kra 1 / - Sep 17, 2011 #1Anna hazare...someone who needs no description.A mild-mannered person who has sieged delhi,not for wrong purposes but for a correct reason.He is government's nemesis.Joined army in 1963,but he was so influenced by swami vivekanand's thoughts that he left army and stood for the country's betterment in 1991. The crusade which he have developed,should have been developed years back.If that would have been developed long back,such a face of corruption would have never come up in front of mankind.The unprecedented support which the country people have given truely shows that the country was fed up by corruption."CORRUPTION FREE INDIA IS OUR BIRTHRIGHT AND WE MUST STRIVE FOR IT".Thank you
EF_Susan - / 2,364 12 Sep 18, 2011 #2Anna H azare...someone who needs no description. ---Don't forget to leave a space between your sentences!---Also, he might need a description because not everyone has heard of him!A mild-mannered person who has sieged delhi, ---This would sound better if you say he was an Indian social activist.He is the government's nemesis. He joined the army in 1963, but---Also, always leave a space between any punctuation mark and your next word.The crusade which he had developed,(using nonviolent methods, in the style of Ghandi) should have been developed years ago.If that would have been developed long back, s uch a face of corruption would have never come up in front of mankind.The unprecedented support which the country people gave him, truly shows that the country was fed up with corruption.He is a very interesting man. I just read about him in Wikipedia, and am disappointed in myself for not knowing of him already. Good luck with school and have fun!:)
