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'from baseball to the stock market' - Stanford Roommate


mcubeaus 1 / 1  
Nov 1, 2011   #1
Stanford Roommate Essay
"Help your roommate - and us - get to know you better"

Hey man! How's it going? Let me tell you a little bit about me. I'm the kid who doesn't really fit a high school stereotype, the kid stuck on the fence between two disparate labels. I'm equal parts incorrigible nerd and sports-crazed jock. ScienceDaily and ESPN.com compete on a daily basis for my free time, and I honestly could not tell you if I'd rather be trying a new formula derivation or playing touch football. A war between these two sides of my personality raged for much of my younger life. My family often jokes that I knew one thing when I was a little kid: sports. Even before I knew what the words meant, or even how to pronounce them, I was memorizing and spewing statistics all day. "Did you see Sammy Sosa last night? 6 Ribbies (RBI's)! 6!" My dad's favorite story goes that my uncle once asked him who the new Texas football coach was, and my dad totally blanked on the name. Little 3-year old me nonchalantly piped in from across the room, "Come on Dad, it's Mack Brown!" But once I started school, sports had some serious competition: good old mathematics. I love math. I really do. Math started taking some time away from sports and my vast statistics knowledge took a big hit when I started devoting brainpower to multiplication tables, squares, cubes, roots, you name it. And when I figured out the breadth of math's applications, especially in sports, free time started disappearing fast. My parents often find me downstairs late into the night writing predictive algorithms for everything from baseball to the stock market.

I have about 500 characters left and i'm stuck on how to finish it. Any suggestions/criticisms are welcome! Thanks yall!
lisa6394 4 / 7  
Nov 1, 2011   #2
Wow. This is really good!! It has nice flow and transitions to it. Maybe some stuff about what you will do in college. I really like this site if you need any more help.

wiselikeus.com/collegewise/2009/11/stanford-university.html
paintchip 1 / 2  
Nov 2, 2011   #3
Very good start, but math and sports probably isn't all that you do. Let your new room-mate know how you actually spend your time. Do you play any video games and if so which ones? Do you like to spend any time watching T.V.? Which shows do you like to watch and why? Are you part of any club or do you plan to be in the future? Are you a night or a morning person? Are you a neat freak or more relaxed? Those are just a few suggestions, I don't actually know how you spend your time. I just think it might be useful for a potential room-mate to know what you are going to be doing while living in the same dorm room. I hope this helped.


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