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Breaking political apathy (princeton supplement)


astrum72 2 / 8 1  
Dec 27, 2016   #1
"One of the great challenges of our time is that the disparities we face today have more complex causes and point less straightforwardly to solutions." Omar Wasow, Assistant Professor, Politics; Co-Founder, Blackplanet. This quote is taken from Professor Wasow January 2014 speech at the Martin Luther King Day celebration at Princeton University.

Youth Power of Change through Politics



Politics is total war, affecting both politicians and citizens alike, leading me to wage war against political apathy, against unintentional or intentional avoidance to the political process, a problem seen nationwide.

This problems does not have simple a solution. We strive to address the problem of youth apathy in an organization called WE(fillintheblank), a student-led group dedicated to engaging the youth in politics. In this organization, I learned about low voter turnout rates in our city after an all time low turnout of 3% for a county judge election. This number terrified me: only 3% of an entire population was making a decision that impacted everyone in the city.

We were invited to Texas Tribune Fest in Austin, Texas, where we listened to and interacted with influential political figures such as Ted Cruz and Wendy Davis. At a panel, we asked an elected official how the youth should get involved in politics. In response, he told us to focus on developing our skills and worry about politics later. This reaffirmed our concerns, inspiring us to work harder. How could students told to not worry about politics at age 17 be expected to make decisions that impacted the nation at age 18? If even those involved in politics didn't believe in the power of the youth, this reflected a problem with the culture, which I desired to change. My desire to find a solution is heightened by my previous adversarial relationship with politics. I was a part of the problem: Politics were an unknown unknown, and I was apprehensive and fearful about attacking such a big subject.

Within my first month in the organization, we hosted a district attorney debate. Embarrassingly realizing I didn't even know what a district attorney did, I tried to research the candidates, look at their qualifications, their stances on topics. Yet there was no information. How could the youth be expected to involve themselves when there was a lack of information available even to those who were searching? As a result of my personal difficulties regarding politics, I became interested in social media. It would be easier to reach the youth if politics were explained through a relatable medium. I posted reminders about dates, urged people to attend the events. #mancrushmonday celebrated the accomplishments of our representative Beto O'rourke, #triviatuesday was reserved for political trivia, #womancrushwednesday was information on our county judge Veronica Escobar. Our twitter was used to live tweet debates, encouraging students to engage in discussion online. After becoming editor of our newsletter distributed to every high school student at our school, I put in dates about upcoming elections, put blurbs about the positions that candidates were running for, highlighted important members in the community. This was information that I had lacked, which had made the political process so difficult to involve in.

However, there was difficulty converting "likes" into actual attendance for events, no way to ensure the facts I posted actually reached and inspired a population. Social media made the rational idea of politics into an emotional entity, and this was necessary in order to attract attention.

Through work with Senator Jose Rodriguez, we looked at new projects such as the Student Voter Initiative, where members of the team visited high schools with a presentation on the importance of voting and registered eligible students to vote. We raised numbers of registered voters, but there seemed no way to ensure that they actually went to the polls. Through politics, the youth hold the power of change, and those unwilling to use this are merely unaware of the potential. Making them aware proves to be a difficult problem however, and although I have tried to find a solution through media, my shortcomings in this process have led me to desire to continue the pursuit of the solution, reiterating the idea that students are more than just students; they are leaders of their community and catalysts for change.
barry 4 / 15 3  
Dec 28, 2016   #2
I really appreciate what you are actually doing in reality.
Anyway your essay was good but I feel it would be better if you even present some solutions you think can make a difference.
Best of luck
potatohead 1 / 2 1  
Dec 29, 2016   #3
This problems does not have simple a solution.

..., look at their qualifications,and their stances on topics.

This is nitpicky, but you might want to stop using the passive voice. I like that you've included things you tried to do to get youth involved, but you could talk about your work with Jose Rodriguez in detail. This is a good essay that highlights your accomplishments.


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