Growing up as a child
This is redundant. You can have "growing up" or "as a child," but not both.
No need for commas here, but use "are"
My experiences and the feeling I got from the movies are
is the
reasons I'm perusing a career in animation.
My goal is to attend the Savannah School of Art and Design and
earning earn a degree in animation.
... cartoon that makes a child
feel how I felt watching animated shows and movies.
Additionally, there is an
Plus a awesome animation department that has all the latest programs and teachers ...
:-)