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|A troubled teenager; Person who had an impact on my life
5 - I don't think your essay will be checked unless some red flags pop up. If your story matches your...
UndergraduateLmcv05 - Mar 2, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Apr 7, 2013
|It is hard to find good loyal people this day and age in society;1000words on loyalty
3 - There is enough more evidence that speaks of declining trend of peoples' loyalty today .... I...
Undergraduatej2k420 - Apr 2, 2013 / dumi - Apr 6, 2013
|I was enrolled in cyber school; STUDY IN JAPAN/ Adaptive person
3 - ... need to improve its presentation; I used to travel around the world with my family from a...
Undergraduatelcape97914 - Apr 2, 2013 / dumi - Apr 6, 2013
|I realize the importance of education; "Why I Want to Go To College"
2 - Even from a young age I always realized the importance of education and valued it very high. I...
UndergraduateEnjoi_Skating - Apr 5, 2013 / dumi - Apr 6, 2013
|Perfect opportunity; Motivation letter for student exchange program
3 - Honestly, saying that you want to use a college's money to learn another language is not a very good...
Undergraduateaida_1604 - Apr 3, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Apr 3, 2013
|Turning point of my life began with my interest in Journalism U of A PS
5 - Hi again. I finished typing up a version of my personal statement and I'd like to get feedback on...
Undergraduatejlion234 - Mar 11, 2013 / jlion234 - Apr 3, 2013
|"You need to do it", said my academic advisor; Overcoming a recent academic challenge
3 - Dear juangar1992, I think it is a well written piece. However the dialogue seems a little out of place...
Undergraduatejuangar1992 - Apr 1, 2013 / Lmcv05 - Apr 2, 2013
|Stay Active Leadership Experience- College Essay for OU
2 - First, it would have been much better if you posted your prompt also with the essay. We could then...
UndergraduateZahra567 - Mar 30, 2013 / dumi - Apr 2, 2013
|"Your son is now in academic probation"/ Goals - Influence from Hispanic Heritage
Undergraduatejuangar1992 - Apr 1, 2013 / dumi - Apr 2, 2013
|I will grow, learn, and become successful; Transfer- Why Connecticut College?
3 - 4. Additionally, though the opportunity to connect with my peers is important to me, having a unique bond with...
UndergraduateChichoTran - Apr 1, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Apr 1, 2013
|My mom & dad made me who I'm today! / influential person in my life
4 - One suggestion I would say is to sub the word 'mom' for other pronouns. We are aware that you're...
Undergraduatesakun - Mar 24, 2013 / ChichoTran - Apr 1, 2013
|I spent four years working with John Smth ;Boulder/Influential people in my life.
Undergraduateavail6 - Apr 1, 2013 / ChichoTran - Apr 1, 2013
|"I find truth in those wise words of Napoleon"; SOP Civil Engineering in Australia
5 - brother your suggestions were very much helpful, thank for the reply and a night before I was thinking the...
UndergraduateAmir Moavia - Mar 29, 2013 / Amir Moavia - Apr 1, 2013
|My family moved a lot around the country ; Education Interruption
UndergraduateiShinta - Apr 1, 2013 / — -
|The road leading to a goal does not separate you from the destination; Common App
Undergraduatehussain567 - Mar 31, 2013 / sachin0312 - Apr 1, 2013
|Ignored my gut instincts; Readmission essay/low grades&wrong major
Undergraduatehthiara - Mar 31, 2013 / cblove9632 - Mar 31, 2013
|Focus on creating the well-rounded entrepreneur :Why Clive Davis I of Recorded Music?
UndergraduateCherryPac18 - Mar 28, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Mar 31, 2013
|Everyone has their expectations,hopes & fears about their senior year of high school!
NEW - Everyone has their own expectations, hopes, and fears about their senior year of high school. Even though I had...
Undergraduatemeep101 - Mar 30, 2013 / — -
|I'd like to become a Performer Entrepreneur; NYU/Statement of Intent
UndergraduateCherryPac18 - Mar 27, 2013 / chessman567 - Mar 30, 2013
|Road to success; "How can you benefit from the education at AUC?"
Undergraduatezooma - Mar 29, 2013 / zooma - Mar 30, 2013
|Answeres for Common App prompts- KU International Summer Campus
3 - That can be one factor that influenced your decision, if you phrase it correctly (emphasizing that you know there...
