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"Behind the Camera, Behind a laptop" - Extracurricular Activity Essay


classof18 1 / 2  
Dec 30, 2013   #1
Hi! I'd really appreciate it if you gave some feedback to the first draft of my extracurricular activities essay :) Duke & Stanford both need this. Thanks!

As Media Coordinator, you'd find me in these two places: behind the camera or behind a laptop.

Behind the camera, it's all about planning and flexibility. I have to be on the lookout for specific shots that I want to capture and make the most out of that single moment (experience, or event). At times I failed to capture some shots, and that's when I learned to make the most of what I had.

Behind the laptop, I have the freedom to create. As I string together clips of my youth group at a Habitat for Humanity worksite, I realize that my role is never a bore because of the different activities, events, and places. Whether or not the video effectively communicates and leaves an impression is all in my control. After a long night of editing, my creative person is satisfied by the applaud of the audience.
enique94 1 / 4  
Dec 30, 2013   #2
It sounds as if you are on your way! The only my only suggestion work on keeping everything in the present tense( this makes it sound more exciting).

Example:
At times I failed to capture some shots, and that's when I learned to make the most of what I had.

Times when I fail to capture some shots is when I learn to make the most of what I have.

Its not a very easy thing to do, I even struggle with it in my essays.

I hope this helps and Good LUCK!


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