandsteady - Feb 21, 2014 / 13williamsm - Feb 21, 2014
|Temple University -personal and professional accomplishments
Undergraduatedenishzaki - Feb 19, 2014 / denishzaki - Feb 20, 2014
|I had participated in a variety of original Russian art fields; Statement of intent
Undergraduateznack - Feb 19, 2014 / Purwati Ayu - Feb 20, 2014
|Issue of Importance essay - Having trouble with past or present tense/opinions on prompt?
UndergraduateJojoray - Feb 19, 2014 / SHanafi - Feb 19, 2014
|What are your reasons for wanting to enroll in the Ib Programme?; IB Entrance
4 - I have told by many people that I have a great potential, however, I don't feel challenged by...
Undergraduateheyhaniel - Feb 2, 2014 / dumi - Feb 19, 2014
|Why APU? I researched well on the uni !
Undergraduatepeacefulwarrior - Feb 17, 2014 / peacefulwarrior - Feb 18, 2014
|My name is Aminu but people call me yakasai
8 - I also like to learn new languages such as French, Spanish etc. because they help me get connected...
Undergraduateay1 - Feb 16, 2014 / Pahan - Feb 18, 2014
|My Brandeis experience; Supplement essay : Why Brandeis?
Undergraduateyuukinguyen - Feb 17, 2014 / yuukinguyen - Feb 18, 2014
|Law School Personal Statement: From a Cultural Bubble, to the Larger Cultural World
Undergraduatepacers7ind - Feb 17, 2014 / SHanafi - Feb 18, 2014
|Being raised and educated in a different country; Diversity
Undergraduatetnguyen6106 - Jan 29, 2014 / SHanafi - Feb 17, 2014
|Option #4: Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content.
Undergraduatecks - Feb 17, 2014 / Pahan - Feb 17, 2014
|Revision of my study objectives essay - Industrial Engineering
3 - I work in the Production Planning Control Department, and daily I come across problems that occur in manufacturing...
Undergraduatemschlindwein - Jan 18, 2014 / dumi - Feb 17, 2014
|How to make my essay more rememberable?-Virginia tech transfer
4 - It is not very clear to the reader what connection your eighth grade scrapbook project had with your...
Undergraduateoreo2016 - Feb 13, 2014 / Pahan - Feb 15, 2014
|Home is wherever I am with my family members; PLACE WHERE I AM PERFECTLY CONTENT
6 - Option #4: Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content. What do you do or experience there,...
Undergraduatesien8888 - Feb 14, 2014 / sien8888 - Feb 15, 2014
|MSc Econometrics - studying in the Netherlands.
2 - Having Being exposed myself to these methods independently.. I will have a strong basis to perform well on...
Undergraduatecoohran - Feb 15, 2014 / niesaysi - Feb 15, 2014
|Social anxiety and inspiration- Circumstance, obstacle or conflict in life
5 - You didn't talk about the resources and skills you used up overcome your anxiety you just went straight into...
Undergraduateabrahamcerv - Feb 9, 2014 / 13williamsm - Feb 15, 2014
|UCLA Supplement Essay #1: Extraordinary talent/skill. APYLP participant.
Undergraduateimtrungle - Feb 4, 2014 / dumi - Feb 15, 2014
|Personal Statement Essay for a Graduate Tax Program.
Undergraduatekokacoca - Feb 8, 2014 / coohran - Feb 15, 2014
|Our greatest glory is not in never failing,but in rising up every time: Recount a failure
3 - @ phamphuongnam - Hey, I found this in Writing Feedback forum. You should have posted it into Undergraduate...
Undergraduatephamphuongnam - Jan 26, 2014 / dumi - Feb 14, 2014
|Personal Statement for University of Washington - Academic History
Undergraduatemintsprinkles - Feb 10, 2014 / oreo2016 - Feb 13, 2014
|Gettysburg College Supplemental Essay, Describe a situation 'Make a Difference'
3 - we occasionallyfrequently stopped what we were doing and I waited herhad to wait until she finished her work Although...
Undergraduateasomegirl - Jan 31, 2014 / dumi - Feb 13, 2014
|Georgia Tech Transfer Essay for International Student in Bio medical Engineering
Undergraduatepgpolanco - Feb 12, 2014 / pgpolanco - Feb 13, 2014
|CommonApp main transfer essay BUSINESS DREAM
2 - Miserably perplex i was when i started As is not required as it change the meaning of your idea....
