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|Poverty in a third world country is not kind to anyone; Background/ Central to Identity
9 - Urgent: I need a reply within 3 hours to meet my uMich deadline. Is my revision better than my...
Undergraduateabacada - Jan 27, 2014 / abacada - Feb 1, 2014
|I will do everything I can to fully maximize my university experience; Queens PS
4 - I would also explore the opportunities for international exposure like exchange or volunteering abroad. Being a...
Undergraduatemmec - Jan 10, 2014 / dumi - Feb 1, 2014
|USC Supplement Essays for a hopeful computer science and business administration major
13 - Yeah, I see your point with the third essay. It is definitely more of a story than actually saying...
UndergraduateGokuKetchum - Jan 16, 2014 / GokuKetchum - Feb 1, 2014
|uMich supplemental essay #2 ; I want to be free to ask questions.
4 - I created my own Facebook Page specifically to post the naive questions, while I encounter pondering about nature....
Undergraduateabacada - Jan 31, 2014 / tiaDS - Feb 1, 2014
|Career and Goals essay paragraph needs to be reviewed AND YOU KINDLY !
8 - wow thank you so much could not of explained it better you are amazing my friends god bless !!...
Undergraduatewizdeep - Jan 25, 2014 / wizdeep - Jan 31, 2014
|A warrior spirit never die-Naval Academy:Deeper Meaning/Purpose to earn invitation to USNA
4 - Read your essay out loud over 10 times, seriously. Stand in your room by yourself and read your paper....
UndergraduateCl0ark0 - Jan 30, 2014 / chessmeister89 - Jan 31, 2014
|'I thought I was going to be a cowgirl' UT Austin Undeclared Transfer Essay
8 - Thank you so much! Also, I have to write an essay on an "Issue of Importance." I've narrowed the...
Undergraduateprncsslxn - Jan 27, 2014 / prncsslxn - Jan 31, 2014
|I am a woman. I am pragmatic and unpredictable; Barnard Transfer Essay!
4 - Your style is bombastic and uneven. It reminds me of hollow political oratory. At that, it is not in...
UndergraduateGalPacino - Jan 17, 2014 / Mustafa1991 - Jan 31, 2014
|Diversity, social opportunities, culture, learning environmen- U MICHIGAN - ANN ARBOR
3 - I believe that this essay is great! I did not see any major concerns. Very strong and direct into...
Undergraduatechessmeister89 - Jan 31, 2014 / Cl0ark0 - Jan 31, 2014
|Cornell College (Mount Vernon, IA) Supplemental essays (why apply & passion)
Undergraduateasomegirl - Jan 30, 2014 / asomegirl - Jan 31, 2014
|I irritated everyone around me; UC - world you come from
3 - Ok, you take a good entrance. However, the last sentence about is somewhat contradictory. This confusion occurs due...
Undergraduateilikebands - Jan 26, 2014 / dumi - Jan 31, 2014
|I was not pressured to go to college; UT:Statement of purpose essay
UndergraduateSeeMee - Jan 28, 2014 / SeeMee - Jan 30, 2014
|Memory of my last day of high school; U Washington Personal Statement (Transfer) Summer 14
4 - Can anyone else give me some feedback on this essay? Sending it in today - I'd really appreciate it....
Undergraduateskirt - Jan 29, 2014 / skirt - Jan 30, 2014
|Unpaid Internship at an NGO; USC- Extracurricular activities or work experience
5 - My most recent work experience was working as a voluntary intern for a NGO called Green Lifestyles Network....
UndergraduateSoubia - Jan 25, 2014 / dumi - Jan 30, 2014
|How do you plan to get the most out of your undergraduate education at Victoria College?
Undergraduatebeecky - Jan 30, 2014 / dumi - Jan 30, 2014
|LGBT people - Why Davidson? 'Davidson and I have the same values'
3 - I think it is also good to talk about how Davidson would help you with your specific academic goals...
Undergraduatemenglingziyan - Dec 30, 2013 / dumi - Jan 30, 2014
|University of Michigan supplemental essay #1; Community of dedicated volunteers.
2 - CommutingWhile commuting by a rickshaw one day, I saw a woman in rags squatting in front of a drainage...
Undergraduateabacada - Jan 30, 2014 / dumi - Jan 30, 2014
|'In Bangladesh...' UofM Essay#1 Everyone belongs to many different communities...
4 - What utopia are you talking about? I'm from Bangladesh as well but I would be very careful about...
