Life is full of difficulties and just approaching it, is consider an
achievement.
--> I don't really get this sentence...
difficulties encounter through the process.
--> difficulties
encountered through the process.
English your second language?
wait, what is the prompt?
-You have a lot of tell, and not enough show. You know what I mean?
-I understand the stress and what not you are going through, being a senior myself and applying to colleges, but because of that reason, I feel like you should choose a different topic. Every undergraduate applying for this college is going through the same thing... I don't know if I'm "right" so can someone (essay forumers) help me on this?
-So, this essay doesn't really set you apart (make you unique) from other individuals...
-I hope i don't sound too rude or mean. I just want to help : )
Good Luck!