can anyone read over application (just some sections)
and tell me if there is grammar problems or any other problems? please//
*I need some help on the Activities & Awards
Artisan Club : I produce animated movie in this club. I am in charge of producing and editing photoshop work.
Asian Pacific Club : Asian Pacific Club secretary. I take care of all the paper work, make a plan for a meeting and club activities.
Cross Country Team: Girls' junior varsity team
Track Team :Girls' varstiy team long distance runner
Marian Medical Center: I organized and delivered medical supplies, and took care of all inventories at the center.
*Personal statement #3-Additional Comments
(Unless you were directed earlier in the application to clarify or expand on other information (e.g., to list additional names, explain citizenship/visa issues, discuss reasons for applying to EOP, etc.), this section is optional. If you wish, you may use this space to tell us anything else you want us to know about you or your academic record that you have not had the opportunity to describe elsewhere in the application. )
I took Honors Geometry class in my sophomore year. I could not take AP U.S.Government class because it was canceled. I was not eligible to keep volunteering in Marian Medical Center because I did not have social security number.
I am not sure what i should write on the 3rd personal statement.
please anyone help me//