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animals, artwork, sciences - present yourself to the Committee on Admissions


sad_an6el 5 / 9  
Aug 18, 2009   #1
Seriously, I've come to a point where I pretty much have said what I thought needed to be said about me in the primary application and other questions. So guys out there reading this, feel free to laugh at what I'm about to answer. Help, I'm so out of ideas.

3. If you could present yourself to the Committee on Admissions, what would you want to make sure they knew about you? (1900 characters)

First, I am great with animals and have a history of pets such as white mice, hamsters, budgerigar, ferret, monkey, iguana, chicken, tortoise and many more. I grew up recruiting stray dogs in Asia prior to breeding my own dogs. From picking out ticks, clipping nail and ear cleaning, to nutrition, birth and microchipping-I acquired these transferable skills from my personal hands-on experience. I have also been told to be a great dog trainer.

Secondly, I am actually really good with my hands, and have produced some incredible artwork one can find at my house and on the walls of my friends' and family's homes. In my spare time, I like to spend quality time painting on my canvas or making wooden scultptures. Maybe it is also due of this artistic flair that I got involved with some student film projects and had te opportunity to act in theatres. Through my connection and network with colleagues, I recently hosted a diversity women's talk show that will be broadcast in India and in the States. And maybe I've even took my artistic talent to a different level by procuring a part-time job as an independent logo-designer; I collaborate projects directly with clients and conduct interactive workshops on the branding and color-playing to suit individual field of work.

Finally, I wish to let the Committee know that I feel that my MCAT score does not reflect my understanding of the basic sciences, my command of English language or the full potential of my scholastic and personal accomplishments as demonstrated by my solid undergraduate grades. Perhaps the test's format and time constraint made it difficult to demonstrate my knowledge in the subjects. But I can overcome this in time. My strength lies in my tenacity; I repeated the MCAT and improved my score.
Llamapoop123 7 / 442  
Aug 18, 2009   #2
First, I am great with animals and have a history of pets such as white mice, hamsters, budgerigar, ferret, monkey, iguana, chicken, tortoise and many more.

Plural and singular agreement issues.

I grew up recruiting stray dogs in Asia prior to breeding my own dogs.

You "recruited" dogs?

The question asks for what you would want admissions to know about you. Why would you want them to know that you have owned many pets? Unless you want to become a vet or something.

Your supposed to be selling yourself.

Finally, I wish to let the Committee know that I feel that my MCAT score does not reflect my understanding of the basic sciences, my command of English language or the full potential of my scholastic and personal accomplishments as demonstrated by my solid undergraduate grades.

Does this mean that your MCAT score is surprisingly low? Don't try to explain your scores away.

Perhaps the test's format and time constraint made it difficult to demonstrate my knowledge in the subjects.

Please don't question the test.

My strength lies in my tenacity; I repeated the MCAT and improved my score.

They know.
EF_Simone 2 / 1,986  
Aug 18, 2009   #3
I have also been said to be a great dog trainer.

I grew up rescuing stray dogs in Asia


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