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|MUSIC, My escape; NYU Transfer - What Intrigues You?
UndergraduateCherryPac18 - Jan 20, 2013 / CherryPac18 - Mar 23, 2013
|Greater Challenge/ I'm my sister's mother; Transfer Objectives/Extracurricular
4 - I wanted my extracurricular activity/work experience to be personal so that it would come off as something I am...
Undergraduatex6karebear9o - Mar 21, 2013 / x6karebear9o - Mar 23, 2013
|TWITTER's influence on me; NYU/ What Intrigues You? TRANSFER
3 - CherryPac18 hey thanks for the feedback, twitter does not directly have to do with my major, but i...
Undergraduatedubbledee22 - Mar 23, 2013 / dubbledee22 - Mar 23, 2013
|Summer Program Application Essay - why engineering and future goals
3 - Thank you for your kind words and suggestions! Yes, this is for a high school summer program. I will...
Undergraduatejonathanthomas3 - Mar 23, 2013 / jonathanthomas3 - Mar 23, 2013
|Feeling hopeless and scared when no one comes in aid; pivotal moment in my life
Undergraduatew803 - Mar 20, 2013 / dumi - Mar 22, 2013
|'the center for intellectual disabled children' - Volunteer - Short Answer
6 - What is your position on these questions? What class is this for and what are the requirements? Your thesis...
Undergraduatephantuhoang - Jan 13, 2012 / x6karebear9o - Mar 21, 2013
|Culture & Beauty of Portland/ Small Classes; Lewis & Clark Supp- How & Why?
Undergraduatedanimeep - Mar 20, 2013 / danimeep - Mar 21, 2013
|I am cracking my head to figure out what is property and real estate - NUS App
3 - Ever since the meeting, I wondered what is property and real estate wereWhen I referred to my sister,she told...
Undergraduateilovebread - Mar 21, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Mar 21, 2013
|I can easily adapt to a new environment; Transfer College Essay
4 - Looks good, really realistic writing approach and I think that is way better than trying to make it real...
Undergraduatekieuduyen - Mar 18, 2013 / danimeep - Mar 20, 2013
|My Motivation. A Turning Point In My Life; I re-took the course
1 - My Motivation Imagine feeling hopeless and scared and no one would come to your aid. That was I...
Undergraduatexie803 - Mar 18, 2013 / — -
|I am more open to different perspectives ; Ben Franklin movable prompt
3 - Overall, very unique answer, as it speaks of your development and commitment to keep bettering yourself. However, I got...
Undergraduatecrazydinosaur1 - Mar 15, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Mar 18, 2013
|The new world fascinates me up to this day; Summer program
Undergraduatematt112 - Mar 16, 2013 / dumi - Mar 18, 2013
|High Expectations/Countless opportunities; Transfer/What intrigues/Why NYU?
1 - What intrigues you? Tell us about one work of art, scientific achievement, piece of literature, method of communication, or...
Undergraduatex6karebear9o - Mar 17, 2013 / — -
|ACADEMIC EXCELLENCE; Exchange Student to UK Bachelor; U Glasfow (PS)
1 - Hello everybody, I am Julio from Mexico city, I have applied to an exchange program in University of...
Undergraduatesir_julio - Mar 17, 2013 / — -
|George Washington Transfer Application: President in the Making!
3 - Thank you for the quick reply! I appreciate the feedback, especially on the sentence about the deer. It didn't...
Undergraduatedsadakane - Mar 17, 2013 / dsadakane - Mar 17, 2013
|Philippines inspired me to craft my own art; SOP - TRANSFER
3 - "I was born and raised in the Philippines which gave me all the inspiration I need to craft my...
Undergraduatedylanblues - Mar 16, 2013 / nothingto - Mar 17, 2013
|My international experience began at a young age; BA-International Business
4 - I emigrated to Vancouver, Canada where I gained many valuable and essential life experiences.[/quote] Delete the 'many valuable'....
UndergraduateROC1991 - Mar 13, 2013 / klaas - Mar 17, 2013
|I like to help people; Statement of purpose
Undergraduatelabakebaby - Mar 17, 2013 / — -
|Pondering over the career and my aptitude; NUS - computer Engineering
9 - Sorry to be harsh, but I totally agree with admission2012. You come off as a very arrogant person....
Undergraduateiam24 - Mar 15, 2013 / chessman567 - Mar 16, 2013
|"We are going to America"; Quest Bridge C/ Significant Achievement
Undergraduatevynguyengirl - Mar 9, 2013 / dumi - Mar 16, 2013
|EXPRESS MYSELF/OPINIONS ; Benefit from education AUC ?
