250-word essay discussing your reasons for choosing the specific health care career you wish to pursue and why you are applying to MCPHS.<-- my question
Studying Nursing and My Future Career Paper
I want to pursue my health care career in Nursing. I always dreamed of being a nurse, because I enjoy working and caring for people. Ever since I was a little girl I carried a toy stethoscope around and havin my family be my patients. I was not like any other kid, who played with barbies and kenn. My mom even knew I was going to fall in the great path of the health care. My potential is to have the greatest affect on others who are in need of my help. Also, I chose nursing to be my health career, because I have seen the real path of nursing in the real world. Attending a vocational high school, has given me a chance to enter the health assisting program. A four year high school program has put an outrageous affect on me. I learned how to practice real health care, and to interact with patients. It was not just a peek in the doctors and nurses office. It was an experience where not many people see other than when they become a real nurse; to see what kind of responsibilities they have. I then, even had a greater chance to realize that I have the desire to pursue the nursing career in my life. I was very greatful that I had that chance to see what it is like to be in the real healh care setting. It made an impact on me to choose nursing as my health care career.
I am applying to Massachusetts College of Pharmacy and Health Sciences, because it is a great school to start pursuing my dreams. It is a school full of opportunities, where you are around people who have the desire in the health care career. When I first walked into this school for an open house, my jaw dropped. It is an amazing school to start my higher education. I have chosen nursing as my major because I want to expand my knowledge within this field. I am also drawn to the three year accelerted nursing program which would efficiently enable me to reach my career goal in a short time-frame. It will give me more time for opportunities in the future. I hope these next steps will be at Massachussets College of Pharmacy and Health sciences.
- please tell me how it sounds, and should i change anyting up!!!?