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|NATURE TRAIL; Environment where I am content
Undergraduatedooleyc - Sep 24, 2013 / dumi - Sep 29, 2013
|UNIQUE INDIVIDUAL; Personal Statement Essay for Exchange Program
3 - thank you for you reply, beside evidence to support my argument, what do you think about the overall content?...
Undergraduateemilia putri - Sep 25, 2013 / emilia putri - Sep 29, 2013
|SINGLE PARENT HOME; College Admission Essay.
Undergraduatethelegendary - Sep 28, 2013 / josibodu7596 - Sep 29, 2013
|"An investment in knowledge pays the best interest"; SOP for UK universities
2 - .... let's try with direct speech ;) The environment I grew up didn't take education so seriously. ...
Undergraduateumer43646001 - Sep 28, 2013 / Pahan - Sep 29, 2013
|TOP in my college list ; Georgia Tech - Attraction and Contribution
2 - Ever since I realized that math and physics are where my passion lays, Georgia Tech had the top...
Undergraduatejsk_jin - Sep 28, 2013 / Pahan - Sep 29, 2013
|Incident/Time of FAILURE; How did it affect you (COMMON)
Undergraduatelengyicau - Sep 26, 2013 / Pahan - Sep 28, 2013
|My dream career, FILMMAKING; FSU Essay / Global awarness characteristic
2 - .... I think you better touch more general aspects because you are talking about global situations. In this...
Undergraduatebuzz123 - Sep 28, 2013 / Pahan - Sep 28, 2013
|Help others achieve their dreams and you will achieve yours; OT PS
Undergraduatembaker8016 - Sep 15, 2013 / dumi - Sep 28, 2013
|my weight and how it has affected me; Personal Narrative
3 - Well.... I like what you've written. For me it sounds as if you genuinely expressed yourself. It's touchy and...
Undergraduatefaburizu - Sep 10, 2013 / dumi - Sep 28, 2013
|Leadership is essential for all aspects and situations in life; FSU - LEADERSHIP
3 - .... this sounds as if this is a complete definition of leadership. However, in my view, it is...
Undergraduateashfsu - Sep 9, 2013 / dumi - Sep 28, 2013
|NURSING is an exciting and dynamic field ; PS Northeastern U/Direct Entry MSN Program
3 - The nursing field is an exciting and dynamic field that is rapidly developing and establishing its identity as...
Undergraduatealexs8 - Sep 9, 2013 / dumi - Sep 28, 2013
|"A sanctuary for the pursuit of science"; Why Carnegie Mellon? Research
3 - I think you do a fantastic job being specific to Carnegie Mellon -- at first glance it seemed as...
Undergraduateyosh503037 - Sep 13, 2013 / deathstroke - Sep 27, 2013
|My willingness to be at a loss. Mit essay
4 - I feel pretty similarly about your response. I think you have a lot of potential with this topic, but...
Undergraduateyosh503037 - Sep 13, 2013 / deathstroke - Sep 27, 2013
|I filled up the white space; UChicago Supplemental Essay: Arch-Nemesis
3 - I really liked the idea behind this essay, and your execution is pretty solid, too. I would try to...
UndergraduateNicolet501 - Sep 24, 2013 / deathstroke - Sep 27, 2013
|Why I ride: University of Michigan Supplement
4 - I honestly really like your explanation of why you choose to ride. One thing I would change, though, is...
Undergraduateandrewmiura - Sep 23, 2013 / deathstroke - Sep 27, 2013
|US History class; U Florida Freshman ;creating or developing a solution to a problem
Undergraduatejosibodu7596 - Sep 9, 2013 / josibodu7596 - Sep 27, 2013
|Surrounded by nutrition; Cornell CALS - experiences/interest in Nutrition
Undergraduateandreaf96 - Sep 7, 2013 / dumi - Sep 27, 2013
|Life is about giving back as much as you have taken; COMMON GOOD; Bowdoin College
2 - Well.... I see a poor connection between the first two lines and this one. Common good generally...
Undergraduatethisweirdkid - Sep 7, 2013 / dumi - Sep 27, 2013
|Not everyone's belief is the same; Texas A&M U
Undergraduateysgrlj - Sep 23, 2013 / ysgrlj - Sep 26, 2013
|EMT appreciation day; Randolph Macon/ EXPERIENCE THAT IMPACTED ME
3 - This essay's topic was to choose a time when an experience impacts you. Many ideas came to mind, but...