UndergraduateLobna95 - Mar 9, 2013 / dumi - Mar 16, 2013
|I had no idea what "design" really was! ;Industrial Design Prog-California C of A
3 - i think you article is really well, however ,in my opinion,it maybe better if you add some details of...
Undergraduated4nvu - Mar 14, 2013 / littlekid 986 - Mar 15, 2013
|This passion is still alive in me; TRANSFER of MAJOR (To technology management)
3 - Well.... all what you say here is true. However, I have a concern whether that's going to help...
UndergraduateSnowWolf - Mar 10, 2013 / dumi - Mar 15, 2013
|Educational and Career Goal Essay: What do I have to offer?
2 - You have presented yourself very well with this writing. I enjoyed reading your answer. Overall, it is...
Undergraduatecoljin - Mar 12, 2013 / dumi - Mar 14, 2013
|My maturity was promptly tested at the age of twelve; Autobiographical E/Columbia GS
4 - Much bigger help than my professors! Columbia would be a dream come true, so I can't thank you enough...
Undergraduatex6karebear9o - Mar 13, 2013 / x6karebear9o - Mar 14, 2013
|Nursing/ It has been always a dream; Unique Characteristics/Why UCF?
5 - I really liked some of the little changes you've made, like the one comment about the midwife (It scares...
Undergraduategrena37 - Mar 10, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Mar 14, 2013
|FUTURE OF CHINA'S ECONOMY; TRANSFER
Undergraduatelauman112233 - Mar 1, 2013 / lauman112233 - Mar 14, 2013
|NYU Transfer: Tisch Clive Davis Institute of Recorded Music: Song Review: Jay-z
3 - I really like the tone of this essay - laid back, but knowledgeable. It doesn't read like a meaningless...
UndergraduateCherryPac18 - Mar 12, 2013 / heartitude - Mar 14, 2013
|"To Know" / Common Application / Transfer / Personal Essay
Undergraduateformenthos - Mar 13, 2013 / formenthos - Mar 14, 2013
|Common App Transfer Essay -- Why do I want to change?
2 - I'm nto a grammer man, so I'm not concentrating on that. I'm not sayign there are problems, I'm saying,...
UndergraduateaGale37 - Mar 13, 2013 / formenthos - Mar 13, 2013
|Album Review- There's no formula;NYUTransfer- Tisch Clive Davis Ins of Recorded Music
UndergraduateCherryPac18 - Mar 13, 2013 / CherryPac18 - Mar 13, 2013
|You can expect me to be studying hard in the room; Stanford roommate essay prompt
Undergraduatebman47 - Mar 13, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Mar 13, 2013
|Knowledge, responsibility, respect, passion & a desire makes good Physician Assistant
4 - I can definitely feel the passion you have in your essay because I also want to go into medicine....
UndergraduatePArachel - Mar 11, 2013 / ShieldandSword - Mar 13, 2013
|"To Seek Out: ; Transfer Reasons; Emerson/Common App
Undergraduateformenthos - Mar 12, 2013 / temptprovidence - Mar 13, 2013
|Common App - Short Essay (Yoga)
Undergraduateshelby_l - Sep 15, 2009 / temptprovidence - Mar 13, 2013
|"you can be dumb as rocks, but if you have ambition..." Trasnfer Essay
4 - I loved this essay! mostly because its a bit similar to my story, i think the right corrections have...
Undergraduatebigboost - Mar 12, 2013 / dianallc - Mar 13, 2013
|Thesis statement for the topic - Should students work part time during college days?
4 - In my view, working part time affects negatively on students' academic performance in several ways; Although it is true...
Undergraduateningo - Mar 5, 2013 / dumi - Mar 13, 2013
|The moving image ; Emerson C- What influenced you to select your major?
Undergraduateformenthos - Mar 11, 2013 / formenthos - Mar 12, 2013
|My strong abilities; Kelley School of business Admission Essay
6 - 1. Drop the opening sentence with your name. 2. Drop the sentence with your current school. App materials show...
Undergraduateluky78633 - Mar 2, 2013 / formenthos - Mar 12, 2013
|My primary goal here is an academic one; TRANSFER OBJECTIVES
2 - Generally, this is solid. However, and me being in the same boat as you with the common app's transfer...
Undergraduateneareast - Mar 9, 2013 / formenthos - Mar 12, 2013
|Living with my parents is a life of forced obligations; Transfer Essay; Ben Franklin
3 - Crit review. Don't take it personally, but I want to quickly hit points hard so you can change them....
