250-word essay discussing your reasons for choosing the specific health care career you wish to pursue and why you are applying to MCPHS.<-- my question
Studying Nursing and My Future Career Paper
I want to pursue my health care career in Nursing. I always dreamed of being a nurse, because I enjoy working and caring for people. Ever since I was a little girl I carried a toy stethoscope around and havin my family be my patients. I was not like any other kid, who played with barbies and kenn. My mom even knew I was going to fall in the great path of the health care. My potential is to have the greatest affect on others who are in need of my help. Also, I chose nursing to be my health career, because I have seen the real path of nursing in the real world. Attending a vocational high school, has given me a chance to enter the health assisting program. A four year high school program has put an outrageous affect on me. I learned how to practice real health care, and to interact with patients. It was not just a peek in the doctors and nurses office. It was an experience where not many people see other than when they become a real nurse; to see what kind of responsibilities they have. I then, even had a greater chance to realize that I have the desire to pursue the nursing career in my life. I was very greatful that I had that chance to see what it is like to be in the real healh care setting. It made an impact on me to choose nursing as my health care career.
I am applying to Massachusetts College of Pharmacy and Health Sciences, because it is a great school to start pursuing my dreams. It is a school full of opportunities, where you are around people who have the desire in the health care career. When I first walked into this school for an open house, my jaw dropped. It is an amazing school to start my higher education. I have chosen nursing as my major because I want to expand my knowledge within this field. I am also drawn to the three year accelerted nursing program which would efficiently enable me to reach my career goal in a short time-frame. It will give me more time for opportunities in the future. I hope these next steps will be at Massachussets College of Pharmacy and Health sciences.
- please tell me how it sounds, and should i change anyting up!!!?
I think it answers the prompt perfectly. You have your reason for nursing and for the college. That's exactly what you needed.
i appreciate it, and since you have an amazinf style for writting would u be able to read my other essay please, ( patient who made a strong impact on me) ive been working on it for about 3 weeks now and cannot come up with an introduction that says "WOW" OR IT POPS OUT!
i seen you writting skills and everything just flowss perfectly and it just says wowoww all over!
Sure :) Do you want me to do what I did for this one or just help you out with the intro? And do you want to completely change the intro or keep it mostly the same?
I HAVE THE SAME QUESTION YOU CHOSE ON THE COMMON APP.
if you have the time to revise it and change it up a little bit, that would be great! i appreciate what you did enough
and yea whatever you think will sound better for the intro- it does not have to be the same! you legit saved me ! ive been working on this essay for 3 weeks now and cannot come up with anything!
i started out something like this-- Some may say anybody can be a nurse, and some say you have to be outragiously smart to be a doctor. The way I look at it is, if it is in your heart you can become anything you strongly desire. I may not be the most intellagent or a person with brilliant ideas but I know that I have a strong heart to work towards what I truly want. My intelegency will come through my experiences. There are many aims(points) to experience that will have a great impact on life. The program I have entered in my vocational high school has given me an ___experience that has made a pursuasive impact on me to even have a greater passion for nursing. (the spelling is a little rough, all im worried is how it sounds the spelling ill revise! as long as i have it down.
THANKS SOOO MUCHH!!
Some say that in order to get anywhere in the medical field you have to be outragiously smart. Through my experiences, however, I've realized that the common link between the doctors and nurses I've met isn't intelligence or test scores, but passion for what you do. I may not get the highest test scores and my ideas may not be brilliant or groundbreaking but I know without a doubt that my heart is strong enough to get me where I want to be. My determination has led me into the most competitive program in my high school which, in turn, has given me valuable experience in the field of nursing. I've seen firsthand the affect that nurses and doctors have on their patients' lives and I want more than anything to do the same. Already, the program has given me the opportunity to interact with patients and it's been one of the most fulfilling experiences of my life.
Hope that works :)
OMG- you are amazing! how did you come up with this soo quick. :)
sounds 1000000000* better than what i wrote!!!
one moree question- would you be able to tell me how to connect the rest of my story idont know if you read it but how can i make it flow to the next paragraph. ijust cannot make it sound amazingg!
plz some body help me correct this intro
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