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Being the CEO - Describe a person that you admire


Huong789456123 1 / 3  
Aug 1, 2020   #1

He changed my thought



The first person who came to my mind is Jack Ma. He changed my thought when I heard his life.
He is the one of famous entrepreneurs around the world. He actually is an English teacher, and he failed many times in applying for jobs when he graduated. He used to be poor and do not have much money to learn English. Therefore, he had to run 70 miles by bike to serve foreign tourists in order to improve his English on purpose when he was a student. Although he met many difficulties and obstacles, he continued to find all ways to develop himself. Finally, he succeeded in leading a multinational technology corporation in the past, named Alibaba. He is proud of the Chinese and the world. I think that leading a huge business makes people stress. However, he always is optimistic and humorous no matter how many times he failed in life. Being the CEO of a big company makes people earn much money, he gave up and retire from Alibaba and pursue educational work, philanthropy and environmental causes. He is very talented and has good personalities.

I was very impressive to him when I read the initial book are related to him. He brought me a good lesson leading on success in life. Although we fail many times, we should not give up and be determined to pursue our dream.

Elise990119 2 / 7  
Aug 1, 2020   #2
I think you can describe more details about his talent and personalities
In addition, the second section could divide into two sections. that will be better
OP Huong789456123 1 / 3  
Aug 1, 2020   #3
@Elise990119
Thanks for your feedback 😊
Dolly Doloris 1 / 2  
Aug 1, 2020   #4
"He changed my thought when I heard his life." Maybe add "about" after heard.
Also,"He actually is an English teacher", It might be better if replacing "is" into"was".
Anyway, good job for the writing.


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