This is an excerpt from an application essay that I am currently writing. I would like insight as to what I need to do because it just seems like a huge mess. I want to include all of this information because I want to not only say that I focused my classes but how I focused them as proof if that makes sense. Please help me to better use this information! Thank you very much!
I began to focus and build my coursework with classes to reflect how serious I am about a career in fashion business by selecting classes such as computer applications and digital communications for building strong computer skills, psychology and sociology so that I better understand the behavior of consumers, AP literature for proving that I can push myself hard and handle such a difficult course, accounting and banking for a better understanding of budgets and money not to mention the information was very insightful for everyday use, and statistics for a lead in to the FIT curriculum although I had already fulfilled all of my math credits in spite of this class. In addition to these, I opened my schedule up for two Virtual Arkansas college classes to further my education. These online classes were fashion merchandising and marketing which were both incredibly insightful and helped to seal my future goal of being in fashion merchandising.