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|Volunteering/ Exam time; UBC- Experience/ Significant Challenge
2 - Hello David, I hope this helps... Although I am in no condition to correct your grammar(I am international)...
UndergraduateDavidL - Dec 9, 2013 / duquevan - Dec 16, 2013
|experience important to my intellectual development
UndergraduateRo4 - Dec 13, 2013 / Pahan - Dec 16, 2013
|Musical Theater student ; Who or what influenced you to apply to Syracuse?
Undergraduategcarrubba - Dec 9, 2013 / gcarrubba - Dec 16, 2013
|I always saw them asking for help; Princeton- "Princeton in the Nation's Service"
Undergraduateawoniyi641 - Dec 14, 2013 / SHE83 - Dec 16, 2013
|Think independently!; University of Chicago - learning, community, and future
2 - I think that you should add creativity to your essay , just make it easy and interesting to read....
Undergraduatemsbluealien - Dec 14, 2013 / sanzhar - Dec 16, 2013
|Home (far from) - Georgia Tech essay: Interest in Georgia Tech/What will I contribute?
Undergraduatepoptarttoasta - Dec 15, 2013 / karanbhullar - Dec 16, 2013
|Biology defines life ; Cornell Essay ; MAJOR
Undergraduateandrewb495 - Dec 14, 2013 / andrewb495 - Dec 15, 2013
|Travel Writing summer program in Australia; Irish Fiddling - Why BU?
2 - You need to talk about how you can contribute in the community. BU is a good school, they know...
Undergraduatequetzaltenango - Dec 15, 2013 / Superjaniter - Dec 15, 2013
|Figure skating has revolved around my life ; Meaningful Activity/ Common App
2 - It sounds, excellent, you have a solid writing style. I would just reword a few things. "Figure skating...
UndergraduateLala77 - Dec 15, 2013 / thartistoo - Dec 15, 2013
|My dream of becoming an Economist! ; Why Davidson College?
2 - To achieve admission at Davidson, a highly prestigious liberal arts college with a very low acceptance rate, one must...
UndergraduateSHE83 - Dec 15, 2013 / deviantzen - Dec 15, 2013
|Admission essay for Texas State- "Describe a circumstance in your life that changed you"
Undergraduatebmcarlin - Dec 14, 2013 / SHE83 - Dec 15, 2013
|I had the idea to rebuild my entire syste - MIT admissions question- significant challenge
5 - Thanks :)...
Undergraduatefraserp - Dec 12, 2013 / fraserp - Dec 15, 2013
|I believe NYIT will help me achieve what I dreamed of when I was young
UndergraduateFlit - Dec 13, 2013 / Ubcappin - Dec 14, 2013
|Georgia Tech Essay-Why do I want to attend and can contribute to GA Tech.
Undergraduateacewashere - Dec 13, 2013 / meatheadmanny - Dec 14, 2013
|"What are the three types of rocks?"; Common App Essay.
Undergraduatevarroyo79 - Dec 14, 2013 / Utau4928 - Dec 14, 2013
|"Obstinate- to obstruct"; UVA-Word Essay 2013 (Evanescent changed me)
Undergraduatettejo - Dec 14, 2013 / varroyo79 - Dec 14, 2013
|"Everybody is a genius"; Why Fashion Institute of Technology (Merchandising)?
3 - Thanks for all the good Feedback. And for the part about being a doctar or lawyer I'm not sure...
UndergraduateLexus Nicole - Dec 14, 2013 / Lexus Nicole - Dec 14, 2013
|My liberal attitude; Why Yale? - architecture and communication
Undergraduateyx_wang - Dec 14, 2013 / yx_wang - Dec 14, 2013
|Bowdoin supplement - The common good
2 - I agree with your friend. You are already beginning to write about how it affects you personally and how...
UndergraduateMarsbar - Dec 13, 2013 / mj2794 - Dec 13, 2013
|What is your favorite word and why? - Honesty
6 - michael_brand1 Thank you for your advice. What was your impression when you finished reading my essay?...
UndergraduateUtau4928 - Dec 10, 2013 / Utau4928 - Dec 13, 2013
|The problem and damage of immigrants in big centers.