Undergraduatekimjisa1 - Mar 11, 2013 / formenthos - Mar 12, 2013
|We had a hard life; Cal Summer Experience
UndergraduateKYOAAA - Mar 10, 2013 / KYOAAA - Mar 11, 2013
|Diversity, proper tools, great learning environment;TRANSFER- How IIT will prepare me
6 - now thats perfect i think... not concentrating on mistakes but the material... that was nice revival..!!! :)...
UndergraduateEpsilon - Mar 8, 2013 / temptprovidence - Mar 11, 2013
|I live by the Performance equation rules ; Upenn Suppliment. Life realization.
2 - Ben Franklin rightly said: `human beings are divided into three classes-those that are immovable,those that are movable and those...
Undergraduatebell2132 - Mar 10, 2013 / mussy - Mar 11, 2013
|Tennis powerhouse ; Ivy League material/ Place or Environment
9 - Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content. What do you do or experience there, and why...
Undergraduatelemonboy377 - Mar 9, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Mar 10, 2013
|why do you choose accounting major? (PT Thiess Scolarship)
Undergraduatejulitajulita - Mar 9, 2013 / julitajulita - Mar 10, 2013
|Learning beyond the classroom; U Minnesota-Why live in Dorm?/ Experience
2 - [i]Moreover, being someone who loves to explore other cultures I find it is a privilege to live...
Undergraduatenguyensybach - Mar 9, 2013 / dumi - Mar 9, 2013
|I sought out ways to excel in an Economic academic setting; Why you want to transfer?
Undergraduateadspeeding - Mar 6, 2013 / adspeeding - Mar 8, 2013
|Aye Aye Captain! No GPS or Google Maps! .......Stranded far north of HAWAII!!
Undergraduateislandgrl23 - Mar 8, 2013 / temptprovidence - Mar 8, 2013
|Journey full of obstacles and surprises; TRANSFER-Cornell,U Miami,NYU&American U.
5 - Hi good job. It was very sincere. Perhaps you can make your hook statement more dynamic that acts solely...
Undergraduatearivero1992 - Feb 28, 2013 / islandgrl23 - Mar 8, 2013
|My parents invest all their time, effort for me; GENETICS AND SCIENTIFIC RESEARCH
4 - Good job. Your hook (first sentence) can be improved. Make it more inviting, exciting, alluring, or simply more interesting....
Undergraduatesunset05 - Feb 28, 2013 / islandgrl23 - Mar 8, 2013
|MY ACADEMIC JOURNEY; SOP for UT
5 - I like the dynamics and vivid imagery of your writing but I think it can be improved by making...
UndergraduateMCBacardi - Feb 28, 2013 / islandgrl23 - Mar 8, 2013
|Crazy amounts of Chaos in my homeland -SMDEP ESSAY
3 - Coming from Sudan, what is now called North Sudan, I belong to one of the affluent Sudanese families...
UndergraduateAmjeezy1 - Feb 28, 2013 / dumi - Mar 8, 2013
|I was represening both my beliefs and people; TRANSFER- Letter of Motivation
3 - Well.... I think you need to talk more about your professional goals,both short and long term, the course you...
Undergraduatesomedaysoon - Feb 28, 2013 / dumi - Mar 8, 2013
|Everyone needs a moment of clarification; UT- SOP
4 - It's good if you posted the prompt such as "topic of choice" or "significant achievement" etc.... Then we would...
Undergraduatekillerdestiny - Feb 27, 2013 / dumi - Mar 7, 2013
|I have been interested in computers and other electrical devices;TOPIC OF MY CHOICE
4 - Well... I feel you should be able to fit into this story. Your answer to this prompt needs to...
UndergraduateHockeykid16 - Feb 27, 2013 / dumi - Mar 7, 2013
|Small businesses are the engine of the economy; TRANSFER/CORNEL&UCHICAGO
3 - As a twelve year old Jamaican xxxx resident, I've understood that small businesses make up the engine of...
Undergraduatekabal - Feb 27, 2013 / dumi - Mar 7, 2013
|Issue of importance essay: Dishonesty in Sports!
Undergraduateafflictedfury - Feb 27, 2013 / dumi - Mar 7, 2013
|I have always been besan, a plain Indian flour!; PERSUASIVE ESSAY
Undergraduatehkk24 - Mar 6, 2013 / dumi - Mar 7, 2013
|"Education is a social process; Education is growth" - UT / Personal Essay
4 - This is a well-written essay, but content-wise, I have some issues with it. A. The prompt says "Choose...
UndergraduateMCBacardi - Feb 28, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Mar 5, 2013
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