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|'giving 110% to whatever I'm passionate about' Personal Statement for Radford university
2 - I thought it was too much of you being negative during high school. The latter part will be much...
Undergraduatefortee40 - Jan 25, 2014 / duogduog - Jan 26, 2014
|'an experience between personal freedom...' Haverford Honor Code Essay
4 - Living atin a school with only a hundred students, reliance on trust and understanding is essential to the wellbeing,...
Undergraduatetravisl - Jan 12, 2014 / dumi - Jan 26, 2014
|How can i benefit from my education at the american university in cairo (AUC)?
3 - well what i meant to highlight is: 1- there is a trend of going to univeristies abroad - taking...
Undergraduateshadia - Jan 25, 2014 / shadia - Jan 26, 2014
|Learning from your challenges in life!
6 - This year I had the opportunity to volunteer for the International Human Rights Day Student Symposium, an event...
UndergraduateAliehs13 - Jan 24, 2014 / dumi - Jan 26, 2014
|My Grandfather's Story- JHU Summer Internship Program
2 - I think you have a too much going on. Within the 1st paragraph we learn about your grandfather, then...
UndergraduateHbdean - Jan 24, 2014 / bomerr - Jan 25, 2014
|I have never had an opportunity like this - I need to be accepted
Undergraduatesamano - Jan 25, 2014 / fortee40 - Jan 25, 2014
|"what would you like to be?" replying "I don't have an idea" AUC Admission Essay
2 - After pondering seriously, I realized that this question dealt with my aspirations and dreams. I don't need an...
UndergraduateAlaaAhm - Jan 24, 2014 / Pahan - Jan 24, 2014
|Everyone possesses unique or special qualities or unique characteristics
NEW - Everyone possesses unique or special qualities that set them apart and make them different from other people, but only...
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|ILLEGAL DRUGS; **UWC PAKISTAN** ; Current problem in Pakistan
Undergraduatedanish_ali - Jan 23, 2014 / Pahan - Jan 24, 2014
|My parents are both from the Dominican Republic; Rutgers - Diversity, multicultural
UndergraduateladyD - Jan 19, 2014 / dumi - Jan 24, 2014
|Fermilab application: internship for foreign students majoring in physics
UndergraduateJpbernal888 - Jan 22, 2014 / leoking - Jan 24, 2014
|There is no challenges so difficult, no goals so impossible; Clep college
4 - CLEP Essay, Please welcome for any comments. Question - Introduction A copyright gives the author of a creative work(like...
UndergraduateNeupane3 - Jan 21, 2014 / Neupane3 - Jan 23, 2014
|Resident Staff program - personal qualities and professional skills
2 - Abilities to communicate, analyze, and lead are three essential skills in a role asfor a Resident AdvisorAdviser . ...
Undergraduatetimmy0110 - Jan 22, 2014 / dumi - Jan 23, 2014
|USC application essay - How will you benefit society?
3 - I agree with the previous comment. Well,... actually I am not a person in computer science, but...
Undergraduatesituation123 - Jan 22, 2014 / sntinn - Jan 23, 2014
|'communities to which you belong' University Application: "We are a family!"
2 - " We are a Family" this is the very slogan used by Greenway High School subdivision within the Navy...
Undergraduatetylermk96 - Jan 22, 2014 / Silentlips - Jan 22, 2014
|University of Wisconsin college; Something goes unnoticed
4 - My public persona is a young happy-go-lucky individual, but many know very little about my experiences that have helped...
Undergraduatebolanos36 - Jan 21, 2014 / fikri - Jan 22, 2014
|Study Objectives - Brazilian project : Mechanical Engineer
3 - Hi... You may start writing what plan to study is, followed by the explanation about what skills you...
Undergraduatearturvito - Jan 21, 2014 / eddies - Jan 21, 2014
|Interest letter to UChicago: "It has been a while since I received the deferral decision"
Undergraduateiloveyogurt - Jan 20, 2014 / niesaysi - Jan 21, 2014
|MOTIVATION LETTER - Business Economics offered by Ghent University
2 - With this letter, I would like to express my strong interest ... This programme is a prestigious opportunity......