2 - This situation leads to low wages while increasing unemployment rate due to higher supply in the labor market....
Undergraduategabriellemes - Dec 12, 2013 / dumi - Dec 13, 2013
|I immerse myself in a community with a rich mix of individuals; NYU (250-500 words)
2 - The first two sentences feel like a filler as they don't really have any connection with what you want...
Undergraduateyyc1 - Dec 12, 2013 / acewashere - Dec 13, 2013
|My running experience -Common App #2 "Learning from failure"
Undergraduateandresat - Dec 11, 2013 / dumi - Dec 13, 2013
|I am an artist (COMMON APP) - CENTRAL TO IDENTITY
Undergraduateacewashere - Dec 11, 2013 / acewashere - Dec 12, 2013
|One should have an aim in life; U Toronto; Engineering
4 - .... Well, you open your response with a bit of a negative sentiment .... Telling them that you...
Undergraduatekhanraf3 - Dec 10, 2013 / dumi - Dec 12, 2013
|'studying at Cate' - "Writing a novel is like driving a car at night"
4 - Why do you sound so uncertain? I don't think such negativity would help you impress anybody. You need...
Undergraduatekesangla - Dec 10, 2013 / dumi - Dec 12, 2013
|It was an eye-widening experience ; Place where I perfectly content
2 - First, you should have a more meaningful title for your thread. (I had to attend to this one) It...
Undergraduateyyc1 - Dec 12, 2013 / dumi - Dec 12, 2013
|(Inspiration through Defeat) - Common app: Prompt 2/Failure
2 - I personally think this is very well written. You bring up some really good points about how this failure...
UndergraduateOneiromancer - Dec 12, 2013 / yyc1 - Dec 12, 2013
|FIT entrance essay; Advantage of Florida Tech's Melbourne campus location
2 - This was good! I made some minor corrections. As for the word count, just try and elaborate some more....
UndergraduateBamboojack - Dec 8, 2013 / AlecSalisbury - Dec 12, 2013
|Why Georgia Tech? Provide me with the best education to start a career in computer science
5 - i would maybe make some changes in your last sentence. maybe something along the lines of: "Georgia...
UndergraduateValerio95 - Dec 12, 2013 / yyc1 - Dec 12, 2013
|I was supposed to write an essay about my identity and use a picture of myself..
4 - The overall component really flowed well, especially how you transitioned into speaking about how your background also influences your...
Undergraduatedaydreamer08 - Dec 4, 2013 / deeisawesome - Dec 12, 2013
|Shy girl who uses books; Something in my life I think goes unnoticed.
2 - Fernandam7 Hi, Fernandam7 Woa, you're a truly bookworm. you believe 100% on book's words, that's cool. i think you...
UndergraduateFernandam7 - Dec 9, 2013 / Ilmiyatin - Dec 12, 2013
|The volunteering programs offered at Emory University - programs/activities
Undergraduateyyc1 - Dec 11, 2013 / yyc1 - Dec 12, 2013
|(my world could be my home with my family) UC PROMPT HELP?
Undergraduatetanzeem - Nov 22, 2013 / dumi - Dec 12, 2013
|"Math just makes sense"- UC Transfer personal statement #1
3 - .... the latter part sounds redundant. ... but math has always been the subject that I liked and...
Undergraduatelexie94 - Nov 18, 2013 / dumi - Dec 12, 2013
|emory university- create your own course
Undergraduateyyc1 - Dec 11, 2013 / S9595 - Dec 12, 2013
|Texas Tech Essay-Electricity & Music/ Education and career goals
Undergraduatemichael_brand1 - Dec 11, 2013 / yyc1 - Dec 11, 2013
|Etymology Proves That I Am Not Mundane; Syracuse Sup CENTRAL TO IDENTITY
4 - In your supplement, I think you should focus a little more on yourself and a little less on your...
Undergraduatedeeisawesome - Dec 10, 2013 / starkeko - Dec 11, 2013
|Tough Times; Influence byFamily history/Culture/Enviroment
2 - My parents divorced when I was six years leaving the entire responsibility of bringing up me and my brother...