UndergraduateCANWANG - Feb 8, 2014 / sandipsinh - Feb 12, 2014
|Reflective Essay on My International study Exchange
UndergraduateLoyisoMbere - Feb 11, 2014 / sandipsinh - Feb 12, 2014
|University Application: what is your favourite past time/hobby and why?
Undergraduatecrystalcat - Feb 9, 2014 / dumi - Feb 10, 2014
|I would like to become an engineer; What life goals will Purdue help you to achieve & how?
2 - I wish to design engineering solutions that achieve the best balance between the trade off of urbanization and...
Undergraduateted22 - Feb 10, 2014 / dumi - Feb 10, 2014
|Parsons School of Art: "Describe a Time When You Were a Minority"
2 - I am also and artistsan artist that,which is not always appreciated by many people because of the idea of...
Undergraduateanakarenbarrera - Feb 9, 2014 / Pahan - Feb 9, 2014
|NUS application Essay- Friends with the WRONG CROWD?
Undergraduateniz1128 - Feb 8, 2014 / Pahan - Feb 9, 2014
|My experience of raising money for charity Anyone check it
3 - Well, it's obvious that city centers have many people walking. Do not emphasize very obvious facts too much...
UndergraduateJefferdson8787 - Feb 6, 2014 / Pahan - Feb 9, 2014
|From music to mathematics - Transfer Application Essay for UT Austin.
Undergraduatesafecamp - Feb 9, 2014 / safecamp - Feb 9, 2014
|"Living in a diverse community" My major passion has remained unchanged - Why UWC?
3 - Throughout my youth, my major passion has remained unchanged; I want to help those who are in need,...
Undergraduateshanstride - Feb 9, 2014 / dumi - Feb 9, 2014
|'Who is your hero who inspires you to achieve?' About my farther.
UndergraduateLauramurg - Feb 7, 2014 / dumi - Feb 9, 2014
|Inspirtaion to pursue engineering- U of T Essay- This opportunity means the world to me
2 - ... This section lacks creativity :( ... These sound like statements you made without much commitment. Talk through...
UndergraduateElmYew - Feb 9, 2014 / dumi - Feb 9, 2014
|"I love the challenge" My International Baccalaureate Entrance Essay
UndergraduateJackie2012 - Feb 8, 2014 / leoking - Feb 8, 2014
|My Bedroom - Common App Essay: A Meaningful Environment
Undergraduatekimnvth - Jan 27, 2014 / kimnvth - Feb 8, 2014
|Financial Analysis and Risk Management; Waterloo / educational goals,
2 - Just a few suggestions which I think would read better. :) good luck fascinated by I regard it as...
Undergraduatebetty999 - Feb 7, 2014 / niz1128 - Feb 8, 2014
|NUS ADMISSION ESSAY---> Torn between arts and science.
4 - I decided to follow my heart and choose something that interested me instead of following the norm for...
Undergraduateniz1128 - Feb 5, 2014 / halleybachelor - Feb 7, 2014
|DIPLOMACY; UT Austin Statement of Purpose - transfer essay
3 - In the pursuit of my dreams of becoming a diplomat or working for the government in the capacity...
Undergraduateutaustin - Feb 6, 2014 / dumi - Feb 7, 2014
|Art institure application essay for graphic and web design
3 - I really do feel like its writers block im suffering from. Thank you for your advice! Ill try rewriting...
Undergraduatemari_zelda - Feb 5, 2014 / mari_zelda - Feb 6, 2014
|How should we react with an exchange opportunity? ; U.S. Perspectives essay tips
2 - "These characteristics provide students with a large range of point of views, and the chance to develop new technologies....
UndergraduateTales - Feb 5, 2014 / snroewms - Feb 6, 2014
|'ideas turned into reality' Engineering application Essay - University of Toronto
UndergraduateKaranarak - Feb 5, 2014 / Pahan - Feb 5, 2014
|"Reason over emotion"; Programme preference - City University, why?
8 - Good start :) This aspect makes me embrace the scienceScience. Ok, Pahan's got a very good point...
UndergraduateUtau4928 - Dec 29, 2013 / dumi - Feb 4, 2014
|My only task was to get good grades; UW Madison
6 - Avoid using contractions. I am, not I'm. Was not not wasn't. Pay attention to capitalization. UW Madison should...
UndergraduateAlberto53 - Jan 30, 2014 / Ulaai - Feb 4, 2014
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