I generally disagree with the type of tertiary education available in my homeland Austria. Though I appreciate its availability for no charge, I long after an education that truly satisfies my mind and strengthens me as an individual rather than to serve the sole purpose to get me a well paid job.
I am not in favor of the approach of tertiary education in my homeland, Austria. I appreciate its free of charge availability, however, I find it fails to truly satisfy my mind and strengthens me as an individual rather than to serve the sole purpose to get me a well paid job.I generally disagree with the type of tertiary education available in my homeland Austria. Though I appreciate its availability for no charge, I long after an education that truly satisfies my mind and strengthens me as an individual rather than to serve the sole purpose to get me a well paid job. I don't want to push myself through college only to obtain a degree for which I have little to no passion; that is not my definition of success.
Ok... if you claim that you are not happy about Austrian education system, then you need to tell them why it is so. You do not justify that claim adequately. Tell how it fails to satisfy your mind and individual aspirations. More than everything, you need to tell them what features would satisfy you and what are your aspirations in terms of education . And then whether you would find those things in Bates.
I feel you better re-organize the flow - First tell them what you seek in tertiary education and then tell the rest.