Undergraduatezammettdamali - Sep 26, 2013 / zammettdamali - Sep 26, 2013
|World of esoteric ideas; Place or environment where you are perfectly content/ Common App
UndergraduateCallMeDoctor - Sep 24, 2013 / haru1996 - Sep 26, 2013
|SONGS/NOVELS/OUTDOOR ACTIVITIES; Tell us about something you do for the pleasure of it
2 - Dearkaustubh if I were you , I would not concentrate on just playing, I am sure you have other...
Undergraduatekaustubh1911 - Sep 26, 2013 / marmaria - Sep 26, 2013
|Growing up in an Asian-American home, I always felt different; DIVERSITY ESSAY
3 - while they kept having theirs on. well... here, your first sentence sounds as if the situation...
Undergraduatekaybee - Sep 7, 2013 / dumi - Sep 26, 2013
|I normally do not make a habit of relying on people; QUESTBRIDGE BIO-needs cut down!
UndergraduateChantal - Sep 17, 2013 / Chantal - Sep 26, 2013
|What is fashion to me, and why do I like fasion?; PERFECT CANDIDA for FIT
Undergraduatebunnyhl - Sep 25, 2013 / dumi - Sep 26, 2013
|Reading glasses; UW Madison; Something gone unnoticed
Undergraduateschjil - Sep 7, 2013 / dumi - Sep 26, 2013
|Scientific Exploration (Caltech): Being Lost in Exploring
2 - quiet a good essay..but you did not mention thoroughly how it excited you and in return what you did..you...
Undergraduateyosh503037 - Sep 13, 2013 / bar08 - Sep 26, 2013
|MY FATHER; Princeton Essay-talk about a person who has influenced you
3 - Even though my father no more lives with me, he still occupies the bigger portion of my heart...
Undergraduatepaul2752 - Sep 8, 2013 / dumi - Sep 26, 2013
|"You're lucky that you're a Mexican"; Questbridge Biographical
UndergraduateFERNANDOCP - Sep 22, 2013 / dumi - Sep 26, 2013
|'never give up' Uw-Milwaukee - life experiences, talents, commitments and(or) interest
3 - good comments by sarthakjain! ... Improve presentation of this idea; All my life, I grew up with...
Undergraduatekenziekalwitz - Sep 3, 2013 / dumi - Sep 25, 2013
|"Good Girl" and the "Gentle Child"; Questbridge Biographical Essay
7 - "Mom and Dad will be the shield, Protecting you through all your life Because you are Daddy girl, The...
Undergraduatekhanhluong - Sep 22, 2013 / vynguyen1995 - Sep 25, 2013
|Life's been good to me so far; Personal Statement ;PA programs, needs 1/3 reduction
Undergraduatesurfermgad - Sep 20, 2013 / surfermgad - Sep 25, 2013
|'more tougher than for freshman' Transfer Supplement Essay SUNY Old Wesbury - challenges
Undergraduatekayylahhx0 - Sep 24, 2013 / JIMMY0907 - Sep 25, 2013
|Health is taken for granted! - UW-Madis; UNNOTICED
Undergraduateyofray - Sep 24, 2013 / Pahan - Sep 25, 2013
|'times change, people come and go' UW Madison Application - unnoticed but important to you
2 - Is that it your parents who's gone unnoticed in your life... You really don't touch on that aspect....
UndergraduateBallinOut - Sep 23, 2013 / Pahan - Sep 25, 2013
|I love my stake ; Introduction to Personal Essay
Undergraduatecsanch11 - Sep 23, 2013 / csanch11 - Sep 24, 2013
|Art is where I can isolate myself ; Parsons the New School of Design-Artist Statement
UndergraduateJasF - Sep 23, 2013 / dumi - Sep 24, 2013
|I am one-sixty-fourth French; MIT: cultural background, activity you do for pleasure
4 - ...I feel the joy of seeing how beautiful it had turned, the quilt I'd been stitching for nearly...
Undergraduateroxy481 - Sep 22, 2013 / Pahan - Sep 24, 2013
|I'm chill, smart, nice, responsible, funny and tall; University of Wisconsin Supp
4 - Yes.... I find the second draft more justifiable and you are able to convince your point to the...
