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'Born and raised in the U.A.E' - me, myself and i english course


faridcool 1 / -  
Mar 27, 2012   #1
My name is Farid I was born on September 29th 1996 in U.A.E I was also raised in the U.A.E I only have one sibling who is my brother I grew up healthy I didn't have any allergies or sick which made me do some sports until I started playing football in parks by the time I was 9 I was enrolled in a football club which at the time the brazilin footballers motivated me to do I was happy to complete a year because I was ended up being paid 200 aed which made me want to stay for another year.

1 year later I stopped playing football for a while because of my grades were starting to fall so I had to stay at home while staying at home I had to study when I had nothing to either played video games which was good because it made me more socialized because everyone loves games or watched movie , i started watching movies constantly I started auto biography movies because it was realistic and based on true after watching movies for a while I wanted to make movies or commercial for living I felt it has a great atmosphere my parents also thought that movies improved my vocabulary in English for my age but as I grew older I became more realistic about the jobs but never ruled out that one day I will work for commercial and advertising .

In my life I went to 3 different schools the first school was Doha private school It was an Arabic school in Sharjah they also thought me English when I was in the 3rd grade I went al kamal private school an American school with Arab teacher the first year was great but the school got worser every year by the time I was 13 my parents decided to change my school and come to an English because universities preferred it when I entered Sheffield private school I found everything was different from my previous school English was harder we studied deeper grammar and used better vocabulary but as time passed the school became easier now I am still in Sheffield private school in year 10 going to finish I my IGCSE here and hopefully study university in England.

As summer came along most of my friends traveled and I was one the few people in my class who didn't travel some movies also ,made me want to travel anywhere I can go I wanted to know where my mother grow up I also wanted to visit as many places as possible like the Hollywood sign and be a tourist when my parents found out how bored I was they used to take me to water parks malls jet skiing or ski Dubai to not get bored my parents couldn't be around a lot because they had to work so many of my summers I lived like a tourist in Dubai by the time I was 12 I traveled for the first time i went to Tajikistan I saw where my mother grew up where my grandfather was born and where he grew up where my mom family is from in Tajikistan it was interesting to find out where she is after that I went to Malaysia it was an interesting experience since I thought no one will know English then almost everyone who works at the mall and land marks there are people from many different countries and many different cultures my goal is to visit more than 20 famous countries.

Farid 10B
sharadarige 15 / 25  
Mar 27, 2012   #2
The construction of sentences are not appropriate


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