Undergraduatedaphne2007 - Jan 19, 2014 / niesaysi - Jan 21, 2014
|My excitement that I had on the journey along the West ; Art project description
Undergraduateikea66 - Jan 20, 2014 / odon - Jan 21, 2014
|Great study environment; Exchange student study statement
UndergraduateStrikerRyan - Jan 20, 2014 / sntinn - Jan 21, 2014
|FaithChurch and I; Extracurricular Activity---
2 - Every Sunday my uncle drives me to FaithChurch, my church and family I suggest you to put comma...
UndergraduateOryx97 - Jan 20, 2014 / fikri - Jan 20, 2014
|HSF Academic Challenge- Science Fair Journey
UndergraduateOryx97 - Jan 20, 2014 / lhs12 - Jan 20, 2014
|Night Club Manager; USC - work experience
Undergraduatenigthclubguy - Jan 20, 2014 / SHanafi - Jan 20, 2014
|A person must be adaptable and flexible to change; U Michigan - Central to Identity
4 - Thank you so much! I was actually considering implementing some of your style with the story-telling because it does...
Undergraduatetylermk96 - Jan 18, 2014 / tylermk96 - Jan 20, 2014
|..remember my excitement for learning the visual illusions in a summer camp - Wellesley
2 - I picked liberal art and science and campus i suggest you to put commas to separate several points...
Undergraduatekaren7179 - Jan 15, 2014 / fikri - Jan 20, 2014
|A strong sense of humor ; Va tech Honors Application Essay
2 - I don't like how you say, "With that being said".."therefore" There is no medium for self-expression quite like comedy...
Undergraduatebsmyth - Jan 19, 2014 / daydreamer08 - Jan 19, 2014
|Progressivism. UCLA transfer personal statement
Undergraduateredjester - Jan 15, 2014 / daydreamer08 - Jan 19, 2014
|People grow through experience if they meet life honestly and courageously; UF essay
Undergraduatebowenee - Jan 19, 2014 / bowenee - Jan 19, 2014
|Multicultural environment as the reason for attending APU
Undergraduatenyxxx12 - Jan 19, 2014 / nyxxx12 - Jan 19, 2014
|How you learned about Santa Clara University? SCU WRITING PROMPT #1
3 - It wasn't until a reunion lunch with a few old family friends of my junior year whenthat I had...
UndergraduateMag_mclach - Jan 6, 2014 / dumi - Jan 19, 2014
|Fight for good education - Common App Essay - (Background)
5 - Throughout my life, I watched my parents exercising tolerance for sentiments and beliefs of other communities. ...
UndergraduateSic - Dec 24, 2013 / dumi - Jan 19, 2014
|Background story - Coming to America
UndergraduateOneStorytoTell - Dec 23, 2013 / dumi - Jan 19, 2014
|FSU - Global Awareness is the big picture
UndergraduateHAHAME - Jan 14, 2014 / GokuKetchum - Jan 19, 2014
|I slacked off in school; UIUC- interest or experience
3 - Everyone treated me as an outsider and I felt unwelcome and lonely, which was a new experience for...
UndergraduateSanjay1023 - Jan 7, 2014 / dumi - Jan 19, 2014
|Cornell REU Summer Program-Educational background,Goals,Computer skills,Scientific interet
Undergraduatejoannap_92 - Jan 18, 2014 / dumi - Jan 18, 2014
|I was born in Deming; Brought up in Farmington
3 - I'm afraid of having to settle into a miserable life if my career as an artist doesn't work out....
UndergraduateJnunez290 - Jan 18, 2014 / Jnunez290 - Jan 18, 2014
|"I don't understand what you are saying, pls tell in Gujarati"; Macalester - DIVERSITY
3 - Maybe delete the part about Meeku's family situation, its not very relevant to your challenge and solution. Talk...
Undergraduatethenewdude - Jan 16, 2014 / grey_form - Jan 18, 2014
|"What is your personal definition of Diversity?" Popcorn, People
4 - I hope this Definition of Diversity would help you ease your writer's block ; :D "The concept of diversity...
Undergraduatekcann2 - Jan 16, 2014 / dumi - Jan 18, 2014
|Why Rhodes? OPPORTUNITIES it offers!
