Can anyone help! Im writing my statement of pupose for SCAD. Maximum 500 words! I have a good start but i need help!!
The statment of purpose shoud be no more the 500 words and should give an overview of the applicant's academic and personal experience, describing peperation for and commitment to further study at SCAD, as well as eductional and professional goals and aspirations.
I could never fathom why, at the tender age of seven, I was fascinated - mesmerized even - by the built atmosphere. I would wander the streets of my neighbourhood, transfixed by the rainbow hues, marvel at the varied roof pitches, the plethora of windows, the cluster of greenery that scattered the front yard; all the while imagining what transpired beyond the welcoming front door. I would conjure stories of the families that lived there, ponder on their daily activities and question whether or not their beautiful houses functioned to their needs, and if not, how can I change that? Little did I know that, at the tender age of seven, I was a budding Architect.
During high school, though my academics focused on Sciences, my passion for Architecture never dwindled. As such, after Secondary school I pursued courses including Caribbean Examination Council's Technical Drawing, Autodesk Authorized AutoCAD 2008 Levels One to Three along with AutoCAD Architectural Desktop 2008. These certifications allowed me to secure an Architectural Technician position at MoCAD Limited - a premier Architectural firm that specializes in high-end residential homes, small commercial buildings and renovations. MoCAD has provided me with gainful hands on experience in all areas of design and construction. Being able to closely interact with clients, collaborate with suppliers and contractors and experiment with design are just some of the advantages afforded to me. Additionally working in cohesion with the Interior Design department truly depicts what an integral role Interior Design plays in the Architectural process. Hence I have also heavily sponged from the creativity, pizzazz and exploration alive in this medium of design.
I have also learnt a great deal from various other activities. As a music lover, I am a member and Tenor Section Leader of Southern Marines Steelband Foundation. Being actively involved with the national instrument has taught me discipline, diligence and the importance of proper preparation. Over the last twelve years, my position in the club has also presented multiple opportunities of both leadership and team work. The celebration of success, endurance in the face of failure, the pride and confidence of always putting your best foot forward are values embedded into any Southern Marine's player. Resultantly, l have taken all these lessons and channeled them into my true devotion: Architecture.
I read somewhere that Architecture only occurs when function marries beauty, for a beautiful piece that is poorly designed and ergonomically impaired is but simply visual art. Architecture considers certain aspects: uses and practicality, efficiency, affordability and durability, all without sacrificing visual appeal. An Architect's purpose is to find the balance in these aspects and harvest it into design. I want to pursue a Bachelor of Fine Arts Degree in Architecture, specifically at Savannah College of Art and Design, because I believe it is the perfect institution to teach me how to maintain the balance required for becoming a renowned architect. Savannah not only provides its students with a strong design foundation but also possesses an environment tailored for the creative mind. Being a specialized university students are centered on design in an innovative, technologically advanced, non-conforming fashion. Furthermore, through research, I am aware that the Architectural faculty comprises of individuals that are practical contributors to the field which is a paramount incentive for any aspiring student.
Conclusively, it is my greatest passion to become an architect - to practice what I have fantasized about since childhood - and Savannah College of Art and Design is the vehicle through which my dreams shall become reality.
Dimoaya,
Nice work. I would however caution that you reread the prompt:
"The statment of purpose shoud be no more the 500 words and should give an overview of the applicant's academic and personal experience, describing preperation for and commitment to further study at SCAD, as well as eductional and professional goals and aspirations."
This prompt is pretty explicit about asking you to show concrete background and direction: arch. classes you may have taken or related subject matter, experiences outside the classroom, your specific goals within the architectural field, etc. The want applicants that are focused and show a true commitment to the rigor of the architectural path.
I think you need to work on developing answers to these questions to ensure that you fully address the prompt. I love the personal quality of the essay, and your flair for description, but unfortunately this essay presents some additional constraints
On a minor note, be careful with spelling--their vs there (spellcheck won't catch that!) and plethora, not plethera.
Best of luck!
Cheers,
Janson
Thanks alot Jansen
I did read the prompt, what I am stuck on is how to reintroduce my experiences or how to further answer the question.
I have the answers to the questions but I have I don't know how to flow from where I am to where I want to go. I think I have to add a couple paragrahs before the second paragrah, outlining my experiences and skills.
However when I am finished with the essay I will resubmit it and will really appreciate further critique
Thanks alot for the spell corrections
Sounds good. Think about this is a potential structure:
Intro (keep your current intro--perhaps eliminate the last sentence for the sake of concision and because it is rather obvious/formulaic). Keep it crisp.
Body-academic/personal experience/goals (probably best to keep this 1 paragraph since the word limitation is just 500 words). This is the 'core' of your essay and should be the longest paragraph.
Conclusion (streamline your current 2nd and 3rd paragraph to create your conclusion--keep the idea about function marrying beauty and how Savannah will help you find the balance). Keep it crisp.
Hope this helps.
Cheers,
Janson