Undergraduatenanosuit - Jan 29, 2014 / abacada - Jan 30, 2014
|Reasons/ Interest in Eng/ Brave New World; Waterloo Aif
2 - Overall, your essays look organized and clear. Your first two essays were impressive and showed who you are very...
Undergraduatejl95ac - Jan 29, 2014 / asomegirl - Jan 30, 2014
|LGBT. The communities you belong to. Michigan Ann Arbor
3 - Thanks! I wanted to say that I had contact with them during the activities I mentioned above because we...
Undergraduatecoldmountain - Jan 29, 2014 / coldmountain - Jan 30, 2014
|"Why are you taking art history?"; UT-Austin Transfer
Undergraduatetexasbreed13 - Jan 23, 2014 / texasbreed13 - Jan 29, 2014
|Compassion and diversity ; Industrial design -CCA
UndergraduateHamma - Jan 19, 2014 / Bob789 - Jan 29, 2014
|My life's passion is to repair the damage on earth created by humans; Purdue - life goals
UndergraduateOGUNSUSI - Jan 4, 2014 / dumi - Jan 29, 2014
|I was born in the Dominican Republic; Boston University -- General Studies
Undergraduateinesalvarez - Jan 3, 2014 / dumi - Jan 29, 2014
|'A challenge only becomes an obstacle when you bow to it' - Essay for UBC
3 - thank you!...
Undergraduatebecky Y - Jan 28, 2014 / becky Y - Jan 29, 2014
|Stanford- FACEBOOK MATTERS TO ME!
3 - I was trying to say that Facebook expanded to Stanford in it's early ages, like when it was first...
Undergraduatesanatm - Jan 28, 2014 / sanatm - Jan 28, 2014
|I wanted to work as a mechanical engineer; Georgia Tech Writing Supplement-
4 - If you replace "GTech" with any other excellent engineering school, this essay would fit perfectly for that school, as...
UndergraduateZackjam1 - Jan 9, 2014 / sanatm - Jan 28, 2014
|'Growing up in Cerritos, CA' USC COMMON APP SUPPLEMENT extracurricular experience
3 - In terms of content, this essay is absolutely perfect. You discuss the activity, but more importantly, talk about its...
UndergraduateAsakariya - Jan 27, 2014 / admission2012 - Jan 27, 2014
|"No. I want to study Environmental Science";Holy Cross Transfer
Undergraduatebranture - Jan 26, 2014 / branture - Jan 27, 2014
|King of Love Poetry. MY PERSONAL STATEMENT
Undergraduateduogduog - Jan 26, 2014 / duogduog - Jan 27, 2014
|Best place: my room with the curtains drawn, my headphones on and the lights off
3 - Haha, thanks. I know the entering paragraph seems super dramatic, I was in a super bad mood yesterday. Damn...
Undergraduateworrywart93 - Jan 26, 2014 / worrywart93 - Jan 27, 2014
|UT Austin Transfer Essay - Switching majors/being undeclared/finding direction
UndergraduateLanac - Jan 25, 2014 / Lanac - Jan 26, 2014
|Personal Essay for Nurse Practitioner Program Application
2 - hi..., To me, you have answered all questions with sufficient explanation, and the way you use grammatical mechanics...
Undergraduatemarafive - Jan 24, 2014 / eddies - Jan 26, 2014
|'giving 110% to whatever I'm passionate about' Personal Statement for Radford university
2 - I thought it was too much of you being negative during high school. The latter part will be much...
Undergraduatefortee40 - Jan 25, 2014 / duogduog - Jan 26, 2014
|'an experience between personal freedom...' Haverford Honor Code Essay
4 - Living atin a school with only a hundred students, reliance on trust and understanding is essential to the wellbeing,...
Undergraduatetravisl - Jan 12, 2014 / dumi - Jan 26, 2014
|How can i benefit from my education at the american university in cairo (AUC)?
3 - well what i meant to highlight is: 1- there is a trend of going to univeristies abroad - taking...
Undergraduateshadia - Jan 25, 2014 / shadia - Jan 26, 2014
|Learning from your challenges in life!
7 - This year I had the opportunity to volunteer for the International Human Rights Day Student Symposium, an event...
UndergraduateAliehs13 - Jan 24, 2014 / dumi - Jan 26, 2014
|My Grandfather's Story- JHU Summer Internship Program
2 - I think you have a too much going on. Within the 1st paragraph we learn about your grandfather, then...
