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A brief statement outlining your interest in the field of architecture


tenkei 4 / 8 3  
Dec 17, 2017   #1

Drawing and painting



Drawing and painting is my language to convert my idea, and math and science are what have sharpened my language. The way light reflects and the reason why the rainbow is rainbow color sophisticate the way I draw shapes of objects. At the same time, depth perception makes me easier understand calculus. Art and science are in harmony for me and I cannot separate these two fields when considering my future. That a good architectural design has not only artistic beauty but also clear reasoning really attracts me. Architecture is more than supplying basic need for humans; using creativity to deal with realistic problems is what excited me and I am sure that it is suitable for me.

Thank you for reading!
Noga123 1 / 2  
Dec 17, 2017   #2
You said good reasons but I think you have to show some evidence of your interest for instance your past project related to this field if you have any. And you said "Architecture is more than supplying basic need for humans; using creativity to deal with realistic problems is what excited me and I am sure that it is suitable for me " so why you think it is suitable for you? And what are your architecture career goals? How and what you will add to this field? You can use this Qs to show them your passion about it.

Good luck
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Dec 18, 2017   #3
Tianhui, your statement is more in response to a Fine Arts question rather than an architectural response. Drawing and panting align itself more with the arts rather than the scientific presentation of architectural design. One uses a color profile while the other uses numbers and observations of an environment in order to create a responsive and usable design. There is a marked difference between the two and your response is a direct reflection of these differences. You have to develop a different statement that more aligns itself with your interest in line definition, usable spaces, and the environment within which a structure is created in order to provide an outline of your interest in architecture. What you have right now should be used only if you are applying to fine arts courses or interior design courses. These answers do not provide an insight into your architectural interests.


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