Hello all. I'm interested in applying to Georgia Tech, and I would appreciate any feedback on these essays.
1st) ... One essay at time please
2nd) Beyond rankings, location, and athletics, why are you interested in attending Georgia Tech? (max 150 words)
"Whether it be through participating in the UROP or collaborating with world-class innovators, Georgia Tech can provide the tools necessary for me to pursue my passions. Working with brilliant minds, such as Gabriel A. Rincon-Mora, discovering ways to improve upon inefficiencies in current circuit designs, will not only prepare me for a career designing microarchitectures for tech giants but also provide me an opportunity to refine society's current technologies. With such an emphasis on undergraduate research, Georgia Tech will allow my visions for an efficient tomorrow, of more specialized and energy-efficient hardware, to come to fruition by my own efforts."
Any feedback would be appreciated.