UndergraduateHbdean - Jan 24, 2014 / bomerr - Jan 25, 2014
|I have never had an opportunity like this - I need to be accepted
Undergraduatesamano - Jan 25, 2014 / fortee40 - Jan 25, 2014
|"what would you like to be?" replying "I don't have an idea" AUC Admission Essay
2 - After pondering seriously, I realized that this question dealt with my aspirations and dreams. I don't need an...
UndergraduateAlaaAhm - Jan 24, 2014 / Pahan - Jan 24, 2014
|Everyone possesses unique or special qualities or unique characteristics
NEW - Everyone possesses unique or special qualities that set them apart and make them different from other people, but only...
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|ILLEGAL DRUGS; **UWC PAKISTAN** ; Current problem in Pakistan
Undergraduatedanish_ali - Jan 23, 2014 / Pahan - Jan 24, 2014
|My parents are both from the Dominican Republic; Rutgers - Diversity, multicultural
UndergraduateladyD - Jan 19, 2014 / dumi - Jan 24, 2014
|Fermilab application: internship for foreign students majoring in physics
UndergraduateJpbernal888 - Jan 22, 2014 / leoking - Jan 24, 2014
|There is no challenges so difficult, no goals so impossible; Clep college
4 - CLEP Essay, Please welcome for any comments. Question - Introduction A copyright gives the author of a creative work(like...
UndergraduateNeupane3 - Jan 21, 2014 / Neupane3 - Jan 23, 2014
|Resident Staff program - personal qualities and professional skills
2 - Abilities to communicate, analyze, and lead are three essential skills in a role asfor a Resident AdvisorAdviser . ...
Undergraduatetimmy0110 - Jan 22, 2014 / dumi - Jan 23, 2014
|USC application essay - How will you benefit society?
3 - I agree with the previous comment. Well,... actually I am not a person in computer science, but...
Undergraduatesituation123 - Jan 22, 2014 / sntinn - Jan 23, 2014
|'communities to which you belong' University Application: "We are a family!"
2 - " We are a Family" this is the very slogan used by Greenway High School subdivision within the Navy...
Undergraduatetylermk96 - Jan 22, 2014 / Silentlips - Jan 22, 2014
|University of Wisconsin college; Something goes unnoticed
4 - My public persona is a young happy-go-lucky individual, but many know very little about my experiences that have helped...
Undergraduatebolanos36 - Jan 21, 2014 / fikri - Jan 22, 2014
|Study Objectives - Brazilian project : Mechanical Engineer
3 - Hi... You may start writing what plan to study is, followed by the explanation about what skills you...
Undergraduatearturvito - Jan 21, 2014 / eddies - Jan 21, 2014
|Interest letter to UChicago: "It has been a while since I received the deferral decision"
Undergraduateiloveyogurt - Jan 20, 2014 / niesaysi - Jan 21, 2014
|MOTIVATION LETTER - Business Economics offered by Ghent University
2 - With this letter, I would like to express my strong interest ... This programme is a prestigious opportunity......
Undergraduatedaphne2007 - Jan 19, 2014 / niesaysi - Jan 21, 2014
|My excitement that I had on the journey along the West ; Art project description
Undergraduateikea66 - Jan 20, 2014 / odon - Jan 21, 2014
|Great study environment; Exchange student study statement
UndergraduateStrikerRyan - Jan 20, 2014 / sntinn - Jan 21, 2014
|FaithChurch and I; Extracurricular Activity---
2 - Every Sunday my uncle drives me to FaithChurch, my church and family I suggest you to put comma...
UndergraduateOryx97 - Jan 20, 2014 / fikri - Jan 20, 2014
|HSF Academic Challenge- Science Fair Journey
UndergraduateOryx97 - Jan 20, 2014 / lhs12 - Jan 20, 2014
|Night Club Manager; USC - work experience
Undergraduatenigthclubguy - Jan 20, 2014 / SHanafi - Jan 20, 2014
|A person must be adaptable and flexible to change; U Michigan - Central to Identity
4 - Thank you so much! I was actually considering implementing some of your style with the story-telling because it does...
Undergraduatetylermk96 - Jan 18, 2014 / tylermk96 - Jan 20, 2014
|..remember my excitement for learning the visual illusions in a summer camp - Wellesley
2 - I picked liberal art and science and campus i suggest you to put commas to separate several points...
Undergraduatekaren7179 - Jan 15, 2014 / fikri - Jan 20, 2014
|A strong sense of humor ; Va tech Honors Application Essay
2 - I don't like how you say, "With that being said".."therefore" There is no medium for self-expression quite like comedy...
Undergraduatebsmyth - Jan 19, 2014 / daydreamer08 - Jan 19, 2014
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