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Autobiography for Feng Chia University (Technology Pre-Major Program)



Sstriaa 1 / -  
Apr 9, 2026   #1
This is my first time writing an Autobiography. Is this good enough?

My name is X. I am the eldest of four siblings and the only son in my family. Growing up as the son of a ship mechanic, I was fascinated by how complex parts work together to move a massive vessel. This curiosity naturally evolved into a passion for "digital engines" software. My supportive parents taught me that while we live simply, education is the bridge to a better future.

My journey was not without challenges. In my early years, I was overly relaxed about my studies. However, the transition to Vocational High School (SMK) became my turning point. I realized that as the eldest son, I carry a responsibility. I began practicing self-discipline, not only in my studies of Software Engineering but also through physical training at the gym. This lifestyle shift taught me that consistency is the key to overcoming any "bug" in life.

My passion for technology led me to an internship at an international app studio during my second year of vocational school. Handling professional projects like Blossom Edugroup, I learned to bridge the gap between developer logic and user needs while sharpening my debugging skills. I then applied these industry-standard practices to my final year project, where I developed a student certificate management website. This project, which converted achievements into points, became my proudest achievement as it combined my technical skills with a solution for my school community. These experiences have firmly confirmed my goal: to major in Information Engineering and Computer Science.

I am specifically drawn to the 1+3 Pre-Major Program (PMP) at Feng Chia University. Taiwan's reputation as a global technology hub, combined with Feng Chia's focus on practical, real-world applications, makes it the ideal place for me. The preparatory year will allow me to master the language, ensuring I can integrate fully into the academic community.

As a student, I will contribute my resilience and my experience in international collaboration. Having worked with a team across Bali and Singapore, I am adept at communicating in diverse environments. My goal is to use the expertise I gain at Feng Chia to create innovative tech solutions that empower others, ultimately achieving financial independence to support my family.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 16091  
Apr 10, 2026   #2
When you introduce your family, try to say a few things about both your parents. What did your mother do for a living? Did she influence you in any way? It is important to represent the influence of both your parents in the autobiography because you are representative of the sum of both your parents.

I am unclear about the connection between your exposure to the work of your father as a ship mechanic and your interest in digital engines software. I believe that should be made a separate paragraph ang given more of a developmental explanation for your reader to better understand what you mean.

When you speak of your studies and how you were a relaxed student, you should discuss how this attitude led to the challenges that you faced as a student at that time. What responsibility did you come to understand that you carry and why?

Why did you have to develop a solution for your school community? State the problem that you needed to resolve of accidentally solved through your project.

The essay draft is good, but has room for improvement. My observations above should help you develop a far more informative and interesting essay for your personal biography statement. I look forward to reading the improvements you will be making on this piece.


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