Undergraduateryoga - Mar 29, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Mar 29, 2013
|How do you get the hang of Thursdays? UofM LSA Honors
Undergraduatehlee106 - Mar 29, 2013 / chessman567 - Mar 29, 2013
|I believe in people, society and their culture; University of Colorado Boulder
Undergraduatesuzu - Mar 24, 2013 / dumi - Mar 29, 2013
|People say that I am absolutely ambitious and they may be right; Application
UndergraduateReka16 - Mar 25, 2013 / rhj - Mar 29, 2013
|I see trends and I see fads; Questbridge Common App
Undergraduateyebin96 - Mar 28, 2013 / Guest - Mar 28, 2013
|I was granted a scholarship for Eur 2000; My glion application
4 - I believe in a value system that respects others, possesses good work ethics and positive behaviors. As an...
UndergraduateOliviast - Mar 25, 2013 / dumi - Mar 28, 2013
|Volunteeriing in FIRST Robotics/WHY YOU HAVE CHOSEN TO VOLUNTEER YOUR TIME?
3 - Do you want to tell the oraginaztion your passion in the volunteer work? You should not just say you...
Undergraduatefsolano94 - Mar 23, 2013 / KYOAAA - Mar 27, 2013
|Personal Statement for Homeland Security Graduate School; I never desired to have such career
3 - Thanks sooo much Didgeridoo!! I just needed that ounce of confirmation before submitting and the grammatical corrections....
UndergraduateMelk87 - Mar 27, 2013 / Melk87 - Mar 27, 2013
|When I envision my future, I see Lifelong Learning -Transfer Objectives
UndergraduateARosecamp - Mar 26, 2013 / temptprovidence - Mar 27, 2013
|My wildest dream; New York Film Academy/ narrative statement
NEW - Hello, I am applying for a film school (New York Film Academy) and one of the requirements is to...
UndergraduateOlacha - Mar 27, 2013 / — -
|I have become 'fan' of something ;NYU Supplement - Campus Choice/Short-Answer Essays
NEW - Hi everyone! I'm applying to NYU as a transfer student, and was wondering if anyone would be kind...
Undergraduateblueeskyy - Mar 26, 2013 / — -
|Skidmore cares for its students; Transfer-Skidmore/ Academic+Personal Goals
6 - dumi She's probably referring to the academic major she will pursue a degree for in college. Maybe "studying...
Undergraduatedanimeep - Mar 19, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Mar 26, 2013
|Set Your Arms Down; NYU Dramatic Writing Portfolio
6 - Thank you! I'll definitely read Dante's Inferno, I've been meaning to for a while now. And yeah I had...
Undergraduateskipperdee - Mar 24, 2013 / skipperdee - Mar 25, 2013
|I'm a DREMER; Characteristics or perspectives I possess that make me unique
Undergraduatekassiag - Mar 25, 2013 / iluvchocalate13 - Mar 25, 2013
|Temple University transfer essay? 10 year reunion?
Undergraduatetsalehx3 - Mar 24, 2013 / tsalehx3 - Mar 24, 2013
|Music has always been important in my family; NYU Transfer: Academic Interests
UndergraduateCherryPac18 - Mar 13, 2013 / CherryPac18 - Mar 24, 2013
|"No one can take your education away from you"; NYU/Transfer/ Reasons &Objectives
UndergraduateCoraMan - Mar 24, 2013 / — -
|What characteristics or perspectives do you possess that make you unique?
2 - From my interpretation, your essay does not actually answer the question of how you are unique. This reads to...
Undergraduatekassiag - Mar 24, 2013 / cblove9632 - Mar 24, 2013
|Accounting is part of human's everyday life; Masters-Personal Statement
11 - @morenikky1: really thank you again for taking your time to help with my personal statement..means a lot....
Undergraduatedosolearner - Mar 14, 2013 / dosolearner - Mar 24, 2013
|Radiography program application essay question
2 - I guess you could be more especific, develop more the answers, more reasons of why do you want to...
Undergraduatemeiko23 - Mar 24, 2013 / kassiag - Mar 24, 2013
|I am in combat. The enemy is stealthy, fast, and skilled; College App
6 - Thank you :) My common app essay was actually on something else; this essay was an extra one I...
