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I can become a convenient change maker, altering the issues and the approaches to them.


sa1na 9 / 72 19  
Oct 13, 2014   #1
As a Changemaker Campus, USD promotes entrepreneurship, collaboration, and innovation for positive social change. Briefly describe how your past activities or work experiences will enhance our community.

The past years have been a perfect experience for me, me always seeking for opportunities to help the society and people, especially the needy ones, and therefore the exhaustive enhancement of my skills. The experience of being a volunteer member of the Child Labor NGO and Organ Donation Organization helped me ascertain how to always believe in the existence of a solution for the challenging problems. It also thought me the fact that if one sincerely cares about an issue, they are the one responsible for finding a way of getting involved in it; no one is going to invite others to be a change maker. This belief which has been growing stronger in me would cause me to be one of the optimistic ones, always trying to find a solution for whatever even if seeming impractical.

Moreover, by the virtue of being a programming teacher assistant, my knowledge and skills were outstandingly improved both in programming field and acting as a teacher. Not all people can be a conventional teacher, abstractly influencing the students and also helping them learn something handy for the rest of their life. I can use these skills helping people in the fields I have even a slightest knowledge in, and I could be a great tutor for any student having difficulty solving a problem since my talent in teaching has been proved to me.

Besides, Participating in global, international activities such as in International Research School Projects and Debates with different countries intensified my understanding of global-social issues. Furthermore, my capacities in communicating with divergent people were improved breathtakingly. I learned that not that much dissimilar are the issues people all around the world are concerned of, and that we should all cooperate if we are really seeking for a result. I can use these experiences to be an extraordinary sociable person, trying to gather all the people, no matter from what nationality. Furthermore, by the virtue of my high-understanding about global-social issues, I would be a great supporter of all the social groups trying to find a solution decreasing these problems' degree of damage.

With all these skills, I strongly believe that I can become a convenient change maker, altering the issues and the approaches to them.
vangiespen - / 4,134 1449  
Oct 14, 2014   #2
Sa1na, you have presented very interesting activities that are sure to interest the admissions officer to learn more about you. The activities show that you are a social person who thrives on interacting with other people and helping them whenever you can. These are all good traits. Unfortunately, you failed to properly connect it with the desire of Changemaker campus to learn about how these activities can help you bond with their student community should you be granted a student slot in the next term.

Rather than talking about your past interactions with various people, you should have your statement look towards the future. Find out what you can about the Changemaker campus and revise the essay to reflect an integration of who you are with the social expectations of the university and its student community. That way you will be able to show how you will effect change within the student community. That is what the university wants to learn about and that is what you should be telling them about.
OP sa1na 9 / 72 19  
Oct 14, 2014   #3
I tried to add the advantages of my experiences to my writing.


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