2 - This is very well written. I wish you included the following point too ; What are your future goals...
Undergraduatethenewdude - Jan 17, 2014 / dumi - Jan 18, 2014
|"Rewards"; MY KALAMAZOO SUPP - favorite childhood book and why
Undergraduateimpatient101 - Jan 14, 2014 / niesaysi - Jan 18, 2014
|Emergency Department Academic Associate Research Volunteer Essay
2 - with more experienced in the profession -- with people who are highly experienced in the profession ...
Undergraduatemedwe - Jan 13, 2014 / niesaysi - Jan 18, 2014
|'Actions speak louder then words' - Texas A&M transfer student essay
Undergraduatelhs12 - Jan 15, 2014 / lhs12 - Jan 17, 2014
|Soccer, surgery, unable to play; USAFA- setback or ethical dilemma
2 - It was one of the deepest feelings of failure that I have ever experienced. This was not the type...
Undergraduatelilienstrasse - Jan 15, 2014 / Pahan - Jan 17, 2014
|Who am I? supplement to the College of William and Mary!
4 - Thanks guys! Those were super helpful corrections... Sometimes the grammar/mechanics stuff is much better picked up on by other...
Undergraduatealicat25 - Jan 15, 2014 / alicat25 - Jan 17, 2014
|"The Road Not Taken"; Why Macalester?
Undergraduatethenewdude - Jan 15, 2014 / alicat25 - Jan 17, 2014
|Statement of Purpose; Anguish is arguably the hallmark of the human condition
Undergraduatehuntermyuz - Jan 8, 2014 / admission2012 - Jan 16, 2014
|There are no secrets to success! ; FAILURE
4 - Thanks for your reply. I'll make the changes. The question : Recount an incident or time when...
UndergraduateNex - Jan 14, 2014 / Nex - Jan 16, 2014
|I grew up in the rural countryside of China; Story central-- A Passion in Biology
Undergraduategrey_form - Jan 9, 2014 / thenewdude - Jan 16, 2014
|'This came as a blow to my self-esteem' - TRANSFER; UW-Madison!
Undergraduateniumuyao - Jan 15, 2014 / Pahan - Jan 16, 2014
|I have dreamed of a career in medicine; Johns Hopkins Summer Internship Program
Undergraduateemedoga - Jan 13, 2014 / Pahan - Jan 16, 2014
|KGSP Self Intro - From childhood drawing hobby to a design master's
Undergraduategongjunim - Jan 7, 2014 / gongjunim - Jan 16, 2014
|'Perfect' American college": Colgate supplement, 200 words
2 - You can definitely shorten the first paragraph. Simple statement like "Colgate attracts me with its rigorous ..." is fine....
Undergraduatethenewdude - Jan 15, 2014 / grey_form - Jan 15, 2014
|How soccer has influenced my life for the past 13 years
2 - Great essay. Short, sweet and I think answers the prompt very well. Just a few minor suggestions: ...
UndergraduateRetsPeht - Jan 15, 2014 / thenewdude - Jan 15, 2014
|Five Hundred Eighty Grams of Precious Life; FSU essay focusing on service
UndergraduateJennaLovesDogs - Jan 11, 2014 / tiaDS - Jan 15, 2014
|Personal Statement for a Fashion Management (BA) course
Undergraduatefash_sim - Jan 12, 2014 / niesaysi - Jan 15, 2014
|Facing the unknown is difficult; How Never Fear Change applies to me!
6 - Ok, don't worry....It's not a major thing. I just felt it didn't keep up with the rest because the...
Undergraduatetravisl - Jan 13, 2014 / dumi - Jan 15, 2014
|I want my education back\ prompt about diversity
Undergraduateteedee11 - Jan 11, 2014 / niesaysi - Jan 14, 2014
|Leadership Demonstration - Western IVEY AEO Essay#1
2 - Please proofread this essay. It sounds like you're rushing. Also, I only see one club and the prompt asks...
Undergraduatealienfly - Jan 13, 2014 / Kanyinqt - Jan 14, 2014
|"I leave feeling renewed"- Common App Essay - Place where you feel content
Undergraduategoldendoor - Jan 9, 2014 / impatient101 - Jan 14, 2014
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