Undergraduatehkk24 - Mar 7, 2013 / hkk24 - Mar 24, 2013
|My team was posted to a day care during a youth rally; Extracurricular activities
Undergraduatehexxcoat - Mar 13, 2013 / dumi - Mar 23, 2013
|School influenced change of my own interests; NYU TRANSFER
2 - two subjects with which I have experience and though they are somewhat similar, they are entirely different from a...
UndergraduateCherryPac18 - Mar 23, 2013 / fsolano94 - Mar 23, 2013
|MUSIC, My escape; NYU Transfer - What Intrigues You?
UndergraduateCherryPac18 - Jan 20, 2013 / CherryPac18 - Mar 23, 2013
|Greater Challenge/ I'm my sister's mother; Transfer Objectives/Extracurricular
4 - I wanted my extracurricular activity/work experience to be personal so that it would come off as something I am...
Undergraduatex6karebear9o - Mar 21, 2013 / x6karebear9o - Mar 23, 2013
|TWITTER's influence on me; NYU/ What Intrigues You? TRANSFER
3 - CherryPac18 hey thanks for the feedback, twitter does not directly have to do with my major, but i...
Undergraduatedubbledee22 - Mar 23, 2013 / dubbledee22 - Mar 23, 2013
|Summer Program Application Essay - why engineering and future goals
3 - Thank you for your kind words and suggestions! Yes, this is for a high school summer program. I will...
Undergraduatejonathanthomas3 - Mar 23, 2013 / jonathanthomas3 - Mar 23, 2013
|Feeling hopeless and scared when no one comes in aid; pivotal moment in my life
Undergraduatew803 - Mar 20, 2013 / dumi - Mar 22, 2013
|'the center for intellectual disabled children' - Volunteer - Short Answer
6 - What is your position on these questions? What class is this for and what are the requirements? Your thesis...
Undergraduatephantuhoang - Jan 13, 2012 / x6karebear9o - Mar 21, 2013
|Culture & Beauty of Portland/ Small Classes; Lewis & Clark Supp- How & Why?
Undergraduatedanimeep - Mar 20, 2013 / danimeep - Mar 21, 2013
|I am cracking my head to figure out what is property and real estate - NUS App
3 - Ever since the meeting, I wondered what is property and real estate wereWhen I referred to my sister,she told...
Undergraduateilovebread - Mar 21, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Mar 21, 2013
|I can easily adapt to a new environment; Transfer College Essay
4 - Looks good, really realistic writing approach and I think that is way better than trying to make it real...
Undergraduatekieuduyen - Mar 18, 2013 / danimeep - Mar 20, 2013
|My Motivation. A Turning Point In My Life; I re-took the course
NEW - My Motivation Imagine feeling hopeless and scared and no one would come to your aid. That was I...
Undergraduatexie803 - Mar 18, 2013 / — -
|I am more open to different perspectives ; Ben Franklin movable prompt
3 - Overall, very unique answer, as it speaks of your development and commitment to keep bettering yourself. However, I got...
Undergraduatecrazydinosaur1 - Mar 15, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Mar 18, 2013
|The new world fascinates me up to this day; Summer program
Undergraduatematt112 - Mar 16, 2013 / dumi - Mar 18, 2013
|High Expectations/Countless opportunities; Transfer/What intrigues/Why NYU?
NEW - What intrigues you? Tell us about one work of art, scientific achievement, piece of literature, method of communication, or...
Undergraduatex6karebear9o - Mar 17, 2013 / — -
|ACADEMIC EXCELLENCE; Exchange Student to UK Bachelor; U Glasfow (PS)
NEW - Hello everybody, I am Julio from Mexico city, I have applied to an exchange program in University of...
Undergraduatesir_julio - Mar 17, 2013 / — -
|George Washington Transfer Application: President in the Making!
3 - Thank you for the quick reply! I appreciate the feedback, especially on the sentence about the deer. It didn't...
Undergraduatedsadakane - Mar 17, 2013 / dsadakane - Mar 17, 2013
|Philippines inspired me to craft my own art; SOP - TRANSFER
3 - "I was born and raised in the Philippines which gave me all the inspiration I need to craft my...
Undergraduatedylanblues - Mar 16, 2013 / nothingto - Mar 17, 2013
|My international experience began at a young age; BA-International Business
4 - I emigrated to Vancouver, Canada where I gained many valuable and essential life experiences.[/quote] Delete the 'many valuable'....
UndergraduateROC1991 - Mar 13, 2013 / klaas - Mar 17, 2013
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