UndergraduateIyana727 - Dec 10, 2013 / dumi - Dec 11, 2013
|'Winning the competition' - COMMON APP
Undergraduatekriftsnitch - Nov 15, 2013 / dumi - Dec 11, 2013
|How Ping-Pong Shapes Me| Activity Essay
UndergraduateRaeAi - Nov 6, 2013 / dumi - Dec 11, 2013
|I never expected a project to change and develop me; Transition Into Adulthood
UndergraduateF022est - Nov 30, 2013 / dumi - Dec 11, 2013
|From Uganda to Boston - Rutgers
3 - Growing up in Easton, a suburb of Boston, my community offered limited opportunities to experience diversity. ...
UndergraduateJD3496 - Nov 30, 2013 / dumi - Dec 11, 2013
|What is Electromyography?; College English Analysis Essay
3 - Many diseases are very hard to diagnose. For example, no test can provide a guaranteed confirmation on Parkinson's...
Undergraduatenzhu - Nov 17, 2013 / dumi - Dec 11, 2013
|I'm conflicted when it comes to my hopes of you; Stanford " future roommate"
Undergraduatejdg - Dec 6, 2013 / admission2012 - Dec 10, 2013
|I am me and I am unshakable; Colgate supplement
UndergraduateLizzKnu - Dec 10, 2013 / Pahan - Dec 10, 2013
|The snarling of the trumpet soloist snaps me back into reality; perfectly content.
UndergraduateDan13 - Dec 10, 2013 / jdg - Dec 10, 2013
|I begin to reminisce back to my freshman year; place perfectly content.
3 - I would definitely start with the image of that moment when you knew that marching band was where you...
UndergraduateDan13 - Nov 12, 2013 / jdg - Dec 10, 2013
|success is not only for those who get the best chances- value i strongly believe
4 - Thank you very much :) I need to submit it soon, is there other grammatical errors to be fixed?...
Undergraduatelidiaep - Dec 5, 2013 / lidiaep - Dec 10, 2013
|I just found out that my passion is not in art; My Personal Statement to HKU
UndergraduateJfryKenanga - Dec 10, 2013 / JfryKenanga - Dec 10, 2013
|Common App: A story that is central to your identity? - Trains
7 - Well.... I feel your response for this prompt, central to your identity is not really in line with what...
UndergraduateNerdFighter - Nov 29, 2013 / dumi - Dec 10, 2013
|"Welcome to the Jincai Law Club" UIUC prompt 2: describe an experience
Undergraduatexujunjiejack - Nov 30, 2013 / xujunjiejack - Dec 10, 2013
|I braced myself for a bombardment of questions ; UBC- volunteer experience
3 - Oh... You think so? :( I am torn whether to completely change my approach then... I am afraid my...
Undergraduatehj135500 - Dec 9, 2013 / hj135500 - Dec 10, 2013
|Short softball; Sports have always been an important aspect of my life
3 - .... I'd like to suggest a slight shift in word arrangement; Sports, especially softball, have always been an...
Undergraduatetintinbelle - Nov 30, 2013 / dumi - Dec 10, 2013
|Lafayette College Supplement; What do you do? Why do you do it?
2 - Hello, You have answered the prompt correctly in both of these short answers. You should have no problem...
Undergraduateskriptkid - Dec 8, 2013 / admission2012 - Dec 9, 2013
|Take the challenge! Face your fears!; UBC- Significant Challenge
UndergraduateParagraphGraph - Dec 7, 2013 / dumi - Dec 9, 2013
|'No Birthday or Christmas present' - Essay for biggest obstacle
3 - Those two children, who were even not my father's blood relations knew my father better than I knew...
Undergraduatedolphin23 - Nov 28, 2013 / dumi - Dec 9, 2013
|"Nothing in this world is free" The Greatest Gift in Life
3 - "Nothing in this world is free", was my Grandfather's inspiring slogan that I and my family believed in...
UndergraduateKhang - Nov 16, 2013 / dumi - Dec 9, 2013
|"Why are you so quiet?" - Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure.
Undergraduatejkpk996 - Dec 8, 2013 / fatihy007 - Dec 9, 2013
|I became fascinated with genetics; Why Nursing & Why Mount Union?
UndergraduateAnge1031 - Dec 8, 2013 / dumi - Dec 9, 2013
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