I'll help with the grammar in parts of your essay.Dreaming my future as an engineer who can able to change the world into better places, I've always tried to do my best in order to achieve this goal.
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able to change the world into
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Process to become an engineer may put me into a challenge, but I believe that preparing to face those obstacles by taking rigorous classes and involving myself in various extracurricular activities such as leadership academy can make me to overcome them, which will allow me to succeed in college and become a successful engineer.
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may put me into a challengewill be challenging , but I believe that
I will be prepared, having takenpreparing to face those obstacles by taking rigorous classes and
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can make me to overcome them, which will allow me to succeed in college and become a successful engineer .
In an academic side, I have mostly taken Pre-AP and AP classes, received a solid GPA, and maintained a high class rank throughout the high school to show myself that I can able to manage the college courses well.
In an academic side, I have mostly taken Pre-AP and AP classes, received a solid GPA, and maintained a high class rank throughout
the high school
, all factors that showto show myself that I
canwill be able to manage
the college courses well.
Taking challenging classes, such as AP Psychology, AP language, and AP physics always made me to spend more time to study for a deeper understanding, but I had a good chance to experience and prepare for the level of difficulties in college courses.
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to study for a deeper understandingstudying than the average high school student,; this providedbut I had a good chance togood experience
and prepare for the level of difficulties infor what to expect from college courses.
My love in physics and calculus allowed me to differentiate from other students.
My love
inof physics and calculus
allowed me to differentiatedifferentiated me from other students.
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