Hi rachaelspelic, I would like to give you suggestions for some gramatical issues
Ever since I was young I always knew what
I suggest you to put coma as the formula is since SV, SV.
so the sentence should be Ever since I was young, I always knew what
I have always had a passion for younger children
Are you sure with article a before passion?
passion for younger children.
This is really bad grammar, I suggest you to rewrite this
What I didn't know at the time
What I did not know
need for everyday life.
I suggest you to use some expression for this sentence. For example, On the other hand, extraculicular activities would ......
I want will be dedicated to both my education
I will dedicate myself..... (be careful to use passive voice)
I want to learn the skill that I need ...
I suggest you to make unforgetable conclusion by state that you will benefit the institution by being student there
I hope it will help you and do not forget to give this a thumb