Undergraduatescroan - Sep 22, 2013 / dumi - Sep 24, 2013
|I love challenges; PERSONAL STATEMENT; MA in Economics
Undergraduateyugi - Sep 21, 2013 / yugi - Sep 23, 2013
|First shot...in! ; Intellectual Vitality (Stanford Essay)- Engineering Design
2 - I had got a daunting task of developing a machine capable of shooting baskets, when I was just...
Undergraduateyosh503037 - Sep 13, 2013 / marmaria - Sep 23, 2013
|My name is Aduraseyi. Multi-Faceted Personality/ Stanford Essay: ROOMMATE note
6 - This made me smile. The way you address the reader directly ("Yes, roommate, I am a nerd.") is just...
UndergraduateXevoz - Sep 19, 2013 / maelinya - Sep 22, 2013
|Mr Lombardo the mentor and Tom, my friend; UF - Most Meaningful Experience
3 - Well... without seeing your prompt, I may be telling something irrelevant. However, isn't it asking about one most meaningful...
Undergraduatealazo47 - Sep 2, 2013 / dumi - Sep 22, 2013
|Stand up and command the attention of all those around you! ; FSU/ "Leadership"
2 - The content of your essay is interesting and you provide good examples! I'm not that best at grammar but...
UndergraduateHokori87 - Sep 11, 2013 / katwoman - Sep 22, 2013
|The Little Boy Who Showed Me How to Live;Something I love,have to do,can't stop think
Undergraduatelillilkim - Sep 17, 2013 / Pahan - Sep 22, 2013
|Princeton/Yale : Inequality and your experience
2 - For the past two years, I have been a part of IT Skills Development Initiative organized by the...
Undergraduatesarthakjain - Sep 3, 2013 / Pahan - Sep 22, 2013
|UC prompt #2- Your world and how it defines your dreams and aspirations
Undergraduateblairann1996 - Sep 21, 2013 / Pahan - Sep 22, 2013
|Family of our family friends; Questbridge Bio;Factors& Challenges
Undergraduatemcblom14 - Sep 15, 2013 / dumi - Sep 22, 2013
|'I live being on stage' - Common App Essay- prompt #4
5 - There is something special about being on stage and connecting myself with the audience that I just feel...
Undergraduatedreamingoutloud - Sep 1, 2013 / dumi - Sep 22, 2013
|VIDEO GAMES ; Portland Art Institute Applicant essay
UndergraduatePatron - Sep 1, 2013 / dumi - Sep 22, 2013
|ART- UMass Lowell - What do you do in your spare time?
Undergraduatefwan17 - Sep 1, 2013 / dumi - Sep 22, 2013
|I want to help people; MED school Personal statement
Undergraduatesagar0092 - Sep 14, 2013 / surfermgad - Sep 22, 2013
|'...I felt immediately at home' Why Harvey Mudd? (Freshman Application)
UndergraduateRiceIsBliss - Sep 14, 2013 / RiceIsBliss - Sep 21, 2013
|Depression; Questbridge/ significant experience, achievement, risk,ethical dilemma
4 - ^agreed....
Undergraduatep93kelly - Sep 1, 2013 / paul2752 - Sep 21, 2013
|Significant Challenge (MIT Essay): The Autism Pursuit
3 - Its a great essay, but i don't feel like you answered the prompt. It asks about a challenge and...
Undergraduateyosh503037 - Sep 13, 2013 / lortero - Sep 21, 2013
|I played piano for the school choir and my church;extracurricular activity
4 - This is all very good...but I wish you added a few experiences or events there to make your response...
UndergraduateAlbyexcel7 - Aug 31, 2013 / dumi - Sep 21, 2013
|I spent more time lost and driving in circles than any person who had ever driven a car; Belief/Idea
8 - Hi, This is very well written and clearly shows your enthusiasm. Here are just a couple things you may...
Undergraduateyosh503037 - Sep 13, 2013 / Purple - Sep 21, 2013
|You have had or will have an interruption in your education - explain
Undergraduateadial1925 - Sep 20, 2013 / Kalyn17992 - Sep 20, 2013
|"Look, it takes videos!" Common App Essay, How YouTube Changed My Life
3 - I really appreciate your comment, thank you very much! I've definitely been working out some of the rougher bits,...
UndergraduateSavannah - Sep 18, 2013 / Savannah - Sep 20, 2013
|Syracuse Supplement: Who is the person you dream of becoming...?
Undergraduatelangeles - Sep 10, 2013 / dumi - Sep 20, 2013
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